Thank you for your 3rd chapter!
It was interresting in the way you laid out your goals and how you intended to accieve them.
Besides that you do a good job in beeing as boring and uninterresting as possible to not get to be a target for anyone with a sane mind
Keep updating, just 2 more chapters for the contest needed![]()




































But let me jump to the most recent chapter with some feedback; because I also love it, and love dishing it out. For one, your deep philosophical journey into a debate vis a vis the efficiency of a non-centralized non-market economy that focuses primarily on subsistence agriculture appeals to my pastoral roots; indeed, though one could argue that defense is important in the face of Nationalism and Imperialism, one could also argue that a well-honed mind (that goes to the range now and again) is a good exchange for a soldier; especially because they can work elsewhere in the interrim. But, unfortunately I've noticed a flaw in your otherwise masterful logic:

