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Join Date: Mar 2006
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The End Of The Begining - USA 1936 AAR
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Prologue ( Great Depression )
Prologue ( Great Depression ) Great Depression The Great Depression was a worldwide economic recession that began in the late 1920s and persisted until the end of War in Europe. All countries were affected, especially the more industrialized nations like Great Britain, France, Japan and the United States. Rural areas, likewise suffered from the Depression as prices of corps dropped and decreasing demands for raw material resulting in lower price devasted the Mining and Lumber industry. Wall Street Crash Quote:
The Wall Street Crash of 1929 begins on October 24 and continued through October 29 when share prices on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE) collapsed. The Stock Market Crash did not plunge all Americans into instant poverty. Indeed, about one third of the population was seriously hurt by 1932; the other two thirds (who were employed) were hurting but not nearly as much There are many explainations for this huge crash, Keynesian, Monetarist, and Austrian economists agree that the Crash followed a speculative boom that had taken hold in the late 1920s, which had led millions of Americans to invest heavily in the stock market, even borrowing money to buy more stock. Banks lent heavily to fund this share-buying spree. The rising share prices encouraged more people to invest, as they hoped the shares would rise further, thus fueling further rises, and creating an economic bubble. On October 24, 1929 (with the Dow just off its September 3rd peak from at 381.17), the bubble finally burst and panic selling set in. 12,894,650 shares were traded in the space of one day, as people desperately tried to dispose of their shares before they became worthless.The banks which had lent heavily to fund share buying found themselves saddled with debt, which caused many banks to fail.While millions of people lost their savings, businesses lost their credit lines and customers and were forced to close, causing massive unemployment. Many commentators view the Smoot-Hawley Tariff Act as a consequence of the Crash, since the act was not signed by President Hoover until June of 1930. However, supply-side economists argue that stock-market prices anticipate future profits. The Crash reflected investors’ rational expectations that tariffs would raise prices for U.S. consumers (both final consumers and manufacturers that used the imported products as inputs) and reduce firms’ future profits Whatever the reason, the stock market took 25 years to recover its 1929 high value. Dust Bowl The Dust Bowl was a series of dust storms in the central United States, caused by a massive drought and decades of poor farming techniques. Beginning in 1930 and lasting until 1941, this ecological disaster caused an exodus from the Oklahoma Panhandle region and also the surrounding Great Plains in which around 300,000 to 400,000 Americans were displaced.[1] Topsoil across millions of acres was blown away because the indigenous sod had been broken for wheat farming and the vast herds of buffalo were no longer fertilizing the rest of the native grasses It covered parts of Texas, Oklahoma, Colorado, Kansas, and New Mexico. Source : Wikipedia |
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Evil looking picture of the dust bowl, there.
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Banned
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: London, UK
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Ooh wow, you think that's decent pah. Write more then this otherwise don't bother to update. You don't seem to have much of a plot in the story, hmm wonder if you should quit, you don't seem to be AAR material!
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Field Marshal
Join Date: Mar 2001
Location: Cornfields
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Marxist Revolutionary
Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Halifax, Commune of the Maritimes, Union of Canada
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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yeah. great start! all you need is to keep working at it!
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The Precise History of New England -AAR Writer of the Week 5/21/06-2/28-06 doot doot doot 4D6574 ●Owner of 1 Yoyo dollar, $4-anonymous4401 Fan of the Week 2/8/06-2/15/06 Was he free? Was he happy? The question is absurd: Had anything been wrong, we should certainly have heard. |
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Almost updating regularly
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Londonshire
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As the author has only made two posts, both of those in this thread, it would be a shame if he's given it up. Five paragraphs isn't really enough to tell anything about this tale and its relative abundance or shortage of plot so it does seem a trifle premature to judge it.
In passing I must confess my curiosity as to why on earth he put a on the end of the criticism. Most confusing. Back to the subject at hand, don't be disheartened and carry on to the meat of this AAR.
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: European Union (UK)
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I like this, and ignore that criticism. It might have been intended as poor sarcasm.
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Banned
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: London, UK
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Sometimes you have to be harsh in these forums, in the forum where I am a admin, that's PHW comics, if we find that the work isn't up to par with good comics we ban them permentally, that's why I lik to see good work not crap laying around.
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yAARn SpinAAR
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Like graphic novels? Read the on-going adaptation of my short story The Marsh God. For more adventures of Dalacroy read Night of the Meld, The Marsh God and Homecoming. The last 2 were winners of Best Short SF&F Story for 2005 & 2006; Preditors & Editors Readers Poll. Visit my Website for story excerpts. Now available: Valley of Bones, in the anthology Return of the Sword. Valley of Bones finished 7th in the 2008 P&E Best Short SF&F Story category. Coming soon: Yaggoth-Voor in the anthology Rage of the Behemoth Visit The official site of Conan author Robert E. Howard and drop by the Community Forums. For a complete list of my AARs go to The Ink Well |
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: London, UK
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What can I say to you, I know these people aren't pros but they need to be fast and quick with the writing, I know what a good story is when i see one, if you want me to I will turn down the fire just a bit. However, if I feel a story isn't up to starch then I will tell then what I think. I will laso give tem tips and advice.
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Almost updating regularly
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Londonshire
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Additionaly I do hope that your advice wont be on spelling, punctuation, grammar, manners and general politeness.
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: London, UK
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Llook don't do dear attack my spech and punchuatation, I have RSI in my right hand, so you can understand why I sometimes make mistakes.
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yAARn SpinAAR
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Like graphic novels? Read the on-going adaptation of my short story The Marsh God. For more adventures of Dalacroy read Night of the Meld, The Marsh God and Homecoming. The last 2 were winners of Best Short SF&F Story for 2005 & 2006; Preditors & Editors Readers Poll. Visit my Website for story excerpts. Now available: Valley of Bones, in the anthology Return of the Sword. Valley of Bones finished 7th in the 2008 P&E Best Short SF&F Story category. Coming soon: Yaggoth-Voor in the anthology Rage of the Behemoth Visit The official site of Conan author Robert E. Howard and drop by the Community Forums. For a complete list of my AARs go to The Ink Well |
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Join Date: Jun 2005
Location: Halifax, Commune of the Maritimes, Union of Canada
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, Hope there is an update soon
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Winning unfairly since 2001
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: USA
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Gee, I can't wait for the first update! How bout you?
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Ra Ra Queenslandaar!
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I thought this was going great, until one inappreciative unsupportive expletive deleted opened his fat mouth. Please continue.
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Banned
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: London, UK
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How dare you, I have not done any damage to this person I hope. Anyway start updating so I judge you and give advice.
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Avatarless for the 3000 club
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Looks good. Do you plan to play historical?
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To make your readers happy, post links to your new AARs in your old ones. If they are reading and posting in your current one, why would they not want to know that you start another? You might become the one and only Paradoxian Idol Hearts of Iron II section Crusader Kings section Europa Universalis III section World war II in colour, boring bulge The Bhutanese sequel of Albanian flying tanks.
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