Oh dear, two people are fingering me for an entry. I guess I really should knuckle down and read/review the set of entries - I've been dreadfully slacking so far
Carefully carefully. Pick a different adverb for one of them please .With that I set off myself, testing the footing carefully, looking around carefully in the waning light of the afternoon.
Ok another quibble:Hour Fifty-One: Giles dropped their glasses
That just doesn't read well. Would be better written something like:Hour Ninety: I’m…not sure when the last time one of us spoke was today.
and the following sentence needs a bit of tightening up, with an "a" that should be an "at" and a missing comma, that I'm sure a bit of proof reading would have caught.I'm . . . not sure the last time one of us spoke today.
I'm going to guess @DensleyBlair for Author #1!
What is this?
How to play?
I have read the rules but I still don't get it
Please someone explain in a simple manner
But whom to submit to?The main aim is just to give a critique of the pieces people submit, so in this case the three bits of writing on the previous page. This can be as detailed or as brief as you like.
The secondary aim (and the reason this is called “Guess the Author”) is to, well, guess the author. If you have an idea about how wrote a piece after reviewing it, make a guess! Otherwise, just take a random shot in the dark.
BUT, I told myself upon first reading it, remember the badgers. Were they chosen at random or do they perhaps hint at something more sinister?
When true night falls, will humanity survive? The badgers probably will
Hour Hundred and about Eighty: We have been playing monopoly to keep us grounded. It isn't working. Giles was sent to jail and began weeping about drums. Then Fields brought a drum, and now they are chanting that they can't get out. Jake is discussing moral realism with the top hat and losing. His ontological reasoning is weak. They are losing it.
The author, presumably.Someone really likes badgers.
Oh right the infamous "Peter posts twice as long critique as the entry he made, just to throw us all off the scent, but failing"The author, presumably.
I mean, I wouldn't even have hit on the "the sun is dying" explanation, which puts the whole story in a different perspective, if there hadn't been that strange line about being eaten by badgers. Why badgers, I asked myself. Why not rats, or dogs, or... why badgers?
So when I read the line about the sun shining forever, the connection I had missed became crystal clear. Badgers, unlike most obvious choices for such a worry, are nocturnal.
Or perhaps I was reading too much into it. It is ever a constant danger in these GTA entries.
For digging the rabbit hole deep, layering multiple meanings, and misdirection in a GTA entry, I believe my own For the Emperor entry is the GTA gold standard, and as a result the critique it got was most interesting to follow... but many GTA writers engage in that sport to one degree or another when they've got the time.
Anyhow, you seem so intrigued by my criticism of #1 that I have this sinking feeling that I guessed wrong with stnylan, and that you are the true author of the story.
If you are referring to For the Emperor, it did too work.Oh right the infamous "Peter posts twice as long critique as the entry he made, just to throw us all off the scent, but failing"
None of these feel like Peter's writing to me, so yes, 95% certain he took a break this round .Care to change your guess? And if you are getting second thoughts, you can't look to Wyvern for guidance this time around, as he hasn't fingered me as responsible for any of the entries. Perhaps I really didn't write any of the entries this time around?
Pray tell me, Avernite, how secure are you in your guess now?
It nearly convinced me that time. It didn't, in the end. That's the definition of "good try but it didn't work", no?If you are referring to For the Emperor, it did too work.
While it didn't convince Wyvern, it did convince DensleyBlair as noted in this wonderful review. Even you, who had at first insisted together with Wyvern that it was definitely me, ended up writing that you wouldn't be surprised to be proven wrong and finding that it was really Wyvern who wrote it.
If you are referring to this entry... Well, it seems you currently have me down as the author of #3, but the only one I posted twice a long a critique of as the entry itself is #1 this time around.
Care to change your guess? And if you are getting second thoughts, you can't look to Wyvern for guidance this time around, as he hasn't fingered me as responsible for any of the entries. Perhaps I really didn't write any of the entries this time around?
Pray tell me, Avernite, how secure are you in your guess now?