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Dark Wings, Pale Bark (A Game of Thrones AAR)
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Hey there. Starting an AAR with one of my favorite Houses, House Blackwood. Simple enough. Contains some spoilery stuff due to the bookmark being "A Feast for Crows", so you probably shouldn't read if you're just a show watcher.... But it's up to you. I'm going to set myself some quick goals for the AAR and see how I do.
1) Exterminate the Brackens
2) Help the Starks back into power
3) Spread the Old Gods religion
4) Join up with a King in the North or Become a King in my own right. The Olds Gods demand a kingdom!
5) Play and write the characters according to their traits
6) Write an interesting story
7) Reply to the fans! You take the time to comment, I'll take the time to reply
Super simple stuff

 
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Chapter 1: The Tent on a Hill
An army was gathering at Blackrush. Sitting atop the tallest of the many hills, was a large pavilion, which gave its inhabitants a clear view of their surroundings and their amassing forces. The tent was stripped black and red, matching the colours of the flag that flapped gently in the wind, flying from its centre pole, the standard of House Blackwood. Within the tent there were two men of this long noble line, and one other lord. Both Blackwoods were geared for war, wearing plate armour that was burnished scarlet, upon them both inlaid in silver was the dead Weirdwood tree of their house, surrounded by ravens that were wrought with onyx. The elder of the Blackwoods also wore a cloak of Raven Feathers, which billowed and flowed with every movement he made. The last lord wore a gaudy tunic of red and blue and green, with a white catfish embroidered upon it.

“How many?” Lord Blackwood said as he replaced a mug of wine on the oaken table.

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“Including the 200 men that just arrived with Lord Shawney here, I’d say we have a little over 1000 men. Including you and me, we have about 31 Knights.” Ser Brynden Blackwood spoke with a deep tone, one almost unsuited to his lean looks inherited from his father.

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“And how many men does Jonos Bracken march on us with?”

“Fuckin’ Brackens” Rogert Shawney, Lord of Blackrush, managed to spit out, along with whatever food he had in his mouth as he slammed a fat fist onto the table, causing the plates and mugs to rattle “Fuckin’ cowards, the whole lot of them. Lannister cock-sucking, horse-fucking, land-grubbing....” Shawney’s fat red face shook he cursed, finally trailing off and bringing his third mug to his lips. Tytos smirked at his master of coin’s outburst. He might not look like one of us, but he hated them as much as Blackwood would.

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“According to my scouts Bracken is following us with a little over 1500 men, a couple of days ride away from here. He had to leave some of his force behind to garrison Raventree Hall.” Brynden said solemnly.

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Tytos’s lips pursed at the mention of Raventree Hall. Tytos had been forced to flee from his castle before the Bracken troops could besiege his lands, mustering 400 men, he rode north with his eldest son to gather his banners in Blackrush. Tytos was pained by the fact that he was forced to flee his ancestral home if he had a hope of defeating the Brackens, but it hurt him even more that he had to leave his family behind. Robert was young and sickly, and a mustering ground filled with soldiers would be no placed for little Bethany. Hoster had volunteered to come with him, but he had no business fighting a battle, the boy would be killed. Worst of all his wife had to be left behind, but they would be safer in the hands of Jonos Bracken then at the mercy of his men storming our camps, men filled with adrenaline and wild fury to rape and kill. Brackens and Blackwoods may despise each other, but the killing of women and children is another matter entirely. His family probably sat under house arrest in their own castle. Tytos had only brought his son and heir Brynden, a competent commander and the boy could hold his own on the battlefield. If Tytos had thought he couldn’t fight, he wouldn’t have brought him. He had no intention of losing another son.

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“My Lord” Shawney’s slurring brought Tytos back to reality “It might be a good idea to hire some extra soldiers for this coming battle, some mercenaries maybe? Y’know, really big fuckers. With so many dead lords out there right now there are plenty of knights looking for masters who pay well.”

