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The men of Bacrot had every faith in the Lieutenant since that spring day long ago when a daring youth rode into the village square, telling tales of glory and debauchery. It was undeniable. His gift-of-gab led to more than just a few enlistees putting name to paper. The reasons for signing on were as varied as the men themselves -- adventure-seekers, treasure-hunters, hopeful politicos, restless sons... It mattered not. They were all here now, in the very pit of hell. Five decades of war. One would assume this sufficient time for plenty of glory and even more debauchery. It felt more like business than pleasure though, as numbers and names flowed into each other and 'The War' consumed an ever increasing percentage of the lives of those still living in this nightmare on earth. There may have been an untouched field, a pristine city, something to have escaped destruction. This was the hope of the Lieutenant's men, that they would soon be able to see these marvelous sights and live life on their own terms once again.

Venice perhaps? Or maybe an island hideaway. One could dream, could they not? It was a dream immeasureably better than the reality. It crossed everyone's mind what once-familiar places must be like now. Each passing day made it more difficult to imagine and more special when a tale could be found in the form of a person lucky enough to have been there and still remember. Family? The Lieutenant considered his men family and he knew they felt the same toward him and each other. Being 'of the same blood' took on even greater meaning between those who willingly had gone day-to-day putting their lives in each others' hands. Half could scarcely recall the countenances of relatives, it had been an eternity.

A solemn mood blanketed the ranks of the men from Bacrot. The coming battle was one they were sure had been repeated over and over across the continent. Names were different, yes...but the situation was the same. More often than not, the results were the same too. But it could not be this time. It must not be. Once proud allies who could not be beaten, were indeed beaten. The realms of the Russians, Poles, and Turks overrun. Even the mighty Habsburgs were vanquished, on this continent and on three others. Rumors of resistance in Scandinavia still floated but could be neither confirmed nor denied since the last of the German states had fallen. These thoughts and countless others swirled around in the collective consciousness of the Lieutenant's men. But there was precious little time for such daydreaming. The massed forces of France were strung out throughout the Alps. With control of the seas long-since decided, this was it, the final act in a macabre drama. An alarum broke the silence. The order to march passed down the ragged line. The Lieutenant led the way atop his prized Arabian - a reminder of past deeds and brighter days. A creek crossing. A dozen hills. An abandoned hovel. The line slowly ran into stragglers from another contingent and stories were exchanged. It was as everyone had feared. The enemy had created a breach in the French position and were pouring through. Several homeland villages were under attack or worse. Everyone looked to their commander, hoping to reinforce their mettle with some of his own. But what they saw mortified even the hardest veterans. For the first time anyone could remember, the Lieutenant had the look of hopelessness.

General Greene sat upright in his chair, beads of sweat dripping off of his brow. He squinted at a line of light seeping through the window just as a loud knocking continued at the door. "Enter," he grumbled. "Report." As the soldier delivered his mantra of bureaucratic hogwash, Greene wondered to himself just how long he had dozed off in his office. That peddler of spirits must be made an administrative aide immediately, he mused silently. Like every such briefing, he paid little attention and distributed the expected nods and hand waving. Something caught his attention though - even though he couldn't figure why. An underfunded privateer had washed ashore near a Portuguese trading station far to the east of the Ottoman sphere of influence. He told fantastic tales of a civilization wealthy beyond all imagination, somewhere in the middle of the vast unknown...
 

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Just to warn anyone who happens to read through this AAR...

I'm neither a writer nor a historian, so please forgive me if I happen to step on the toes of anybody's tastes here. I've been lurking here for quite some time (enjoying many good reads :) ) but have decided to give the whole thing a shot. In all likelihood, I'll run my story and its inhabitants into the ground. Should be fun. :D Since I play and write in between grading papers, this saga should be completed by next autumn. Just kidding. ;)


By the way, I know very little about the intricacies of fiddling with the game. Files and such. But through the help of a good friend, we've gotten the improved grand campaign to work on my computer with a little tweaking of one of the main antagonists in the story. Everything else is run of the mill.
 
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From the personal journal of Edmund Greene...

