Clan Otomo: A Historical Account

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• Sep 23, 2011

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Clan Otomo, a Historical Account​

Howdy! This is my first Sengoku AAR, finally got the right experince in the game, but when your used to paradox you dont need much time before you get settled into the game. Ive decided to make an AAR about the Otomo clan, and the AAR will probably be in pictures such as these. Please do comment, if you find the pictures too blurry - writing to small, ect. Enjoy!

The Shoni-Otomo War​

The Drums of War

The Second Shoni War

 

Last edited: Sep 27, 2011

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• Sep 23, 2011

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great start, but a wee quibble - you might want to adjust the font - maybe keep the very atmospheric/realistic font for the first word of each para and the rest in an easier to read font?

 

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Nice intro. I had the same problem in my AAR.... its better to use a font readers can easily pickup. Im all for realism, but you really want as many people reading your AAR as possible!

Good luck.

 

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• Sep 24, 2011

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Thanks for the comments. And yea, now when i think about it - hard to read fonts are often also a big turn off on my part. I am already doing the next chapter - with more than just one picture - and with a (hopefully) more readable font

 

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• Sep 24, 2011

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Updated. Hope this font is better

 

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I like the graphics! The font is a little bit heard to read, but it's no big worries.

 

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• Sep 26, 2011

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Updated!

Is it the font which is scaring you all away?

 

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• Sep 28, 2011

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Hi theres no need to keep on putting in single line posts - Updated!

its better to gather a block of material together and then make a new post (which will show up if people are subscribed)

... having said which - the graphics are really good and the font works (it could be more readable but then it would lose some impact so its a trade off)

 

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• Sep 28, 2011

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The Final Blow!

 

Last edited: Sep 28, 2011

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• Sep 28, 2011

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Peace and Friendship

 

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• Sep 30, 2011

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Friend in need or a friend indeed?