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Note: This story will be game based on the world of Cursader kings but it wont include alot of gameplay but maps a such will be posted now an again

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'Quickly get the children inside!'
'But My Lord..'
'Just do it Perrie'
'But your second child Emma is not in the castle grounds'
'Ugh dam that child, Get the captain to make a quick search of the city'
'As you wish my lord'


Out on the fields to Reggio, far away from the fighting at the castle, a maid was followering her 14 year old Princess

'Princess Emma please return to the castle'
'No, i dont want to see that harpy of a sister ever again'
'Please dont call Princess Mathilde that'
'But she is a Harply, always running to mother so she can get what see wants'
'But Princess we should return, i fear these raiders have increased numbers and i dont want then to capture you'
'Hush Elena the raiders never come this close to the castle, im 14 and i know that'

'Arhhhh!!'

'What was that?!?'
'Dunno lets look'
'Please dont use such informel lan..Oh god its the captain!!' shrieked Elena trying to cover the Princess eyes, while she looked on at a men forcing what looked like a curvered sword into the captains chest
'Dont i want to see' said Emma pushing away from Elena but then the Princess trips an falls down the hill landing right in front of the strange looking man
The man just looked and smilled as he grabbed Emma

'كابتن الفريق الرابع وجدت شيئا'
'Let go of me you filthy freek'
'أعتقد أنه من الملكي' said the strange man as a another man cam out of the bushs, same size as the man holding Emma but with what looked like expensive armer and a well made sword with jewels on it
'ترك لها' said the other man and at once the filty man let go of Emma and walked back into the bushes
'Sorry about that, i am shikc leader of this war party'
'What are you doing in my farthers lands, where are you from?!?'
'Please carm down my lady, i am a muslem from sicily and if you cant tell yet we as taking these lands'
'What no!' shouted Emma
'يأخذها' shouted shikc and two men came out the bushes, one of them the filthy one and the other was a larger man wearing little, and grabbed Emma and took her away
'No let go of me!!!!' cried Emma
'I know you are there servent women, go and tell your lord i have his daughter and we are to meet outside the walls at midday'

Later, back at the castle, Elana told Lord Roger what had happened out at the fileds and that his daughter has been taken captive

'Dam that child does she ever listen!' roared Roger as he grabbed Emma
'My Lord the maid has nothing to do with this and we have to plan this meeting and i have news from the soldiers down at the gates' said a man who had a strong bulid and long black hair with a deep but comforting voice
'Ah yes' said Roger letting go of the shaking maid and sat down opposite the man with the deep voice
'So marshal Henry tell me the news first and please tell me it is good'
'Well my lord it turns out it wasnt raiders'
'Ah would of though so, what were they?'
'saracens'
'What!' shouted Roger as he leapt out he chair
'Saracen my lord, and please sit down'
'Ah yes sorry'
'Now we must move onto freeing your daughter'
'huh?'
'You want to free your daughter, dont you my lord?'
'well not really, she has been a waste of space and good money'
'But my lord she is still your daughter'
'Henry my good friend, today it is all about money, now Mathilde is going to marry the duke of bohemia which bring a great amount of money and even Adelise has a good chance of marrying a lord of high rank but she is chosing to follow the footsteps of Emma who is scaring away all possible suiters'
'But my lord there's still-'
'For the last time i dont care!!!!' roared Roger drawing his sword and pointing it at Henry
'Henry you are a good man, wise and strong, so please dont make me kill you for going against my word for that is treason'
'Y-yes my lord'
'Good now lets get ready, it will be noon in 2 hours'

Back at the camp of the saracen raiders
Emma was kneeling down praying to god that a savoir will come and save her from this rabble
'Please lord please help me, i know i havent been the greatest christain but please forgive me, send me a savior and i will lead a good life helping the poor and he clergy' Suddenly a strong hand grabbed her head and pulled her to a door
'Haha i always knew that Amir had a thing for young girls haha!'
'Amir now this is our Royal captive-'
'But captain i-'
'let me finish, as i was saying she is our royal captive so... dont be to rough' the last words said in a evil way as he grined at the Princess
'No No!!! I am Royal, dont touch me you overgrowen boar!!' cried the princess as she held on to a piller with all her might but this man was to strong but suddenly a arrow hit Amir right in the eye
'AHHHHHH my eye!!! who did that ill cut you in two!!!'
'it was him amir' said another saracen pointing at the doorway were a man stood who was putting his bow back on his back Amir roared as he grabbed his sword and charged at the cloaked man, amir put all his might into cleaving this man in two clearly but the cloaked man doged it an pulled a massive sword which was the same size as him and made this beast amir drop with a large cut at the neck and the cloaked man started laughing.






This is my first attempt at story writing so could anyone help me with improving this story both gramaticly and the story itself
 
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SirCliveWolfe

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This looks very interesting, I wonder who the cloaked man is?