“We won’t need them.” Tytos stood up from the table and turned around, feather cloak flowing behind him. He was the tallest man in the room, taller than his son by a margin. He was gaunt and thin, and wore a close-cropped salt and pepper beard. “I’m going to move our forces to Maidstone and take root up in the mountains. They won’t be able to dig us out, and in those narrow passes and rock terrain we’ll beat them back. After that we re-take Raventree Hall, and then we capture Stone Hedge.”

Both Shawney and Brynden nodded in agreement, but Tytos didn’t see, nor did he care for their agreement. He knew it would work, as Bracken was too determined not to chase them into the mountains. It wasn’t the way he wanted to fight him, it felt a bit cowardly. But true cowardice is betraying your king when his corpse is not even cold and bowing to those who had a hand in his demise. None of these southerners had any sense of pride; their knees are weak and brittle, bending at the first sign of trouble. Once Bracken realised things had become a little difficult, he decided to betray his king. Is it their gods that lead them to act this way? Probably.

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Those whose ancestors converted were weak and fickle, but we Blackwoods come from a stronger stock, we kept the old gods, and the ways of the first men. We are just as northern as the Starks, and I will not go down without a fight.

“You know boy, you really should drink more wine instead of that water stuff, it’s much better for you, the Maestars have done studies y’know. You and your father look like corpses, you especially. You should dine with me some time boy; I’ll give you a real bloody meal, because it doesn’t look like your dad’s been feeding you proper. Oh maybe your mother’s tits just ran dry when you were young?” Shawney chuckled

“No doubt your children will look nothing like me then, because your tits seem to be in no danger of running dry” Brynden smiled appreciatively at him. Shawney burst into laughter and his face turned a deep red. Tytos smiled.

Suddenly the flaps of the tent opened.
“Apologies my lords” the guard stepped in followed by two men, bloodied and injured. “But these men have urgent news” Tytos turned to see two knights, one wearing colours he did not recognise, but the other’s surcoat bore the unmistakeable trout of House Tully.
“M’lord” The Tully man panted urgently “We’re lucky we happened across your camp. The Lannister host approaches from Maidstone. They crushed Lord Edmure’s forces, but we managed to escape, and now they’re coming here. More than 1000 men led by The Kingslayer.”
 
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Chapter 2: The Battle of Riverhalt​

The battle lines had been drawn around the village of Riverhalt, a hamlet of little consequence that sat atop a steady slope. Like most villages in the Riverlands, Riverhalt had suffered at the hands of the forces of Tywin Lannister, and now it faced forces under the command of his son, to suffer at the hand of Jaime Lannister. The Blackwood men had attempted to sneak past the Lannister host to make it to mountainous Maidstone, but had been caught and pushed back in a number of small skirmishes by the better-armed Lannisters. Now they had fortified themselves within the mostly deserted village, as they awaited the oncoming battle. At the bottom of the hillock, encircling them were the combined forces of Lannister and Bracken, as men eager to make their names stood shoulder-to-shoulder, packed several lines deep.

Tytos and Brynden Blackwood rode towards the four men halfway between the two opposing sides. Atop their destriers were two knights, sitting tall in their saddles and beside them their banner bearers, each holding the standard of their lord. The Lion and Horse flew high, whipping and lashing in the wind. Tytos pulled Night into a trot before finally stopping, and turning to see Brynden trotting behind him, gripping the standard tightly in his scarlet gauntlet. He watched his son for a moment, catching his eyes, and offering him a small smile, which Brynden returned. Bracken looked taken aback, and the Kingslayer slightly amused, as Brynden held high a grey direwolf.

“You’d fight for a dead man and a lost cause?” Bracken blustered.

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“I’d fight for our king. I’d fight for honour and pride. I’d fight for the chance of justice against a man murdered at a wedding, and the chance of putting a sword through one of those responsible.” Tytos eyes never left Jaime Lannister’s, his white enamelled armour was the best money could buy, but it wouldn’t stop him caving it with his fists if he needed to.

“You’re outnumbered two to one, and our men are better equipped than yours, surely you know you cannot win this day.” Ser Jaime spoke much sense. Maybe Tytos would have listened had Jonos Bracken not been present.

