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Sorry for not updating much, folks.:) I got quite alot to do on school suddenly...:( I am writing an update right now, the problem is, almost nothing except chasing down rebels ever happen! Only one of my provinces has converted yet and I get 1-3 revolts every months. I think this beta's events on this just wasn't balanced enough yet...:p I could wish I could update the AAR to the newest beta, but I doubt that is doable. I will update the AAR of course, do not fear, but to make much interesting happen might be difficult. *sigh* Why must I be so unlcuky every time I try to make an AAR, eh?:p I have had lots of good games where much happens when I don't write them...:p Oh well, back to CK.;)
 

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Unbelieveable I missed a tale about a "Duke of Saxony" and the rise to the Lithuanian Kingdom :eek:o ! I hope you will find the time to update, nice read ;) . Btw. there is always something happening worth telling, my best chapters were, as I found, when not too much was actualy happening in the game compared to my imagination :) !
 

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I might try to do that DoS. In this story so far, I have mostly referrered what happens and nothing much more, but as I've said, I have problems with continueing along that road. I will update, I have swore to myself I will. I must just find a new way to do this.:)
 

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Update soon this night.:) The update will be like the others so far, as I was well underway finishing the chapter when I decided to hold it back a little. I felt as said before that it was difficult to make it as good as good as I wanted, but let's see what you think.;) I will try to write the next chapter a little bit different, hope it'll be of taste.;)
 

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“Ho-hum-di-dum…”
“Look, grandpa! I’m a knight!”
“Hmmm? Oh, yes, you really are, boy!”
“When I grow up, I will be exactly as brave as Heinrich!”
“I’m sure you will. Do you want to hear some more of his glorious deeds perhaps?”
“Oh, yes grandpa! And I will learn and become just as good! Was he good at sword fighting?”
“Well, as a matter of fact….it was not among his best skills. But he was not bad. But now listen to my story! As always: A story of glory, the story of God’s servants on Earth, the Askanien dynasty!”


When April 1215 went by, the fight in Volhynia had begun. The orthodox prince was an evil man, only Christian on the outside. He supported the pagans in his realm, and took often part in their dirty offerings at night. He was an Enemy of God, and Heinrich would not tolerate it! His troops therefore marched into the demesne of the prince, soon overwhelming the pitiful excuse of an army the prince had collected. But even though Heinrich won the battle, he got many problems during the siege. Small bands of pagans and satanic devils attacked several times, scaring the army and thus making the morale bad. Heinrich had to use all his skills to keep them together. It did not get easier when the main commander beside Heinrich, Wilhelm of Memel, a good man who had been a close friend to both Heinrich and his father, mysteriously died. But of course, the evil prince could not stand against God, and soon he had to accept giving away everything he had except one tiny little province. Heinrich had won, but not he had to return to a demesne in full revolt. The satanic pagans of Volhynia had namely stirred up revolts in the pagan populace all over Heinrich’s demesne, and it was a hard job that awaited him.

Of course, to travel around the country was a hard job. Even more so was it for Heinrich, because of his wounds, which made him anything but able to fight. But although he couldn’t do much with his hands, his head was still clear, and in his tent, he made several master plans. Unfortunately, this showed up to be a bit too much for his body to bear, and a strong fever more and more often forced him to stay in bed, not being able to do much. No doctor could find out what kind of illness it was. It was whispered among the servants that they had seen devils in the woods, dancing a death dance, but was it for Heinrich? Noone knew…

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The new angel in Heinrich’s life.

Life hit hard for poor Heinrich. Not long after he got sick, his beloved wife died in labour. Crushed he lay in the bed for several days. Noone was allowed to come in to him. Noone thought he’d ever marry again. But he actually did. A young girl who served at his sick bed slowly got him back to life, and he came in such a deep love as one seldom see. Zoe looked like an angel people said, and for him, she was! But, the sorrows for the poor king were not over. After giving birth to a little girl, she died while being pregnant with their second child. King Heinrich once again fell into a deep mourning, questioning whether God was punishing him for something he had done.

The next years were quiet. Rebels were chased down, pagans complained over being ruled by Christians. Heinrich was seldom seen outside his bed room, and when he was, he always looked very weak and sick. It was therefore no surprise when the heralds a cold day in November announced the old king’s death. A new king was crowned. The new king was Herman, Heinrich favourite son and marshal. He was skilled in the arts of war, but as Heinrich, he was severely wounded by an evil pagan arrow. Noone knew if he would live long, but one thing they knew: He would surely continue his father and grandfather’s work for God! From early childhood, he had showed great zealousness, praying hard every evening, and his deep thoughts around the mysteries of religion had been to great joy and interest for more than one priest and bishop.
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The new king and his wife.

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The kingdom and a little revolt-party. It’s quite normal really.


“Poor Heinrich…. He got a hard life. But he did come to God, didn’t he, grandpa?”
“Of course he did!” the old man exclaimed. “He was a zealous Askanien, my boy! He walked with God, and as Job he got tested. But eventually he got the reward, and now, my son, he is among the holy populace of Heaven!”
“He was a good man, and I will be just as he was!” the little boy smiled.
“But good night grandpa, I must tell dad about this! And I want him to learn me to fight today! And then,” he sighed, “it’s bed time.”
”Hrrrmmm….” The old man smiled behind his beard.
“Well, off you go!”
 

