Mongolia calls the captain Deng

oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 12:45

Quote:

The history starts with this telegram

Deng, go to Ulan Bator, with the rest of Genghis Khan Divison. Gral. Kuliev

protagonists

I'm sorry for my English
Spanish version:
http://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/...=338109&page=1

oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 12:48

Chapter1.
Call to the arms and Zoe!

Chapter 2.
Traslate of Genghis Khan Div. and help Russia.

Chapter 3.
"To surprise is to win".

Chapter 4.
"Temujin" and news BA6 Soviets.

Chapter 5.
Zoe works and writes to Deng.

Chapter 6.

Threat of Mengkukuo.

Chapter 7.
The Temujin incident.

Chapter 8.
The one-eyed siberian and the Battle of Khalkin Ghol.

Chapter 9.
Zoe, the one-eyed one and the transfer ot the "Genghis Khan"

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Chapter 10:
The sentence of Zoe.

Chapter 11.
General Kuriliev; "Deng, protect these documents as you would protect your life".

Chapter 13.
Prisioners: Learn to love the Russian People!

Chapter 14.
Captain Deng discovers new T-34.

Chapter 15.
Maneuvers! The War is near.

Chapter 16.
The prisioner is dead!

Chapter 17.
Corporal Borjov.

Chapter 18.
Panzers attack!

Chapter 19.
Preparations for the War. Zoe crying to Deng.

Chapter 20.
BEGINS BARBAROSSA. First aim are Kiev anda Smolenks.

Chapter 21.
Sir! The Division 1st Siberian has been annihilated!.

Chapter 22.
THE SIEGE GERMAN FAILURE. ZHUKOV IS DECORATED AND APOINTED "HERO OF RUSSIA"..

Chapter 23.
NEXT AIM KHARKOV. THE SQUAD "TEMUJIN" HE MOVED TO MOSCOW...

Chapter 24.
Flee!.

Chapter 25.
The map of Kharkov..

Chapter 26.
"The footprint" of the NKVD.

Chapter 27.
Off Hunting! .

Chapter 28.
The withdrawal of Kharkov. .

Chapter 29.
The battle of Ostrogozhsk I .

Chapter 30.
The downing of the "Me" commander Medina. .

Chapter 31.
Sevastopol, the secret letter to Stalin. .

Chapter 32.
Zoe is saved by the Major Medina. .

Chapter 33.
MOSCOW, September 1, 1941. .

Chapter 34.
Deng and the cape Borjov are sentenced to a "Shtrafbat", Russian penal battalion .

Chapter 35.
Zoe and Medina arrive at Hospital of the "Blue Division" .

Chapter 36.
Angel and Demons. .

Chapter 37.
We should never throw in the towel! .

Chapter 38.
Panic. .

Chapter 39.
Renegade Mongols. (It based on the famous one Ostbattalion 43) .

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oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 12:55

Chapter 1

Call to the arms and Zoe!

After that, for 12 hours, captain Deng travels by train to Ulan Bator, where he returns to the Ghengis Khan division

It was impossible for captain Deng not think of his beautiful wife Zoe during the long journey

oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 13:16

Chapter 2.

Traslate of Genghis Khan Div and help Russia.

A) The Genghis Khan division was ordered to Ulan Bator, where the men received the "new" B6s, built in Russia.

When a division has a special name, like in the Whermacht, it means that the division is the elite of the army.
The Genghis Khan is the most important division in the mongolian army and was (under the command of General Kuliev/under Commander Kuliev)

B) The mongolian government got help from Mother Russia, who did not forget her ally

C) Russia starts the Great Purge

Admiral Yamamot · 20-01-2008, 13:45

Looks promising!
Carry on, please!

oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 14:18

Chapter 3.

"To surprise is to win".

101 A.A · 20-01-2008, 14:39

Quote:

Originally Posted by Admiral Yamamot

Looks promising!
Carry on, please!

We will trie to do this aar at the same time of the spanish version.
And thanks for visit our thread

oriafontan · 20-01-2008, 14:45

Quote:

Originally Posted by Admiral Yamamot

Looks promising!
Carry on, please!

Thank you very much.

I want to say that I can´t do anything with the message of the game

rcduggan · 20-01-2008, 14:54

I really think "Surprise is win" is funny... I like the AAR. good artwork too, keep up the good work.

101 A.A · 20-01-2008, 15:13

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Originally Posted by rcduggan

I really think "Surprise is win" is funny... I like the AAR. good artwork too, keep up the good work.

