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    Renaissance: Élan de Romain Français!

    I took a crack at this before, but because of technical difficulties/time it failed miserably. Those who are reading this, it is going at a leisurely pace, probably each weekend. That is all I will promise. The way I was writing created a very elaborate story that would have been great, but it was to ambitious and it became way to cumbersome. So, I'm going to be concise. When I eventually move this from Crusader Kings, which I will as fast as possible because honestly I really find this game tedious and open-ended, at least the way I play. I've got to move it to EU III as fast as I can. Then I'm going to reorganize how I do this. Please, don't be kind in your comments, constructive criticism is welcome!

    Preface -
    Introduction -
    Chapter I -
    Chapter II -
    (Etc... will be filled in as I go)



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    Renaissance: Élan de Romain Français

    “Thy brokers of all Christendom, doubtful darkness, entangled thorn, compatriot and antagonist weave alike a most iniquitous creation of man! No Commonwealth can be founded but by free consent. I, Lords and Heavens do beseech, yea shall solemnly swear; not one kingdom, republic or religion to confine our auspicious flair; brought against most envious blear! Rather, t’was twice decided, blood articulate in glorious battle, board mitigation among gripping intrigues and with none placed in unacquainted or uninvited danger but great brotherhood,” – An excerpt from Herbert IV, a famous 17th century French play

    Preface

    Herbert IV’s legacy is undisputed. His contributions left unmistakably permanent changes to European civilization. Even as legendary a figure he has become, inspiring interesting fables and mysterious conspiracies, his life is easily the most relevant study of the rebirth of the Carolingian Dynasty. Clearly an interesting and fascinating tale of courageous survival and royal vitality, it is arguable that the Caroling line has had the most impact of any other family throughout Europe. His legacy is still relevant, even to today, as the father of the modern French kingdom.

    Introduction

    Herbert IV was an unlikely success story. Within the volatile country of France, hardly could one even considered it a state, let alone a kingdom. After the death of Charlemagne, many of his former vassals became autonomous, further, after the death of Louis the Pious the Empire completely fell apart. In the remains was the French Kingdom stationed at Paris, especially along the periphery mainly the coastal areas of Brittany and Toulouse much of its territory became independent of central rule. In this very trying time for the young French state, Herbert was born. While the peripheral robber barons surrounding Paris slowly became independent of the King, Herbert witnessed the complete opposite and gave him reason to fear him. He had been by his father’s side when he lost the county of Reims and numerous smaller estates near Paris to the encroaching French King, thus he only inherited the domain of Vermandois and a few townships throughout Valois. It was his ambition to recover the family lands, taken by the King when his father had given him trouble within his realm. He was determined to not make the same mistakes as his father or to rely on the mercy of his King.

    This history begins with the coinciding events in England. In 1066, the Normans, descendants of Vikings and Franks, had just conquered England placing their nobility in power at the expense of the English themselves. This was not the first time something like this had happened, nor was the Norman conquest something all that new. It was a common practice among Europe to tear down the prevailing order and replace it. Usually, the losing side wasn't working. For instance the fall of the Roman Republic and the birth of the mighty Roman Empire under Julius Caesar, it is efficiency, swiftness and inclusion that create powerful states. The legacies both Julius Caesar and Charlemagne left behind were important influences on Herbert when he was being educated as a young child. It was from them and the recent fall of the English kingdom that he began to plot the downfall of the French King.

    He set out first to discover his claim to the Kingdom, which he would base his usurpation on. While he knew he was a descendant of Caroling blood and probably had an ancestor of the old Caroling rulers of France, any evidence of this tie had been lost to history. He commissioned a historian to discover his familial connections to the King of France, he hoped to be placed in the line of succession and use that as a legitimate claim on the throne. The historian, Gabriel-Jean de Encre, possibly Herbert himself, stumbled upon an interesting 9th century text that showed familial relation with Pepin I of Aquitaine. The history inspired Herbert and his court with the many tales of his apparent ancestor. Herbert’s attempts to trace his lineage to Pepin II*, the pretender to the throne of Aquitaine, became controversial only after his death. The account itself was supposedly written in ancient German and apparently translated. When the historian de Encre found it in the early 11th century it guided the scholar to a poem, written for Pepin II by one of his people. It described him as a fair ruler of his former lands. The poem apparently extolled his feelings, as it was written by an admirer of the pretender, and expressed his belief that God had given him a second chance to rule his former lands after his escape. He had been locked away in a monastery after he led an uprising against Charles the Bald who had usurped the throne from him.

    According to the scholar's history, Pepin's image was tarnished as part of a larger plot in case he ever attempted to reclaim the throne. In reality, according to the history, Pepin II was not a Pagan, a Viking raider or a glutton. Instead this was an early example of a smear campaign used to depose him. In truth, he had a son with his wife who he sent to a monastery. There are, however, no concurrent records of his son or much evidence that contributes to the accounts in the Heeren de Francia Historie.

