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Just a prelude to my AAR - I'm still relatively new to CK2, (100-ish hours over a few months), and I am completely new to the world of AARs as of a few days ago. I was looking for interesting houses/scenarios to play, and stumbled across Asphyxion's excellent 'A Rising Star' AAR. Needless to say, it not only inspired me to play as House Dayne in my playthrough, but also inspired me to make an AAR of my own. This will be a narrative AAR, and I'm not exactly sure where I'm going with it, I'm just letting it do it's own thing for the time being. Without further adieu, here is 'Dawn'.

INDEX
Prologue
Chapter I - The Break of Dawn
Chapter II - From the Ashes
Chapter III - Forging a Star
Chapter IV - The Bloodless Wars
Chapter V - A Star in the North
Chapter VI - The Mummer's War
Chapter VII - The Crannogman
Chapter VIII - The Decade of Death
Chapter IX - Rise With the Sun

PROLOGUE
My name is Edric Dayne, third of my name, and while my story begins here, my journey does not. I was born in the year 287 AC, to Lord Tion, of House Dayne, and Lady Elia Velyon. While the name Edric might not be known across the Seven Kingdoms, the names of my kin surely are. The Darkstar is known equally for his prowess with a sword as he is for his looks, and Arthur Dayne, the Sword of the Morning, and also my uncle, was perhaps the finest soldier the kingdoms had ever seen. My father died when I was young, too young to even remember his face, and my aunt, Allyria, cared for me in his stead. My aunt's marriage to Lord Beric Dondarrion saw me abandon the comforts of Starfall, the ancestral seat of House Dayne, for the Riverlands. Many years I spent as a squire to Lord Beric, even after his 'death' and the formation of the Brotherhood. I served Lord Beric faithfully, and loyally, as best I could, until the end of his days. Upon his death... Well, his final death, I abandoned the Brotherhood and made the long journey back to Starfall. Seventeen years have passed since my uncle's death at the Tower of Joy. Seventeen years has the name Dayne strayed out of thought and mind. No longer. While I could never hope to rival the esteem of my late uncle, perhaps one day I might return our house to glory, and the right to call myself the Sword of the Morning. Dawn is coming.

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And just if anyone, by some miracle, is interested in this, any tips for new authAARs, (see, I'm down with the lingo), or any feedback would be awesome. Thanks! :)
 

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And just if anyone, by some miracle, is interested in this, any tips for new authAARs, (see, I'm down with the lingo), or any feedback would be awesome. Thanks! :)

1) Screenshots

2) Keep a good balance of story and gameplay influenced events

3) Screenshots :D
 

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Good luck. Especially since this is your first AAR and welcome to the forum!

Cheers!

1) Screenshots

2) Keep a good balance of story and gameplay influenced events

3) Screenshots :D

Thanks for the welcome/advice guys. And don't worry, I've already got a large backlog of screenshots.

Just one, moronic, question though. How do I add the screenshots? It seems like they're appearing as small thumnails, or attatchments. How do I make them a normal size like all the other AARs out there?
 

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CHAPTER I - THE BREAK OF DAWN

I had been back in Starfall for but a month before the Darkstar came knocking. The troublesome Lady Larra of House Blackmont had taken up arms and declared independence from Dayne fielty. Gerold himself had personally asked to lead the offensive against Blackmont, and I was inclined to allow him to do so. My aunt and regent, Lady Allyria, however, felt that there were more pressing issues to attend to.
"My Lord-nephew, Lady Larra will fall under heel in time, the Blackmonts cannot stand alone in their position. With the Red Mountains to their North, and the Darkstar's seat of High Hermitage to the South, they have nowhere to run. They will either have to march directly into our lands, or suffer a siege of their very own making".
"So what would you have me do instead?", I asked.
"There have been reports, Edric. Reports that claim Sansa Stark of Winterfell yet lives. You must act quickly and betroth yourself to her! The Starks would make valuable allies, and in time, might find themselves ruling Winterfell once more. You cannot let this opportunity pass, Edric." "Give me 'til the morrow and I will have a decision.", I replied, and left the council for my chambers, and a night of contemplation.

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In the morning, I met again with my aunt Allyria and the Darkstar, along with a few of my other lords, stewards and council members.
"Edric, I know marrying Sansa Stark would give our family a foothold in the North, I really do, but we have more pressing concerns.", the Darkstar commented.
"We must move against the Blackmonts!"
"My Lady-aunt believes Lady Larra's forces will not pose us a threat locked in the mountains, such as they are", I replied. "How is this a more pressing concern than the Lady of the North?"
"Because Lord Quentyn is marching to her aide my Lord!"
Lord Quentyn, I thought. House Qorgyle has no love for House Blackmont. Why now? This made matters far worse. House Qorgyle rule Sandstone, th vast desert lands directly to Starfall's Eastern borders. With the sea to the South and West, the Blackmonts to the North, and now the armies of Sandstone to the East, House Dayne was surrounded. I cannot allow this to happen. House Dayne will not fall to an insolent wench like the Lady of Blackmont, nor her new-found allies.

