Author 1: I agree with Rensslaer here, in that some dialogue would have been nice. However, the writing is good and the alternative history intriguing.
Author 2: This was good. I liked the little details like the songs playing on the radio, as well as some of the insights into the relationship between Al and Renny.
Author 3: The idea of a modern day research crew's discovery of the ship combined with the attempted discovery of the Island by the ship I found worked well, especially as it meant this piece contained two discoveries in one. The diary parts were well written, and conveyed some of the initial excitement and later despair vividly.
Author 4: This I thought was outstanding. The switch in viewpoints from the protagonist to Petersen and then back again was well done, and the part where Petersen is narrating works for two reasons; it is written in such away that you get a sense of it being told by a person, rather than an unseen narrator, and because there is the feeling of genuine emotion from him.
I'm not going to guess at the authors this time as I have no idea about any of them.
Author 2: This was good. I liked the little details like the songs playing on the radio, as well as some of the insights into the relationship between Al and Renny.
Author 3: The idea of a modern day research crew's discovery of the ship combined with the attempted discovery of the Island by the ship I found worked well, especially as it meant this piece contained two discoveries in one. The diary parts were well written, and conveyed some of the initial excitement and later despair vividly.
Author 4: This I thought was outstanding. The switch in viewpoints from the protagonist to Petersen and then back again was well done, and the part where Petersen is narrating works for two reasons; it is written in such away that you get a sense of it being told by a person, rather than an unseen narrator, and because there is the feeling of genuine emotion from him.
I'm not going to guess at the authors this time as I have no idea about any of them.