“I do.”

“Then give up you fucking idiot.” Bracken snorted “You give me the land your family stole from mine so long ago and we won’t have to crush you with our superior forces and tactics.”

“Forces commanded by your daughter?” Brynden’s deep voice cut through the gale, almost not having to shout over it. “She has a fine pair of tits that one” Bracken’s leaped for his sword before Jaime shot him a disapproving look. It was well known that nearly all of Bracken’s military advice came from his daughter, Allysanne, the same daughter who had been betrothed to Brynden, an arrangement brokered by King Robb Stark to put an end to the in-fighting, for a generation or two at least.

“Speaking of children, what about mine Bracken?”

“Don’t worry Blackwood, I’m not a fucking monster. Your dearly beloved and little ones are now my honourary guests at Stone Hedge. Raventree Hall isn’t exactly ideal living conditions compared to my Castle. Especially not in the state I left it anyway.” Bracken left out a laugh

“Then we are done here. Hopefully I will see you on the battlefield, and justice will be served.” And so Tytos turned his horse and rode away, his raven feather cloak flowing behind him in the wind. Ser Jaime tried to shout something after him, but over the gust and his own pride, Tytos didn't hear.

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Tytos and Brynden sat side-by-side as they watched Jonos Bracken, beside whom was his daughter, order the first assault. The army of the throne charged uphill and the Blackwood archers fired down. Jaime Lannister was right, as they arrows mostly panged harmlessly against the superior armour and shields of the attackers. He’d brought with him real soldiers, while Tytos and Jonos had brought farmers. Acting before they would lose the advantage of the hill, the Blackwood Knights, led in their charge by Brynden Blackwood, thundered down at the Lannister heavy infantry. Men were crushed beneath hooves, and breast plates were caved in by the forces of hammers and swords, leaving holes in the lines. Following the knights were Tytos and his personal guard trying to capitalize on the chaos caused by the horses, giving them time to retreat and charge down at Lannister men once again, or perhaps even break through to the other side were Jonos and Jaime watched with their reserves, waiting for their men to get to the top and take out the archers.

Once the men had engaged Tytos realised there was truly no hope of breaking through the Lannister lines, packed too dense with twice their number. Their only option was to attempt to outflank the Lannisters and strike them from behind with all their cavalry. Tytos pulled Night back to see his son and the Knights reach the top of the hill. He dug his heels hard into the side of the horse and he moved right, to go around the Lannister flanks, signalling for his son and his men to follow. Though Jaime and Jonos, or Allysanne at least, had been watching and ready for this. The trumpets sounded and the Heavy Infantry at the back of the line moved to face the incoming cavalry. The horses smashed into the men. Some buckled and crashed, others trampled the Lannisters. Tytos saw as his son’s horse buckle and Brynden was thrown from him, as his own crashed through the men. He turned, his heart in his throat to see Brynden rise with a vengeance, long sword in hand and cutting down the first man who advanced on him. That’s when Jaime Lannister skewered him with a lance.

Tytos felt his shoulder puncture as he was wrenched from Night. He spiraled out his saddle as he watched his warhorse continue to charge, but without his rider. Then all he saw was dirt as he smashed into the ground. He hadn’t been knocked from his horse in so long, he’d forgotten what it felt like. His body was in shock so he didn’t feel anything for a moment, all there was, was the taste of his own blood. Tytos spat out the part of his tongue he’d bitten off on his decent and grimaced. The taste of blood mixed with the dirt in his mouth. His ears rang; the screaming and dying of his men now felt as if it was taking place miles away, a memory in the back of his mind. His men, his son. He pushed his hands into the dirt to lift himself, his shoulder shrieked, and all the pain returned to his body and he crumbled back into the dirt. Next time he tried to lift himself it wasn't a shoulder, but a foot that stopped him. Tytos looked up at the sword that stared back at him, and the pure white figure holding it.
“I think we’re done here”

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You're certainly fulfilling the "write an interesting story" criteria! It'll be interesting to see how Tytos will get out of that situation.

