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Neroon said:
Given the nature of the world the AAR takes place:
Wouldn't any males from another dimension rather than invading not be more interesting in building a very detailed surveillance networkd to closely monitor (in great graphic detail :D ) what's going on on this world rather than mess with it?
I mean every time someone suggested invading, this would of course need to be discussed in commiteé 1st with a very thurough review of all available "recordings" which will need to be watched again and again and again ;) just to be sure..... and then reaching a verdict that they need to do see a lot about this dimension before making up their mind.

If i was in any way inclinded to make nasty remarks i might even wonder out loud whether it isn't in fact the wives and mothers of the patriarchs who supposedly run this elsewhere place that are pushing for intervention in order to get their hands on the locals anti-aging technology :D .

There have been distant days in a certain RL-Amonas life where such repeated remarks and provocations by you, dear Sir, would have gotten little Amona quite agitated, up to the point of you finding on your door some violet paint forming the words: "WE WILL GET YOU TOO; MALE!"
Fortunately, these dark days are gone :D .
On the other hand, you are joking about MALE shortcomings here, so you might be allowed to keep your little guy a while longer. Perhaps... :mad: :eek: :p
 

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well im pretty happy im not living in that world - not that i mind housekeeping or whatever males do in that world but i wouldnt be able to get anything done - i would be staring at every passing female and probably end up in prison for drifting and vagabonding - following one female around like a worshipper and then switchin to the next with higher heels or a longer whip or something - id be dogmeat in that world.....

jeez i sound like a total pervert.......another personal flaw of mine discovered.....rats....and i thought i was actually kind of an okay guy... :D

always respect and honor a woman who can see your flaws - if you can't see a reason why, you degenerate fool - remember that she could pass her knowledge on to female strangers.....
 
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Finally caught up in all the reading. I really like how you've slowly developed your characters giving hints to their motivations and background. You've also done very well in bringing to life your action scenes.

There have been several comments about the comedy in your updates. Although, I've enjoyed the comedy vein found in your AAR, I'm really drawn to the suspense almost pulp fiction quality that I find in this AAR. I like how many of your updates leave the reader at a cliff hanger; thus clamoring for an update!

Speaking of which, looking forward to your next update. Still digesting the lastest twist in your AAR, going from a world war II back drop to something more fanciful. I am interested to see where you go from here.

As for the contest, am a bit stumped at looking for clues; so I'm going to guess picture 8.

Lastly; since you mention in your synopsis of Cat world that you weren't sure if Marlboro was even around in this AAR's time frame, they were. Ironically, Marlboro was introduced in the mid 1920s as a brand catered to women.

It was only in the late 1950s that the brand image was changed to attract male customers (ie Marlboro man and Marlboro country advertising campaign). Learned this in one of my media classes as an example how even when the product itself does not change, the image surrounding the product can be changed through advertising.

Thought you would find this information interesting.

All the best ... and did I mention looking forward to your next update :)

Mcdunne
 

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I've managed to restrain myself from making some snide comebacks thus far, but cannot hold out any longer ;) .

Amona said:
There have been distant days in a certain RL-Amonas life where such repeated remarks and provocations by you, dear Sir, would have gotten little Amona quite agitated, up to the point of you finding on your door some violet paint forming the words: "WE WILL GET YOU TOO; MALE!"
Fortunately, these dark days are gone :D .
You haven't seen anything, yet. In order to train my Swedish i took a "Society Knowledge" class (it involves a lot of discussions and debate so ideal for language training) last year at the local grownup school. One of the classes was "Security in a Globalized World from a Gender Perspective". During which i was busy mouthing off how modern/western "equal rights but not equal responsibilites feminism" might lead to the re-marginalization of women in the political sphere now that the world is a more dangerous place again. So i was all worried about the future of equal rights unless this dangerous movement isn't stopped ;) . Also add some choice counter-examples about how the "Iron Flowers" in Thailand are busy risking their lives fighting terrorists and how in certain country i talk a lot about security services are very meritocratic and one cannot really accuse me of sexism.
There is also a certain special someone who knows, that she'll better never ask me, if some dress does make her look fat :D . Who would BTW interpret any message about "getting me" differently from the way you intended it and go fetch her Viking Axe :rofl: .

Amona said:
On the other hand, you are joking about MALE shortcomings here, so you might be allowed to keep your little guy a while longer. Perhaps... :mad: :eek: :p
And in a more serious tone: What i consider the difference between something that genuinely is offensive (rather than just labeled so by special-interest-control-freaks) and what is just good-natured cynical humor is, whether you can also poke fun at yourself and "your own group".
 

