First of all I'd like to point out a couple of great things
General1 :
1) I like that you're stretching yourself and writing in English, a 2nd language for you. I can assure you that if I attempted an AAR in German there'd be a diplomatic incident.
2) It sounds like you've created your own mod and you're trying to reveal it in this AAR. That's really ambitious and commendable. Maybe you can point out some of the specifics of your mod so we can better appreciate them.
I also have a specific suggestion for you. I don't want to be negative...but rather help you communicate more effectively and enjoyably.
It appears you're taking full res screenshots and posting them...something like 1400 pixels wide. Unfortunately, the forum will condense those images down to 800 pixels wide (that's not anything you can control). The result is your images become hard to read...and not as pretty as they could be. You have 2 options: a) play the game at a lower resolution and screenshot a smaller screen....or b) use an image editing program like Photoshop (or any other more affordable image editor
available online) to resample your images down to 800 pixels and post those.
If you take the "b" pathway (which will give you the better result), I'd recommend cropping images to focus on the particular area of interest in the screen shot. That should help make your images much more legible and at the same time help focus your readers on the subject you're trying to illustrate. It will also make your images load faster...making it a double bonus for you and anyone reading your AAR.
I hope that's helpful and constructive! I enjoy Germany AARs. Keep going!