Pedro's ineptitude is beginning to show, the cracks in his facade are large enough that they would be hard to miss.
Alfons is a madman, but a madman that has influence. The only question is now - how far does that influence go?The nobility would come before the army methinks. Nobles command the army.
Damn bishop and his foul words.
It can only be a matter of time before the rot spreads to the court. Even his puppeteer mother can't stop that.Pedro's ineptitude is beginning to show, the cracks in his facade are large enough that they would be hard to miss.
Congrats on winning the AARland Choice Award for best CK Narrative
Congrats on winning the AARland Choice Award for best CK Narrative
Thank you both for your kind words! I never expected to win this award, even after I had said I didn't want to be in the race in the first place. I am glad, however, that AARland does like my work thus far.Yes, definitely. Great work and well deserved.
I am having a little trouble writing the next update - but it should be up by tonight. I apologize for the long wait.
I am having a little trouble writing the next update - but it should be up by tonight. I apologize for the long wait.
Pedro, as I have written him by the events that fired for him, was quite the ladies man - and very afraid of commitment. Urraca is attractive, yes, but consummating the marriage, in Pedro's eyes, is akin to giving up on his bachelor-filled life.Enjoying the read so far. Great dialogue, suspense, intrigue.
I say go for the religious angle. Pedro seems not so bright on that or any front really. The Sanchez branch of the Jimenez dynasty are rather attractive by CK standards (Sancho is himself rather hunky, compared to his brothers), so I would like to hear more on why he finds poor Urraca Sanchez so unworthy of his time.
Pedro, as I have written him by the events that fired for him, was quite the ladies man - and very afraid of commitment. Urraca is attractive, yes, but consummating the marriage, in Pedro's eyes, is akin to giving up on his bachelor-filled life.
I can't ever remember that one CK event that it's option is "But what about all the other girls?" - that is basically Pedro's reasoning. I am just glad you are enjoying it, RedRooster.
Just to clarify, this AAR is back in session. It will have an update before this day is out. I apologize for the wait, folks.