This is a really interesting story. I like the format as is, throwing my two bits into the question you were asking earlier.
I was thinking the same thing about Roman after this update. Prior, I had considered him the protagonist but he is clearly a shade of grey. With the spymaster around, that might be a very dark shade. I am glad to see that. Im also glad that Gleb is showing other skills. He first comes across as the "dumb jock" type. One dimensional characters normally don't add anything to a story.
That widowed-Danish-bastard might be a hard sell. If my heir was turning 16, the last think I would want for his first wife is someone that sounds like they are entering the twilight of their child bearing years.
This is a really interesting story. I like the format as is, throwing my two bits into the question you were asking earlier.
and again the painting of a polish victory, it's great there is no greater one
Darn you Yarolpolk!
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A great read so far and, I have to say, one of the best narratives I've seen in a while. I think you should stay true to the form you've been working so far. Narrative AAR's with deep characters is a great thing, but not everyone seem to have the patience needed to read the long chapters, however I think you'll just have to consider this their loss and not yours, for you are doing a great job so far.
I would if I knew where the report button was
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