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Neroon said:
I've managed to restrain myself from making some snide comebacks thus far, but cannot hold out any longer ;) .

And in a more serious tone: What i consider the difference between something that genuinely is offensive (rather than just labeled so by special-interest-control-freaks) and what is just good-natured cynical humor is, whether you can also poke fun at yourself and "your own group".

I wholeheartedly agree to what you say here, Sir.
I am sure you know I am not offended by anything you say, and am just giving back from one cynic to the other. :)
On a more serious tone myself: There is nothing what can be said with words in the world what has the power to offend me at all. Words are just words.
If you look through the AAR or the Mod-Thread, you will encounter here and there replies of mine to certain comments I didnt see as very... ah... fine, and my replies were nearly always ironic and usually "in-character" as a female from CAT WAR-world.
So, bottomline, just carry on, carry on, one day will the Skorzeny with a big sharp knife be standing in your doorstep, and then it will be too late... :p
 

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Well...

The contest....

Not really a success, ahhh....

Two possible reasons:

1. You consider it nonsense and I should forget about such silly diversions.

2. It was too difficult.
But I think its the problem my readers are males, as ATLANTIC_FRIENDS comment suggests. You were all looking for logical clues.
For the goddess sake, it was just a game. You cant deduct which are my hands! Just guess!

*Sigh*

Lets forget about it.
MacDunne has participated as the only one.
PIcture 8, his guess, is the hand of a blond german lady I dont know and which I just asked if a could take a picture of her hand. Quite pretty, naturally, but unrelated with me and my life.
Anyway, as there were no other guesses, *sigh*, MacDunne is considered the winner and will, if he likes, get a future male role in the AAR.
PLease stay tuned, Sir for an pm about the thing, but it can take a while, up to several months, before it happens. And thanks for your praise about my work.
The action scenes I at some time decided to write just like I write such scenes in german. Obviously a good decision, though you usually cant just translate german into english and vice versa and keep style, pace and feeling of a story or given scene IMHO.

Next update has to wait a bit. Please stay tuned, RL is a woman, I mean a bitch, again.
 

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Amona: ...Two possible reasons...

perhaps more time would have helped, as well.

Amona: ...You were all looking for logical clues ... You can't deduct which are my hands! Just guess!

OK, since you did not reveal the answer. pic 2.

Amona:
...MacDunne has participated as the only one.

that is fair ! ! :)

looking forward to the next update ! !
:cool:
 

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wow......sorry I didnt know you would take it like that.....just thought of it like a nice little chance to study some fine looking hands there...... Now I aint much of the type taking part in contests since ive got cronic bad luck inherited from both lines of the familiy going back 200 years or more.......but okay I say picture 1.....and there are parts logic (sorry but last time i checked i was male as you pointed out to us we were :D )....and parts mystical or whatever what do you females lean on?...voodoo? :D

chill - smoke some cigarettes and have a few cups of coffee ;)

oh and most people just call me "CC"
 
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OK, I'm on the guessing game then; I say hand #6 is yours. No special reason, except that it's a very nice hand, and I couldn't imagine anything else at the end of our Lady General's arms.

Eagerly awaiting the next update!
 

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The Yogi said:
No special reason, except that it's a very nice hand, and I couldn't imagine anything else at the end of our Lady General's arms.

As the lucky bastard :D quoted about above by our Lady, I can only but agree with your comment. :D There's nothing ugly in her.

Well, her habit of smoking, perhaps... :D

The Yogi said:
Eagerly awaiting the next update!

I agree on that too.

PS: Seven months and a day since I discovered the Black Shine... sigh... :p
 
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Amona said:
I wholeheartedly agree to what you say here, Sir.
I am sure you know I am not offended by anything you say, and am just giving back from one cynic to the other. :)
I didn't think you were, just was worried the AAR-thread would end up getting completely derailed if we start sniping at each other on a daily basis ;) .
Amona said:
So, bottomline, just carry on, carry on, one day will the Skorzeny with a big sharp knife be standing in your doorstep, and then it will be too late... :p
Where she'll be greeted by a readhead with a big sharp viking axe, who keeps a 24/7 high alert for any blondies trying to "touch her stuff".
Amona said:
But I think its the problem my readers are males, as ATLANTIC_FRIENDS comment suggests. You were all looking for logical clues.
For the goddess sake, it was just a game. You cant deduct which are my hands! Just guess!
You are pretty much correct here. I don't know how things are amongst your tribe ;) , but we males are programmed to interpret "just give me a wild guess" to mean "try to figure out what i want you to say from amongst the hints and traps i have set"
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I'll just risk it anyway and add my guess to the contest:
Picuture 7 (highly scientific method: removed the guesses that were already taken from the list of options then rolled a die :D ).
 

