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26 October 1918​


Frau Hitler,
It is with great regret that I write to inform you that the gas attack which your son was caught in whilst carrying out his duties has claimed his life.
He was a brave soldier, as I am sure you know, he will be missed in the trenches as an example to us all.
He did not die in vain. The war is on the verge of being won, it is a matter of months now.

My deepest regrets,
Lieutenant Colonel Godin
 
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Right, I've given up on a new version of MDS coming out soon, so until then my Britain AAR is on hiatus.
This here is a bit of an experiment into me doing a history book AAR, if any of you read soonerborn's AARs (which you should) I will be drawing a lot of my ideas for the format from him.

I will be playing a communist Germany in 1936 using the cold war tech tree mod so expect it to continue for quite a while.
:D

So, enjoy!
 
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Who invented Communism? Karl Marx. Where was Karl Marx from? Germany. Germany is the birthplace of communism, and soon we shall show the capitalist pigs what a true worker's state can do! Follow me comrades and we shall build a utopia on earth, starting with the Fatherland! Ein Volk! Ein Land! Himmel auf der Welt!
Erwin Rommel, Leader of the Kommunistche Partei Deutschlands.

...Versailles which left Germany bitter and resentful towards those that defeated it. But it was not just a harsh treaty that led to the civil war that would tear Germany apart for 5 years.

The Wall Street Crash

On October 29th 1929 the Stock Market in New York crashed sending the world into a state of economic depression. Millions were left jobless and homeless, unable to feed themselves or their families. Germany was one of the worst hit, it relied on US loans and when they lost value Germany lost control. The state was bankrupt and everyone looked beyond the Weimar Republic, to new extreme ideologies as their salvation.

Civil War


On 13th June 1930 Communist revolutionaries seized the city of Berlin and held the Reichstag to ransom, many fruitless attempts were made to break the communist hold but they controlled all major transport links in and out of the city.
The sheer numbers of communists showed through as reports came in that Hamburg, Munich, Nuremberg, Cologne and Dresden, as well as tens of other large towns and cities were also under attack.
The leader of the communist forces, Erwin Rommel had planned the attack well yet his troops, who were little more than an aremd rabble, turned out to be no match for the army of the Weimar as it descended on the cities. Nevertheless, Berlin was held, as well as much of the land to the east of it, here Rommel would stay and direct his forces, here, he would make his stand.
The remaining Communist beseigers of cities in the west fled east to regroup around Berlin and prepare for the next stage of Rommel's plan to liberate Germany from its oppressors.
Codenamed Operation Pure Morning it began on...

From A brief history of the KPD, 1930-1970
 

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Just keep making posts.

People also like IN-game pictures, as well as a smattering of Historical ones.

It's nice to get a few historical posts, to get the idea of the AH timeline, but then start ingame operations.
 

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Although history-bookish, a touch of your usual wit will be an essential!
 

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Yeah as other people said historical pics really help. They are also useful to make an update seem much bigger than it actually is, so you dont have to write as much as you would without them ;)
 

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A silly advice,

Rewrite the first post and write "Frau" instead of "Heer", as Adi's vait was long dead by 1918.

:D

Couldn't resist, sorry...

Go on please.
 

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I think your introduction/prologue is not bad at all. But I would try to tell it from one point of view. Forexample you could take the approach of a biased communist history book, as in post 4, but then you should add more flavour. Explain in the origins of communist movements in mid-war germany. Write some speeches filled with pathos and ideology to draw readers into your alternate world. It would also help to use portraits of partyleaders and party symbols to give your audience the right feeling for your setting. I'm using quite a lot of pictures to visualize nearly everything thats happening, so readers could keep track of things more easily. A picture of a steam locomotive draws more attention than a sentence or two about the fact that a railroad line from A to B has been built. Furthermore I use a header to make the AAR more recognizable.

I hope this tiny bit of advice is of any help.

PS: Erwin Rommel as communist party leader? Thälmann would be the better choice without question. But it's your timeline, your decision :).
 

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Well thanks for the advice, tbh the Rommel choice was just because I am somewhat in love with him.
:D

Also, thanks for the info about Hitler's dad, Kurt_Steiner.

And finally, I decided the firsat bit would be an unbiased basic history of what's gone on.
From then on in it's going to be a variety of media including papers and whatever else I'm feeling like at the time.

But thanks, and expect an update on the actual civil war soonish.
 

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Don't be a fool. Radio back when a real emergency happens.
Hamburg Military District upon a message that thousands of Rommel's communist's had stormed across the German border

Source A - The borders before Operation Pure Morning
map-of-east-west-Germany.gif


...Pure Morning took the Weimar Republic completely by surprise. For a year nothing had happened on either side of the conflict apart from a few short border skirmishes. When on May 19 1931 the KPD army broke the borderlines German troops had no option but to fall back west with great speed. Hundreds of kilometres of land were taken by the communists, for a loss of only a fraction of their armed forces.
It was an astounding victory and left the KPD forces in a much better position, they now had what looked like the upper hand in the war.
However, it would still take many years before ultimate victory was to be achieved.

1931-34

The communists began a steady march forward, pushing the German troops back, slowly, but surely. One of the major battles of this period was that of Bremen, 1933.
15 000 communist troops attempted to storm the city but were held up by the populace who had armed theirselves and garrisoned the city.
The KPD troops were forced into a bitter and humiliating retreat, leaving 1000 dead and many more wounded to be finished off by the militia.

Source B - A communist General writes about Bremen
We have suffered horribly on these plains, who'd have thought such militia could overcome the communist war machine?
However, soon, very soon, these people shall realise the glory of Marxism. Either that, or we shall make them realise it.

Reinforcements arrived and a siege of the city began, the communists afraid to assault again.
The city finally surrendered in February 1935. Anyone in possession of a gun was shot.

Intervention

Not only German troops fought in their civil war. Troops were sent from the USSR to aid the communist's struggle whilst French, British and US troops provided the main support given to the Weimar Republic. However language proved to be a major problem and attacks ended up disorganised and uncoordinated. It was not uncommon for entire battles to be "lost in translation".
But, upon the end of the war and the eventual defeat and annexation of the Weimar Republic not all the anti-comintern lost out. Polish troops marched into the largely ungarrisoned Prussia, seizing it for themselves. French troops captured the Saarland and much of the Rhineland which was then given to Luxembourg to provide a buffer zone against the rising communist state.
Much of Bavaria was also lost as it elected to join the fascist Austria, rather than join the new communist Germany.

Source C - Germany at the end of the civil war.
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From A brief history of the KPD, 1930-1970
 

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Having a brilliant mind like Rommel would make a change when Germany goes intothe World Red Revolution Tour.:D
 

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It's a sign of Swedish fiendishness, but Friedrichshafen is NOT part of Bavaria.
 

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now luxembourg will be a superpower whit all that IC:D
go rommel
 

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I have decided that to be honest, I don't really enjoy writing history book style.
Therfore, I am stopping but have had a great idea for my other AAR, which should hopefully give me something to do.

Sorry to anyone interested in this.