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Chapter XXXVIII. Jean I the Greek
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Never had the emperor witnessed such rage, such fury, such chaos. Around him, the world forged by his ancestors was consumed in hatred and blood.
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The battle of Jerusalem

The shouts of the soldiers, the neighing of the horses in panic, the sound of swords smashing the shields and the rattle of the wounded, the battle may have been deafening, but Jean could clearly hear the soldiers around him shouting the same name: "Jerusalem! Jerusalem!"

But which Jerusalem? Loyalists and rebels alike shouted the name of the same city, invoked the protection of the same Saint Etienne and raised the same silver and gold banner of Jerusalem.

The emperor was striking. To the left. To the right. But who? He had no idea. The horses' hooves raised huge plumes of smoke, turning both friend and foe into dark silhouettes that barely stood out against the setting sun.

A gust of wind swept across the plain of Jerusalem and for a moment, through the chaos of battle, Jean saw it. The banner of Onfroy. So close. So far away.

"Death to the usurper!" he shouted at the top of his voice as he spurred his horse. Several of his knights followed him in his mad charge across the battlefield.

"Protect the king!" shouted a rebel. Several knights formed up to absorb the shock.

It was violent. Jean saw Duke André of Sanaa skewer a knight. He himself disarmed one of his opponents but had to struggle not to fall. No sooner had he regained his balance than a rebel attacked him. The emperor was saved only by Count Orson, who managed to disembowel his attacker with a powerful blow.
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Duke Andre of Sanaa and Count Orson of Haditha defeat their opponents

"Onward!" shouted Jean, pointing at Onfroy with his bloody sword. So close! So close to victory!

But the last rebel square was increasingly compact and put up fierce resistance. The melee was of unparalleled violence.

A knight bearing the arms of House Azraq of Amman challenged Jean. Although stout, he fought like a demon.
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Duke Hamelin III of Amman

The emperor was so engrossed in the fight that he hardly noticed the giant charging at his uncle Henri and who knocked his horse down with a single powerful blow. Henri's life was saved only when one of his knights thrust his sword into the giant's side. The rebel let out a terrible cry of pain and rage but did not collapse, continuing to swing his sword left and right.
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Prince Henri of Montoire (left) and Amaury (right) fight and wound Duke André II the Giant of Oultrejordan (center)

For his part, Jean was foaming with rage. His duel was costing him precious time. The time he would need to kill Onfroy and put an end to this war.

On his left, the imperial marshal, Duke Manasses of Mecca, had his right flank ravaged by a spear. In an act of desperation, he threw himself at his opponent and they both fell to the ground. Manasses drew his dagger and plunged it into the chink of Duke of Damascus' armour. The rebel struggled for a few moments before expiring. Manasses, whose guts were spilling over the battlefield, finally collapsed.
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Dukes Manasses of Mecca and Roger of Damascus kill each other

As he avoided a parry from his opponent, Jean heard the dreaded call to retreat. Led by the wounded giant, the rebels were retreating.

Jean was seized with anger. He struck his opponent with such force that his shield was shattered.

"Mercy! Mercy!" the man shouted, raising his hands to the sky.

In the distance, the Onfroy banner had disappeared.

In rage, the emperor removed his helmet and grabbed Duke Hamelin. He wanted nothing more than to behead him here and now.

"Mercy, Sire!" the man shouted as Jean's sword grazed his throat.

“I am a true knight!" shouted Jean angrily before swinging his sword. “A true Frank!"
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Emperor Jean captures Duke Hamelin III of Amman

Today he had won a battle.
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Victory

But not the war.​
 
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Merry Christmas to you too! I'm currently reading the Greatest Knight by Elizabeth Chadwick, and your battle reminded me of the book!

Thank you! I didn't know Chadwick. She is not well known in France and very few of her books are translated into French (but she seems really focused on English History that's probably why). I might try her Guillaume le Maréchal (it will remind me of Duby's dated but extremely well written book) or her Aliénor which seem to be translated. After that I should read Mireille Calmel Aliénor to see if the character is seen differently in French fiction.
 
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Thank you! I didn't know Chadwick. She is not well known in France and very few of her books are translated into French (but she seems really focused on English History that's probably why). I might try her Guillaume le Maréchal (it will remind me of Duby's dated but extremely well written book) or her Aliénor which seem to be translated. After that I should read Mireille Calmel Aliénor to see if the character is seen differently in French fiction.
I didn't know about her either till I just happen to pass by the book at the store and it caught my eye.
 
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Joyeux Noël @Werther! And thank you for the lovely segment!

Merci @Historywhiz !

I didn't know about her either till I just happen to pass by the book at the store and it caught my eye.

Too late, I ordered all of her books :D.

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Today is a great day. I have just written the last chapter of this story. I still have to translate these last chapters, but I feel really relieved (and a little proud).

I have a long epilogue to write, but I'm not in a hurry for this last one. I don't want to leave my characters just yet.

