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Chapter III



Two men sat across from one another around a small table in an ornate breakfast pavilion. The remains of their breakfast covered the table between them and all around them, though safely enclosed behind glass, roamed exotic animals from the far corners of the world. Aside from their surroundings, these two men could be like any others who met to share a breakfast and perhaps discuss business. Except that seated at this table were the Archduke Louis and Count Franz Kolowrat. They were two of the most powerful men in the Empire, and when they discussed business, it affected the lives of millions.

The two cut off their conversation as servants dressed in fine livery approached and cleared the table, leaving behind two fresh cups of melange. Their job done, the servants left them alone again, appearing to vanish in that way that all good servants learn to do.

Kolowrat lifted his cup from the saucer and sipped at it's contents experimentally. He smiled in approval and said, "It's very good, your Highness."

Louis smiled and said, "Yes. We only get the best here." He did not say it as if bragging, but merely as if stating a known fact.

"A pity, though, that your brother could not join us today."

Louis heaved a sigh and cast a look toward the Schönbrunn Palace which loomed nearby. He said, "Today is one of his bad days, I'm afraid."

The two men lapsed into a thoughtful silence, each thinking of the Emperor and his unfortunate condition. Kolowrat broke the silence and changed the subject by inquiring, "Have the orders we discussed been drawn up?"

Louis nodded and replied, "Yes. They can be distributed to all of the Empire's armies at any time. Though, if you ask me, it's a waste of time."

Kolowrat raised and eyebrow and asked, "How so?"

"Because Mett-" Louis broke off suddenly and began to stare over Kolowrat's shoulder toward the walkway leading to the pavilion. A man was hurrying towards them and seemed to be carrying several pieces of paper in one hand. Kolowrat turned to follow his gaze, and immediately stood and said, "If you'll excuse me, your Highness, I believe that this man is here to see me."

Louis waved a hand to dismiss him and Kolowrat left the pavilion in order to meet the man on the walkway. When he had drawn close he asked, "What do you have for me, Oskar?"

Oskar handed over the papers and answered, "Reports, sir. From the border as well as our agents in Africa."

Kolowrat looked at the reports briefly before asking, "Does Metternich know of this?"

Oskar shook his head, "No, sir. As you requested, I arranged for these reports to be brought to me first. What you hold now are exact copies, and you are the first person other than myself to read the reports. The Chancellor will be receiving the originals in an hour."

"Make it two hours, Oskar.", said Kolowrat.

"As you wish."

Kolowrat indicated to Oskar that he could go and returned to the pavilion. He retook his seat across from a curious Louis and passed the sheets of paper over to him. He gave the Archduke a moment to read them over before saying, "I think that it's time you sent those orders out to the armies."

Louis started to nod, but checked himself and said, "But still, Metternich will not allow it."

"Metternich is not the Emperor.", replied Kolowrat.

Louis snorted in disgust and said, "He might as well be. My brother took our father's last message completely to heart and listens only to him in all things."

Kolowrat leaned back in his chair and allowed a small smile to come to his lips as he said, "Well then, we'll have to make sure that he listens to us just this once."
 

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Hmm... This sounds like the 'coup' that put Franz Joseph on the throne in our timeline - except perhaps this is earlier, as so far there has been no mention of the Revolutions of 1848.

Not sure what the reference to Africa entails. Perhaps the Austrians want to make sure that France is embroiled in some sort of colonial war, before they make their own move. Or maybe your Austria (I'm assuming, since the story is set in Austria, that you're playing as that country) is a busy colonizer in Africa. :)

All in all, the rarified setting and the grand scheming of the Prince and the Count contrasts very nicely with the earlier posts about Artur's and Johann's mundane day-to-day life.
 

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Enewald: He is indeed still alive, and is still State Chancellor. Africa, or perhaps certain events taking place there, is of great interest to Austria right now.

Stuyvesant: You are, as usual, pretty close to the mark. I'm going to play it close to the chest for now, but subsequent updates will reveal the situation more fully.
 

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Hardraade: ..."Does Metternich know of this?" .. Oskar shook his head, "No, sir..."

intriguing ! ! :)

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..."Metternich is not the Emperor.", replied Kolowrat. .. "Well then, we'll have to make sure that he listens to us just this once."

awesome ! ! :D

excellent update ! !
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Playing a dangerous game tangling with Metternich; he is what, I believe, they call a sly fox. But I think they have the advantage, and lets hope that the Kaiser listens to his brother, just this once. Excellent update, like Stuy said; a nice constrast with the mundane shown beforehand.
 

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GhostWriter: Thanks. Glad that you enjoyed that little look at a couple of scheming minds.

robou: That update was intended as a change of scenery as well as a short set up for the events that led to the prologue. We know that Artur ends up in the army, but why did he join? For that matter, did he join or was he conscripted? Also, what war is he fighting in? The answers to that will follow in the next updates.
 

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A very good chapter there, especially since you have Chancellor Klemens von Metternich still around, perhaps one of the most Conservative Aristocratic men in Europe from 1815-1848 (in RL). And now since you've hinted the coming war is going to be discussed in the near future, I'm very eager! :D
 

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A very good chapter there, especially since you have Chancellor Klemens von Metternich still around, perhaps one of the most Conservative Aristocratic men in Europe from 1815-1848 (in RL). And now since you've hinted the coming war is going to be discussed in the near future, I'm very eager! :D


I'm definitely going to be inching us all closer to the beginnings of the conflict and I should have the next update ready before the end of the week.
 

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Sorry about not coming through on the promised update. Work has been pretty busy and I really haven't had a lot of time. I do have the next few days off, though, and I'm hoping to finally be able to finish the update and get it posted.
 

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Metternich was definitely one of my favourite historical figures just concerning the ambitions and hopes around him . I love the court politicking so far XD
 

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Metternich was definitely one of my favourite historical figures just concerning the ambitions and hopes around him . I love the court politicking so far XD

Glad you liked it.

Next update posts in a few minutes.
 

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Chapter IV



A man walked into small, dank tavern not far from the bank of the Sava. He took an old, worn-looking wide brimmed hat from his head and gave it a hard shake that caused rain water to fly about around him. Placing the hat back on his head and pulling the brim down low to hide a sharp and weathered face, he took a moment to take in the scene before him. The tavern was full of rough looking men, most already drunk despite the early hour. His arrival seemed to have attracted little notice, and those that were focusing on the stranger rather than their drinks or card games quickly found something else to occupy their attention when his hard gaze fell upon them.

The man moved from the entrance and began crossing the dirty floor toward a corner table occupied by two men. As he walked the smell unwashed bodies, cheap liquor, and urine struck him with full force. He ignored it. He had encountered such smells and worse in many places like this. His kind of places. He reached the corner table and stopped to look down at the two men sitting on opposite sides of it. They looked up at him with dull expressions and glassy eyes. The men, clearly drunk, each sported ruined-looking noses and gnarled hands. They were men used to hard living and most men would have exercised great caution when speaking to them, assuming that they had the nerve to speak to them at all. The stranger was not most men. He twisted his features into a snarl and growled, "This is my table."

A long silence stretched between the three as the drunks regarded the stranger with looks of equal parts bemusement and aggression. Finally one of them asked, "S'that right?"

The stranger nodded and slowly reached his hand inside the long jacket he was wearing, making sure to displace it enough to clearly show the knife hanging from his side. When he withdrew his hand it held several coins which he threw onto the table. The drunks took their eyes from him to watch the coins clank down while the stranger said, "Go and buy yourselves another round. Just make sure to drink it somewhere else."

The drunks looked from him to the money on the table, seeming to be weighing their options as best as their minds were able given their current condition. They seemed to come to some sort of silent agreement and each snatched the money from the table and moved off toward the bar. The stranger moved around the table and placed one of the chairs so that it's back was in the corner before sitting down. A short and very fat serving woman wearing a filthy dress and apron appeared at the table and asked what his pleasure was. She put special emphasis on the word "pleasure" and smiled as she said it while leaning in close to give him a look at her ample cleavage. He studied her for a moment. She had a round, red face framed by filthy blond hair. Her breath was rotten and her smile revealed a mouth full of stained teeth. Leaning in as close as she was, it was impossible for him not to notice a decidedly sour smell that seemed to hang about her like a cloud. He took his eyes from her and ordered a beer in a terse voice that clearly indicated a lack of interest. The barmaid gave an angry sniff before moving away and returning soon after with a filthy glass full of weak-looking beer. She slammed the glass down hard enough to cause some of the contents to slosh over the top and gave him a venomous look before going to check on the other tables nearby. The stranger picked up the glass and pondered it for a moment. He had angered her quite a bit and it was generally not wise to anger your server in places like this. Hoping that all she'd done was spit in his drink, he took a pull from the glass. The beer tasted as bad as it looked. Still, it wasn't the worst he'd ever had.

He spent the next few minutes slowly drinking his beer while keeping watch on the other patrons until a newcomer walked through the door of the tavern. He could not have looked more out of place. His clothes were fine and looked brand new and expensive. His shoes were highly polished and his hair, which became visible after he removed an ornate looking hat, was meticulously styled. Every eye was upon him in an instant and the stranger knew that everyone in the place was thinking about how to separate the dandy from his purse. Most of the scenarios being imagined no doubt ended with the dandy lying in an alley with his throat cut.

The dandy stood in the entrance, seemingly oblivious to the attention he was attracting, and looked from one side of the room to the other. His eyes settled on the stranger sitting in the corner and he moved quickly over to him. He looked down at the stranger and asked, "Are you the man that I am to meet?"

The stranger gave a tight nod of his head and replied, "I am."

The dandy smiled and dropped into a chair across from him. The stranger rolled his eyes and shook his head imperceptibly. The dandy clearly had no idea how these things were done. He had no way of knowing if he truly was the man he was supposed to meet and assumed that he was simply because he said so. Luckily for the dandy, it just so happened that he was. The dandy extended a hand across the table and said, "A pleasure to meet you, Mr....?"