"Lord Gerold. Take the forces of High Hermitage and march on Blackmont. If met in open conflict, show them what is at stake when they cross our house. Show them no quarter."
"When do I ever?", the Darkstar retorted, with a sly grin on his face.
"Very well." I said, as long as you get the job done, I found myself thinking. "Ser Matarys!"
A tall, olive-skinned and bald-headed man appeared from the crowd. He donned black-plated armor and held in his hand a shield that appeared as large as my very throne.
"Yes, m'Lord." The man responded, as he made his way through the rabble of courtiers.
"Take my forces. Take the forces of Starfall and the Elbow, and meet Lord Quentyn on the battlefield. Do not allow him to pass into our lands, and do not allow him to make any form of connection with the Blackmonts. He must be stopped.", I ordered.
"At your command.", he replied, and made hastily for the door.
Lady Sansa will have to wait.

Over the next few months, I continued my studies with little interference from foreign affairs, and with continual updates from my forces in Blackmont and Sanstone. The Darkstar had engaged a small force of Blackmont on the road, yet found little challenge in dispatching them. He has been laying siege to their castle for the better part of 3 months, and has sent word that Lady Blackmont can not hold much longer. Ser Matarys has also found success to the East. The forces of Starfall met an evenly-manned Sanstone army, and fought on level terms but a month ago. Lord Quentyn led his forces, yet failed to stand his ground for very long. At the sight of their liege lord fleeing the field of battle, the Sanstone army routed and victory was ours. A small contingent of levies from the Elbow remained to ensure no further harassment came from Lord Quentyn, while Ser Matarys marched the forces of Starfall to the aid of the Darkstar. Victory was surely ours.

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My studies proved fruitful, as I found in me the traits necessary to one day be a strong and honorable leader of men, and worth of the lordship of House Dayne. Many in my court acknowledged the man that I was becoming, noting the humility I showed, yet pride I carried myself. In one of his letters, the Darkstar himself made word that he had seen the pride of House Dayne growing inside of me for some time. The pride of House Dayne. That's what it is, I thought to myself. I am not humble because of my surroundings or my titles, but because of the very title our family is known for: The Sword of the Morning. Arthur Dayne was the Sword of the Morning, not Edric. I was but a boy of thirteen, what had I achieved? My pride stemmed from the very same place. I was proud to be carry the name Dayne. Proud to fly our banners, and proud to call myself nephew to such a man. And all the while, my aunt Allyria damned me for my decision to not contact Sansa Stark immediately, many others commended me for this decision. They say I took the needs of our house before the needs of my own, and showed great temperance and control in the process. Life is good, I thought. Perhaps one day my family might deem me worth to carry our ancestral blade, Dawn. One day.

By the turn of the year, Blackmont had been taken, and Lady Larra along with it. The Darkstar brought the Lady of Blackmont before me in chains, and I decreed she be locked in the dungeons until my decision was made. Ser Matarys had not finished with the armies of Sanstone in time to join forces with Lord Gerold, so he began his march back to Starfall, having crushed Lord Quentyn handily. The next few months were spent consolidating my rule over the Red Mountains. I was not yet a man, and I had already won my first war and restored Dayne-rule over the Red Mountains. While Lady Larra dwelt in my prisons, the Lordship of Blackmont puzzled me. Should I release the Lady Blackmont and allow her to swear fealty to me? Should I even allow her family to continue ruling a vast section of my lands? I knew not what to do. My Aunt-regent Allyria constantly counselled me to show mercy on House Blackmont, and to release the Lady Larra and allow her to return home. My aunt had also counselled me to not engage the Blackmont rebels, and to marry Sansa Stark. Unfortunately, during the war, Lady Sansa married Lord Paramount Harrold of the Vale, and so that opportunity passed from thought. However, if I had followed my aunt's advice, Lord Quentyn would surely have reconvened with Lady Larra's forces, and they then would have possessed the manpower to take Starfall and crush our house. No, I though. I made the right choice.

As I sat at my hearth, the door to my great hall slid open, and Ser Matarys entered alongside the Darkstar.
"House Qorgyle shall trouble you no longer m'lord.", said Matarys, with a air of pride that seemingly stretched his breastplate to it's limits.
"Thank you Ser Matarys.", I responded. "I'll see that you are properly rewarded."
"Thank you, m'lord.", replied the Ser, as he bowed low and made his way to the back of the hall.
"There is still the matter of Lady Larra and the rule of Blackmont at hand, my lord.", said the Darkstar.
"What would you have me do?", I asked. I was still unsure what to do with the Blackmonts and their lands. I knew what the Darkstar's answer would be, but I asked it anyways. I had heard enough of my aunt's ramblings, I needed another opinion to be voiced.
"Allow me to bring you her head. Do not let their treason go unpunished." The Darkstar replied, adamantly.
I pondered his words for a moment. They made sense, oddly enough. I did not take joy in the thought, but I must consolidate my rule. To show the resolve to do what must be done before I had even come of age would surely impress the other lords.
"Very well. Bring me her head."
The Darkstar began taking his leave when I made my final decision on the matter.
"Lord Gerold!", I yelled, in an attempt to catch his attention before his exit.
"Yes, my lord?".
"Blackmont is yours. It's lands are your and it's titles are yours, and are to be held by you and your sons from this day until the last day."
The Darkstar said not a word. A simple grin and bow was all he offered me in return, as he made his exit from my halls.