Anyway, I want to thank you for your support, and I hope you will enjoy the last month of this AAR.
 
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Chapter XXXIX. Agathe
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"Is she here?" asked Agathe, pointing to the small staircase leading to the crypt of the church of Santa Lucia de Pera.

"Y... Yes, Your Majesty," replied Hugues the By-Blow in a frightened tone. The empress wondered where the confident young man had gone. The one who, centuries ago, had dreamed of becoming a knight. "But she doesn't like to be disturbed, perhaps you could see her later?”
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Friar Hugues the By-Blow

“This is my last chance to talk to her," said Agathe. “Night has fallen and my boat is waiting for me to cross the Golden Horn. And tomorrow I will leave Constantinople to repel the Hungarians. But don't worry, Hugues, I'll go alone." She nodded to her faithful Pulcheria and the two guards, ordering them to stay with her nephew.
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Duchess Pulcheria Doukas, Head of the Empress Household

Hughes tried to dissuade her again, but she ignored him and went down the stairs. After pushing the door open, she found herself in a small, long, dark room. She passed between two rows of columns that led to a sarcophagus lit by two torches.

Kneeling before the tomb, Catherine de Bartanay murmured prayers. Agathe approached behind her back, and just when she thought the Queen Mother was absorbed in her prayers, she spoke, without taking her eyes off the sarcophagus.
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Quenne-Mother Catherine of Bartanay

"How did you find me?”

“Pulcheria told me that you were here.”

“She is well informed," said Catherine, sitting up.

“As head of my household, it is her role to be." Agathe stood in front of the sarcophagus where the following inscription had been engraved: HUGO II DEI GRATIA REX MESOPOTAMIAE. "But it is no secret that you often come here to pray.”
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King Hugues II the Dark, husband of Catherine of Bartanay and brother of Empress Agathe, who died in the Battle of Constantinople

“Yes, I come every fortnight. And yet I hate this place with all my soul.”

“Why?" said the empress.

“Why?" Catherine gave a sour little laugh, but did not look away from the sarcophagus. "Your brother... not that one, the eldest, Jean who was called the Heir. Well, Jean never ruled or even held a title. He spent his life here in Constantinople, far from your father. And he died in a skirmish to conquer a mere piece of land in the Caucasus... Yet his remains had the honour of resting in the Heroon, alongside the Greek emperors. And when the Glorious abandoned you and returned to Jerusalem, he took the body of the Heir with him and buried it in the Holy Sepulchre beside Our Lord."

Catherine's tone became harsher. "And my husband? A prince of the blood who spent his whole life fighting for Jerusalem. The conqueror of Baghdad. A king! Who gave his life so that his father could win his greatest victory, and make you an empress. He was only allowed a sarcophagus in the crypt of a small church in the Genoese quarter. No matter how much his brother Henri insisted, only his embalmed heart made its way to Baghdad.”

Her voice had broken and she seemed to be struggling to contain her tears. Agathe could not help but feel pity for this woman whom she had hated so much.

"I'm sorry, Catherine," she said, putting her hand on her sister-in-law's shoulder.

The Queen Mother wiped away a tear and took a deep breath.

“It’s all in the past," she said, standing up. “What about the future? Did your meeting with the Genoese podesta go well?

“The negotiations were difficult. We did not reach an agreement until after dark. The Genoese were very hesitant, but the alliance between Duke Currado and the Pisans worries them. They finally agreed to provide us with ships to transport the army to Bari. As soon as I have repelled the Carpathian emperor, I will embark for Italy.”
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The wars against the dike of Benevento and the emperor of Carpathia

“I beg you," said Catherine. “Give up this madness. You must support your nephew.”

“If only I could," sighed the Empress. “But my husband Philippos is right, I must defend the Empire if I want to keep my crown.”

“You will not keep it if the usurper wins.”

“Don't be so pessimistic, Catherine. Onfroy has been weakened since his defeat in Jerusalem. The siege of the city has been broken.”

“But not him," retorted the Queen Mother. “He has taken refuge in Kerak and spent the winter building up his strength. Every day he grows stronger, you must help the emperor! Just as your brother, my husband, helped you to obtain your own throne!"

Catherine seemed almost to implore Agathe, who was moved.

"I don't forget Hughes' sacrifice, I promise you," she murmured. "But..." She took a resolute tone. "But I must do my duty, I have no choice."

Catherine looked at her in silence, dipped her right hand into her left sleeve and sighed, "Me neither."

The blow was so quick that Agathe could not dodge it. As the dagger pierced her throat, she fell backwards and smashed her head against the sarcophagus.

She brought both hands to the dagger and withdrew it, letting out a blackish blood which she quickly stopped by applying her hands.

Her breathing was so difficult, she was choking.

"Pul... Pulch..." she tried to articulate, the blood rushing from her mouth preventing her from speaking.