    Here is an excerpt from Heeren de Francia Historie, translated into English in 1277 from the original French and German texts supposedly written by Nithard in the 9th century and lost after his death:
    Anno 840, Louis, by the aid of God, king of the Franks and Lombards and patricius of the Romans, son and successor of Charlemagne, died and was delivered to God from this world. In death, he lived on through his four sons, except Pepin I of Aquitaine who died in Anno 836. They each, by birthright and in custom of Frankish law, were given each a possession to call as their own realm equal to eachother as Kings. It was in this fashion that most Frankish realms would be divided. Pepin I of Aquitaine would have ruled over his father's possession the Kingdom of Aquitaine, his realm would have stretched from Bordelais on the Atlantic coast bordered by the Pyrenees and Provence, his rule was over those who used lingua romana rather than lingua teudisca. While his father remained Emperor, he would become the heir-apparent to his father, ruling with him as equal. He died, however, before his father. Emperor Louis, under duress, had given his possessions to Charles the Bald, Pepin II's tyrannical Uncle, disenfranchising Pepin II of Aquitaine from his inheritance. The nobles rebuked Charles the Bald and recognized Pepin II, King of Aquitaine. He would be crowned, Anno 838, by the grace of God, Pepin II of Aquitaine in the city of Toulouse as the true King. When Emperor Louis died, his other son Lothar became overlord of his younger brothers as the eldest. Lothar was sympathetic to his nephew, however, this placed him in a precarious position between both his brothers when they allied against him. At the Treaty of Verdun, Lothar was forced to recognize Charles the Unjust, the name the nobles had given him when he attempted to impose his rule, as King of both Western Francia and Aquitaine. Pepin II, with righteousness on his side, defied the treaty and went to war with his Uncle. Pepin II eventually lost his Kingdom. However, he had enlisted aid from a Viking conqueror known as Jarl Oscar. After more than a decade in prison, he escaped and joined the Vikings in their quest to control Aquitaine. This unholy alliance gave the enemies of Pepin II enough evidence to falsely consider him a follower of Wodon, even though his brother was the Archbishop of Mainz and, thus such a conversion, would have disgraced him into obscurity and ostracized from his Lord God. While his detractors defamed him, it is rumoured he was wed secretly to a speaker of lingua romana, Maredith, as he reassumed authority of his lands. When she became pregnant with his son, she was spirited to a northern baron, where it is speculated his son would prosper.

    This discovery gave Herbert IV the ability to plan a new balance within the French Kingdom and solidify his personal obsession to depose Capet, and remove the House of Capet from the throne. This was logical considering the Capetians on more than one occasion historically threatened the independence of the Duchy he had assumed after his son killed himself. This is a better conclusion, since the evidence for the claims made in the history even then were flimsy. It was more likely the histories referred to an illegitimate son and any reference to a wife could have been confused with a woman he likely kept as a slave. The histories were in fact fake, however, this wasn’t discovered till much later. However, had they been real his son would have no real claim to the throne anyways. His dispossession, especially after the Treaty of Verdun, would have left any future claims mute. The fictitious history Herbert used for his imaginary claim to the throne of Aquitaine, which gave him impetus to accept their ways, created a historical narrative for his sons. The history is still required reading for any French Historian and an excellent mythology that influenced future Carolingians upon reassuming the throne creating a “Pepinian” spirit or élan.

    Those who were descended from the Frankish tribes that had invaded in the early 6th-7th centuries, still continued to speak the lingua teudisca, what today has become an extinct dialect of the Germanic tribes that had settled the northern frontier. His first born Eudes spoke only the more boorish Frankish language and continued to wear traditional German clothing. However, Herbert’s first grandson from his second son Robert was fluent in both Old French and began to wear Italian fashions from Venice. While he could never live up to his father’s ambitions, Eudes was still instrumental in his plans. Alix-Adele de Valois was Herbert’s first wife and also Eudes mother, putting him in line to become Duke. Historical records are mixed and vary on the exact details of Simon de Valois, son of the Duke, but he too played an important role. He died in 1076, killed by a stray arrow while on a hunting trip with the Duke as his martial. When Raoul III finally died in 1083 of old age he left all of his possessions to Eudes I, Duke of Valois. Eudes I, thereafter, committed suicide.

    Historians agree that Eudes I had an early recorded form of schizophrenia. In his book, “The Possible Genetic Heritage of Psychological Disorder,” Paul X. Thibodeau, a psychological historian at the Universite d’Toulouse and royal psychologist, diagnosed Eudes in a controversial study. He classified Eudes with bipolar disorder, schizophrenia and numerous dissociative behaviors after a thorough investigation of both his ancestral history and identifying clear symptoms. Dr. Thibodeau is clear in his case study of Eudes, “pressures from his father, the death of his mother and competition with his brother, Robert, gave him two realities. The patient, [Eudes], simply bore criticism in one reality and in another, which he created, he lived as an equal.” It’s obvious later that Herbert felt little remorse for his son’s death, who he believed was a “worthless boor.” Once he realized he had driven his son to suicide, however, he felt more empathetic toward his firstborn.