December 17, 1491
A herculean task lies before me. If our foes were to know our true condition, we would be finished. Only one general remains who I can trust. Correction -- only one remains who will not see my orders as jokes and following those orders as lunacy. Lunacy is the thing we must rely on to scrape ourselves off of the ground though. We have fought using the same principles for who knows how long. Everyone else lives by those same rules as well. One giant slugging at another, pulverizing each other in order to gain nothing. Are we any stronger now than we were a hundred years ago? More stable perhaps, but has our fundamental position become any more favorable in a strategic sense? Do we not suffer internal strife just as our neighbors do? Alas. Even in my position, I do not possess the power to do all that must be done. It pains me to think that those duties fall upon the shoulders of men I have doubts about. Still, I cannot shirk my own responsibility.

I have sent for General Norfolk. He will no doubt be irritated having to be pulled away from his command. With enemies surrounding us and within our own borders, I will gladly trade his irritation for the counsel he brings. Time is short and we must hammer out a course of action so we do not fail before we have begun.

~E.G.


Biographical note: Edmund Greene was an unbalanced man. Many speculate this had something to do with his propensity to wash his breakfast down with hard liquor and yet find a way to leave his "real" drinking for the evening hours. Others have delved into the murky waters of the Greene family tree, uncovering more than any one family's fair share of psychoses. Despite his eccentricities, he possessed a brilliant mind and this allowed him to succeed. After a modest upbringing, he rose through the ranks at an astounding pace. He achieved a captaincy at the age of twenty and became one of the youngest commanders ever put within earshot of those calling the shots. An advocate of combined arms warfare, he made the logical choice when it came time to commission the Crown's revamped military. To the officers, it existed under its official name -- the Army of Britannia -- reminiscent of a legend full of hope and promise. To the commonfolk, the gathering of heroes would one day be known as The Greene Elite.
 

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An excellent start AvalonsMist. Has the feel of mytholgy and history combined to form a good yarn to tell around the fire.:) Looking forward to what is to come.

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a fortnight later...

Norfolk: "Greene! You'd better have a good reason for summoning me away from my troops. The Scottish front could go active any moment."

Greene : "That's funny. I was under the impression a commanding officer had the discretion to issue commands to his subordinates. Not the other way around."

Norfolk: "Bah! You know what I mean. Just look at the situation..."

<motions to a wall-sized map>

Map of England - January 1, 1492

Norfolk: "Our position is tenuous. If war were to break out, the situation to the north would be unclear. I will not have that frontier compromised because I am not at my post."

Greene : "Tell me, General. What do you see there?"

<leans back in his chair, pointing to the map>

Norfolk: "Is that supposed to be a joke?"

Greene : "Not at all. It's a straight question."

Noticing his comrade's hesitation, he continues..."Humor me."

Norfolk: "Well let me see. I may be stepping out on a limb here but it looks remarkably like a portrait my son made of the local tax assessor last summer. We often mistake him for a great land mass."

Greene : "You know. If all that energy were channeled into other more useful endeavours, you may very well be the first invincible general to have graced the earth with your footsteps."

Norfolk: "Hmph. You flatter me."

Greene : "Let me tell you what I see, General. The big picture."

Norfolk: "Which is?"

Greene : "Quite frankly, England has lost too much ground. We are now viewed as only accessories to the schemes of the mainland powers. Even now, I am convinced many believe us to be the battlefield for France and Spain, nothing more. We must reform our entire philosophy and the King's new army must be reconstructed to reflect that philosophy. Do you dispute this?"

Norfolk: "You slander the name of the institution you have sworn to defend."

Greene : "On the contrary, I am trying to open your eyes to the situation at hand. It does not have to be this way. Only a few men are in the position to effect significant changes. Even fewer are willing to acknowledge the need for a change. I know of none who have proven to have the courage to actually commit themselves through action. You have such an opportunity."

Norfolk: "This is by no means an endorsement of your views, but what do you propose?"

Greene : "Nothing difficult. Just anything and everything."

Norfolk: "And your motives? I must know."

Greene : "I will not lie. I want my name to ring through the streets for as long as there are people living in this world."

Norfolk: <chuckling> "They were all right. You are quite insane."

Greene : "I'm not sure how to take that."

Norfolk: "Consider yourself possessing at least one ally in this grand venture of yours. But be forewarned. I do this for the Crown and for England. Just because I am throwing my efforts into your corner, that does not mean I am throwing common sense to the wind."

Greene : "Point taken."

Norfolk: "Now that we understand each other, let's get to work. I must return to Newcastle as soon as possible. Where shall we begin?"

A knocking is heard at the door just as the head of General Greene's chief aide pokes into the room. His worried expression betrays his news...rebels in Ireland have captured two provinces and are marching on Dublin.

Greene : "I think we have our answer to that question, General."
 
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Very good writing AvalonsMist! Nice dialogue and good humour. I just hope you realize what you're getting into and can maintain the pace. Trust me ;)

Keep it up! :cool:
 

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Excerpt from the memoirs of General Norfolk

December 31, 1491
I fear I have made a critical mistake. Will this day be one I end up regretting years down the road, as an old man? If it is to be, then all my life as a soldier will be for nought. There is no greater sustenance to a warrior's spirit than the manner in which he is viewed by the people around him. Tyrant. Fool. Coward. Traitor. Are any of these epithets more negative than being known as one of the men responsible for the downfall of a nation?

Greene would have proceeded on his own tonight, with or without anyone on his side. He has won King Henry's trust for good reason, assuredly. I know of few with a keener mind. But he is but one man and ideas alone cannot take us to where we need to be. Results are needed and quickly. Only then will others take up the banner for a new way. I honestly don't believe for an instant that two individuals are much better than one where this monumental undertaking is concerned. But some of what Greene says is true -- if there is even the slightest chance he is able to pull this off...

Against my protests, Greene has left the rebellion in Ireland for the local garrison to deal with. They are outnumbered and in short supply of experienced commanders so I question this decision but we shall see shortly. I am due to arrive back in The Marches by the end of next month, and have already sent forth a communique to implement the first of Greene's conscription orders. He, meanwhile, remains as enigmatic as always -- formulating what he hints will be a "pivotal mainland campaign." I pray he does not ruin us and in the process earn the wrath of the entire civilized world.

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To Storey and Lord Durham

Thanks for your considerate words. :) These being my very first posts on this site, I'm finding myself unsure sometimes where to go with the story.

I have every intention of seeing this AAR through to its completion, but I probably don't have any idea what I'm getting myself into either. :D
 

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I'm finding myself unsure sometimes where to go with the story.
This will come across like a shameless plug, but you might want to read my Seven Years War AAR. Your approach to writing The History of the Greene Elite is similar to the the style I'm using in SYW. I've tried focusing on several POV's to move the story along faster. (That way you can jump ahead several weeks and recap events through another character) Just a suggestion ;)
 

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from a tattered textbook that has long-since lost its cover...

The transition from 1491 to 1492 saw a shift in the Crown's attitude toward Ireland. Whether this was due to pressures from within or without is a subject for debate.

Unknown to all but the highest levels of government, agents of Scotland (already in league with the French) had accomplished much to sabotage English efforts at strengthening the infrastructure of her neighbor to the west. Economic conditions of the time also made it unclear if the revenues from taxation of the Irish provinces indeed outweighed the influx of funds from London. It was also at this time that the restructuring of the military was in its opening stages, with an emphasis on streamlining and compartmentalization. A combination of all of these factors likely led to the surprising decision by Henry VII and his top general, Edmund Greene, to delegate the suppression of an Irish nationalist rebellion to the local garrison under Colonel Zachariah Walker.

Roughly 19,000 Irishmen (including 10 cannon) marched out of Connaught and Munster in mid-December of 1491. Bound for the province of Ulster, they reached their destination within a month and put the city of Belfast under siege on January 25th. During this time, the English contingent based in Dublin braced itself for an inevitable showdown -- 8,000 infantry with 2,000 cavalry in support. Bolstering their numbers with disenchanted Ulster natives, the Irish force breached Belfast's walls and achieved victory on July 22nd. Fearing that a cessation of fighting for the winter would give the English additional time to prepare their defenses, the re-energized Irish clans pressed on to the south, hoping to win Dublin before year's end.