"Pulcheria?" asked Catherine as calmly as possible. “Don't worry Majesty, I will call her."

Catherine called Pulcheria who entered the crypt followed by the two guards. They were in no hurry or panic, as if they had expected this sight. The two soldiers ignored the empress completely and moved towards the sarcophagus. As for Pulcheria, she was content to watch her die.

"Oh, don't look so surprised," Catherine laughed. Who brought you here? And Jean the Heir told you not to trust the Doukai. Especially not a Doukas whose lands you sacrificed to save your precious little crown."

The pain was unbearable. She struggled for the slightest breath of air.

“W... why?" she managed to articulate.

“Why? Why? Why? That's the only word you can think of.” Catherine leaned over her and looked her straight in the eye. "I don't like you, it's true. But believe it or not, there is nothing personal here. If you had agreed to defend the emperor, then maybe we wouldn't be in this mess. You want proof? I don't like Jean either, and yet I serve him. I serve him because what is good for him is good for my son Hugues. And their victory is now assured.”

Catherine put a finger over Agathe’s mouth. "I know what's going through your mind, you don't need to drown in your own blood to express it. No, neither Jean nor my son know about it. They are children, and this is not the kind of game they enjoy. If I had offered to get rid of you, I'm sure they would have refused, protested. The same reaction as your crybaby nephew." In the distance, Agathe could hear someone crying and praying.

"They... they will know..." said Agathe.

“No, no one will know. These two fellows," said Catherine, pointing to the guards who had just opened the sarcophagus, "serve the Doukai. As for your nephew Hugues, he may whine, but he will eventually accept his dream position as knight of Saint Etienne. As for the ship that took you to Pera, it will not cross the Golden Horn again, but will go to Caffa. Its captain will not return to Genoa for months, and its crew will have time to tell the little story of the frightened empress who flees by night to disappear forever into the barbarian steppes. Perhaps they will invent a marriage with a Russian serf or prefer to imagine you in the harem of some Mohammedan kinglet."

The two guards lifted her by the legs and arms.

"But the truth is far more glorious, sister-in-law. You will end up in the final resting place of a king. A real Montoire at that."

The two guards placed her in the sarcophagus. Lying in the cold tomb, Agathe was in a state of panic. She could feel her warm blood draining from her wound and struggled with all her strength to stay conscious.

"Don't worry, Majesty," said Catherine, leaning over her with both arms crossed over the edges of the sarcophagus. “You will not share this final resting place with anyone else. I have taken care to have my husband's bones removed. They will rest in Baghdad, next to my son.” She threw him something round and cold that rolled down his chest. "And don't forget your crown, you sacrificed so much for it."

The slab closed with a terrible noise.

Then darkness came.
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The death of Agathe
(translation: disappeared without trace on 31 January 1314 at the age of 63 / Killer: Queen Mother Catherine of Bartanay)
 
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Wow. That… was terrifying. And brilliant. The game wrote itself.

Yes, it was terrifying. When I played the game I didn't understand the cause of death. It turns out that this is often what is written when a character is immured alive... Thanks to the console, I later learned that Catherine was behind the murder.

I made a little nod to Agathe's fate at the beginning of the chapter with the name of the church :) .

Thus sadly ends the story of one of my main characters. I have two more fates to tell you before I finish this AAR.
 
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Chapter XXXX. Jean I the Greek
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It had been several years since the great hall of the imperial palace had hosted a major event and the servants had done their best to restore it to its former glory. A difficult task in times of war, when supplies were disrupted and the capital was short of everything. The hall looked desperately empty, most of the courtiers had fled or were supporting Onfroy.
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Prince Henri of Bissy, Duke Jean of Shammar, Emperor Jean I the Greek, Princess Isabelle of Montoire and Patriarche Gilbert

Sitting on his throne, Jean sighed: "Was this really necessary?”

“In a way," replied Jean of Shammar. “Your Greek subjects appreciate all this decorum.”

“A waste of time and money," grumbled Prince Henri of Bissy. Jean had always been surprised by the physical resemblance between his uncle and his late father. The resemblance ended there, however. Unlike the Heir, Prince Henri was not a leader but a soldier, the right-hand man of his brother Hugues the Dark and then of his nephew Hugues the White. "We should be with Count Orson preparing the troops for the coming campaign.”

“My brother is a killjoy, don't listen to him, nephew," said Isabelle of Montoire. The emperor's aunt had been glowing since he had ended her exile. Jean needed to present the image of a united family. A lie, since all the children of the Glorious’ second marriage had sided with Onfroy. "We need their troops.”

“What troops?" replied Henri. “A few hundred men at most and no great lord. You just need your bastard.”

"Mylord!" protested Patriarch Gilbert. “That is no way to talk to a lady, and even less to your sister." The young patriarch seemed to like Isabelle, so much so that he took her daughter, Sister Beatrice of Eu, into his service.