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Well done comeback! Nice that you found the time to write an update, I certainly like your way of storytelling and will stick to your story and btw. hail to the new King Herman! :)

Ps.: Elzbieta doesn't look like a "girl who wants to have fun" *song reference* , ugh ;)
 

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A new tale and a new king. His martial rating is quite good and with his zeal it seems only logical for him to put some pagans to the sword in the near future. Maybe quite a lot of pagans, the terrifying horse people from the steppes perhaps? It seems to be about time they show up... ;)

I'm glad to see you're writing again, Nikolai!
 

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DoS: :D

AKjeldsen: I think the risk as risen, or so it seems to me. The new king was not wounded in one of my battles though, but in the betas the AI is quite happy if it can fight a bit on its own...

Stuyvesant: Unfortunately, I have more or less only Catholics and Orthodox negihtbours, and very little prestige...
 

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Yikes, look at all those revolts! Looks like the "please put in more rebels" crowd is getting their way in the new patch. :( I guess no one ever said serving the LORD on earth would be easy. :D

Now you've just got to watch out for the Golden Horde...
 

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Okay. Sorry for the loooooong delay. It has a few causes, the main ones being school and me not finding a good way to write the story(IMO that is...:p). But I am currently writing on a new chapter, this time a bit different and fantasy like, you'll see what I mean.;) I hope it will come to taste.:)
 

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Nikolai said:
Okay. Sorry for the loooooong delay. It has a few causes, the main ones being school and me not finding a good way to write the story(IMO that is...:p). But I am currently writing on a new chapter, this time a bit different and fantasy like, you'll see what I mean.;) I hope it will come to taste.:)

Sounds excellent, take the time you need...and then post it :D . I promise to be nice ;) !
 

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“Wow! This is real cool!”
“What did you say, sir?”
The boy turned towards the servant. Or, boy was the wrong word. Now he suddenly was a long, shining knight with muscles bigger than Jesus himself must have had, he thought. Was that blasphemy by the way? A moment he thought hard. Then he smiled. It was probably not. And now he had important things to do; fight demons and dragons and rebels and, and, and…
“Sir?”
“Don’t you just
love my new appearance?”
“Yes sir.”
“I want to ride my horse! Where is it?”
“Right here, sir. It’s standing in the hall, ready to fly.”
“Fly? WOW!”
“Yes, sir. All mammals fly these days.”

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Horses can fly these days.
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The trumpets flew high in the sky, trying to be the loudest. But where was grandpa? the boy asked himself. Not that he could think too much on that now, this horse was quite wild. And the knight in front of him surely looked ready to fight.
“Okay…!” the boy whispered.
“My hero!” a voice was suddenly screaming from the crowd.
“WOW! A princess! And she is running towards me!” He could not believe his luck.
“My prince! Have this necklace as a sign of my gratitude!”
Then she left, waving towards him.
“WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!! What a beauty!”
“Sir? It’s your turn.”
The trumpets sang, and an old man came out on the field.
“Grandpa!!!”
“A-hem! I hereby announce the start of the XXVIIIth Lithuanian Knight Tournament! May the best win!”
He smiled towards his grandchild and disappeared into a local cloud.
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The princess and her chosen one.
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“I won! I won! I wooooooooooon!!!”
“Yes, sir.”
“Now, there be dragons.”
“I’m sorry sir?”
“I just wanted to see a dragon.”
“Of course, sir. That would be Third Masonic Dragon Square, right to the left of the wood to the right of the capital.”
“WOW! WOW! WOW! Are they wild and dangerous?”
”I wouldn’t count on it sir.”
“Oh. Well, never mind. Could you saddle the horse for me?”
“Sorry sir, but all mammals stopped flying last night. It’s so last weekend at the moment.”

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The wings disappeared.
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“Szzzznort….”
“Oh, what a weird dragon! It almost seems kind!”
“Szzz-----ort! Grrrrr! TR%/DJF/)()989374”#%¤4¤”WEIIII
RFMMMMMGAAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGGGG!!!!”
“Almost is just about the word, sir.”
“WOW! It seems like it tries to sing!”
“Yes, sir.” Dragons are known to sing gospel every Sunday. They are quite good Christians in that way.”
“Christians!!!??? WOW!”
“Yes, sir. But they tend to forget sometimes. Once the pope nearly had to be replaced.”
“Oooo-kay! I think I need to sleep now.”
“Yes, sir. I will find a bed immediately. What colour do you want?”
“Light green will do it… Grandpa! How on Earth did you manage to walk out of that dragon’s mouth???”
“Training my boy, training… Now, off to bed you go!”

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There be fluffy dragons!

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“Grandpa!”
“Yes, my child?”
“You won’t believe what I just dreamt! Just listen…”
 

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Wow, this is what I call a wild ride of a dream :D . It was an interesting difference from the earlier story (btw. I really liked the first picture). I think that both kinds of ways of telling the story are great. Really well done, but I just can not imagine that kids of that time talked that way, what a blasphemy :D !
 

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I agree, he's wild, but this is a dream after all...!:D I have not decided how next installment will be exactly, but I do not plan to continue just like this of course, must have something from the game too...:p;)
 

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Nikolai said:
I agree, he's wild, but this is a dream after all...!:D I have not decided how next installment will be exactly, but I do not plan to continue just like this of course, must have something from the game too...:p;)

I will be patiently and eagerly waiting for the next chapter, even if it should take a while. I prefer a slower update from the quick one anyway, alows me to catch up with a story even if I am not that active for a few days ;) !
 

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That was one strange dream! Has grandpa spiked the little boy's cup of warm milk with some strange mushrooms? :p

Nice to see you updating your story. Looking forward to grandpa's reaction. And his next tale. :)