Oopps, looking at the last few pages, it appears I never posted my comments to the comments to my poem from last round. So much belated, here they are:
Author #4
This is poetry that goes way over my head. Too classy for my poor head.
Peter writes poems that must be good. Usually I don't get them, as they have such deep-woven delicacies I simply miss the whole point. I believe this is one of those.
My guess: Peter Ebbesen
You participate in this guessing game for the very first time because Wyvern and I discuss it elsewhere, you having somehow managed to miss GTA during its two decades run... and you manage to pin this poem on me immediately, without any knowledge of my other GTA entries, but just knowing me rather well in general.
Frankly, I found it hard to believe, and with such a lousy reasoning too. This ISN'T a good poem, or a classy one – it is merely a fun exercise in obfuscation and deliberate misdirection, cloaked in a weak generic poem about the wild hunt based mostly on the version from Welsh folklore.
And yet you got it in one, with your stated reasoning completely ignoring a) every hint I had given as to authors and b) everything else I'd done to confuse the issue, simply on the grounds that it was a poem where you missed the point due to complexity, and I write complex poems.
INCONCEIVABLE!.... to everybody who doesn't know you and how smart you really are. Well done, Jarkko. Very well done indeed.
Okay, this piece sure is different. Arawn and Annwn are the ruler and lands of the dead in Welsh mythos, if I got that right, which suggests a Briton. TBC, Wyvern, and stnylan all are such, at least, among our list of authors, but this is all mighty hypothetical. Far better maybe to look at the style. It is a VERY short piece, and so maybe Densley himself thought this was short enough for a fifth story?
I couldn't really follow the story; I guess it was somewhat generic 'wild hunt' fare, and of course last round I did bring in Herne who is associated with the same, so maybe someone was inspired? In any case poetry is always harder to follow for me, but specifically confusing was:
"Two short their victims to hide in convent. "
Is the two a misspelling of too? I dunno.
As I was forced to point out in my own criticism of my poem as it appeared nobody else had clued on to this, it was a deliberate instruction on how the 'c' in convent was two short of the 'e' required for the name hidden partly in convent to make sense (Avernite rather than Avernitc).
I also suspect, but this may be my own lack of pronunciation skills, that the rhythm of the poem stutters. Take the first bit:
"
Madmen and
sinners, the
walkers by
night;
To this you
must pay,
your full at
tention!
Whence your vim
essence,
regretting
nothing?
This truth is
final:
all else il
lusion.
"
I would tend to put stress on the bolded parts (the underlined being an alternate reading), which makes for a somewhat weird scheme; first is a dactylic line (stress-low-low), but it breaks at the end of line. Second line is dactylus-trochee (stress-low)-dactylus-trochee. Third seems dactylus-dactylus-trochee-trochee but could be back to snapped dactylic, final line dactylus-dactylus-trochee-trochee but could be dactylus-trochee-dactylus-trochee. My reading can't settle between the options, and so doesn't flow well. Mind, all the lines have by my count same amounts of stressed syllables, so it's not all bad, and the rhyming works. But the poetry won't flow for me.
A reworked version that'd work better for me, adopting 3x 3 dactylus+1 trochee, 1x DT-DT to close a 'verse'.
"
Madmen and
sinners, the
walkers by
nighttime;
To this you
must pay now,
your full at
tention!
Whence your vim
essence,
regretting
nothing?
This truth is
final:
all else il
lusion.
"
Single word and single syllable added, and suddenly it's 3 lines of flow that breaks at the end, rather than (to me) a stuttering verse. Mind the rhyme got changed by the one syllable, so it's not perfect on that first line... but that's why I didn't write it, only offered an alternate
(and yes, essence got counted as three syllables here and whence as one, but the third line has nice flow to me; poetry is no exact science I suppose).
Mind, if my orginal reading has the wrong stress it's very possible the flow was good to start with.
It was a bit of a mess stresswise, as it started out as a freeform poem with the primary purpose of matching the different rhyme-schemes and other forms used to hide names, and the more the better, and only once I had completed that did I attempt to regularize it, aiming for 10 syllables per line, ideally 5 and 5, using nordic skjaldic poem tradition rather than Greek derived with a focus on stresses. The result is, I acknowledge, rather a mess, being neither one nor the other.