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As I rose from my seat to take my own leave, Ser Matarys, who I had thought gone from my halls, approached me once more.
"There is one more thing, m'lord", he quipped.
"Yes?", I responded. If this was a means of improving upon any reward I was to offer him, I was to have none of it.
"I received word m'lord, on my travels in Sandstone with your forces. News that you would surely wish to know."
While I was glad to know this did not entail his reward, Ser Matarys had peaked my curiosity. Surely this was important, why else would Matarys be so hasty to inform me of it? I pondered.
"Yes?", I stated once more, this time not in the manner of disinterest, but in curiosity.
"King Aegon m'lord... King Aegon is in the Stormlands. He is here."
 
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I certainly appreciate the narrative element of any AAR, mostly because I'm a nostalgic reader who came into the forum through great narratives, and attempted one myself (much smaller in scale than 60+ page mini novels)!

Keep up the good work. The first person element is also a nice touch.
 

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Thanks for the interest!

By the way, as a person who is pretty much new to anything forum-like, am I doing something wrong with regards to this? I may just be paranoid/jealous, but I feel like this isn't getting seen by anyone. :confused:

Again, it might just be me wanting to be king of the world or something, but any information helps. :p
 

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Thanks for the interest!

By the way, as a person who is pretty much new to anything forum-like, am I doing something wrong with regards to this? I may just be paranoid/jealous, but I feel like this isn't getting seen by anyone. :confused:

Again, it might just be me wanting to be king of the world or something, but any information helps. :p

A long long long time ago people used to comment more frequently then now, I think it's a generation thing. I recall my Presidents AAR back in Victoria I, at its height, would sometimes pull in 10-12 comments in a few days (but I had built up a loyal following by then). However, most people are 'ghost' readers, they read, might be interested, but otherwise don't comment (in fact, the majority of AAR readers will be like this). Sometimes, they might just drop a comment to let you know they're reading.

Pretty much now, it seems, that only people who have made a 'popular' AAR or have a lot of friends on the forums receive an extensive amount of comments. Although, I'll admit, being a historian and philosopher who spends a lot of 'free' time (my job really) already reading thousands of pages of material every week and writing journal articles, spending the hour or so compiling an update with pictures for an AAR is not worth my time (as I also like to hike, fish, golf, etc) if no one is bothering to comment on (even I might otherwise know 'ghost' readers exist). I wouldn't be paranoid or jealous, but the narrative AAR has long since fallen out of favor. Again, I think the majority of people now on the forum are young, middle-school to high-school students who just really don't want to sit and read "a book" if you know what I mean.

Of course, none of that means you should get dispirited! :cool: I'm around, for now anyways! :p

(As a great old Paradox forum user, stnylan says, "To view is human, to comment is divine!" I try to live out that motto of his ever since reading his post from like, 2009 or something I think).
 

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CHAPTER II - FROM THE ASHES

Aegon is here? In Westeros? My mind raced at the thought of it all. Ser Matarys went on to explain that the Golden Company, a famous band of sellswords founded by a Targaryen bastard, had landed with a host of ten thousand men. Jon Connington, and exiled lord from the Stormlands, had landed with them, and claimed to bear the son and heir of Prince Rhaegar- Aegon VI.
"Aegon died long ago, did he not?" I asked of the knight. My love of history was nothing short of non-existent, granted, but every man, woman and child in Westeros had heard of what the Mountain that Rides had done to Elia and her children.
"I had thought so too, m'lord.", said Matarys, "but...", the knight paused for a moment. "Begging your pardon m'lord, but who are you to deny the return of the king?"
His choice of words proved poor, but what was I to expect from a lowborn knight? After all, he had a point. Should this really be Aegon Targaryen, the shame of not riding to his aid would haunt our House for eternity.
"I agree.", I replied, with little deliberation. "We must ride to his aid at once".

I began preparations with the Darkstar for our rendezvous with King Aegon when the sickness struck me. It festered deep in my stomach, like a rodent attempting to gnaw it's way through flesh and bone. The sweats left me bedridden for weeks, and the nurses who tended to me could hardly keep up with the speed of my bowels. I think I'm going to die., I thought to myself one night. Right here, in my bed, before I am even a man-grown. But for once, luck came to the aid of House Dayne, and in little over a month I was on the mend. With my sickness behind me, it was time to continue my preparations for our march on the Stormlands.

