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Europe is an ancient land. It has played host for many battles over its expansive history. Newest among the list of bloody engagements to occur upon Europe’s scoured ground is a battle between French and Prussian forces at Drenthe, a location within the Netherlands. While enormous armies fight fiercely, equally important events occur in secrecy.

Chapter V

Diary of Graf [Count] Emmerich von Mises (General of Prussian Army)

February 8 – There was stiff wind blowing toward the east when I awoke. The cool air did much to wake me up quickly. When I had dressed and armed myself, I exited my tent to make a general inspection of the troops, who I found in a state of readiness for combat. At a fair distance to the south, I could perceive the faint glow of lights from a distant encampment. This sight provided evidence that a French army was still, as we had determined the previous night, close by.

During the night, the prospect of engaging a hostile force had frightened me to the point where my whole body shook fervently. At that moment in the morning, as I stood upon a hill and glared out at the slumbering enemy, I tried to seem calm. Though an unexplainable fear of defeat still lingered in my breast, I tried my best to swallow the anxiety, for it would have been a defacement of my rank to show weakness before the troops.

Conforming to the proper rules of engagement, I prepared to meet the French troops upon the battlefield at about noon, which is the hour when most civil battles begin. My effort to seem polite, however, had no effect upon the stormy French disposition. Charging forth from their starting positions like demons from the gates of hell upon a quest to destroy the purity of the world, the French made their first attack. That effort ultimately failed and acted as prelude to hours of battle. It is needless to say that there were losses of great magnitude on both sides in the fray.

The whole battle came to a head when I released my last contingent of cavalry, the others having already been swallowed up by the French. Curiously enough, that attack seemed to break the French resiliency, for a great portion of the army suddenly turned about in a hasty retreat. My forces being tired and weakened, I have not made an immediate attempt to pursue. In the morning I will follow their trail.

Journal of Dauphin (the would-be Louis XVII of France)

February 2 - I find myself within the company of a curiously secretive group of people. My guard, who has refused to disclose his name despite my urging, has barely spoken since our flight from the prison in which I was held. The owner of the house in which we reside (a man I am told fought in the army of father) has likewise remained stonily quiet. While the silence unnerves me, I have remained passive. My… rescuers... have told me that we are, for the moment, staying hidden, lest the radicals should concert a strong effort to put me back in bondage. This seems reasonable. However, I must be careful not to fall pray to any nefarious plots.​
 

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Some feedback on feedback;

stnylan - Of course! The Dauphin faces many problems; mainly who is he going to trust?

Fiftypence - Actually, I was going to use that as part of the story. However, seeing as you have guessed the idea, I'm going to try and think of something different. I don't want to be unoriginal. :)

coz1 - The Dauphin is rather cut off from the outside world. He is under the protection of his guard and another loyalist. However, one must wonder, what would happen if the would-be King tried to leave?

Nil-The-Frogg - If I had to interpret Moreau's comment, I would say he knows something about the coming battle that we don't... Not yet at least.

Duke of Wellington - How far the Dauphin gets with his escape is yet to be seen. As for how much power he might have, I think that depends on how ruthless he ends up being.

Bismarck1 - I appreciate the well-wishes! Needless to say, Napoleon will show up at some point.​
 

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A switch view from the front. I like it!

And the Dauphin, well, I would not wish to be in his shoes.
 

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The Dauphin seems a pawn at present. It is unlikely that either side would like to see him move erratically. And I wonder if von Mises might regret not pursuing and thus allowing them to fight another day.

Continued excellence. :cool:
 

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I like that Mises appears afraid and unsure. I also like the fact that we never know if he's skilled or not (though his comments about correctness aims at an outdated tactician :D ). He must be at least acceptable anyway, since he seems to win the engagement. Of course, to which point he won remains to be seen: I too suspect some trap in the french retreat.

Still pleased with the dauphin realising he's probably being manipulated but not knowing how to avoid it yet.
 

