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Wow, experimented with a bit of bizarre Joseph Heller scene-shifting in that last one! :eek: (Oops, started a new page, so readers beware there's a brand new update at the bottom of the last one if you haven't seen it.)

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Great to see that Margaret mad at Guy, of course she couldn't stay mad long. I really liked your discription of London in the morning. Very poetic. :)
The fact that Wendell is on board of the same ship as Guy, again, is looking very suspicious.

I must say I had to re-read that last part to understand it. But maybe it's just me. Anyway good as always!
 

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Kipper is an entirely reasonable feast, perfect to eat at any time of day or night. ;)

Of course, one would rather have bacon and black pudding butties, but I suppose you can't have everything :D
 

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stnylan said:
Kipper is an entirely reasonable feast, perfect to eat at any time of day or night. ;)

Of course, one would rather have bacon and black pudding butties, but I suppose you can't have everything :D

Yes. One day in Arabic class we had described to us various sorts of food Arabs eat, and many people thought it sounded disgusting, but it is par for the course in the Old World, all stuff one could give the name of various British foods to. Marge hasn't a leg to stand on.
 

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Ak! I'll be back May 18, after I finish with AP testing at school. If I pass the physics test (BIG if - I just got 44% on a quiz in class) I will not have to take any math or science classes in college. I'm taking four other exams, though, each about 3 hrs long. Wish me luck ~ while I study and cram and generally go bonkers, Guy Marlborough will sadly be on a spring vacation. :(

See all of you soon & take care! Maybe when I return y'all can recommend some good new summer AAR reading to me. Thanks for your patience and hopefully when the testing is done there will be oodles of time for updates and time for me to ramp up the suspense and suspicion to a new level.

Thanks again & take care - :) .
 

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The darkness opened upon the little boat the next morning and revealed a single figure already on deck, standing by the side, one hand upon the railing. The figure faced forward, trying to find something to entertain his perception in the still-grey gloom. He had spent a long night outside, listening to the crew with their bustling purpose and fondness for causing eccentric loud noises. It was not easy to sleep in such circumstances.

He had grown used to the sleeplessness, and had come to enjoy it. It demonstrated to him that not only could he survive under the circumstances, but he could get used to them and thence enjoy even more the transition back to nightly slumber. He knew it would come soon enough, when his wife would let him back into the cabin after supper.

A dark shadow of human form wandered to the deck's very peak, in front of him; he watched the mysterious visitor, who in turn watched the waves, for a few minutes, before the first figure decided to return to the indoors. The remaining man at the bow turned back to watch him go, supporting himself in the point where the two railings converged on the boat's front. He folded his arms across his chest, knowing quite well the nighttime meanderings of Guy Marlborough, even if Marlborough did not know about his.

A freak wave burst full into his back, and he fell onto his face, spitting up salt water.

Forty-five miles to the south, the Atlantic fleet of the Royal Navy lay in wait, to prevent any and all foreign vessels from entering the waters surrounding the Caribbean Sea. This was only the first ring of defense, however; an especially large force cordoned off Venezuela from even its island neighbors. The mission was to ensure that no foreigner could enter the nation without permission and clearance from the very highest levels.

The special exception, of course, was spies.
 

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Hoorah ~ I'm back! I survived the College Board AP tests very well - actually I think it will save about a semester's worth of classes that I won't have to take at university. Now it's time to write! Thanks all for your patience and wishes of luck!

stnylan said:
Of course, one would rather have bacon and black pudding butties, but I suppose you can't have everything
See now, if I'd said that nobody else would have believed me! :D
 

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The new nightfall found Guy Marlborough outside again, evidently still out of favor. He bore his burden with ease, sitting on a wooden bench, gazing out to sea, whistling aimless tunes and tapping along. His musical thoughts drifted into the realm of Gilbert and Sullivan, and gradually into Johann Strauss, though he generally abhorred the frothy lightness of that man's style.

Annoyingly, an internal conflict now arose, as Marlborough began to question his own taste in music. His foot stopped tapping as he debated the merits of the two Strausses; diametrically opposed figures, in all. There was not much call for Richard in England - come to think of it, had Margaret ever heard either of them? She really had no nose for classical music. Nose? That expression can't be right. Suddenly he looked down at his feet; they were still, but the tapping sound continued.

What could this mean?

He lifted himself up and looked out around the corner at the shapes of the deck; a uniformed figure stooped over something far up the bow, but the soft, slowly regular noise came from somewhere else. Marlborough began to pad around the ship.

