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It feels good to be back!
(For those set to 20 posts per page, there's an update on the bottom of the last page.)
I haven't written for this AAR in a long while, and therefore had to reread it to get the idea of where things are and what all clues I've deposited. Nil-the-Frogg, now I really respect what you're doing and how cool it is :cool: - hope you enjoy! As for your guesses - won't say, but it's really intriguing to read them!

Thanks to all my readers and especially Fiftypence for making sure I didn't forget this tale! :) I won't be in the future, that's for sure.
 

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Good to see Guy has noticed he's being trailed, although that could well be the least of his worries given the seeming absence of leads, bar an uncooperative general.
 

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What I want to know is how Guy managed to sleep in the same room with his wife... further more: room that is right? not bed?

Anyway good to have you back! Really missed this. It's one of my favorites! Oh yeah... where's the secretary? ;)
 

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Not exactly the most auspicious sign.
 

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Good update. The recap served a good purpose.

I'm surprised Marlborough didn't do much to confront the mysterious men on the ship, although I suppose the narrative could always backtrack to reveal that he did. Hopefully they're not far away from him now.
 

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Now, of course, everything was gone.

Jose Arraqui's apartment had been completely cleaned out, such that even the kitchen cabinets were empty, without plates or saltshakers. Marlborough checked the spot where the stash of American money had once been hidden. It too had disappeared. The carpets had been obsessively cleaned, the clothing taken from the closets - everything gone. There was nothing new to see here. Distressed, Guy Marlborough left the apartment and headed down the streets of the city to another place he remembered well, the Taqueria Almendarez. It was just about time for lunch.

"I didn't imagine I'd see you again," a chipper American voice said as its owner claimed another chair at the table. "We heard you'd been kicked out of the country."

"Well, Mr. Summers - I'm back. And this time on official business."

Summers' eyes widened. "Are you one of the negotiators?"

"No." But as soon as he said it Marlborough realized he had no idea who the negotiators were. He asked.

"The people to negotiate the debt business, try to save Venezuela from a European invasion. Weighty stuff. So you're back for that old murder case."

"Indeed I am."

"Now why is that? Why is it in the United Kingdom's interest to send an investigator over to solve the death of a Venezuelan foreign agent?"

"I suppose," Marlborough mused, having never really given the question any thought, "that's another problem I will have to explore."

- - -​

"General Juan Vicente Gomez, Chief of the Army." As the orderly held the door open, at a distance, as if with distaste, the barrel-chested figure of Venezuela's top military man asserted a dominant air on the room that he felt rightfully was his. He waved the minion out without any signal from the President, who watched, bored, from behind his desk.

"President Castro," the General began without the usual courtesies, "we have word that some of our nation's more unruly factions are planning a coup. It is of the utmost importance that you relocate to a safer location, under the protection of a military guard."

The President considered this matter briefly and picked a finished cigar up out of a glass bowl on his desk, twirling it around in his fingers.

"That will not be necessary. I will remain here, to deal with the numerous threats we face from the exterior."

The General stood, watching the cigar in its little dance. The stub moved ever more slowly in the silence, until it ceased, locked between two fat fingers. General Gomez waited a moment longer, apparently in deep thought, his eyes occasionally betraying a small, peculiar gleam.

"Yes, sir," he finally replied, now staring at his feet. "It shall be done." And rapidly he wheeled around and left.
 

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A bit of counter-feedback!
El Pip - yes ... we shall see how these tails tie in to the central mystery...
bowl of soup - I was actually going to update immediately about the secretary, because it's such fun writing her scenes, but then I realized there was nothing to say yet. :) Good catch about the room. More to come soon, I imagine!
Lord J. R. - the recap was partially to refresh my memory too :D . More to come.
J. Passepartout - ah, so that whole severed head thing was ... only a flesh wound? :D

Won't be able to visit tomorrow ~ maybe another update midweek or so. If it's not too much to ask, I suggest in the meantime you head over to the bAAR to pay a visit to one of our most beloved forum members, Norgesvenn, who is going through an exceptionally difficult time ... :( thanks.
 

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The General is most assuredly one of those factions.

Of course it is only a flesh wound! Amazing things have been done with heads. But no, I realise they are dead, it just would be great to see a dead man step into the room.
 

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I would not be surprised if the President has a trick up his sleeve.
 