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Ghostwriter: Pic 2. OKay, but no. Would I, going logical (*grinning*), wear such a pullover as seen there? Hell, no, Sir :D

Simon/Chrazy Chicken: Well, CC, Picture 1 is, ahh, wrong! :D Oh my, what a bitch his one was, looking at me while I asked for a pic like a female pervert out of an asylum. But nice, quite nice, optically, brunette, with curls and frackles in the face. But no, not me. And yes, Sir, we rely on something, its magic and very secret, and I would make myself very guilty if I would breach that wall between boys and girls in telling about this magic :rolleyes:

The Yogi: Pic 6, yeah, ah no. Thats Bernas hand. Not Berna Üncel from the AAR, but the real Berna, a turkish gal, ex-schoolmate of Ilona Schmidt. Oh, so yummy, oh my, but sooo hetero *sigh*. But not me for sure.
Awaiting an update? I know why you wait especially, Sir, and rest assured... soon, so soon... ;)

Kurt_Steiner: Seven months since discovery of Black Shine, eh? And you still havent stopped stalking old Amona. Well, dear Sir, I am sure you would have guessed wrong too, had you not seen my hands and the pic on msn.

Neroon: The blonde and the readhead, both fighting. Or both packaged? Uh oh... lets stay polite, Amona, nothing unappropiate here, please, will you, old kinky girl.
Picture 7, oh my, thats... correct! ( *fanfares in the background, cheerleaders cheering and throwing their legs*)
Mr.Neroon from Sweden /Bavaria has won the silly contest. The antifeminist wins the feminists recruitment officers (of old) game. What would my gals from back then would have said to that. Well, they called me something very bad in the end anyway, as we parted. Lets remember... bourgoise Wh*re I think it was... :D
Neroon will star in the AAR too. Maybe as a wedding present. :p

On the update matter. Lets see, perhaps today.
 

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Nice - congrats Steiner...and Neroon too!?! - I guess i only managed to pick up the pervert vibrations from picture one....freckles...curles hehe...nice :D....I think we are both happy since I now know even our dear Amona may sometimes be mistaken for a pervert while she only enjoys female beauty. Only thing left for me now is go back to the cave where I got hold of this voodoo and bury it - possibly curse my own ancestors :D

looking forward to the next update!
 

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Amona said:
Kurt_Steiner: Seven months since discovery of Black Shine, eh? And you still havent stopped stalking old Amona. Well, dear Sir, I am sure you would have guessed wrong too, had you not seen my hands and the pic on msn..

:D

This young puppet cannot avoid wanting to play with my good and young lady Amona. So I'll be a gentleman and I won't add any further regarding my male impure thoughts right now :D . Howling I remain till the update comes...
 

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Dreaming about briefcases, Steiner? :rofl:
 

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XLII - Snakes and Scorpions, part 7

XLII - SNAKES AND SCORPIONS - part 7

[ Music listened too while writing scenes: Lord of the rings, Original soundtrack, Return of the King, Reprise Records, 2003 ]