Thanks. Well I think that this aar is only of Oriafontan, but I´m helping he with the translation and the dialogues

rcduggan · 20-01-2008, 17:47

Quote:

Originally Posted by 101 A.A

Thanks. Well I think that this aar is only of Oriafontan, but I´m helping he with the translation and the dialogues

for the most part it is very good English, sounds natural.

stnylan · 20-01-2008, 22:12

Always nice to see English versions of non-Englist AARs.

oriafontan · 25-01-2008, 21:49

Chapter 4.

"Temujin" and news BA6 Soviets.

That was true, the November 30, 1938 Division Mongolian People Army, "Ghengis Khan" received the BA-6 Soviets.

The captain left Temujin to see their "replacements". Yes, they were changing times.

Immediately ordered to review his regiment in front of their new vehicles.

101 A.A · 25-01-2008, 21:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by stnylan

Always nice to see English versions of non-Englist AARs.

Thanks stnylan.

Capibara · 26-01-2008, 05:56

I like how this AAR is made, I'll have to check the Spanish version

oriafontan · 26-01-2008, 08:57

Quote:

Originally Posted by Capibara

I like how this AAR is made, I'll have to check the Spanish version

I want to focus a lot on Zoe, is a character who will see how it will be highly significant. In the next chapter we will discuss it because the Aars not usually talk a lot of women.

Thank you very much.

stnylan · 26-01-2008, 13:57

Nice to see Mongolia moving with the times

DarkReborn · 26-01-2008, 19:25

A more correct translation from the original Spanish AAR would have been "To surprise is to win".

And as I said in the Spanish forums, this is the real Mongolia, no that overpowered one with a crazy Russian Baron as leader

oriafontan · 26-01-2008, 22:08

Chapter 5.

Zoe works and writes to Deng.

Although Zoe wrote his letter at the end of November 38, did not arrive until the addressee, the captain Deng, until February 1939.

The Div. Genghis Khan had been transferred to the border where the Japanese puppet, Manchukuo, threatening the security of Mongolia.

Herbert West · 26-01-2008, 22:12

Si quieres, pudeo ayudarte con la tradución (en una semana de tiempo, porque tengo examen). Mi espanol es un poco "oxidado",aunque.

Tu AAR es bastante extraordinario y excelente

Translation:
If you want, I can help you with the translation (in a weeks time as i got exams). My spanish is a bit rusty, though.

Your AAR is quite unique and excelent.

20-01-2008, 12:48	#2
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter1. Call to the arms and Zoe! Chapter 2. Traslate of Genghis Khan Div. and help Russia. Chapter 3. "To surprise is to win". Chapter 4. "Temujin" and news BA6 Soviets. Chapter 5. Zoe works and writes to Deng. Chapter 6. Threat of Mengkukuo. Chapter 7. The Temujin incident. Chapter 8. The one-eyed siberian and the Battle of Khalkin Ghol. Chapter 9. Zoe, the one-eyed one and the transfer ot the "Genghis Khan" Advertisement: Vodka "Oriafontan" Chapter 10: The sentence of Zoe. Chapter 11. General Kuriliev; "Deng, protect these documents as you would protect your life". Chapter 13. Prisioners: Learn to love the Russian People! Chapter 14. Captain Deng discovers new T-34. Chapter 15. Maneuvers! The War is near. Chapter 16. The prisioner is dead! Chapter 17. Corporal Borjov. Chapter 18. Panzers attack! Chapter 19. Preparations for the War. Zoe crying to Deng. Chapter 20. BEGINS BARBAROSSA. First aim are Kiev anda Smolenks. Chapter 21. Sir! The Division 1st Siberian has been annihilated!. Chapter 22. THE SIEGE GERMAN FAILURE. ZHUKOV IS DECORATED AND APOINTED "HERO OF RUSSIA".. Chapter 23. NEXT AIM KHARKOV. THE SQUAD "TEMUJIN" HE MOVED TO MOSCOW... Chapter 24. Flee!. Chapter 25. The map of Kharkov.. Chapter 26. "The footprint" of the NKVD. Chapter 27. Off Hunting! . Chapter 28. The withdrawal of Kharkov. . Chapter 29. The battle of Ostrogozhsk I . Chapter 30. The downing of the "Me" commander Medina. . Chapter 31. Sevastopol, the secret letter to Stalin. . Chapter 32. Zoe is saved by the Major Medina. . Chapter 33. MOSCOW, September 1, 1941. . Chapter 34. Deng and the cape Borjov are sentenced to a "Shtrafbat", Russian penal battalion . Chapter 35. Zoe and Medina arrive at Hospital of the "Blue Division" . Chapter 36. Angel and Demons. . Chapter 37. We should never throw in the towel! . Chapter 38. Panic. . Chapter 39. Renegade Mongols. (It based on the famous one Ostbattalion 43) . __________________________________________________ _______________ __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08) Last edited by oriafontan; 26-05-2009 at 18:30.

