You've really created an interesting and emotional character in Roose. Every update he intrigues me, and i find many redeeming and negative qualities alike in him.
Great update, as ever, but be careful. Nothing ever goes well when Northmen go South.
Thank you very much! I've come a long way with character writing but it's been a while, and I think I'm overplaying their emotions at times. This could just be because I usually only do the naratives at particularly emotional or stressful moments in the story but I might tone it down if the readers agree it seems a bit overdone.
No, it really doesn't. And it's coming.
Yeah the characterisation is fantastic. I really like the character you've created, especially the fact he's seemingly turned his back on the way Roose the Elder did things. You have mentioned this before but what happened to Ramsay Snow, the twisted bastard.
Thank you very much! He grappled with that a lot as a kid but it still shines through here and there, like when he decieved Perra by bedding her just after his marriage to Kyra and then the arrests, trials and executions that were done to - mostly anyone he was reasonably suspicious of. Of course now he's got a bit more, after flaying Lady Beth.
Ramsay was killed by Lady Kyra's uncle, Theon Flint who served as a bodyguard to her for a time, but died and now his son Jory Flint continues his service. Strange arrangements to be sure - being the bodyguard of the wife of the man who's father you killed.
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that one line "I've never done this before"
Holy S*** thats awesome!
Thanks! I really wanted to fit that seen in but I wasn't sure after all the other writing I did that day. It came out to like 6,000 words or a just a bit under if I remember. I hoped it was subtle enough to show it would be horrible, while leaving it all to the readers imagination.
Such7 awesomeness in this update...!Mind ifI remark some of the most interesting parts, in my opinion?
Go ahead! I wish I heard more from readers with criticism or just general comments. I see the views spike when I post, but hearing from the readers normally means I wait a while between updates and just keep checking back, hoping

Any comments are welcome!
-A very little one, but the description ofGreyworm's gear is quite suggestive, it along with the heraldry and hose themed clothes and ornates in the late Daenerys court speak of her longing for returning way more than any word spoken, or that ambition in-game
I was very definitely trying to show the dragon theme that pervades Daenerys' empire. She's nearly fifty and for all her accomplishments has never managed to get back to Westeros. Given that that is her life's mission, she's lost hope but still tries to make it feel like home so to speak.
-Myrcella's proposal is intriguing, specially if one try to figures how much of it is taken from in-game elements. My guess is Danny is in facMyrcella's heir (I am more doubtfull of the converse), and beyond that, I doubt any marriage has founded an alliancebetween the two empires, am I right on that, yes?
True, Daenerys was Myrcellas heir but around the time of this update, I remember I checked Daenerys and Myrcella was her heir as well. For some reason my screenshot of Daenerys was just a bit before that. I really wanted to bring that into the story and felt it was a great opportunity for Roose, what with a civil war in Ghiscar and his new appointment to Master-at-Arms. Plus we met Jon Connington briefly!
-So you have formed a faction for Danny, with Connington joining. On that regard, there is a suggestive line on Roose intervention: Danny is the queen "he would have chosen". Could that imply that Roose would also favour the introduction of some kind of elective system in the IT? That would solve the "lack of heir" issue. And while I am on that, may I ask who are the 2nd and 3rd in line to both the Iron Throne and Danny's Empire? Or would that be atoo heavy spoiler of the forecoming tale?
Yes I did and he did. And that is what he means. Without an heir with a true claim, other than perhaps the Baratheon line through Shireen who had quite a number of children before she died in Brienne's prison from some illness, there is no clear successor and many in the seven kingdoms think the realm will tear itself apart. The Ironborn have a precedent of the Moot and Donnor Greyjoy was mentioned as having spoken with Roose before. They're not close but have at least spent some time together then and he would have heard of their moot - which would provide an agreed upon successor.
As for the successor, there are 4 ways for it to go. It can go to Daenerys in the Ghiscari Empire. It can go to the Baratheons, of Robert or of Shireen (I think at least two of Robert's bastards are still alive here and Shireen had around 6 kids with claims.) It can also go to the Lannisters, if Myrcella passes it through her House which settles it on one of Tywin's brothers I think but I forget his name. Of course, Myrcella could still have an heir. She's in her early-mid thirties but given a long marriage to Dickon, a few lovers and no births ...
-Your approach to beyond the wall is quite unorthodox, and keep throwing me into disbelief, and out of it again. Imean, as it is your story, you don't need to constraint your imagination and interpretation of the white walkers, but I think that overtly converting wildlings into ones of them and having them as "POV" characters dilutes all the mystery and the "otherworldly" feeling, at least for me (I know that even the Giantsbane could still be unaware of the goals of his masters, but... the atmosphere is not the same, I suppose. Of course, the story is very cool nonetheless). It also has the disadvantage of keeping you from using Tormund & co.'s character image for immersion reason. But as I said, it is an interesting and "fresh" design decision, nevertheless.
And yes, I intended to go in a very different direction than other AARs. I love the Game of Thrones AARs but so few, if any, of the ones I've read ever deal with the North and the White Walkers and the Long Night and with the Feast for Crows bookmark, I felt it was too far ahead to ignore it. I had dealt with it offsite in a War of Five Kings bookmark where Danny and her dragons were sent to the Wall (just the course of the game) where they joined with Stannis and Jon Snow - and all 3 took the Black, claimed a Dragon and went on a ranging. Naturally, that was my explanation and easy out for the end of the White Walkers there - although Jon was killed fighting the Wildlings. Here though, I have an amazing character in Tormund of Ruddy Hall who I refer to as Tormund of Giantsbane because he is the grandson of our Tormund Giantsbane with some insane stats - like that 31 Martial score which is ridiculously high - and I couldn't see anyone better to represent the threat. He gets his own nickname later to make it less confusing.
That said, neither he nor Sigorn Bluerage are necessarily White Walkers. It was like in the show where the horned white walker touched the baby and it's eyes went blue. I won't say what it did or if they're right in thinking what they do but it does do something. In part, it elevates them among the Wildlings - not all of whom will be happy about it keep in mind. As for the POV character aspect, the White Walkers as in the Masters won't be POV characters. The course of the AAR will also become more narrative - especially at the end of Book 1 (The Flayed Wolf) and going into Book 2 (Not telling you yet).
Unfortunately, there is nothing I can do about the character portrait - but I did have the idea of using the Draugr character images from the Elder Kings mod and transfering them over and modding them in to at least have something. Unfortunately, I couldn't figure out how. If anyone knows or wants to help with that, or if the Dev team reads that then looks into something like it, that would be great.