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The end of my illness was met with bad news. Lord Anders of Yronwood had risen in revolt against Prince Doran's rule, and had claimed the Stoneway as his own. While this concerned our ambitions in Dorne little, it severely damaged our ambitions in the Stormlands. The Stoneway was the main passage out of Dorne. When Dorne had no love of the dragons, the stoneway kept the Conqueror out of our lands, and ensured that the future seven kingdoms remained as six. With the Stoneway in Lord Anders' hands, we had little hope of reaching King Aegon.
"Take the Prince's Pass Edric.", the Darkstar added. "It is nearer our borders and large enough to fit our forces through with little trouble."
That would work. I thought to myself. We would have to pass through the Dornish marshes, but at least we could reach Aegon in Griffin's Roost.
"Little trouble?", a voice chimed in. From behind a pillar emerged my Lady-aunt Allyria.
"Do you not remember our discussion, aunt?", I replied. "You are to have no more part in our discussions of war."
"I do remember, my lord, but I think for once you might agree to hear out my counsel".
My aunt had grown wearisome in recent months. She had no love for the Darkstar, that was obvious, and sought to undermine his counsel at any turn. While I loved her dearly, we were in a time of war, and Starfall could not afford to sit idle any longer.
"The Prince's Pass leads us too close to the Reach, Edric. Mace Tyrell has never been a friend of Dorne, but I fear our situation is far worse than you understand, nephew. Euron Greyjoy, brother of Lord Balon, has taken his brother's kingship and conquered the Reach in a matter of months! We cannot afford to march so far with a threat so near!".
For once, my dear aunt was right. I could not leave Starfall, and Dorne's Western borders, undefended, regardless of Aegon's landing. Even if I wanted to, I could not leave Dorne, as the only two viable passes through the Red Mountains were now in enemy hands.
"Thank you, aunt.", I said, calmly. "Lord Gerold, as the Lord of Blackmont, it is your duty to guard our Northern borders. Do not let the Ironborn into our lands."
"Even iron cannot wound darkness, my lord.", the Darskstar retorted, as he took his leave.
He is a strange man, but I am glad he is on our side.

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With no hopes of joining King Aegon's war, I looked to improve House Dayne's standings internally. My mother approached me one day, asking a fiefdom of me. She was never around, my mother, and only showed up to ask something of her only son. Yet, fortunately for her, timing was on her side. I needed to strengthen my standing in Dorne, and valuable allies was a strong way to do this. I had granted the Darkstar lordship over the lands to my North, yet I still controlled the lands to the South of Starfall, known as the Elbow. I bestowed the Ladyship of the Elbow upon my mother, and in turn, gave Starfall a staunch ally to the South. The only border left unattended was to the East. Once again, timing proved benefitial, as on the behest of my aunt Allyria, I had begun searching for a bride. Lady Sansa was no longer an option, and so I looked to the daughters of Dorne instead. As it happened, the High Lord of Brimstone, the vast desert lands directly East of Starfall, had a young daughter. Ellaria was her name, and at roughly my age, was a perfect candidate for marriage. My decision was made.

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Most of the following weeks were spent preparing for the wedding. Musicians were hired, travelling acts were arranged, and food, wine and guests were all brought to the halls of Starfall. During the preparations however, my master of coin came to me one night, and informed me of some missing coin. He told me that someone has been stealing from my treasury for months now, and although not sure who it was yet, he had one suspicion.
"Lady Allyria, my lord.", he whispered.
Allyria? My own blood? Stealing from me? The thought rattled me. I had felt her disdain for me ever since my return, and for the favor I showed the Darkstar. But this? This was too much. To have my regent, and my blood, no less, rob me blind. I would not have it.
"Continue investigating this a while longer. Come to me if you have any further proof." I said, and with that, the master of coin left.
I am nearly a man-grown. I thought to myself. The regency of my aunt is nearly over, and my rule nearly begun. It must not falter. House Dayne will not fall into ruin under my watch. I will start with her.

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CHAPTER III - FORGING A STAR

'What a man sows on his nameday, he reaps throughout the year', the old saying went. I was six and ten, a man-grown, and old enough to rule my holdings without a regent. As I had promised myself, I began to consolidate my rule at the first moment I could. My Lady-aunt Allyria had been accused of theft from my own treasury. At first I had little proof of the matter, but my wedding saw to that. All had gone well, I had exchanged my vows with Ellaria, and the feast was well under way. A troupe of musicians approached me and noted they had not yet received their pay, even after being told they were to be compensated before the event took place. I personally attended to this, and in little time, learned from one of my courtiers that my aunt had refused to pay any of my hired performers. Not only that, but she had pocketed the gold for herself. As it was my wedding day, I let it pass, but I did not forget.

The morning of my nameday, my aunt entered my halls to congratulate me, and see to her final duties as my soon-to-be ex-regent. She was taken completely unaware when I informed her of my knowledge of her deeds, and was even more shocked when I ordered her thrown in the dungeons then and there. She is my family... And she betrayed me. While I could not bear to be counted among the ranks of kinslayers Westeros has seen, I henceforth banished her from Starfall. Last I heard, she had taken up refuge in the halls of the Lord of Lemonwood, currently rebelling against Prince Doran.

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My sixteenth nameday was not all bad news, however. Throughout the night, my wife had been in labor, and a few short hours after my dealings with Allyria, I was a father. Olyvar, we named him. Born on the first day of March, like his father, in the year 303 AL. He bore a remarkable resemblance to his mother, with dark-olive skin, hair that resembled the cold remains of a once-warm hearth, and the thickness, for better or worse, of his mother. One undeniable aspect however, was his eyes. His eyes were mine. A man's face can deceive a thousand men, but the eyes tell the truth to all. While he would grow up to look like an Uller, any time I looked into his eyes, I would see a Dayne. That was all that mattered.