Thanks very much! I'm sure he'll survive no problem. It's not like it's being written by Martin himself. Just some guy on the internet aping him. It's a cool thing when someone who's AAR you're reading comments on your own stuff.
 

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Thanks very much! I'm sure he'll survive no problem. It's not like it's being written by Martin himself. Just some guy on the internet aping him. It's a cool thing when someone who's AAR you're reading comments on your own stuff.

Haha, you're welcome! And yeah, it's true that it's not written by Martin himself, but these AAR's tend to have a high mortality rate anyway!

And of course, interesting AAR's deserve to be read!
 

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The Blackwood's defeat in AFoC scenario is almost inevitable, but I'm still glad you went down fighting. I liked the conversation you wrote between Lords Blackwood and Bracken. ''.. Especially not in the state I left it anyway.'' Just brilliant. Now to seeing what'll become of the rest of Lord Tytos' sons. He has plenty more, doesn't he?
 

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Chapter 3: The Smell of a Weirwood​

“.....and Honeytree” Jonos Bracken stabbed his finger at the map he had unfurled on the centre table in his pavilion. The table was made of a beautiful white weirwood, white as bone and smooth as silk. The smell of weirwood reminded Tytos of home. A deep, heavy wooden smell, that reminded him of the days he spent in the godswood in Raventree Hall, and its gigantic weirwood tree. The biggest one in the world supposedly. Tytos was married in front of that tree, and spent many a night with his wife beneath that tree. Brynden was probably conceived under that tree. A tree that was poisoned by the Brackens thousands of years ago out of jealously. Was this table some sort of slight by Bracken?

“The lands you stole from us will finally be returned.” Bracken had quickly changed from his armour and now wore a yellow tunic with a brown horse embroided upon it. He had a wench on hand for drinks and quick gropes.

Tytos rolled his eyes and shook his head, but he was in no position to be debate the issue. “Yes yes, fine, now can we discuss my family?” Bracken had spent the last hour lording his victory over him, most of which Tytos had barely listened too because the victory belong mostly to Jaime Lannister, who sat beside Bracken looking incredibly bored, his head resting in his hand, paying no attention to Bracken’s gloating.
“In due time, Blackwood” Jonos snorted “In due time my friend. I think I’ll also take…”

“You’ve acquired quite enough land, Lord Bracken.” Jaime’s head rose up and turned to Bracken. Tytos resisted the urge to smile, but couldn’t help but smirk.

Bracken nearly choked on his drink “But…. But your Lord father”
“Is dead” Jaime cut in “And what was promised was for subduing the Blackwoods, which you needed me for. I did half the work, so I should take half the land.” Figures a Lannister would take my lands for himself, thought Tytos, they’re all the bloody same.

“You have no claim on those lands! Those lands belong to-“

“To Lord Tytos, and so with him the rest of the land will remain.” Except this Lannister perhaps. Ser Jaime had changed quite a bit since Tytos had last seen him at the Battle of Whispering Woods. The loss of a limb can humble even a Lannister, make an honourable man out of him. Then Jaime stood up from the table, and Tytos caught a glimpse of his golden hand. Well, maybe not completely humble.

“Lord Tytos shall be allowed to return to his Raventree Hall as long as he agrees to bend the knee to the crown and renounce all fealties to the Starks. Of course, hostages will also be taken to ensure your loyalty to the crown.”

Tytos pursed his thin lips, and stared at the table for a moment. On the map laid out he saw Stone Hedge, where Bracken held 5 of his 6 remaining children and his wife. Family, Duty, Honour. The words of house Tully. King Robb was half Tully, surely he would forgive him for this. Lord Edmure was Tully, but Edmure was lord no more, and now he wasted away in Casterly Rock. Family first, duty second.

“Of course.”

“Then go ahead and kneel!” Bracken's dismay at losing lands, had quickly been replaced at his excitement to see Lord Blackwood kneel before him. He’d no doubt waited for this moment. “Kneel before The Kingslayer and swear fealty to your new king!”