“Enough!" scolded Jean. “Stop this bickering. They'll be here soon."

They did not have to wait long. The trumpets sounded and the heavy doors of the hall opened. The procession moved forward, flanked by two columns of Varangian guards bearing Roman insignia and the Chrism.

In the front row walked the Montoires: Catherine of Bartanay escorted from Jaffa by her son King Hugues III the White; then Marthe, Jean's aunt, and her husband Adrianos Ouranos; and finally Hugues the By-Blow, Isabelle's bastard son, who wore the tabard of the Order of Saint Etienne.
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Hugues the By-Blow, King Hugues III the White of Mésopotamia, Queen-Dowager Catherine of Bartanay, Priincess Marthe of Montoire and Adrianos Ouranos Ouranos

Behind the members of the imperial family walked some Greek lords but no despots. They surrounded Emperor Philippos of Pera. The widower obviously took care of himself, his beard was finely trimmed, his clothes were woven from the finest silks and his crown was encrusted with magnificent jewels.
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Emperor Philippos

"We hope you had a good journey," said Jean as the procession stopped in front of the throne. “We know that the journey to the Holy City is perilous in these troubled times. So our hearts rejoice to see you safe and sound before us.”

“Such an honour is well worth braving a thousand dangers, Your Majesty," replied Catherine of Bartanay, bowing.

“I don't know how to express my gratitude to you," Jean replied. “You have served me loyally. Even after the disappearance of my beloved aunt, Empress Agathe, you acted with coolness and discernment in the interests of Jerusalem."

Catherine of Bartanay did not hide her pleasure and pride. Jean turned to Princess Marthe.

"Dear Aunt, Jerusalem is delighted to see the return of one of her daughters.”

“I haven't seen the city for ages, it’s as noisy and smelly as ever.” Jean smiled, Marthe was known for her frankness. He had always liked his aunt. She was a loudmouth who was brimming with confidence. When she visited him at the palace of Ta Konsta, she did not hesitate to criticise mother, to shake father and never lost an opportunity to complain about Anatolia. "I can't say the same about you, nephew. What happened to the fearful little child of Constantinople? He has been replaced by a great and confident emperor."

“Brother Hugues," said the Emperor, turning to the By-Blow. “I am pleased to see that Grand Master Uthred has agreed to welcome you to the Order of Saint Etienne.”

“Ye... yes," stammered the bastard, his eyes fixed on his feet. “In Jaffa... he... finally... knighted me.”

“And you have earned it. You have done a great service to the empire.” Strangely enough, Hughes' uneasiness redoubled. "At the request of your mother and sister, I have asked the Grand Master to send you to Jerusalem to serve the Patriarch." The news seemed to soothe the Knight of Saint Etienne, who thanked him.

Jean sensed an unease in the Greek delegation. He had spoken in French, a language that most of them had not mastered. Worse, he had deliberately ignored protocol by not addressing Emperor Philippos first. This was not an oversight, Jean wanted to send a message: the Montoires had primacy.

Nevertheless, he eventually turned to the Greeks, but continued to speak in French, leaving it to the drogmans to translate: "Mylords, I am pleased to see you in the City." The term was normally used to refer to Constantinople, but only Jerusalem deserved such a title. "Especially you, Uncle.”

“A shared pleasure," Philippos replied in perfect French as he walked to the steps of the throne.

“Have we heard from the empress?”

“Unfortunately not," Philippos replied sadly. “I have sent emissaries to the four corners of the known world, in vain. Agathe has not been seen since she boarded that damned Genoese ship.”

“I share your grief," said Jean.” My aunt's disappearance is a wound that cannot be so easily healed.”

A silence fell over the room. Both Franks and Greeks had their eyes fixed on Philippos who seemed to hesitate.

"There is no longer any doubt in my heart that my dear and loving wife is no more.” His voice was as if strangled, and Jean wondered whether he was crying for his wife or for the decision he was about to make. Philippos took off his crown and fell to his knees. "I have come across the seas to put the fate of the Roman Empire in your hands."

Jean was as if frozen on his throne. Of course, he had expected this. Since Agathe's disappearance, Philippos had been holed up in his palace, contested by the entire Greek aristocracy. He had no choice, and Catherine had spared no effort to make him understand this. But to see him abdicate and hand over Constantinople to him...
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“The crown of the Great disappeared with my wife," said Philippos, holding out his own headdress. “So I can only give you mine.”

“I accept it," proclaimed Jean. “I will not, however, wear it. I already have a crown."

As expected, it was the patriarch who came to take the crown from Philippos' hands.

"In the name of all Romans," said Philippos, "I implore you to come to Constantinople to be crowned by the two patriarchs. Your subjects need you, and your protection against their enemies.”