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As the days since my nameday wore on, my thoughts began to return to King Aegon in the Stormlands. It had been two years since the King's landing, and two years of minimal action. The Golden Company had laid siege to numerous holdings in the Southern Stormlands, and had set up a temporary base in the Crow's Nest. With the Ironborn facing rebellion from the lords of the Reach, and the Lords of the Stoneway still rallying against Dornish rule, I was yet unable to align myself with the king. I often pondered if he truly was the king. In Westeros, Aegon had been dead for twenty years, yet apparently, he was not. The son of the last dragon had been residing in Essos, awaiting his return to reclaim his throne and his birthright. While Ser Matarys had convinced me in years-passed that I should rally to the King regardless, news reached me that set my mind on the matter at ease. News had been spreading for years that Daenerys Targaryen had three dragons, far to the East in Mereen. However, word soon reached Starfall that Viserion, one of the dreaded three, had broken free, and none other than Aegon Targaryen had tamed the winged beast. By the Seven... It really is him. A dragonlord of old. Our king has returned.

No matter the news, our position remained the same- We could not leave Dorne. As such, I sought other ways to strengthen my rule. I realized that although I showed proficiency with a blade, I showed little with my words. I focused my studies on my diplomatic abilities. If I was to rule Starfall, I might as well be good at it. Additionally, I continued my tutelage under the Darkstar, who taught me not only how to hold a blade, but how to use it to lead men. The Darkstar was known as a trickster, a master of deceit and foul-play, and some of his unpredictable tendencies had worn off on me. Years as a boy and now months as a man with the Darkstar had forged me into a fine soldier and commander, and as such, Lord Gerold saw fit to grant me a Knighthood.
"Arise, Ser Edric, Lord of Starfall.", he said to me, with a hand on my shoulder and smile on his face. Although our blood ties were distant, I could tell he thought of me as a son. And I him, in a peculiar way, as a father.

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By August of the same year, my thoughts had turned to increasing my influence in Dorne. The Daynes were always loyal to the Dragonkings, as was House Martell, and as such, Prince Doran liked me well enough. The other lords, however, barely remembered the name Dayne. A man came to me one day, informing me that one of my young courtiers, Alester, was of House Dalt and rightful lord of Lemonwood. Alester's father had died a few years passed, under highly suspicious circumstances, and Alester's uncle ruled Lemonwood in his stead. The man begged me to intervene, and claim the fiefs in the name of Alester.

Lemonwood had rebelled against Prince Doran almost a year ago, and it was said that my aunt had fled there after her banishment. Prince Doran paid little attention to the rebellion, as Lemonwood's forces remained in their castles throughout the revolt, and did little in the way of pillaging. Yronwood and the Stoneway was of more pressing concern for the Prince of Dorne. If I were to take Lemonwood, not only would I gain a valuable ally so near to Sunspear, but would surely please Prince Doran for ending a rebellion he could pay little heed to. And so my decision was made. I rallied my banners, hired a mercenary fleet, I really should commission the construction of a proper port for Starfall, I noted in my head, and set sail for the broken arm of Dorne.

As my wife was the daughter of the High Lord of Brimstone, Lord Ulwyck answered my call and marched his forces to Lemonwood. As I was now a man, I personally led the forces of Starfall, for the very first time. The thrill was exhilarating, and my excitement was clear to all who saw it. The Darkstar was quick to remind me that war was not as glorious as the stories told, and that even he took no joy in the slaying of another man, particularly other sons of Dorne. I had besieged Lemonwood's castle for a few weeks by the time Lord Ulwyck's forces arrived. Now, with over four thousand men at my command, and the morale of the defenders low, I called for an assault on the walls. The battle was quick and ruthless, with most of the rebels perishing in the ensuing melee. I killed a man for the first time that day, and the image has remained in my memory ever since. The battle was won, and the now-Lord Alester was seated, and immediately swore fealty to Prince Doran's rule. The Lord of Sunspear and the Lord of Lemonwood both thanked me for my efforts, and I returned home to Starfall, victorious.

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On the voyage home, my thoughts turned to Brimstone. Lord Ulwyck had come to my aid when I asked it of him, as his blood was now tied to mine. My newborn son was, after all, his grandson, and to refuse the call of your kin was most dishonorable. This made me think however, of further ambitions of my own. Now that I had a son and heir to Lady Ellaria, I had a claim to the High Lordship of Brimstone. Brimstone sat directly East of Starfall, and should I possess these lands, would give me dominion over nearly two-thirds of Dorne. That sort of prestige would not have been felt in the halls of House Dayne for many years. Alas, this was merely a lingering thought. Lord Ulwyck proved loyal, and as such, I could not repay him by usurping his lands, even if it were for my own son.