And so Tytos knelt in the dirt before Lannister and the ever smug Lord Bracken, and renounced all he had fought for this last year, for the sake of his family. Swearing fealty to a 9 year old king. Swearing fealty to Cersei Lannister.

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“Now for the matter of hostages.” Jaime said as Lord Tytos rose from his knee. The final part of the young wolf’s kingdom, left there in the dirt. He was disappointed in himself, the words of the oath to his new king tasted bitter in his mouth. Tasted of dirt and blood.

“’l’ll keep hold of Edmund and Bethany, you can have the rest of you children back.” Bracken said almost dismissively. That would have infuriated Tytos, had he not just been shocked by what he heard.

“Not Bethany! Please Jonos, she’s my only daughter. She’s-“

“The best way to keep you in line is what she is.” Bracken violently jutted a finger at Tytos.

“Please Jonos, she’s never been more than a day’s ride from me!”

“And Stone Hedge isn’t that far away from your hall, we’ll keep her safe. You can have you other two sons back.”

Tytos opened his mouth to speak again, to protest, but knew better. What’s one more defeat? He saw himself lucky to be getting any of his sons back. That and there was another matter remaining, meaning he could not risk upsetting Bracken. Not yet anyway.

“And my wife?” He forced the words from his mouth, dreading the answer.

“Oh yes” Bracken licked his lips. Tytos clenched his fist. “Your wife. You can have her back... for a price. These wars are expensive you know. I think 100 gold dragons is a fair price.”

“What!? My treasury is nearly run dry in the first place. I have to pay for repairs, weapons and arms, train new guardsmen. And now you expect me to pay your ransom? On top of the money I must send to the crown!?”

“Then I guess I’ll just hang on to her. She’ll make a fine serving wench. I need a new one.” Bracken pinched the bum of his whore “You can only feel the same ass so many times before it starts to get old.”

Tytos, infuriated, jolted up from the table, slammed his fists into the weirwood table “I SWEAR IT BRACKEN, BY THE OLD GODS, I’D STRANGLE YOU WITH MY OWN HANDS IF SER JAIME WASN’T HERE TO SAVE YOU!” Tytos meant what he had said. He was still sour that he would have defeated his long-time rival if not for the arrival of Lannister men.

Bracken sank back in his chair and chuckled. “Oaths to false gods mean nothing to me Blackwood. What matters now is gold. Your gold. And if you can’t pay with gold, then your wife will pay for it with service.”

Tytos clenched his fists, and wondered what would happen if he lunged at Bracken. Might he be able to choke the life from his thick neck before Ser Jaime stuck him with his blade? Could he break his neck? Maybe gouge out his eyes? Yes, Bracken was stronger than him, but no matter how strong you are, you can’t build muscle in your eyes. Every muscle in his body tensed as he prepared to leap over the table at Bracken, before Ser Jaime spoke.

“Your offer is quite unreasonable, Lord Jonos.”

“As is Lord Tytos’s decision to fight the crown. I’ll have his gold, or he won’t have his wife. She’s my prisoner, mine to do with as I see fit. 100 gold dragons. That’s my offer.”

“You won’t get 100 gold dragons, you’ll get 10. The 10 gold dragons you request will be taken from the amount Lord Tytos is sending to the crown and be given to you. You get your gold, and Tytos gets his wife.”

In that moment Ser Jaime reminded Tytos of an old friend. Just and fair, perhaps he had been too quick to judge. It was clear to see that Bracken was upset, and Tytos loved it. He didn’t want 100 gold dragons, he wanted 100 of Tytos’s gold dragons. The confusion spreading on his face suited him well, thought Lord Blackwood, he now looked as stupid as he was.

“I..... well.... I suppose bu-“

“Good” Jaime said swiftly. ”Then the matter is settled.” Tytos was beginning to like him.

“May I return home now, Lord Commander?”

“You may leave.”