“I already have enemies," the emperor retorted. “Stronger, more dangerous, and I owe it all to the Empire of God. I plan to make peace with the Emperor of Carpathia and the Duke of Benevento.”
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La paix avec le duc de Bénévent et l'Empereur de Carpathie

“But... they will take…”

"Two cities," cut in Jean. “Not worth sacrificing the Holy Land for.”

“The Greeks will not accept…”

“They will obey”, the reply did not suffer any contradictions. “I don't want my Greek subjects to worry. I have given it a lot of thought and I think I have found a solution that will satisfy them." He stood up. "But we'll talk about it when the war is over. Now that you're here, it's time to head east, to Maab where the Usurper and his followers are holed up. It is time to end this war!"​
 
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Yes, it is time to put the Usurper in chains. Thank you for the update. The colors on the map made it a little hard to understand at first.

It is!

Yes, i'm experimenting. Is it the white that is difficult to see? For lands and seas it is just parchment (darker for lands, lighter for seas). There will be two other maps like this one (sadly there are already done, so I don't know if I can change too much as it is time consuming, but I will try to improve them next time). I can play with colors or brightness (but I will keep parchments, because I love parchment maps :p).
 
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Hi Werther, enjoying your AAR, especially the 2nd last chapter with the burial in the tomb.

On the map, agree with Midnite Duke. I think the issue is that you're using negative white space to show your territory when our eyes are tuned to ignore it so takes a while for us to figure out what's happening. Maybe use a different colour like red or a dark brown?
 
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It is!

Yes, i'm experimenting. Is it the white that is difficult to see? For lands and seas it is just parchment (darker for lands, lighter for seas). There will be two other maps like this one (sadly there are already done, so I don't know if I can change too much as it is time consuming, but I will try to improve them next time). I can play with colors or brightness (but I will keep parchments, because I love parchment maps :p).
Yes, it is the white that is difficult to interpret as I expect water to be lighter than land. Thanks
 
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Hi Werther, enjoying your AAR, especially the 2nd last chapter with the burial in the tomb.

On the map, agree with Midnite Duke. I think the issue is that you're using negative white space to show your territory when our eyes are tuned to ignore it so takes a while for us to figure out what's happening. Maybe use a different colour like red or a dark brown?

Yes, it is the white that is difficult to interpret as I expect water to be lighter than land. Thanks

Thanks guys! I tried a lot of colour, and decided to go with light gold. It is one of the two colour of the arms of Jerusalem, and darker version could be weird or not match the next map. You can see the new version in the chapter. Unfortunately I lost the Jerusalem territory layer on the other two maps, so I'll have to redo them which will take some time.

Tomorrow I will publish the penultimate chapter of this AAR: hurrah!
 
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Chapter XXXXI. Etienne
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Etienne was awakened by footsteps coming from the corridor. He sat up and kicked a rat that was trying to nibble at his toes. His wrists and arms, hanging from the ceiling with a heavy chain, were hurting. But he considered himself lucky. You survived one of the greatest butcheries in history unharmed, he thought to himself as he recalled the battle of Maab.
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The battle of Maab

The imperial offensive had been swift and violent. Onfroy's supporters had tried to resist but the battle had quickly turned into a massacre. By some miracle, Etienne had survived without a scratch, a chance that André of Oultrejordan, who shared his gaol, had not had. Since their capture, the Giant had not stopped moaning.

The footsteps came closer. Soon they stopped in front of the door of Etienne’s cell. The key turned in the lock and the door opened. Several men entered the gaol, carrying torches that blinded Etienne.
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Duke André of Oultrejordan and Prince Henri of Bissy

"Remove their chains," a familiar voice ordered. Two soldiers approached Etienne and removed his shackles.

"T’one is dead, m’lord," said a guard, pointing to André the Giant, whose massive corpse swayed piteously in his chains.

"That explains why I was able to fall asleep," Etienne joked, rubbing his wrists. He was so weak that his voice was a whisper.

“Save your breath for your trial, traitor," said Henri.

“I see that you are still as kind and warm as ever, brother.”

“Half-brother," corrected Henri. ”If at all."

The prince gave orders and the guards pushed Etienne out of the dungeon. They led him through the dark, damp corridors and up the stairs. Soon they were in the router courtyard of Maab Castle. Franks, Arabs, commoners and nobles, they had come by the hundreds to attend the Judgement of Maab.

I see they've already had a bit of a show, said Etienne to himself as he saw the scaffold with several hanged men dangling on it. That won't stop them from asking for more. The guards had the greatest difficulty in getting him through the crowd that wanted to tear him to pieces.

Hypocrites, thought Etienne as he received a stone on the head. Only a few days ago, the people of Maab were welcoming us as heroes.

They soon arrived at the dais where Emperor Jean was seated. Protected from the heat by a magnificent hanging, clothed in all the symbols of power, he looked like a biblical king dispensing justice. The same could not be said of Onfroy who was kneeling before him. Dressed in rags, chained, with a swollen face, the fallen king was a sorry sight. How the mighty have fallen... Etienne thought.
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Onfroy and Emperor Jean

“And my cousin André?" asked the emperor.