Part 7

Gulyaha abn Traskashs house, her personal quarters, a few minutes later

Finally, Shanaya was free of all tape on her limbs and body as well as of the rope connecting her with Gulyaha and Ashilya. She rose, starting to get rid of the cruel triple gag.
The four other prisoners grew agitated again, waiting to be freed too. But not now. First, this old monster out of an american Marvel comic had to die. Shanaya succeeded in removing the gag, spitting out the wet silk packing last, breathed deeply and headed for the clothes and stuff at one side of the room. On the way, she fetched a Marlboro out of a pack and put it between her lips. Oh, a smoke at last.
The egyptian beauty lit the stick, inhaled, oh, what pleasure. She sighed deeply, letting the Marlboro at her lips while her hands found under clothes and belts one of her daggers, a real big one, not the small knife she still had in one hand, with which she had cut her bonds.
“Lookie here!”
Shanaya reacted immediately to the growling old voice from behind. She swiveled around and went left, meanwhile the small knife leaving her hand towards the door which had just opened with a bang preceding the old dragons voice.
At the same time, a shot deafened everyone in the room for a few seconds. Shanaya felt a sharp bite at her shoulder, leading her to let out a short cry of pain, the Marlboro falling from her opened lips. The knife hit a doorframe, reflecting from it back, missing the struggling Pasheba and Keshybi only by a small margin. But it had before too missed the Breckinridge standing in the door.
The beautiful terrorist didnt hesitate because of the near miss of Bronwyns bullet, instead ready to throw the bigger dagger, this time with aim and line of sight. She had killed this way before, as more than one british police gal had learned as last thing in their respective lifes. Her left foot came down again as her muscles in the arm got ready for the throw. Her soft skin under her foot made contact with the glimming end of the fallen Marlboro, and the sudden pain let her send the dagger without correct aim towards her enemy, it hitting the wall, falling down and shattering a crystaline sculpture of a lioness hunting an antilope.
The muzzle of Breckinridges gun seemed meterwide, pointing directly at a point between Shanayas eyes.
“Well...” the Breckinridge said. Shanaya, after changing her stand, didnt move a muscle now, starring with blazing eyes full of hatred and anger at the old lady.
The Egyptian now noticed the heavy injury at the Americans side, her dress there soaked in dark blood, she pressing a clawlike, bloodstained hand against it. Fat sweat pearls were standing on the brow of the old monster, her hairknot partly loose, grey streaks, wet and dark of sweat, hanging out here and there. The Breckinridges eyes were burning too, burning with a cold fire.
Alright, she was a warrioress, this old daemona, Shanaya finally admitted.
“You know the phrase already, young girl. Obey and live, fight and die.”
Shanaya, her eyes still interlocked with her enemys ones, nodded slowly.
“Fine. Put in the gag packing again. Quick. And stuff it in right, I want to see your cheeks bulge again, understood?”
Shanaya eyed the silk ball on the ground, huge and soaken with her own saliva, in a mixture of hatred and disgust. But she obeyed. A groan escaped her filled mouth after it was done.
“Now the tape, take the roll over there, I forget to collect it last time.”
Bronwyns rucksack was no longer in attendance.
You cant carry it anymore, old bitch, Shanaya thought as she took up the roll of white tape, starting to press it in over her lips and cheeks.
“Make it tight, around your head, uhh, six times, will you, sweetheart?”
The terrorist obeyed. For a while, only the gagged mewing of the other terrorists, the squeaking of the tape as it was applied, and Bronwyns very heavy breathing was audible.
“Good, baby, very good. We can forego the scarf this time, this should already keep you nice and quiet. Put your hands in your neck, fold them there. Fine. Now approach me, slowly, yes, thats good, no fast movements, will you? Pass me, slowly, go outside. I need a bit help, you know?”
The gagged terrorist in her silken underwear, red strokes at ankles, knees, wrists and upperarms from the now gone tape there, her hands folded at the neck, her dark hair a mess because of the tape gag, like a helmet on the back of her head, passed the Breckinridge and went out of the room into the corridor.
“Forward, slowly.”
Shanaya heard the monster behind her, tumbling, breathing, wounded, getting weak. The monster... no, the warrioress, she corrected herself, the warrioress was getting weaker. Shanayas chance would come, she now knew. She calmed down, just going docile ahead of the gun at her back. Her chance would come, and soon...


We will see you laugh this way again, Miss Shanaya Superterrorist if you manage to get rid of your gag at last and to kill the Breckinridge.



Joan Allenby Barracks, southern Cairo, the moment Shanaya stepped out of the room into the corridor

“Mam, are you well? You look a bit...”
“Everything fine, Leftenant Gascoigne, dont worry. Your platoon is ready?”
“To show the Mahmas what the Queens gals are made of? Sure, Mam, I mean, ready to move, Lady Colonel,Mam!”
“Fine, fine. Then lets move out. Miss Collingwood, stay near me, and be careful with that camera, please.”
“What are these guns? Looking, ahh, weird.”
“That, Miss Collingwood, are the means to make sure you will be able to shoot photos of our terrorists packaged but alive.”
Meredith Collingwood raised an eyebrow again. The Mountbatten now ignored her, looking after Leftenant Gascoigne and her platoon of commandos, boarding the waiting Lorrie trucks.
What the hell?
Lady knight Eve Lois Mountbatten showed a fine smile, no sign visible she was more than a bit drunk. German SET siding with the Mahmas. SET.... Eve Lois couldnt explain it, but there was this feeling she knew already who led these Krauts.
Welcome back, blond bitch. This time, you wont get away, trust me. I owe that much not only to the Dutch queen and prince, but to sweet, deceased Stockbottom too, she thought, her face suddenly turning grim.
The blonde curled Collingwood beside her, on seeing it, got the impression this Lady Knight was one very dangerous woman, one not to trifle with.
The Mountbatten followed her commandos to the trucks. The reportress looked after the slim lady in khaki dress, eyeing her shapely legs and bottom side. This pleasure night, it was only postponed, blonde Meredith decided in that moment.


On to some adventures and some pictures, Miss Collingwood. Maybe even a certain blonde in bonds? We will see, everythings in the balance...



