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Henry v. Keiper

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Damn, even in AAR's the Soviets can't stay out of Afghanistan. :mad:
 

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Henry v. Keiper said:
Damn, even in AAR's the Soviets can't stay out of Afghanistan. :mad:

I know there one tough cookie to crack at the moment and now im in trouble as Germany is no longer at war with them they can focus on me. My best efforts i think is to join the axis. The allies have no chance and the Russians as i said are hard to crack, at the moment any way. I have no realistic ambitions of annexing Russia just filtering part of their nation into my vastly growing Empire. What does every one think of the aar at the moment? n e critzism welcome as this is my 1st AAr
 

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Axis look like the way to go sure enough - though whether you could hold out against the Red Army for long enough is something to consider.

As for the AAR, it's fun and enjoyable. A little unpolished maybe, but it is your first aar, so no worries there. One presentational think - I would always leave a blank line between separare paragraphs, simply because it appears clearer on the screen.

Other than that, the more one writes the better one gets (or that's the theory at least!). Keep up the good work.
 

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Sorry for the delay!

Right thank you for the advice, ive been extremley busy recently and so have not posted since last weekend but i am going to update saturday nite!

:)
 
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Right, i know i said i was going to update on saturday and it is now saturday, even though a week later it is still a saturday and will update as soon as ive eaten my grub. :D
 

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On March 9th the Emperor of Afghnistahn dies of a Heart attack. The country is stunned.
On March 12th The Afghan FM rushes via plane to the Urals where the new Russian capital is located were he has been summoned by Stalin taking advantage of the Emperors death.. Stalin talks of peace and the Afghan FM accepts the terms and on March 14th all fighting betwwen Russian and Afghan forces cease and the Centreal army pull out and return to Kabul. The Emperors oldest son Jabar Ali is crowned in a great celebration in Kabul ad afterwards visits the body of his fathers lying in state in the capital and declares that the Afghan Empire will now change for the better and claims that Afghanistans Expnsionist days are over.
In honour of his father a Mlitia division with engineers is named Emperor Zuhirs I Guard. Thus the days of the Afghan empire become calm again and Daniel takes a break but when i become better motivated this story will continue...UNTIL NEXT TIME!!!
 

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So, get motivated! ;)