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Clever tactics win a major battle for the French in Holland during the winter of 1795. Despite the victory, French military affairs are starting to look troubling. While wins have been common against the untrained Dutch, other countries are proving more capable enemies. Spain, for example, is menacingly advancing upon France from the south!

Chapter VI

Diary of Dimitri Moreau (Officer of French Armie)

February 10 - It seems as if I have not slept for an eternity. Though my body screams out from want of rest, I dare not slumber a moment, for one misses a great deal while sleeping… Two days ago we engaged an impressive Prussian army in combat. As darkness fell upon the battlefield, my superior (General Ravenues) executed a scheme to trick the enemy. Bringing our army into a retreat, he made us pretend to flee like dreadful cowards. When the Prussian general did not pursue us (a move that depicts his laziness well) there was much rejoicing… Within the dark of night General Ravenues then took the army on a great march. Around the enemy we made a sweeping circle. Thus, by dawn’s light we approached the dastardly Prussians from their rear. Though I am not usually excited by tactics or the horrible art of war in general, this maneuver has quite enthralled me. It is not often that an entire army is pacified within the span of an hour!

Honestly, I derive no joy from victory over the Prussians, for all it serves to do is dig deeper the well of my woe. Continued success in the Dutch-land will encourage our leaders in Paris to extend the military campaign. Such will take me further away from my love, Alexandrine, and deeper into the desolate wasteland of “civilized” Europe…

Letter, Eloi Aglionby to Mathis Vignes (Member of French National Convention)
Written in Paris, 10 February

Sir… the issue of the Dauphin is still in need of resolution. Over a week has passed since loyalist dissenters freed the would-be King from his accommodations. Since the search parties we have sent out have not uncovered the escapee and the loyalists we captured have not spoken a word (even under severe duress), we must take some further action. Word is seeping through the underground of the Dauphin’s escape; soon the public at large will know… If ever there was a time for what we discussed, now is that time. Take no chances, sir! The benevolent state depends upon our actions. ~ Your loyal servant

Captain’s Log, James McAlester (of H.M.S. Glory)
On patrol in Caribbean

11 February – Took in supplies at Kingston. We also received new orders from Admiralty while in port. I am to follow the prevailing winds deeper into the Caribbean. It seems that there is a suspicion back in England that some mischief is going on in the French colonies. My engagement with French vessels recently seems to concrete that view… HMS Glory will arrive upon destination in one week if there are no obstacles.

15 February – Able-bodied sailor “Hamilton, Alex” died today of disease. The crew takes it as a bad sign; I believe they are fools…. There have been no sightings of French vessels.​
 
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Feedback on feedback;
Duke of Wellington - The French retreat was indeed a trick. As for the "secret" group, I think that they want power. Don't we all? ;)

stnylan - Thanks for the compliment. I enjoyed switching perspective on the battlefield for a little while. I'm not sure how much on my narrative is going to come from non-French characters at this point, to be honest.

coz1 - Thank-you, sir. I believe the Dauphin will be testing his boundaries shortly. The result might be interesting.

Bismarck1 - Well, the Prussians thought they won initially. However, as my new post describes, it was actually a French victory. :)

Nil-The-Frogg - I think all people in war are a still unsure of their actions. Honestly, I beleive it would be hard to say focused upon fighting at all times. There are always things to draw your attention away. Moreau, the French officer, ponders his loneliness for example.​
 

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I was so hoping to get an update from you today, and here it is. :) I really cannot express how much I am enjoying this work.

First, I must really commend you for the clear way in which you distill the action in your opening sections. And then the entries - such joy. I really enjoyed Moreau's excitement and sure lack of joy at the same time. He sees what works but none seems to matter if he cannot be at home with his love. And I see I was right on von Mises not following. ;)

Truly continued excellence, sir! I am loving this AAR. :cool:
 

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That deputy is up to no good, I am sure of it.
 

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Though the revolutionaries in Paris believe their current situation is flawless, the French have been dealt a crushing blow. Moving north to attack Southern France and capture key ports, a Spanish army has defeated the only contingent of revolutionary forces near the Pyrénées. The closest French force to the now unhindered Spanish army is a contingent of troops preparing to march across the Alps and assault Austria. How can the radicals recover from this twist of fate?