Upon my return home, I was greeted by Lord Gerold in my halls. The Darkstar is never far from conflict nor trouble, I thought to myself.
"What is it, Gerold?", I asked, before I had even reached my seat at the head of the table.
"It's regarding your aunt, Edric", the Darkstar replied, in a manner unusual for the man. Lord Gerold had always carried himself in a manner not unlike the Red Viper, Prince Oberyn. Full of charisma, bravado and the utmost confidence on a normal day, the Darkstar sat almost somberly in his chair, like a man recently robbed.
"What about her?" While I was usually in no mood to discuss the treacherous woman, the Darkstar's demeanor troubled me, and so I obliged him this once.
"She has wed Lord Andrew of Storm's End, my lord, and named you a bastard, born of adultery."
A bastard? That can't be. Or... could it? My father had died when I was young, and my mother was always distant from me, yet I had never considered this to be a situation I would one day find myself in. I had no knowledge of my mothers' transgressions growing up, but I refused to believe it. I was the only son of Lord Tion, second of his name, Lord of Starfall. I am NOT a bastard!
"She's lying.", I told the Darkstar. "This has never been mentioned before, it is purely Allyria's spite for me that fuels her allegations, nothing more".
I could tell by the look on his face, Gerold wanted to believe me, but for the time being, could not. He sat for a moment, silent, before saying what was already on my mind.
"She wants Starfall."

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Having posted parts one and two, I noticed how heavy they were in speech, so I decided to tone it down and make Part Three more of a descriptive section of the AAR. I'm still new to this, and still trying to get a hang of how best to write one of these.

Thanks for reading. :)
 

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I always like Dornish stories ! I wondered what may happen dpwn there while reading the books and I think your style is nice .Moreover House Dayne is one of my favourites due to its historical appearance in many important events so consider me a loyal servant my liege and future Sword of the Morning ;)
 

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Having posted parts one and two, I noticed how heavy they were in speech, so I decided to tone it down and make Part Three more of a descriptive section of the AAR. I'm still new to this, and still trying to get a hang of how best to write one of these.

Thanks for reading. :)

Naturally, one might develop a style of AAR writing. Gameplays obviously don't really need that as screenshots tell the story. For me, I write only history books since, as someone who writes history professionally anyway, I just could write any other way when discussing history! :p

Per narratives, finding the right balance between dialogue and descriptive prose is always the main key. Just dialogue lacks depth, but too much description, might have just written a history book then! Keep up the fine work.
 

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Naturally, one might develop a style of AAR writing. Gameplays obviously don't really need that as screenshots tell the story. For me, I write only history books since, as someone who writes history professionally anyway, I just could write any other way when discussing history! :p

Per narratives, finding the right balance between dialogue and descriptive prose is always the main key. Just dialogue lacks depth, but too much description, might have just written a history book then! Keep up the fine work.

As a second-year history student myself, I find it awesome that you get to write history professionally. :p

Thanks for the advice though, I'll try to keep it in mind as I write the next few parts.
 

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CHAPTER IV - THE BLOODLESS WARS

The letters my aunt Allyria had written were spreading. She had the courtesy to send one directly to me in advance of the others, but soon after, most of the lords and ladies of Dorne had heard the news. I still did not believe her words, how could I? To admit to being a bastard son of my mother would be to cede Starfall to my aunt. I would not allow it. As such, I sent ravens of my own, to all the nobility of Dorne, that my aunt's words held no truth not worth. I called upon my mother to ride from the Elbow to Starfall immediately. If I was to find the truth of the matter, I would find it firsthand from the one person who knows it.

Nonetheless, I had to prepare Starfall for what might come next. Lord Gerold and I had agreed that regardless of the truth of the accusations, my aunt was moving to take Starfall from me. My first order of business was to prepare for what now seemed like an inevitable conflict. Having married the lord of Storm's End, my aunt had access to a host much larger than my own. I called a meeting of my small council to discuss the steps we could take to prepare for an invasion.
"Balman, Olyvar", I beckoned, "see to the increasing of taxes throughout my lands, we need to bolster our treasury should we be dragged into conflict with the stormlanders."
Olyvar was my castellan, a wise, old man, and a most devout follower of the Seven. He had seen many winters and witnessed many wars come and go. Balman, on the other hand, was barely twice my age and none too experienced. He had come to me one day, seeking service in my halls, and I granted him that right. I did not know the man, nor his skills, but he carried himself in a way that was most impressive, and he has yet to fail me.
"Lord Gerold, how many fighting men does Starfall have?", I asked of the Darkstar.
"Starfall has two thousand my lord, with another two ready to answer your summons from your vassal's lands."
"Good. We will most likely be in need of them soon. See what you can do about finding some more men willing to take up arms for us."
"As you wish.", the Darkstar replied. I was accustomed to his usual manner of exit, with little courtesy and seldom a bow. But he was different today. Lord Gerold bowed low, said the right words, and left with a smile, not a grin, on his face. Perhaps he saw in me a worthy leader. The thought made me smile.

With preparations for war underway, a messanger raven arrived in the night bearing news from Sunspear. The rebellion in the Stoneway was finally over, and Yronwood fell in line once more. Our passage to Aegon's side was now clear, on the very eve of our own war. The message also told of news from the Stormlands. Has Prince Doran sided with my aunt? Has he sent me terms of surrender? The thought turned my stomach. As I read the coarse hand of the message however, the news was far graver. King Aegon, the rightful King of Westeros, has left. He married his aunt, Daenerys Targaryen, and set sail for Meereen to join her wars in Essos. He has left behind a portion of the Golden Company to hold the lands he had reclaimed from King Tommen, but what did that matter now?