The Battle of Meath

On August 22nd, the growing Irish rebellion reached a critical juncture as approximately 17,000 nationalists encountered Colonel Walker's garrison just outside of Dublin. Surprised by the swiftness of the Irish advance, Walker was ill-prepared and called for his troops to fall back to a small creek a few kilometers north of Dublin's battlements. Taking losses along the way and facing little hope of receiving reinforcements, the English fought on bravely in the face of a foe outnumbering them two-to-one with the added benefit of a company of cannon.

By the 1st of September, it was clear the Irish numerical superiority would eventually overwhelm Walker's men. With their objective in sight, the commanding clan chiefs ordered as many frontal charges as necessary to dislodge the defenders. Finally on September 7th, Col. Walker pulled his forces out of the battle and set out on a march for Leinster -- leaving the volunteers within Dublin's walls to their own devices.

The English took devastating losses of over 9,000 men and inflicted 2,500 casualties on the rebel army. No Irish guns were lost which would prove to doom Dublin to its fate. The only realistic hope was that the walls would hold long enough for Walker to reorganise in Leinster and possibly extend the campaign into the following spring.
 

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Greene: "I trust your beverage meets with your approval, Mr. Montoya."

<Greene's companion chortles heartily>

Montoya: "Beverage?!? Back home we call this by the name it deserves...sweet nectar of life ."

Greene: "Ah yes. I should have known that Englishmen were not the only ones with impeccable taste. After all, your people have agreed to have dealings with us."

Montoya: <holding up his hand> "As I recall, there have been no formal agreements yet."

Greene: "Of course. Of course. Certain conditions make that unwise at this time."

Montoya: "Yes. If certain members of your alliance were to catch wind of even the existence of this conversation, it would be most...unfortunate."

Greene: "All in good time then?"

Montoya: <nodding his head in agreement> "All in good time."

Greene: "So, tell me what has transpired since our last meeting."

Montoya: "Nothing that your own agents have not probably informed you about. As we all expected, the Turks opened a 'new' war with the Mameluks in February. They have already scored a series of victories."

Greene: "A 'new' war. That is laughable."

Montoya: "Indeed. My own government would likely volunteer to transplant the whole of the Mameluk realm to an island paradise if it meant we would not ever hear of another Turk declaration of war against them."

Greene: <chuckling> "What of your neck-of-the-woods?"

Montoya: "All is quiet on the outside. But behind the scenes, Poland-Lithuania is giving out signals that she may be setting her sights on expansion. No idea where, though."

Greene: "We may be forced to deal with her sooner or later."

Montoya: "Sooner if the rumor is true. Now tell me how things are going for your fine nation."

Greene: "Ireland is proving to be a thorn in our side. The rebellion there is growing by the day, according to reports. We could mount a vigorous expedition to crush it but that would cause intolerable delays in other areas."

Montoya: "I understand. However, some of your neighbours may see a protracted internal conflict as a sign of weakness."

Greene: "If they do, I sincerely hope they decide to act. There would be no finer way to begin our military's new legacy."
 

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June 1492, somewhere in Bristol province

Soldier: "Tell me, good fellow. Is this the only way to get to the harbour?"

Townsman: "Aye, sir. Although there is a field we sometimes use to move things through faster."

Soldier: <thinking to himself but out loud> Hmmm. A field. We could possibly construct a wall to block it off.

Townsman: "Block it off!?! Are you mad?!? How would anyone get across it then?? Just who do you think you are?!?"

Soldier: "Merely a soldier, good sir. And I am acting on orders. That is all."

Townsman: "Whose orders?"

Soldier: "I serve Edmund Greene, the good King's general and commander of the Army of Britannia."

Townsman: "Army of Britannia?" <snickers> "I suppose you are now going to tell me that this general of yours wants to build a great castle on that hill over there, hire giants in golden suits of armor, and send them on nonsensical quests for mythical cups and slaying of hairy wildebeasts."

Soldier: "Now you are just mocking me, good sir. The castle, yes. But the rest of what you say is complete rubbish."

Townsman: <scratching his head> "A castle then? Well isn't that the damndest thing..."

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from the personal journal of Edmund Greene

June 27, 1492
Of all the potential sites I have mulled over, Bristol must be the choice. It has everything I could ask for in a base of operations. A healthy population from which to draw workers and soldiers. A more than adequate harbour. A location which is central and easily accessible by land or water -- yet is defensible should the worse happen. It will take some time to construct all that must be built. I anticipate being called upon by the King to explain myself and the need for such an undertaking. Such an expense. That is what it truly comes down to, is it not? What I need are tangible results. Something significant which shows that my way can succeed if given sufficient time. Tis a pity, time cannot be convinced to help one way or the other.

Quelling the rebellion in Ireland could be such a 'result.' But we have been suppressing uprisings for as long as there has been an England. Would dealing with this latest one stand out any differently from the countless other ones in the history books? Could I ever hope to pass off that success as being the product of the new military? Of course not. There hasn't yet been enough time to effect any meaningful changes. Henry would see through this as plainly and as swiftly as I have penned these words onto paper.

Should I tip my hand? Word is slowly spreading throughout Europe that things are changing in England. Montoya is proof of that. However, nobody but Norfolk and myself know where the first blow will be struck. If the status in Ireland deteriorates, I may be forced by circumstances to include the King in our little triumvirate. Perhaps I will give the King something solid to hold onto. I pray I do not get cornered into making promises which no man may deliver. If I must accelerate my pace, Norfolk assures me his army in The Marches will stand at the ready. That along with the garrison in Calais should be enough...maybe.

I am again troubled in my dreams. I must say I have played out this particular battle in my head over a hundred times. Not once can I remember the Lieutenant achieving victory. And the dragon fire. What about the dragon fire?....I do not know what to make of this. If I were a believer in omens, I might be more inclined to embrace caution in my thoughts and actions. But by the Grace of God, I do not. Caution in anything but moderation would guarantee our destruction.

~E.G.
 

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September 18, 1492 - in the antechamber to King Henry's private study

Greene pursed his lips as he reached yet again for the note he had folded into his pocket. Unfolding the parchment with deliberate resolve, he scanned over the formalities and came upon the lines betraying the true purpose of the note and of this visit to see the King.

A page slowly opened the great oaken doors to Henry's study and motioned for Greene to approach. "You have been announced, Sir. His Highness is expecting you." As quickly as he stepped through the doorway, Greene had the door shut behind him. Few people saw the sights housed in this room, as there was surely enough wealth stored here to support many small nations. Some of the items Greene knew by reputation but many others were as foreign as the lands they no doubt originated from. He would have continued gawking at the splendour for ages if he did not have his thoughts interrupted...

Henry: "This visit is quite unexpected, General."

Greene: "If you would pardon my presumption, I assumed Your Highness would appreciate an update on the progress his reforms have made."

Henry: "Be wary of tossing that word around carelessly, General. Unlike you and I, there are less open-minded individuals who would equate the mere thought of disturbing the status quo with treason."

Greene: "Surely Your Excellency realizes I strive only to strengthen England and would never do anything to jeopardize her institutions."

Henry: "Is that so..." <leaning back in his seat and gazes out through a window overlooking the sea>

Greene: "Yes, Your Highness. Do you doubt this?"

Henry: "Doubts... One does not assume the role of King without learning to question the actions and motives of those around him. Especially those closest to him."

Greene: "If I may be allowed to know the source of these doubts?"

Henry: "Tell me about Ireland, General."

Greene: "True. There is currently rebellion there."

Henry: "Is it also true that you have ordered that no reinforcements be sent to relieve our garrison there?"

Greene: "Yes, Your Highness. And I stand by that decision."

Henry: "Well? I am giddy with anticipation -- let me hear your explanation."