The stranger ignored the hand and the question. He hardly ever gave a name to anyone, and when he did it was the wrong one anyway. After his hand had hung there for several seconds, the dandy let it drop down onto the table. The barmaid reappeared and the stranger ordered two more beers which were brought with slightly less vehemence than the first. No doubt she expected a nice tip from the newcomer. Maybe she hadn't even bothered to spit in his beer. The dandy eyed the dirty glass as if afraid it would bite him and the stranger barked in a low voice, "Drink it and smile. You're already attracting enough attention with that outfit."

The dandy looked down at himself and asked, "What's wrong with my clothes?"

"Look around you.", replied the stranger. "You stand out in here like a Muslim at Mass. You were specifically told to be inconspicuous."

The dandy coughed in embarrassment and sipped at his beer. To his credit, he almost managed to keep a look of disgust off of his face. The stranger said, "We have to make this quick. If this meeting hasn’t been reported yet, it soon will be. I, for one, intend to be long gone from here by the time anyone comes to investigate."

The dandy nodded and cast furtive glances around him. In a low voice he said, "I was told that you have a message for us."

The stranger nodded and said, "My superiors have directed me to report that our government pledges full diplomatic and military support to your cause in the event that your movement comes to blows with the current authority."

"I see.", said the dandy. "And do you have a written message? Something other than your word that I can take back to my superiors?"

The stranger stood and said through clenched teeth, "My word is more than good enough for you. What’s more is that it’s all you’re going to get."

He moved to leave, but the dandy reached out and grabbed hold of his arm. The stranger tore himself from the other man’s grasp and growled, "Put your hands on me again and I’ll forget that I’m supposed to be polite." The dandy shrunk back from his rage as he went on, "Just make sure that your people remember not to act until we give you the go ahead. Act too soon and the deal is off and you’ll be own your own. Got it?" The dandy nodded his understanding and the stranger left the tavern.

Once outside he took several steps toward an alley that ran along the side of the tavern. A man of medium height with a long, drooping mustache appeared from the shadows and the stranger said, "Make sure that fool doesn’t get killed on his way out."

The man nodded and slipped back into the shadows as the stranger walked off up the street.
 

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Very good update! Not sure if the man looking like a Muslim at Mass is hinting of the future war; perhaps against the Ottoman Empire or not? Yes, more! ;)
 

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Apart from the reference to the Sava river, you give us absolutely no clues whatsoever where this is taking place, or what the involved parties are.

My first thought was that the stranger represented Serbia, trying to stir up trouble in occupied Bosnia, but (at least historically) it's far too early for Austria to even be in Bosnia yet. It can't be 1878 yet, because Metternich's still in power.

So, who else are possible suspects? The 'internal' part (the group represented by the dandy) could be the Croats, getting ready to rise up against the Hungarians. Or maybe they are the Hungarians themselves, as Austria-Hungary has presumably not been formed yet. Of course, there are many other disgruntled minorities in the Austrian Empire, but considering the meeting location, I think Croats and Hungarians are most likely.

As far as the outside sponsors go, I still like Serbia best, but it could also be a devious Ottoman Empire. Maybe Italian or German agents, willing to make common cause with anyone to weaken the Austrians, but that seems a little unlikely. Not that I have much to go on, really, but I keep coming back to that mention of the Sava...

Well, sooner or later things are bound to become clearer. :)
 

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Enewald: War indeed! And coming soon too.

volksmarschall: My lips are sealed on the exact shape of the future conflict, but it is fast taking shape and all will be revealed soon.

Stuyvesant: I always enjoy reading your responses to my updates. I will say this: you are close, but a bit farther away than usual.;)
 

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ahh the seedy rendezvous locales . I've always loved those XD

Enjoyed the humour as per our colleagues have noted .

This , coupled with the last update , makes me wonder if there isn't a kind of diplomatic trap involved . something similar to how germany unified . But I might be taking stabs in the dark here . The political game seems to be playing a lot larger role than usual if it's also being done in secret channels .
 

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Just starting to read this, and it's pretty good.

Just one nitpick for Chapter I, though:

In the front of the church and from behind the altar, the priest finished his sermon and made the sign of the cross over the congregation before saying, “Go in peace.”

That would be anachronistic for this time period, since, like in all good Catholic churches of the era, the priest would spend the entire Mass in front of the altar, since there would be no space between the altar and the reredos. Oh, and he probably wouldn't have said, "Go in peace" - that didn't get added in before the mid-20th century. Instead it probably would have been, "Ite, missa est", translated as "The Mass is ended."
 

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canonized: The meeting was part of some behind the scenes wrangling that will eventually lead to war. The next couple of updates will explain more of the situation.

aussieboy: Glad you like it thus far. Whoops on those mistakes in the opening post. Having been raised Methodist, I don't really know much about the Catholic Church and have only started attending Catholic Masses since my marriage( the wife is Catholic).