Chapter VII

Diary of Mathis Vignes (Member of French National Convention)

February 15, Paris - I spoke with my loyal servant, Eloi, earlier today. He vigorously assured me that Dauphin’s vacation from captivity would soon be coming to an end. The spies that he keeps embedded within the loyalist scum have told him the would-be king’s location. Tomorrow, by dawn’s light, he plans to assault the Dauphin’s refuge. I have been assured that the scum found guarding the escapee will be made available for interrogation…

Journal of Jorge Valdez-Delgado (Private of Spanish Army)
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February 17 - Death lingers around us. Though two days have passed since we demolished a French force guarding the Pyrénées, the smell of blood still wafts through the air. Perhaps, the lingering of death is due to the excessive violence of that battle.

Many of my comrades were flown to heaven in the arms an angel during the engagement. I would swear upon the holy book that, as I thrashed through the chaos of battle, an aura of divinity hung in the sky. Hovering above the battlefield, with her unblemished whiteness juxtaposed harshly against the cruel blood of men, was an angel. Though I have no proof that a holy being was looking over me that day, save the continuance of my life, I believe with a passion that such must have been the case… Man is not strong enough to endure the pain of battle without holy aid.

Never the less, the battle raged for many hours. Eventually, the French were forced to their knees. In desperation, the soldiers begged to God for mercy. However, God has no mercy for radicals that defy the divine will of his servants on earth. Thus, we ended the lives of those captured… Tomorrow we continue our march north.

Journal of Dauphin (the would-be Louis XVII of France)

15 February - My body has been cruelly battered by the rain. Though we have taken refuge from the storm within a nondescript inn, I remain cold from the moisture. From across a grimy table, the guard (who still refuses to disclose his name) watches as I write. I fear that we are in dire position. Indeed, if my life was secure, then we would not have fled our haven of security in the dark of night… Neither of my rescuers, if they can still be called such, will tell me anything of our situation. Thus, I wait in trepidation to learn something.​
 

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I have probably already said this, but I really pity the poor Dauphin. Eloi was perhaps a little overconfident, however.

That Spaniard almost sounds like he is on a Crusade.
 

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Yes, there is a nice little game of cat and mouses going on with the Dauphin. I think the chase will continue for a while.

Not so, however, in the south. With the Spanish victory, that army heading to Austria will sruely need to turn around. And it does not appear the Spanish are being very forgiving, even if touched by God.
 

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I've got some comments on your great feedback from the last update. Sorry about the delay in posting it; I got caught up with other work.

coz1 - Wow, I can't thank you enough for your praise of my story. I'm not a very good writer; in fact I've never really tried to tell a story before. With that in mind, I think you can attribute any aspects of my narrative that your enjoy to the great authors of the past, who I'm relying on for style. I really hope you continue to enjoy. However, if you find a part of my story to be banal, please say such. I want to try my hand at writing what appeals to readers.

Bismarck1 - Well, Spain is attacking me. The Italian states have been rather quiet. Though, I only just started to focus some of my attention on the southern fronts in Europe. Perhaps, as an assault into Austria I have planed happens, the Italian states will become more active in the game.

stnylan - Maybe he is up to no good; maybe he is just a little bit overzealous. I guess we will find out? :)

Duke of Wellington - Good catch. Something worth noting for future reference is that there is no sizable army near Paris. The nearest force is in the Netherlands.​
 

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Those frenchies must be tough guys. Marching all night long, after a battle, to win another one right on... :wacko:

I'd bet that while the radicals have spies among the loyalists, that's also true the other way around. And yes, the spaniards look like they're on a crusade, which rather fits the situation, I think. It should still be noted that French Revolution was by no means atheistic, although it has been in confrontation with the bigger part of catholic church. In fact, atheists have been beheaded in numbers during the Terror.

Curious to see how you will deal with your various fronts...