“He succumbed to his wounds," replied Henri. Eve, Etienne's sister, fainted when she heard that her son had died.

“Take her back to her apartments," ordered Jean, "and send a message to her daughter Adélaïde. She is now the Duchess of Oultrejordan."
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Duchess Adélaïde of Oultrejordan

His attention turned to Onfroy.

"It is finally time for you to answer for your crimes, Usurper.”

“What a farce!" spat Onfroy. “We both know that you will put me to death. Like Evrard." It was only then that Etienne saw the head of the Duke of Yamama planted on a pike. His body was hanging by its feet on the scaffold.
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The execution of Duke Evrard II of Yamama

"Evrard was a murderer and a regicide. He deserved only death. You still have a chance.”

“Are you afraid of parricide?”

“Why is that? You are too. For what is a revolt against one's cousin and emperor but parricide and regicide?"

Onfroy answered nothing, his eyes were fixed on the executioner's axe. It was at this moment that the obvious became clear to Etienne. For the first time, this nonchalant king was afraid. Strangely enough, he was not. He accepted his fate like any good Montoire.

"Give up your foolish claims to the Crown of Jerusalem once and for all, hand over the Duchy of Lebanon to me and give his lands back to Jean of Shammar, and I may let you live. You will even retain the Duchy of the Desert, even if it is your son Baudoin who will rule your lands while you are in prison."
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Onfroy is stripped of all his titles. His son Baudoin the Nani, becomes the new duke of Désert

Clever, thought Etienne. By making Onfroy renounce the crown, Jean put an end to all rebel claims. By leaving him his title of duke, he weakened the legitimacy of his successor.

A man with more honour and pride would of course have refused. Onfroy was nevertheless frightened and, after a short hesitation, he formally renounced his rights to the Crown of Jerusalem. When this was done, two guards came to take him back to the dungeons.
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Victory

It was Etienne's turn. A guard pushed him before the emperor and forced him to kneel.

"I see we saved the best for last," he says with a smile.

Jean ignored his remark.

"Etienne Mellent of the House of Montoire, do you acknowledge your crimes? Do you acknowledge your treason against Jerusalem?"

Etienne laughed out loud. "What treason? I have only done my duty to Jerusalem. I protected the Holy Land from Greek influence. My only crime is that I failed. Now a Greek rules in Jerusalem, and the Holy City will soon be a province ruled from Constantinople.”

“No," replied Jean. “I am emperor of Jerusalem, and the Greeks who bend the knee to me will be vassals of the Holy Land. The rest will live in a sovereign empire, ruled by my son."

Jean the Brute came forward. He was dressed in purple and wore a Greek crown.
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Crown Prince Jean and the partition of the Empire

"Jean III the Good," laughed Etienne, who knew the character of the Crown Prince. The latter turned red.

"Father! I want his head!" cried the young man, but the emperor ignored him.

“Do you acknowledge your crimes?" he repeated.

“Yes," said Etienne. “I admit my crime. The crime of being born into this cursed family. Of being the son of the greatest ruler in history, but also of the worst father ever. Am I ambitious? Relentless? Heartless? To whom do I owe it if not to this man who shook the earth but broke his family? I hated my half-siblings, but who caused it but the Glorious? Is it not his fault that two of his sons sacrificed their lives for his ambition? Was it not he who put such a burden on my half-sister that she deserted her throne and the world? Who cultivated our hatred of each other but him? Put me to death, nephew. Become Cain. You will only continue our family tradition."

The court was now completely silent. Resigned, Etienne looked Jean straight in the eye. The emperor held his gaze in silence.

"You are right, uncle. Our house is cursed. We seem destined to tear each other apart. But I believe the cycle can be broken. I will not have the blood of a Montoire on my hands. I will not vindicate you by derogating from Frankish clemency. I will spare your life."

Etienne read the surprise on the faces of the courtiers. Others were clearly disappointed.

"But don't misunderstand me. This is not a present from me. You had the ambition to rise above them all? Well, you will be nothing. I hereby strip you of all your titles and fiefs. I deny you the right to call yourself a Prince of the Blood. You will be condemned to live the rest of your life as a commoner in my dungeons. You will taste loneliness, isolation and regret, and one day you will wish you had been put to death.”

“And what will you do with my lands?”

“Out of respect for our family ties, I will give them to your eldest son.”

“Arnoul is only eight years old.”

“That is why he will not become a duke by right until he comes of age. In the meantime, he will live with me in Jerusalem, where I will see to his education.”
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Etienne loses his titles which are given to his son Arnoul who is educated by the emperor Jean

“I would never allow a Greek…”

“You are in no position to allow anything, Mellent! I will educate him! And know that I will personally see to it that he learns his Greek letters!"

The emperor snapped his fingers and two guards grabbed Etienne. He tried to struggle but they dragged him by force through the hateful crowd.