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It took 2 days for Brynden and Tytos to make the return ride from Riverhalt to Raventree Hall. Riding is significantly quicker when you have two men opposed to one thousand, as all of their men had either died, deserted, or been conscripted by Jaime Lannister to replace the men he’d lost. Brynden did most of the talking on the uneventful ride home, speaking of the men he’d killed, the injuries he sustained, and the whores he’d fucked before the battle. He’d been forced to wait outside under Bracken’s guard while Tytos negotiated, which Brynden hadn’t minded, since he trusted his father completely. Unfortunately for Brynden, his father did very little listening to him, very wrapped up in his own thoughts and if he had made the right decision. He wondered if it had all been worth it as they rode through the desert which had once been the Blackwood Vale. Razed and razed again, leaving his subjects to be slaughtered like sheep. The Blackwood Vale was a barren ash shadow of what it had once been. No plants grew where once was verdant, no villages stood where once was lively, and no people greeted their lords where once there was many. Tytos sighed to himself. He fought for his king, and those who trusted him paid the price. His wife, his children, his people. He spent the most of his trip contemplating his decisions. Yet while there was many uncertainties, there was one thing certain. Bracken will suffer.

“And then there was Melons. By the old gods she was good.” Brynden savored the words in his mouth.

“I guarantee you that wasn’t her real name, son.” He’d spent more than enough time with whores back in his day to know a fake name when he heard one. He also wanted to call his son out on speaking about the gods in reference to how well a whore could suck, but he didn’t have the energy. Sure, Brynden was a follower of the Old Ways, but not as much as Tytos would have liked. At least he doesn’t spend his time drowning people for favour, or praying to a black goat in the sky.

In the distance Tytos could see Raventree Hall come into view. The top of the timber keep peering out from behind the ancient stone walls, green from the moss covering them. There didn’t seem to be any damage to the walls themselves. No remnants of siege towers or ladders. Tytos had told his wife to drop the drawbridge when Bracken approached, and welcome him herself. By letting him in it’d hopefully keep casualties to a minimum. The garrison didn’t have the food to survive a siege anyway, most of it Tytos had taken for his men at Riverhalt. Yet as Tytos approached something seemed off. Something was missing from the skyline. Something dead and white. The realisation made Tytos feel sick, he could feel the worry in his stomach. He drove his heels in Night as hard as he could and the horse went full sprint towards

The drawbridge dropped and Night galloped into the courtyard, with Bryden trailing behind. He clenched his teeth so hard it hurt when he saw the inside of his grounds. Hundreds of blackened sticks shafts stood where the godswood had once. It smelt of ash and smoke. Tytos dismounted his horse and felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned to see Denys, the captain of his garrison. He shrugged him off and clenched his teeth harder still. Not out of rage, but to try to stop himself from throwing up. He slowly walked through the black weirwoods, reliving the memories of his life, until he came to the centre. A small clearing surround the huge white stump. Tytos fell to his knees and prayed in the ash. Could the gods hear when they had been cut down and fashioned into a table? Tytos didn’t know. His tears left little puddles in the ash surrounding the hearth tree. He felt a presence behind him, but was too upset to look. He heard him kneel beside him, the ash crunching beneath him greaves. Brynden had begun to pray also. Tytos had expected that. Then the unexpected occurred. He heard more crunching of caked ash beneath legs and feet. Curious, he turned to see Denys kneeling down in prayer. Denys was no godly man, he’d never set foot in the godswood, except to chastise Tytos for hiding from his father. Denys had been here since Tytos was a boy, and in his sixtieth year, now he finds the gods? More crunching signalled the approach of more men. More of the garrison, came to kneel beside Denys. Then the stable-master, the cooks, the servants and peasants who had taken refuge in the castle during the siege. Tytos smiled as he realised what was happening, softening the pain a little as the tears drying from his eyes, leaving them as crusted as the ground. He turned back to the gods and he prayed. He prayed for justice.