20-01-2008, 12:55	#3
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter 1 Call to the arms and Zoe! After that, for 12 hours, captain Deng travels by train to Ulan Bator, where he returns to the Ghengis Khan division It was impossible for captain Deng not think of his beautiful wife Zoe during the long journey __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08) Last edited by oriafontan; 30-03-2008 at 12:44.

20-01-2008, 13:16	#4
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter 2. Traslate of Genghis Khan Div and help Russia. A) The Genghis Khan division was ordered to Ulan Bator, where the men received the "new" B6s, built in Russia. When a division has a special name, like in the Whermacht, it means that the division is the elite of the army. The Genghis Khan is the most important division in the mongolian army and was (under the command of General Kuliev/under Commander Kuliev) B) The mongolian government got help from Mother Russia, who did not forget her ally C) Russia starts the Great Purge __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08) Last edited by oriafontan; 26-01-2008 at 23:18.

20-01-2008, 14:18	#6
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter 3. "To surprise is to win". __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08) Last edited by oriafontan; 25-05-2009 at 22:44.

20-01-2008, 14:54	#9
rcduggan (Interim Avatar) Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Cthulhu Neaderthal realpolitik Posts: 7,018	I really think "Surprise is win" is funny... I like the AAR. good artwork too, keep up the good work. __________________ The Ebony Cross and the Sacred Eagle (Ongoing) ---Favorite History-Book AAR, Eu3 (Q2 2008) ---Weekly AAR Showcase, 1/13/08 Charter member of "The Warlord Club" Awards: Fan of the Week: 3/4/07, 4/29/07, 6/18/07, 2/19/08, 4/11/08 WritAAR of the Week: 5/20/07 I was canonized! 4/21/07 My ink well thingy...

20-01-2008, 13:45	#5
Admiral Yamamot Major Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 777	Looks promising! Carry on, please!

20-01-2008, 22:12	#12
stnylan Compulsive CommentatAAR Moderator Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Taunton, UK Posts: 17,018 Blog Entries: 7	Always nice to see English versions of non-Englist AARs. __________________ To view is human, to comment is divine. "Be not afraid" - John Paul II "The Christian way has not been tried and found wanting, it has been found to be hard and left untried" - GK Chesterton. Completed AAR: In Memory of France EU2 View my full AAR list at The Inkwell My blog From Across the Pond and My library, and my Paradox blog Ask not what AARland can do for you, but what you can do for AARland. If you are writing a HoI3 AAR, remember to report it in the LibrAARy update thread for inclusion in the HoI3 LibrAARy.

25-01-2008, 21:49	#13
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter 4. "Temujin" and news BA6 Soviets. That was true, the November 30, 1938 Division Mongolian People Army, "Ghengis Khan" received the BA-6 Soviets. The captain left Temujin to see their "replacements". Yes, they were changing times. Immediately ordered to review his regiment in front of their new vehicles. __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08)

26-01-2008, 05:56	#15
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26-01-2008, 13:57	#17
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26-01-2008, 19:25	#18
DarkReborn Ese friki de ahi Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Zum City, Side 3 RL: Zaragoza, Aragón, Spain Posts: 2,225	A more correct translation from the original Spanish AAR would have been "To surprise is to win". And as I said in the Spanish forums, this is the real Mongolia, no that overpowered one with a crazy Russian Baron as leader __________________ TAKE YOUR SORROW AND TURN IT INTO ANGER ZEON THIRSTS FOR THE STRENGH OF IT'S PEOPLE SIEG ZEON! - Gihren Zabi's speech to the people of Zeon Now you will see the ultimate fate that awaits true warriors - Ramba Ral EMBRACE DEMOCRACY OR YOU WILL BE ERADICATED - Liberty Prime Fan of the Week 5-04-2007

26-01-2008, 22:08	#19
oriafontan Catalanista furibundo. Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Madrid (Spain) Posts: 2,001	Chapter 5. Zoe works and writes to Deng. Although Zoe wrote his letter at the end of November 38, did not arrive until the addressee, the captain Deng, until February 1939. The Div. Genghis Khan had been transferred to the border where the Japanese puppet, Manchukuo, threatening the security of Mongolia. __________________ Mongolia llama al capitán Deng.Mongolia calls the captain Deng. _______________________________________ Best Character WritAAR of the Week (Octuber 08) Last edited by oriafontan; 25-05-2009 at 23:09.

26-01-2008, 22:12	#20
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