With Aegon gone, Prince Doran saw the futility of standing against the Iron Throne, and offered Dorne's forces to aid in the boy-King's many wars. My force was not large enough to assault the host of the Riverlands or the North, so I made the decision to take Seagard for Tommen. Seagard sat West of the Freylands, and as the name suggests, bordered the vast waters to the West of the Seven Kingdoms. While the forces of Seagard would undoubtedly outnumber my own, I knew that with myself in the van and the Darkstar by my side, victory could be achieved. I once again hired a mercenary fleet and set sail for Seagard. The voyage took us passed the Ironborn's holdings in the Reach. Years had passed since the Crow's-Eye had taken Lord Mace's lands, and the results were still to be seen. The land was green-anew, but the buildings told of a hard-fought war. The shadows left behind on the stones told of the razing of many homes and castles. There is a somber air to this place. King Euron has cast a shadow over these lands. Starfall shall not succumb to this malice. While the Ironborn had made no attempt to enter our lands since their conquest, I would not let my guard down. I would die before I allowed such a fate to befall my own people.

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I arrived in Seagard in the first weeks of the year 305 AL, and found a royal host led by one Lord Bayle besieging Seagard.
"Your forces are a most welcome sight, my young Lord.", The old, gruff, man bellowed. "Look to the South, should Gravesham be allowed to ride out, I fear we could not match their combined forces."
With that, I took my men and made the march to Gravesham. The march lasted a few days only, but was long enough to teach me that the Riverlands was no place for the Dornish. The lands were damp and the ground loose, with every step a burden to even the lightest of foot. While I had grown accustom to these lands in my journeys with Lord Beric, my men, had not. Nonetheless, my forces arrived at Gravesham a few days later and laid siege to the castle. Only a few days had passed when the news reached us. Prince Doran was dead.

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Upon Price Doran's passing, his daughter, Arianne, succeeded him and called all Dornish forces home. She would take no part in the wars of King Tommen. As such, my siege of Gravesham, and the assault on Seagard proved pointless. I took my men, and after only a few short days in the Riverlands, returned to Starfall. I returned home feeling defeated. There was no battle, and hardly any siege, but it felt like a loss nonetheless. I did not consider Tommen my true king, but with Aegon gone, he was the only king I had. If Prince Doran had not died so soon, or had Arianne not pulled Dorne out of the conflicts immediately, perhaps I could have delivered Seagard to the boy-King within weeks. What's done is done, I thought. Best move on.

My few years as Lord of Starfall could be summed up by the sight of a messenger raven. News came and went more often than not, most often concerning far off regions of the Seven Kingdoms that I would likely never see. News reached my halls that Lord Paramount Harrold of the Vale had died in combat, fighting for Tommen in the wars we so recently abandoned. This meant, once again, that Sansa Stark was available for marriage. But I am already married. I found myself thinking. I cannot break my vows to my wife. Or can I? Brimstone, the high lordship of my father-in-law, had chosen not to heed Princess Arianne's decision, and remained involved in the Iron Throne's wars. As such Lord Ulwyck was branded a traitor of Dorne. My wife's family are traitors. Surely that is reason enough to end the marriage? I visited my Septon, and he counselled me to send a raven to King's Landing, asking the High Septon for his blessing. A few weeks later, my request was granted. Ellaria left Starfall and returned home shortly, and I sent a message to the new Lord of the Vale, asking for Sansa Stark's hand in marriage.

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A short while later, my request was granted, and Sansa and I were married within the month. The wedding was marred somewhat, by two occurrences. Firstly, my new wife was pregnant with Lord Harrold's child. While I vowed to her that I would raise the child as my own, the marriage could not be consummated that night. Secondly, and far more gravely, was the issue of a murder in my halls. One of my courtiers, Cedra, had slit the throat of my vassal, Lord Alaric. Lord Alaric was a drunkard and a fool, but a capable warrior that would surely be missed on the battlefield. According to Cedra, the Lord had thrust himself upon her, and she would not have her honor so tarnished. While I could understand her grievance, I could not let murder, the murder of a lord no less, go unanswered. She was thrown in the dungeons, and the issue was settled. I came to be informed however that Lord Edric had left no worldly heir to his holding of Nightfall. What am I to do with the castle now? I pondered.

As I sat at the head of the banquet, a knight approached me in full armor. He was a large man, older than many, with a shield instantly recognizable to my eyes.
"Must you always wear your armor Matarys?", I asked of him, jokingly. Ser Matarys had been a loyal knight in my service since I had returned to Starfall many years ago. The knight removed his helm, and smiled back at me.
"Perhaps that question might not have been asked of me, had I been here a little earlier, m'lord.", the knight replied, clearly referring to the death of Lord Alaric.
We talked a while, as old friends might have done, about battles, warfare and of women. The party was winding down before the knight rose from his seat to finally take his leave.
"Seven blessing to you m'lord, and to you my Lady Sansa.", he said, as he bowed, turned and began his walk away.
I pondered for a moment.
"My Lord, Matarys." I said to him. The old knight turned to me once more, with a look of confusion on his face. "I believe the proper words are 'my lord', when one Lord addressed another."
I thought perhaps my riddles would be easy enough to deduce, but the old knight was known for his skills in battle, not his words at court.
"As you are aware, Lord Alaric is dead. Lord Alaric had no heir, Matarys. You have served me faithfully for many years, my friend. What was once his is now yours."
Matarys dropped to his knee faster than a whore with a gold dragon in her hand. "I am honored m'lor-", he stopped himself. "My lord. I hope I should prove worthy of this great honor." With that, the new Lord of Nightfall rose, and took leave.