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Weeeew, got a little bit carried away with that post but I'm really happy with it. Usually I aim for about 1000-1200 words to keep the reading quick and snappy, but I got 2100 in there, so hope you guys don't mind. I've been trying to think of some house words for House Blackwood, since they don't have any canon words but I'd love to be able to use some.... Time for ask the audience! Any ideas? I had something to do with Wisdom in mind, because of ravens/weirdwoods. "Wisdom rooted deep" or something? Ain't got that "Winter is coming" repeatability though.... Give me your ideas! Winner gets a their name mentioned in the next update :D Or maybe you guys like my one? Let me know!!

All criticism is welcome and accepted, and all praise is loved. Time for some quickfire replies to everyone kind enough to comment!

Some of the pictures are broken to me :(

Sorry about that..... Not sure what I can do as they all seem to work fine for me.....


Haha, you're welcome! And yeah, it's true that it's not written by Martin himself, but these AAR's tend to have a high mortality rate anyway!

And of course, interesting AAR's deserve to be read!

Thanks again!! That's also why I read yours. Tymos dying at 19 by assassination, after what? 2 posts? Now that's a mortality rate.

A good read so far! Always more than a little interesting to start off on the back foot and actually lose a round!

You can lose a round but doesn't mean you've lost the whole match! Tytos is going to come out of his corner punching! Despite his huge negative prestige, no money and all his men dead, he's gonna give as good as he got..... hoepfully

The Blackwood's defeat in AFoC scenario is almost inevitable, but I'm still glad you went down fighting. I liked the conversation you wrote between Lords Blackwood and Bracken. ''.. Especially not in the state I left it anyway.'' Just brilliant. Now to seeing what'll become of the rest of Lord Tytos' sons. He has plenty more, doesn't he?

Aidun? On my AAR? Dude I love "The Lion Cub"! It's what got me writing AAR's again after not having written one for so long. Love your writing! Thanks for the praise, means a lot! You'll see in this chapter what ol' Bracken meant!

Is it actually possible to win the war?
One time i somehow got up to 30% warscore but then lost :/

After playing it many many times to get a good start for my AAR, I've found it basically impossible to win. Not that I wanted to, it would've been ridiculous to win, and everyone loves an underdog. I think you might be able to if you get start getting those Lord paramount messages that "Your cause is just and I take up arms for you" or whatever, but most of the paramounts are either very loyal to Tommen or fighting their own wars, so I doubt you'd ever get those.....
 
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Sorry about that..... Not sure what I can do as they all seem to work fine for me.....

Don't worry, it was just my ISP that had blocked the image host for "adult content" :p

Also, the Blackwoods are staunt old believers in the old gods, and it's exaggerated that they hated Bracken even more when they converted to the seven, implying they're pretty conservative in the south of Westeros. Therefore I think their words should have something to do with the old gods!
 

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Don't worry, it was just my ISP that had blocked the image host for "adult content" :p

Also, the Blackwoods are staunt old believers in the old gods, and it's exaggerated that they hated Bracken even more when they converted to the seven, implying they're pretty conservative in the south of Westeros. Therefore I think their words should have something to do with the old gods!

Yeah was thinking about something Old Gods related aswell but couldn't come up with anything decent so I'm still thinking about it..... Damn adult content! I guess Crusader Kings 2 could be rated 18's for incest, child murder, torture, and all those other terrible things. at least you can see them now :D

As far as I know their words are "The old gods are watching you" or something like that.
Great AAR so far.

I saw that aswell but couldn't find anything in the canon to back it up. According to the song of ice and fire wikipedia their house words ain't been mentioned in the books yet, so I figured someone just came up with that one. I think it's okay, but I'm trying to come up with something better......
 

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"Here comes the King in the North...":(
/trauma
As for the AAR, it's really good! I like the narrative style, and while I can't think of a writer alive I admire as much as GRRM, your writing is quite good! I shall be the bannerman of House Blackwood on their quest for justice for the Young Wolf!
 

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Have you actually bethrothed someone matrilineal to sansa?
Else pedofinger tends to marry her himself,and sansa is the only definitly safe was to Keep the starke alife.
Same with tully.