Greene: "It comes down to a choice, Your Highness. On the one hand, we may send any number of troops to quell this revolt. We would of course succeed and be committed to maintaining an occupation force, which would itself take years to properly install...at the expense of allowing the remainder of our armed forces to stagnate. The alternative which I have chosen allows a generalized improvement in battle-readiness across the whole of England which will give us the resources to go after greater prizes than just sitting idly while others eat away at what remains of our strength."

Henry: "Long-winded, aren't we? Get to the point, Greene. You are not telling me anything you have not told me before."

Greene: "The point, Your Highness?"

Henry: "Yes. The prize you speak of. I know you too well to believe that you have not already plotted your next dozen moves. I wish to know what you consider a prize which justifies jeopardizing England's ability to hold onto Ireland."

Greene: <considering his words carefully> "I propose a bargain to Your Highness."

Henry: "Excuse me?"

Greene: "I will give Your Highness a deadline for the accomplishment of my goal, the attainment of this 'prize.' However, I will not be ordered to disclose the specific details of the operation. Suffice it to say that a mainland power will be left crippled."

Henry: "Crippled? A bold choice of words. What timeline do you propose?"

Greene: "I believe ten years should prove sufficient. If I fail to meet this obligation, I am prepared to have my command revoked and my commission terminated."

Henry: "I am not an unreasonable man, General. Even as proud as I am, I cannot be blinded so as to ignore the enormity of the task which lies before you."

There is a lengthy pause during which only the roaring of the sea can be heard through the walls.

Henry: "I will grant you exactly fifteen years to do what you say -- cripple a mainland power. In your position, you hold enough discretionary power to obtain whatever you require. Within reason of course."

Greene: "I am grateful for Your Highness' generosity."

Henry: "Do not thank me yet, General. The task ahead is daunting, and if you happen to fail I will not have your commission terminated. I shall have your freedom terminated. Indefinitely." <waves his hand, motioning Greene to depart>

Greene: "I understand completely, Sire."


Upon exiting the King's study, Greene looked down at his sweat-covered hands. He had failed to notice the note he had palmed in his right hand until now. Unfolding it to read the lines for the umpteenth time, he read:

.....rebels have surrounded Dublin..won't hold out much longer..In full retreat south..Requesting reinforcement....signed Col.Walker
 

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Nicely written. Good sense of mystery. I'm interested to read what happens next. Keep it up.
 

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I'm beginning to feel the pressure of keeping this up for 300 years.
[smug grin] No need to refer you to an earlier post of mine, is there? [/smug grin]

Do your best, it's the story telling that counts.
 

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Originally posted by AvalonsMist

I still have no idea how far this AAR is going to go. Assuming the 'worst' though, I'm beginning to feel the pressure of keeping this up for 300 years. :D

This is probably the scariest moment for the author when he realizes the amount of writing that will be necessary to complete 300 hundred years.:eek: I love the fact you're still in 1492!:D :D Just do what you want. We the audience appreciate the effort and understand if you decide to stop. Although it will be a shame since this is really well written.

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Excerpts from the memoirs of General Norfolk

September 30, 1492
Everything lies silent on the Scottish border. It has been nine months since the implementation of Greene's orders. I must admit, I have had my share of doubts during this time. But my eyes show me something I had not thought possible in the wildest machinations of my mind. I have not seen an army as well trained and of such a morale since my early days as a soldier fighting on French soil.

The 2,000 new recruits have turned out splendidly and should be in battle-ready form by years' end. What a marvelous sight it would be to lead such a force north and sweep aside the Scots. That might happen soon if what I hear about Ireland is true.

Greene has given some indication that there may be action shortly. Recruitment is to continue throughout The Marches and also in Calais...is he insane? We cannot hope to continue this type of mobilization without drawing the attention of others.

~Norfolk
 

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October 16, 1492 - Bristol

Montoya: "Congratulations are in order for the diplomatic gains England has made. Your fine realm is certainly on the upswing."

Greene: "Tis nothing grand. We do nothing diplomatically that every other nation does not do."

Montoya: "Modesty, General? Remember who you are talking to. Royal marriages with Hannover and Hessen...not to mention the Spanish success in bringing Naples and Persia into your military alliance. All this accomplished in the span of just a few short months."

