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Seed of Destruction : Paranormal Tales From The NKVD
Somewhere in the Vologda Oblast
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. Fantastic writing and an equally strange premise. Poor Sergei
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Ooh, a creepy start. Sounds like an interesting tale.
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Great start, interesting one too!
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Simply superb writing dear sir!
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Mythology and HOI2?
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First Lord of the Treasury
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damn, good stuff comrade!
Is the Stuhac your creation or a 'real' mythical beastie? |
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Quote:
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Looking good, looking sweet.
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hmm... looks interesting
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Hey all,
It seems my Polish ATR file has gone walkies, by that I mean my 2nd PC is now a hundred miles away for reasons too complicated to explain Hopefully I'll get the file back soon but until then I've decided to start this, a Soviet AAR with a twist, I've been writing it for months and so now will begin unleashing in on AARland after a few minor adjustments. Thanks for the great response so far guys, and yes the Stuhac is a 'real' creature, the narrative will be based around Slavic folklore and mythology though I'll probably let a few foreign elements in as are protaganists travel Anyway, second installment soon, hope you enjoy and I hope you stay along for the ride. Jape
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Narkompochtel Building, Moscow
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Oh my...
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What the... is there some kind of super- tapeworm in him or something?
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First Lord of the Treasury
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I think the previous posters' emoticons express my reaction!
Fantastic writing, I hope Alik's condition is revealed, god knows what was happening to him though I assume the package he opened had something to do with it. Keep going amigo |
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Join Date: May 2007
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Something's rotten in Moscow...
I concur with the Doctor, keep going with the parawierd!
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The Avatar of Time
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Knowing the way Soviets keep thing secret he will be extradited to the NKVD who will kill him and dissect him to find out what little monster did this to him. Then they are going to file everything, and Alik will be buried as a murderer. All restaurant visitors will probably be visited by NKVD somewhere around midnight and would be persuaded to keep their mouth shut.
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The Avatar of Time
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I think the parcel sent itself.
Or the capitalist pig dogs wanted to destroy the glorious Soviet workers mail, which is clearly superior to it's capitalistic slave driving counterpart. |
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