“Cursed!" shouted Etienne so loudly that even the courtiers could not ignore him. “Damn you and your descendants! May you tear each other apart!"

The guards pushed him into the tower and led him to his cell. There they locked him in, keeping him in the dark.

Forever.​
 
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Exceptionally, the next chapter will be published on Sunday. It will be the 42nd and last one and I have prepared some surprises to close this AAR. I am extremely grateful to all of you.

Thanks again! See you tomorrow.
 
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Epilogue. Jean I the Outremer
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Emperor Jean poured himself another glass of Thracian wine and sat down on his chayer to watch the children. Night had already fallen and his apartments were lit only by the fireplace. In front of the hearth, a reading desk had been set up where the patriarch had just placed a large book.
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Patriarch Gilbert, Crown Princer Jean, Prince Henri, Matthieu and Roubaud of Eu

"What is this?" stammered young Prince Henri. The emperor's youngest grandson was only three years old, but he was already able to speak. The manuscript seemed to intrigue him, so much so that he abandoned his playmate, Roubaud of Eu.

"It is the History of the Kingdom of Jerusalem", replied Roubaud's brother, Matthieu of Eu. The nine-year-old bastard was proud to display his knowledge. "It was written by His Holiness Gilbert."
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Commission family Epic

The patriarch smiled at the young man. Jean saw a hint of pride in his eyes. Oh, he was very proud of his work, and perhaps that was why he had insisted on lecturing the little princes. But the emperor suspected that his pride had something to do with the young man himself.

The birth of Matthieu and Roubaud and their sisters caused a great scandal. His mother, Beatrice of Eu, was a nun and the daughter of Princess Isabelle, herself known for her infidelity. Fortunately, no one had ever learned the identity of the father.Yet even a blind man could have seen the resemblance between the boys and the patriarch. Jean had done everything to cover up the scandal and, out of friendship for Gilbert, had taken charge of the education of the two little bastards.
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Beatrice of Eu's bastards

"Is this the story of my ancestors?" Jean Porphyrogenitus was only five years old, but already showed great intelligence and had the manners of a Prince of the Blood. The emperor was proud of this young boy who was destined to succeed him one day.

"Yes, Your Highness," replied the patriarch. “This work traces the history of the Montoires since the First Crusade. It required a colossal amount of work on my part." And cost me an equally colossal sum of money, thought Jean as he refilled his glass.

"Would you please come and read this passage that I have just written?"

Prince Jean nodded and went behind the desk. He had to climb a small stool to reach the book. He leaned over it and began to read aloud.
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The emperor felt a certain pride. Prince Jean's voice was a little hesitant and he sometimes stumbled over a word, but he had obviously received an excellent education at his father's court.
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“It is Saint Aymard's Day!" cried the young man.

“Yes," said the patriarch. “The Battle of Constantinople took place exactly 28 years ago to the day."

Prince Jean resumed his reading.
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Prince Henri applauded. His brother Jean turned to the emperor, his eyes full of lights.

"Did you take part in this great battle, Grandfather?”

“Yes," said Jean, taking another drink. “But read on." Perhaps it was not a good idea to tell his grandsons that he had fought on the side of the "schismatics".
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“Patera!" shouted young Henry.

“What happened to the Usurper?" asked Prince Jean.

“I know! I know!" Matthieu of Eu raised his hand, ready to answer. Gilbert beckoned the little bastard to answer and he did so: "At the Judgment of Maab he was condemned to spend the rest of his life iin the dungeons of His Majesty. He died the year I was born. “

“And who is his heir?" asked the patriarch.

“His son Baudoin the Dwarf," replied the young Jean. "Duke of the Desert."

“Duke of the Desert and of Oultrejordan," said Matthieu.

Impressive, thought Jean, taking a long sip. Baudoin the Dwarf had indeed not hesitated to overthrow his cousin Adelaide in order to seize her duchy.
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Baudoin the Dwarf, Duke of the Desert and Oultrejordan

“And Etienne?" asked Prince Jean.

“That traitor is still rotting in my jails," the emperor intervened. It was very, he would have to ask his servants to turn off the fireplace.

"Will you ever release him?”

“No, Jean," replied the emperor, massaging his temples. “Etienne is dangerous, and his son Arnoul makes an excellent Duke of Dyiar Rabia."

The patriarch seemed to notice Jean's fatigue. "It is time for you to leave His Majesty and return to your rooms," he said, clapping his hands to call the governesses.

Roubaud and Henri rebelled, but their elders obeyed. Before leaving, Jean led his little brother before the emperor to greet him. "Good night, Grandfather," said the prince, bowing respectfully.

"Good night, princes," replied Jean.

When they were out, the emperor could not help but sigh: "I must confess, I am relieved.”

“By Prince Jean?" asked the patriarch.

“Yes, knowing his father, I expected to discover a wild little brute.”