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Drat, I had an update all ready to go, and the computer ate it. Re-creation coming up soon!
Of course, there's no hiding the fact that the General is one of the factions. :D J. Pass, I'll keep your idea in mind for future victims or future mystery AARs. It reminds me of the movie Murder by Death, where Truman Capote dies and all the detectives try to figure out who did it, and in the end it turns out the murderer was Truman Capote, which would beg the question of who exactly was the victim, except that Neil Simon wrote it, so you can't expect everything to be so logical.

EDIT: (a) The next update is designed to send you non-history buffs flocking to Wikipedia! Enjoy; (b) Is it really as incredibly short as it looks, or is my new widescreen monitor making everything look small? I've been concerned for a while about the brevity of my updates actually ... :confused: care to weigh in?
 
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"I must thank you so very much for agreeing to - to explain for me the present political situation. The truth is that I have but a cursory knowledge of it all."

"It's my pleasure." Summers looked across his desk at the British detective, who seemed not to be the cheery man he was on his first visit. "But you must know how remarkable it is that you got through the blockade."

"They wouldn't let just anyone through, I imagine."

"Specifically, they let no-one through. I should explain what I mean by they: all the European powers, Germany, France, Italy, and your British. They are only allowing in diplomats of the highest order. And spies."

"I'm not a spy."

"You may be a cover for one. At any rate, Mr. Marlborough, the situation is this. The Venezuelan government is heavily, painfully in debt to the European powers. The Europeans want their money back. At present they are collaborators, to bring down the country together. Once they get in, however, they will be sure to claim anything of monetary value they want. And the fighting will begin. There's just one more problem."

"And that problem is...?" A second of silence and Marlborough realized he hadn't phrased it enough like a question to prompt an answer. "What is it?"

"Well, the Venezuelan government is hardly unified itself." He let this thought hover in the air for a moment. "Actually, there's a problem that goes even beyond that."

Marlborough was beginning to understand the scope of the situation, and he certainly didn't want it getting larger. "What is that?"

"Roosevelt's getting interested. And from what I hear, he's just had Mahan over for dinner."
 

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Your updates may be smaller than some writers *coughMrTcough* but are large on quality. :)
 

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Oops haven't replied yet to the update itself so here goes:

To your question, I agree with stnylan: Shorter but great quality as always :)

Also it's no question some spies came along with Guy but why choose him as coverup. He is just someone who's trying to solve a murdercase not something very important in the great scheme of things unles the murder has something to do with it all (which of course it does) and the British authorities actually want it solved to help their own case... The detective might be more than just a pawn, but he doesn't know it or not to it's full extent.
 

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J. Passepartout said:
Aha!

A man, a plan, a canal!



HMMMMM... ;) Wendell?
HMMMMM... ;) Margaret?

Yes, your updates are rather short (but your frequent short updates are not worse than my rare medium sized ones, are they? :eek:o ) , and yes the widescreen makes it look even shorter. I've got the same problem a few weeks ago. Never mind, you'll quickly get used to it.

So, Hoch it was... I got it wrong. Looks like your AAR is heading fast toward a new style of WW1... :eek:
 

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bowl of soup said:
I suggest writing a PM to Hajji for the wiki thing: let's do a who gets it best :)
:eek: I saw this and panicked and cleaned out my PM box (which had 29 messages), but then after you nobody sent anything. :D So if you like, bowl of soup, you can post here what you unearthed.

Thanks everyone for your comments on update length; I'll try to maintain things fairly close to their current state, or slightly more or less to satisfy my own taste. Some of this speculation going on is very intriguing :cool: especially Nil's. Margaret? Can't comment :D

J. Pass - .......Panama?
 

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Hajji Giray I said:
:eek: I saw this and panicked and cleaned out my PM box (which had 29 messages), but then after you nobody sent anything. :D So if you like, bowl of soup, you can post here what you unearthed.

Heh, oh well guess I won :eek:o Guess the rest wasn't in the competetive spirit I was. Was there anything vital you had to delete? ;) Anyway here goes:

me @ Hajji said:
From what I can gather from a quick google is that Roosevelt enacted the monroe doctrine stating that from then on only America would 'police' the western hemisphere, in this case in particular Venezuela.

Venezuela - · Venezuela is a country in northern South America. In 1903, British and German warships began shelling its coastline when the Venezuelan government refused to pay its debts. President Roosevelt issued the Roosevelt Corollary to the Monroe Doctrine in 1904 to protect Venezuela, Santo Domingo and other Latin American countries from the European powers
source

On the subject of Mahan, It seems that Roosevelt was greatly influenced by and had a lot of respect for him. Though I can not see a direct link with the crisis and Mahan, but I think his idea's led to the fact that Roosevelt got involved in the first place.