Greene: "Granted. Hannover and Hessen add 70,000 troops to the alliance's standing force. But I beseech you, remember who you are talking to. You should know my philosophy on the benefits of military alliances by now."

Montoya: "Indeed. A mixed blessing in this case, I suppose."

Greene: "A refill?"

Montoya: "Please." <leans forward to hand his near-empty glass to the General>

Greene: <arises and slowly walks to the bar> "I am interested in hearing your thoughts on your situation."

Montoya: "Well, we all knew Poland-Lithuania was up to something." Shaking his head, he continues..."That what they were looking at was the Teutonic Order... Nobody could predict that."

Greene: "Their unpredictability makes them a worthy foe and a dangerous one at that." <begins filling his and his guest's glasses>

Montoya: "Should I view you in that manner as well, General?"

Greene: "What better friend could you have than an unpredictable and notoriously crazed one?"

Montoya: "In all my years and all my dealings with men of power, you probably trouble me the most."

As Montoya graciously accepts the refilled glass from his host, he continues...

Montoya: "The Poles' Portuguese allies also make the prospect of fighting not so good for the Teutons."

Greene: "So, your people will opt to stay out of the conflict?"

Montoya: "Officially, we have declared our support for the Teutons but we know which way the wind is blowing in this contest. I would be surprised if we did not have a white peace signed by the spring."

Greene: "A strengthened Poland-Lithuania could make things difficult for you."

Montoya: "A strengthened Ireland could make things difficult for you."

Greene: "Touche."

<after a pause>

Greene: "So. It is common knowledge already."

Montoya: "I am afraid so. My agents know -- and if they know, then it is safe to say the French and their Scottish lackeys probably know as well."

Greene: "I had hoped to keep our difficulties in Ireland quiet at least until next year. The breathing room would have been nice."

Montoya: "Is it true then? Dublin is going to fall?"

Greene: "Yes. It may take some time but that is a certainty."

Montoya: "Either you are the finest military genius I have ever known, or you are a bumbling, drooling imbicile. Just so you do not decide to lop off my head, I assure you that I say that with all the respect in the world."

Greene: "Good. Any other man and I would be wiping my blade clean of blood at this very moment."

<both men break into a hearty, drunken roar>


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Meanwhile...

Colonel Zachariah Walker prided himself on being a man of action. That was why he had originally decided to become an officer in the King's army. Decisiveness was the quality that brought Walker into the leadership pool when it came time to replace the retiring commander of England's garrison in Dublin. It was decisiveness that made the colonel take the course of action he was embarked upon now.

Three urgent requests for reinforcements from England had gone unanswered since the Battle of Meath. More than a little irked, Walker wanted an explanation from his superiors and was determined to receive it in person. He set out from the English encampment in Leinster, accompanied by a small squad of cavalry. They would not reach their destination.
 
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London - November 25, 1492

A scruffy old man creaked open the door to a darkened room that smelled of mold and wet parchment. As he lit the lone lamp within, the flickering of the tiny light lit up the only furniture present -- a well-used wooden table, small wooden stool, and small piles of wooden crates lining the walls. The man sat down silently to look over the day's business...


To: Finance Minister, Treasury of His Majesty King Henry VII
From: Anastasius Falke, Aide to General Edmund Greene..commander Army of Britannia

The following summarizes all troops recruitments conducted in the name of the Crown for Anno Domini 1492 ~~~
  • (2/0/0) in The Marches on January 1
  • (2/0/0) in Calais on January 1
Twelve months worth of munitions and rations are requested for the following contingents ~~~
  • (14,000/3,000/10) in The Marches
  • (7,000/1,000/0) in Calais
  • (8,000/2,000/0) in Anglia
For England,
A. Falke

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Authors note: The finance minister was new to his post but had been briefed completely on his primary responsibility -- to ensure that the King's army was adequately funded at all times. This meant juggling trade envoys, taxation, and promotion of local officials. It was as large a task as General Greene faced, but that is best left to an entirely different story. (and AAR :D )