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Intriguing this is
Follow I must do now
Like Yoda my poem reads

(First poem I've ever written \o/, its crap :()

It's quite good, I say
For one who bears such a name
As 'blowscrapup', aye
 
This could be better
What if events were haiku?
Go tell ubik, now!
 
Ah ! This AAR...
As beautiful as petals
of cherry blossoms

これ輪うまい
俳句隙です
有賀とよ

(This is delicious
I love haikus
thank you !)
 
Paradoxian with a nick that was Slavic
Enjoyed many a well-crafted word trick
Read an AAR writ in haiku
Thought it was neat, so he tried it too
But he ended up writing a limerick. :(

Irish limericks
Lack Japanese Elegance
But still poetry ;)

AllmyJames, You fool!
Look what you have gone and done?
A thousand haikus!

:p

A thousand, or more?
Will this be an AAR,
Or simply haikus?

The chain is broken
A limerick has entered
Perhaps, misspoken?

A link may weaken
The strongest chain of all,
But this thread endures.

Is it very weird,
If when I read your title,
I checked 5 7 5?

All throughout this day
I've tried to speak in Haiku.
Wife very puzzled.

Intriguing this is
Follow I must do now
Like Yoda my poem reads

(First poem I've ever written \o/, its crap :()

It's quite good, I say
For one who bears such a name
As 'blowscrapup', aye

Even Dagoba
Boasts a poet in its swamps
Great trees grow from seeds

This could be better
What if events were haiku?
Go tell ubik, now!

Life is a haiku
Each passing event an 'on'
We find our metre.

Ah ! This AAR...
As beautiful as petals
of cherry blossoms

これ輪うまい
俳句隙です
有賀とよ

(This is delicious
I love haikus
thank you !)

Oh dear. An expert.
Who can also speak Japanese.
Criticise kindly.
 
Found this through searching
Looks good I will have to say
Will be following
 
We all like haiku
So let's keep up the writing
Here are helpful tips

The correct haiku
Has five, seven, five syllables
Spread over three lines.

Plus, if possible,
A kireji splits it up,
Two poems from one

Seasonal kijo:
This word evokes poem's soul
Spring, fall or summer

Wikipedia
Informs me of all these rules,
I break them sometimes
 
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Here’s the First Chapter
Rykuyu's Mothers Weep Tears
Year Fourteen-oh-One


First we move slider
One step to innovative
Huh! Barbarians!

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We have no army
But no money to build one
Quite a conundrum

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Looking for Allies
Daughter marries Korean
Not such a good plan

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Ingrate son-in-law
Claims the Chrysanthemum Throne
Over my dead body!

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Wrath of Heaven strikes
Plague in city of Bundo
Many thousands dead

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Emperor appears
Leads invincible horde
Sails to Rykuyu

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Colonial war
Godless pagans have no rights
Victory assured

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Trade will bring us wealth
Jiansu has much potential
Damn – it’s full of Ming!

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Better in Settsu
Owned by us, but worth much less
Adequate for now

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Look at Ezochi
Not Japanese, but Ainu
This will have to change

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Honguru Xuan
New advisor from the Ming
Guaranteed? That’s good!

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Rykuyu annexed
Surely the will of Heaven?
Will they see this too?

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Fort on Ezochi
National Focus as well.
Missionaries, ho!

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Here ends chapter one.
Rykuyu islands conquered
Ezochi upgrades

But what to do next?
Colonize Taiwan? Elsewhere?
War with Korea?

All advice welcome,
Together we will succeed
Japan will be great!


 
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Korea good
make you much stronger methinks
be careful with Ming
 
Perhaps you'll go west?
Manchu could be a good target.
But then, you decide. ;)
 
Pester the Tiger
But take careful measures
Or feel its anger.

Nippon will expand
Peaceful islands await you
Benefit from them.

(That was hard.)