The streets of Cairo, about fifteen minutes in long booted legs away from Gulyaha abn Traskashs house, as the Collingwood starred at Eve Lois nice bottom

Dark and dirty the nile was, dark and dirty as most enemies would have described the tall lady going alongside its flushing waters.
Deep in the night, Cairo was still alive, and others were here, dropping garbage and wastes into it, some wandering just about, hand in hand, veiled like was the custom here. Near a factory, egyptian males were sitting with their naked feet hanging into the water, chatting, resting from hard work. Other than in western culture, in the oriental countries the male gender was not shielded from hardships and works, but utilized as cheap labor, some said slave labor.
The lady in white garnments, eyes shielded by western sunglasses, expensive boots showing under her garnments sleeve, seemed deep in thought. The white clothes were simple, but of fine making, the boots showed it too, this was one born high, and so no one disturbed her. Here, before so many peoples eyes, the criminals abundant in the cities suburbs didnt consider an attack to get at the probably fat purse of the bitch.
Memories of the past. Many memories, mostly dark. The current adventure was not the first, though even it started more than a decade ago. Hard work lay behind the blonde here, on GREAT WAR IX.
Was it all to no avail? Was Danja right, in her bookstore, with her cat? Was CONTROL wrong? Had everything been a lie, starting with her education, her training, her vow, in the distant past. So many victims, so many dark stains on her eternal soul. SHOGA IV, a rainy day in Osaka.
No one saw the salt soaked water drops on the ladies cheeks. It was not raining now.
Damned, she had to carry on. She always had. It was to late to just give up and go home. Sorry, this was not my intention, girls, boys. I dont like this game anymore. My mother is waiting with dinner, bye.
Concentrate, bitch, concentrate. GREAT WAR IX, Germany. World conquest, the plan. She rembered how it all had started in the late twenties. A long way. Too long to give up now.
Deep in thought, her mind in other times and places, Ophelia Skorzeny slowly approached the house were the Breckinridge forced Shanaya at gunpoint to enter the SETs room, where Beate and Anke lay unconscious in their latexwear.
The blondes sense of danger was silent. Elsewhere in Cairos streets, 3 Lorrie trucks rushed towards a certain terrorist holdout too, the british commandos inside eager and determined to get on with it.
In a suburb, in a small backyard, a young lady named Meshya sat on a stone, smoked a Marlboro and thought of memories out of her dreams.
Ophelia left the river and crossed a big street, entering the vicinity of Gulyaha Abn Traskashs house.
 

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Amona: ...Her chance would come, and soon...to kill the Breckinridge. ...Welcome back, blond bitch. This time, you won't get away, trust me. ..Ophelia left the river and crossed a big street, entering the vicinity of Gulyaha Abn Traskashs house.

awesome ! ! :D


magnificent update ! !
:cool:
 

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There are no SMALL WARS for Ophelia, I guess... By the way... come on, rush, frau Oberst!!!!

Schnell, schnell!!!

Weren't for the chance of seeing Ohpelia and Mountabatten exchaging some blows...

Oh, and the gorgeous vision of Ophelia all dressed in white...

So here we are, in the briefcase, as a young playful puppy.... :D
 
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Drastic fantastic! :D

Careful Ophelia, this is no time to indulge in old memories, the Mountbatten cometh! ;)

Ooops...
 
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Amona said:
The blonde and the readhead, both fighting. Or both packaged?
Gee thanks a lot :mad: . You got any idea how long i'll take me to get that picture out of my head?!
(Or how long until i'll even try ;) )

Amona said:
The antifeminist wins the feminists recruitment officers (of old) game. What would my gals from back then would have said to that.
Yes, thats almost as ridicously as woman in a "stricly patriachical" country who was born into the lower ranks scheming, plotting and clawing her way to absolute power..... whops that's already happened.
Well it would be like a "conservative confucianist patriarchic" country making a drama featuring a female Michael Corleone as one of the main characters.... no wait that's already happened, too :D .
You see, stranger things have happened!

Simon-1979 said:
I think we are both happy since I now know even our dear Amona may sometimes be mistaken for a pervert while she only enjoys female beauty.
Some of her former friends proably have enjoying female beauty as their definition of pervert :rolleyes: .

Now about the update:
- So even in your story smoking can have dangerous side effects - like being caught off-guard
- Beckingridge versus Terroristas is kinda going back and forth all the time. You using a pandemomium to decide on how to play it out? :)
- Regarding Ophelia: Women and their planning! I could tell you about a certain someone, who is very very busy with planning for something that is at least as important for the entire future of the planet as the outcome of a World War :cool: . (It least that's the impression one would get from her ;) )