This latter regularization exercise took place over a few hectic hours
after the official deadline, with DensleyBlair kindly accepting updates every few hours until final publication.
Oh.
Right.
But it's not so straightforward
So first author: ?
Second author: stnylan? This feels off, so apparently I haven't cracked the code...
Third author: Densley
Fourth author: also Densley, as bonus and not counted in the poem
Fifth author: Ebbesen- or Avernite, but it wasn't me.
VICTORY! Didn't assign #4 it to me!
Entry #4:
I have to admit it took other people spotting it for me to get it, but "Dense Y'BlAir WroTetHis" is a pretty darn good clue as to the piece's authorship, unless someone is being very tricky indeed. Beyond that? I'm never at my best with poetry and I don't remember the Black Cauldron or the The Dark is Rising books that I read as a kid well enough to be familiar with the Welsh mythology, but it's certainly tonally consistent. I have no suggestions for improvement.
My arm ached for days from patting my own back after discovering just how well the ”Densle Y'Blair WroTetHis” misdirection worked. I thought this was the weakest part – I expected some suspicion to be thrown his way due to just how many authors were to be found in the poem, who were also on the list of eligible writer, and included this mostly as a fun afterthought and (I thought) much more obvious than some of the other names hidden in the poem.
But with nobody pointing it out immediately (I'd allowed myself once again to overestimate people's general ability to pattern match) I had to point it out myself and, by golly, how it worked in my favour.
Densley getting into the game of neither confirming nor denying helped me, of course, but even so.
What? Paragraph 4 writes from Ebbesen- to Avernite. If that's not an 'other' clue I don't know what is
Edit: for that matter, Wyvern in line 3. I knew vim essence was odd.
Yep, congratulations – you were the first one to find Wyvern in the poem, or at least the first one to mention it in public.
Author #4: From the comments above and the poem itself,
@DensleyBlair wrote this, obviously. I can't say much about the poem itself as a poem other than that some nice, evocative language is used, but the placement of the authorial reveal being in the third stanza of four makes me think it's suggesting that
@DensleyBlair also wrote the third piece, but that's obviously misdirection so there's no way I'm falling for that.
I'll do the other three later
There was, of course, no authorial reveal. The poem may have explicitly told the reader to ”find the name”, have provided any number of names, and have hidden what appeared to be an authorial reveal – but why would anybody trust the poem to play this straight? Particularly in a round which had the theme of deception?
Probably should update my guesswork list:
So first author: Peter Ebbessen (content, see my analysis)
Second author: Swuul (content, idem)
Third author: HistoryDude (content, idem)
Fourth author: DensleyBlair (content of the poem 'DensleyBlair Wrote This', vague allusions to a cryptogram which noone but the host could write for lack of knowledge)
VICTORY!
Oh boy, this is a piece destined to make your eyes glaze over. Very little is said, but much is hinted and teased. There are traps, suggestions, pointers and signs.
The actual content isn't pulp trash, just mostly gibberish sort of about the wild hunt and Odin, but limited very much by the word playing and authorial intent to plant as many clues as possible into the text.
The actual hints, as covered by everyone else above, are apparently very good. I see a lot, and Peter ebsen sees even more thanks to the strange vibrations in his head. Either he or densley Blair wrote this, I think. Probably the latter, if only because the former I think would have made something even more intensely insane. It isn't interesting to note there is nothing explicitly linking me or my work to this poem, for whatever reason. Honestly, I suspect the entire endeavour was begot purely to involve the veterans of the thread and of AARland in one brief snapshot of chaos.
Bit of Welsh, bit of European folklore, lots of aarland history and veteran shoutouts. DB did it, or a very good imitator.
Probably the best analysis of the poem, and I love how you ended up choosing Densley Blair as the writer rather than me due to the poem being insufficiently insane. .
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I'm still somewhat disappointed that nobody managed to find even one of the well hidden names in the poem (and I'm not referring to the rather dubious extra guesses I wrote in my own review of my entry), so I guess that nobody made an effort to look beyond the obvious or, possibly, that I hid them a bit too well.
But rather than reveal them now, I'll just leave them as an exercise to the reader.