“You are very hard on your son…”

“Stop it Gilbert. We're friends, do not lie to me. My son is a monster and a failure.”

“He will settle down.”

“At 28 years old? I doubt it.” The emperor wiped his sweaty forehead. “Jean II the Tyrant! This is how the Greeks call him. When the lords overthrew him the first time, they called on me. I didn't abandon my son though, I went all the way to Constantinople to restore him. And how did he thank me? By continuing his exactions and provoking a revolt that brought Helena I Komnenos to power! Thanks to my son, the Montoires have lost Constantinople!”
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Basillissa Helena I Komnenos

“You should have intervened, he was seriously injured.”

“Is it my fault that he was disfigured? He has to accept the consequences of his actions. At least his face is now a reflection of his soul. Let him be content with the despotat of Bulgaria.”

“He will not be satisfied with Bulgaria.”

“Oh, I know he's ambitious. I'm not a fool, I know why he sent me my grandsons. But I'll need more than the princes and a case of Thracian wine to start a war against the empress. My troops are busy enough with the crusade.”
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The Crusade for Mésopotamia

“According to Grandmaster Hugues, your cousin Hugues the White has made good progress and is on the verge of being recognised as the sole master of Mesopotamia.”

“Why is he not my heir ?" sighed Jean. “But I must convince Pope Lucius II to deny him such an honour. He may have these lands, but I refuse to let him take his independence."

The headaches increased and Jean rubbed his temples.

"Are you all right, Your Majesty?”

“Yes... yes. I must have had too much wine. You can go, Gilbert, we'll meet again tomorrow at the council.”

“As you wish, Sire.” The patriarch bowed and left.

Jean found himself alone. His headache was getting worse and he sat still, watching the flames dance in the fireplace. They moved faster and faster, flying, jumping, swirling to the point of nausea. He wanted to get up, but his body would not move. He began to panic, his body no longer responded.

And that's when he saw him. There, standing behind the desk looking at Gilbert's work. His grandfather Hugues the Glorious.
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Emperor Hugues III the Glorious

“An exciting story," he said.

“What is the meaning of this?" Jean managed to say, although his face could hardly move.

“That you are about to leave this world."

The voice was quiet and unreal. Jean's breathing quickened.

"Nonsense, I'm in great shape, I'm…”

“Paralysed," finished Hugues.

“What devilry is this?"

In response, the Glorious pointed to Jean's right hand. The emperor moved his head with difficulty to discover the empty cup he still held in his hand.

"The Thracian wine," he sighed. “My own son. What a magnificent emperor he will be.”
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Prince Jean's plot to murder his father (the gift)

“The worst," smiled Hugues. “But if it makes you feel any better, his reign will be short and unhappy. Not even worthy of a chapter in this book.”
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“So the curse of Etienne has borne fruit. We are doomed to tear each other apart.”

“I'm not sure my son is responsible for this curse," smiled Hugues. “It is older than he is and will outlive him. Your two grandsons will know better.”

“What do you mean?”

“The day will come when Jean the Porphyrogenitus will ascend the throne under the name Jean III. John the One-eyed, as he will be nicknamed after losing his eye in a battle against Emperor Valerios III, the grandson of Helena. After the conquest of Constantinople, he will give it to his best friend, his brother Henri. Twenty years will gradually drive them apart. Love will turn to distrust and distrust to hatred. They will come to confront each other during the War of the Two Brothers. At the Second Battle of Jerusalem, Emperor Henri will be killed by his brother. After the abdication of his nephew Jacques, Jean III will combine the crowns of Jerusalem and Constantinople forever. He will have exchanged his brother and best friend for the Union.“
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The two brother emperors and the Second Battle of Constantinople in which Henry perished

“The Union of the Two Montoires Crowns.”

“Two of the three Montoires Crowns.”

“What do you mean? “

“With your death, nothing will prevent my grandson Hugues III from proclaiming himself independent of Jerusalem. His line, the Huguesides, will reign until the death of Queen Tiburge. The throne will then pass to the Montoire-Tathliths. Queen Isabelle will in turn be murdered by her husband and cousin, passing the crown to the Bissys, the descendants of my third son Henri.”
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The Kingdom of Mesopotamia

“Thus the branches will have outgrown the trunk. My heritage is nothing.”

“You are wrong. Why do you think our successors will be named after you? Jean IV the Fat who will bring peace and prosperity, Jean V the Strong who will be as short as his reign, Jean VI the Limper who will marry Queen Amélie of Mesopotamia allowing his son Jean VII to unify the Montoires Lands..."
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Jean's eyelids were getting heavier and heavier.

"But you are still the great emperor," he murmured, closing his eyes.

“Maybe. But you will also be honoured and respected. Respected as the great Frankish ruler you once were."

Jean's breathing gradually slows down.

"Thank you…”

“Go in peace," replied the Glorious. “Emperor of the Levant."
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