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A year had passed since my marriage to Sansa Stark when Princess Arianne called us into battle once more. Ghost Hill, a small province to the North-West of Sunspear, had been in rebellion since I was a boy. Prince Doran paid little interest to it, but Arianne tasked me with leading a force to reclaim the territory for Dorne. My march took several weeks, and led us across the vast desert lands of Dorne. By the time my army reached the borders of Ghost Hills, I could already seen another Dornish army approaching. Obara Sand, one of the famed Sand Snakes, the daughters of Prince Oberyn, led a vast host to the gates of Lady Nymella's keep. Obara instructed me that she was to lead the assault on the castle, and that I was to take my smaller force and hunt down Ser Maron. Ser Maron was Lady Nymella's nephew, and had been harassing the lands along Ghost Hill's borders for some time. When Obara's forces arrived, he had fled North into the Stoneway, and I gave chase. Deep into the Red Mountains, my pursuit led me, until finally we had Ser Maron's forces surrounded. With my larger host on one side, and the sharp slopes of the mountains on the other, he had nowhere to run. I set up camp and, along side Lords Matarys and Gerold, devised a plan to best vanquish our foe. A messenger entered my tent, handing me a letter with the seal of Sunspear upon it, unbroken. I read it to myself quietly. Lord Edric, Lady Nymella has surrendered. I hope this letter has found you before any blood has been spilled. You are to return home to Starfall immediately, Ser Maron will be dealt with in Sunspear. Signed, Arianne Martell, Princess of Dorne. Two wars in as many years had ended without bloodshed for me, and both have felt like defeats. I yearn for a real battle, against an enemy worthy of the forces of Starfall.

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My return to Starfall was met with wonderful news- My Lady Sansa was pregnant. My son Olyvar was already walking by the time the news of my second child reached me, but I was filled with joy nonetheless. A son of ice and of stone. I thought to myself. Just the thought of such a man brought a smile to my face. Perhaps he would be the one to follow in my uncle's footsteps and claim Dawn as his own. The news of my wife's pregnancy had further implications than the ones felt in Starfall. This child, whether boy or girl, would be the rightful heir to the North. Over the years, Galbert Glover had wrestled Winterfell from House Bolton, and declared himself King in the North. An independent North would be of no benefit to my son. If I ever hoped to place my son in Winterfell, I would need to have the Iron Throne on my side. As such, I sent word to King Tommen that I would aid him in his fight against King Galbert. The North would be brought back under the rule of the Iron Throne, and, in time, would be returned to my son... We sail North.

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I always like Dornish stories ! I wondered what may happen dpwn there while reading the books and I think your style is nice .Moreover House Dayne is one of my favourites due to its historical appearance in many important events so consider me a loyal servant my liege and future Sword of the Morning ;)

Thanks for reading Mike!

I had never paid much thought to House Dayne, other than of course Arthur himself, but it's a really interesting house that I wish was expanded upon. I guess that's what I'm doing with this, making my own expansive story for the House.

And don't worry, there's plenty more ahead for the Lord of Starfall. Already played well in advance of where I've written up to. :)
 

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Iam not worried ;) This young man seems to be already ready for glory as his ancestors were ! though I would not help so easiyl the Throne ....
 

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As a second-year history student myself, I find it awesome that you get to write history professionally. :p

Thanks for the advice though, I'll try to keep it in mind as I write the next few parts.

Are you concentrating your studies in any particular field? Oh yes, writing articles that maybe a few hundred people will read at most is enthralling! My AARs here, often heavily using historical references anyways, have accumulated hundreds of thousands of views! :ninja: Although, I shouldn't be so harsh since my institution rewarded me with $1500 for my work.

Per the update, another nice update! As someone who has already mentioned his preference towards narrative, you're making me exceptionally happy to read along! :cool:
 

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Are you concentrating your studies in any particular field? Oh yes, writing articles that maybe a few hundred people will read at most is enthralling! My AARs here, often heavily using historical references anyways, have accumulated hundreds of thousands of views! :ninja: Although, I shouldn't be so harsh since my institution rewarded me with $1500 for my work.

Per the update, another nice update! As someone who has already mentioned his preference towards narrative, you're making me exceptionally happy to read along! :cool:

As of now, no, no particular focus. I'm just about to start my second year actually, so I haven't gotten into the thick of things yet. I will, most likely, focus on feudal Japan when the time comes though.

Thanks again for the interest in my AAR. The 400-ish views are nice to have so far, but individual comments make me want to continue making this. :)