The boat at night was a mildly unsettling thing, for the swinging of the waves came generally as a surprise, and the light allowed only for loose shapes to be perceived. Near the back there was one such shape, which upon closer inspection was some sort of ventilation tube. Along the other side of the boat, though, was the other person awake, carefully pacing up and down the walkway. A sudden instinct stopped Marlborough, and he watched the figure; he resolved that he didn't want to know who it was, and headed for the nearest staircase down to the bar. Perhaps it would still be open.

It was. During his third drink, although he could not have known it, the ship began to pass through the British navy unhindered. There would be one final stop at Havana; then it would pass through to the final destination with the only a handful of trusted passengers.

None of them had a good idea of what lay ahead.
 

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Wendell may possibly have slipped in allowing Guy to see him. After we have advanced furtehr in this tale there willl come a scene where Guy screams at Wendell about how he is a dirty rotten spy, and Wendell will have some smooth and tidy response, and we will need to decipher the truth of his response.
 

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And personally I am sure not much good lies ahead, either.
 

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stnylan said:
And personally I am sure not much good lies ahead, either.
Words of wisdom there. Even if some of the things that aren't as they seem are in fact as they seem there are still many things that wont be as they seem. ;)
 

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Hi.

I've just read the 100th post and want to try to guess too before I read any further...

My first thought was "Guy's wife". That would be unexpected and leave him free for this secretary. But OTOH, his wife his the funny bit here and bringing her so unexpectedly in the story just to have her killed quickly...

Okay, second guess was Heinrich Hoch. His death would be quite a twist in the plot, wouldn't it? But you took care to develop it in a weird way and told coz1 it was on purpose, so taking him out of the picture at this point might be silly.

After that... well, I don't know. But I disagree with those who bet on Mister Summers, since Guy has just left him alive minutes before. Would be rather quick to process all the murder properly and have the police already working on it...

So, I suppose I have to keep on reading, now. ;)
 

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Inspector Lopez of the Caracas police force looked up from his coffee hoping against hope that some beautiful woman in trauma had just walked in, warding off the gnawing fear that it was just an orderly to tell him about some infernal kidnapping. It was neither.

"You're back," he said, putting the coffee down and quickly calculating in his head what this development could mean.

"Yes, I am," Guy Marlborough answered cheerfully, slinging his raincoat over his right arm and splattering the wall beside him. "This time, on official British business." He pulled out the papers.

A rock crashed through the bottom of Lopez' stomach; he stared at the papers as if they were alive and crawling up the detective's fingers. "I see," he answered at length. "And what are you ... back for?"

"Same case!" Marlborough was ebullient. He, in fact, was fully conscious of this. Earlier that morning he had awakened in the same room as his wife - a triumph - and declared to her passionately, "I feel ebullient!" Now he told the Inspector, "The one involving Jose Manuel Arraqui - I'm sure you must recall."

"Ah." There was more skepticism than anger in Inspector Lopez' voice now. "Good luck." He quickly fished in his mind for excuses, found one, and fled the office to replenish his coffee cup, leaving Marlborough to inquire after some form of police protection.

Luck was certainly something the British detective would need; he had, on the final voyage from Havana, organized the case mentally and then onto paper. It didn't look good. A man named Jose Manuel Arraqui had been murdered in his apartment, with ludicrous brutality. In fact, so far as Marlborough could remember only the head had been found. Arraqui had been in possession of a suspicious amount of United States currency, mint condition. He had also been, according to the American diplomat Summers, a secret agent of some sort, working for inner circles of government. There was, of course, not much further information on this, except that Arraqui was involved in foreign security and seemed to have a habit of extorting - or trying to - money from various foreign governments. Actually, shortly after he had learned this Lopez had tried to get money from Marlborough himself, he recalled.

One solid lead was the appearance of the name Heinrich Hoch in Marlborough's appointment book. But then the dandy himself had died, with significant assistance from unknown individuals who clearly had inside knowledge of Arraqui's death, to say the least. And in the end it turned out the name had been inscribed by someone else. All that Marlborough could truly ascertain further than that, though, was that agents representing at least three European nations had tailed him on his way into Caracas on this second voyage. Why were they so interested in him, anyways?

The obvious answer was that they were interested in Arraqui - the man who had been involved with foreign agents himself. And now Marlborough had been told on the boat that he was one of the very, very few people who had been permitted into Venezuela past the blockade of the European powers. Was he getting into the makings of an international war? Or was Arraqui moonlighting in another business?

There were answers somewhere. But it seemed that first he would have to go in search of the questions. Take the slinking, shadowy men who had pretended not to be on his boat. Why were they so interested in him?