    After the death of his first wife, Herbert married Matilda de Vogue. Matilda, born near Montpellier, spoke a crude form known as Old French and wore Italian fashions. She was a clear break from the northern Frankish traditions, which Herbert saw as boorish and uncivilized. Her influence on the court would set the tone for the creation of the Chateau de Amiens. Her very shrewd nature and almost total loyalty to her husband and his cause made her a valuable asset to the new Duke. She would give him his second son Robert I who would eventually become known as Robert the Magnificent. His sons and nephews would follow his example and marry women across the southern half of France. History shows Herbert IV knew full well the histories he created were false, but he was like his sons, especially Robert, a shrewd politician. He wanted revenge against those who he had believed betrayed the Carolingians, driven through this revenge, he established objectives to slowly erode Capetian rule. He was thus driven through revenge to propel his family to rule France. He didn’t simply want to depose the Capetians either but to eradicate their house permanently from the political and social arena through any means necessary, especially removal of their heirs from the throne, succession, any possessions they had within France or cadet branches. He planned to veil his motives from the king as revenge not against the Captians, but against the southern nobility that had abandoned Pepin. He wanted to use this ancient strand of French culture and language to drive a wedge that would eventually eliminate any allies the Captians had left through expensive civil war. While the Duke would consolidate his powers, he planned for his sons to gain popular support to match the Captians at their own game, the same game they had won to depose Charles of Lorraine.

    His plan was thus made very simple divide France so he would rule it. His hero Julius Caesar used a similar strategy to conquer the Gallic tribes. His near insane fascination with Roman history created in him inspiration for a great empire. He believed his plan required common kinship with the old Roman rulers of France, which he believed was important to his legitimacy to rule. As aforementioned he would accomplish this through patronage of southern culture, which at the same time would create an unstable realm for the French King and would in the ensuing chaos forge a kingdom for his sons. He needed the compliancy and support of the southern regions while using the northern divisions to exhaust their strength to supply armies to assault Paris only then could his sons legitimately depose the king. He wanted to begin building with his rule his realm in the south and then his descendents would finish in the name of his legacy. The first obstacle to this bold initiative was the loyalty he barely commanded among his own nobles. This was a common issue that plagued 11th century European feudalism. These noble lords throughout Europe simply ruled from force and had carved out their kingdoms through conquest of the old Roman Empire. He had to devise a mechanism to give him the loyalty he required and the future establishment of a kingdom. It is here that he began the first progressive reforms, which would eventually become a characteristic of his long and fair rule. He began creating contracts that required their unquestioning loyalty, at the suspense of his total power. He hoped this would secure after his death his imperial prerogative.

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    Notes:

    - There actually was a Pepin II, if anyone is wondering, he really did try to retake his lands and he really did become a viking and a pagan to do it. Though there isn't historical accounts of him having kids, he did have a brother who was the bishop of Mainz. He was a horrible king. He led the Vikings on a guided tour, noting all his weaknesses the whole time, through his kingdom to get their help against Charles the Bald. They raided all of his lands afterwards and he quickly became very unpopular.

    I hope everyone enjoyed this first installment! Comment, please!
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    Excellent- Occitan Carolingians! I'll keep reading!

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    Good and well-researched AAR. Only minor quib, why do the decendants of Charlemagne abandon their Frankish roots simply for the sake of some southern allies?
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    Hannibal X - Thanks

    FlyingDutchie - That is a good point, most people try to create a whole science fiction thing, what if you could go back in time and inform such and such individual about what is going to happen. I decided to look at Europe from the perspective of the future Dux himself, it is kind of the logic I'll be proceeding on. When you look at the European map you see he has only one province, when his father actually controlled a much larger chunk in Valois. The king historically was encroaching on both the Duchy of Valois, by this point ruled by Raoul III, (I have no idea who he is descended from) and the county of Vermandois. He has lost all that land and has to wait for Raoul III to die to become the Duke, while at the same time the King is probably going to take both for his son. Historically, that is what he did. I'm sure Herbert saw it coming unless he was totally oblivious. This is sort of a natural but active response to what has been happening to him and his ancestors, because historically his lineage simply retreated and died in obscurity and humiliation. He's raging against the machine, man and in the 11th century to boot!

    Seriously, though, the Franks betrayed the Carolingian Dynasty, electing the Capetians to the throne not the old King's uncle Charles of Lorraine. I'm not to sure if Herbert has any relation to him, but it does give him some animosity toward the Franks. I mean, Herbert is also the last of his house, which is a big deal in 11th century Europe. So, if I was Herbert I would think, what have they done for me and what do I care about? At the same time, this specific line of Carolingians were insane and unpredictable. In our timeline, that is what eventually destroyed them. Historically, Raoul III outlived Eudes, who married his cousin and never left his castle eventually killing himself when he went into a deep depression. While Herbert didn't show signs of insanity he was rather unpredictable, so instead of their insanity destroying them, it gives me some breathing room to change history.

    Herbert married Raoul's firstborn daughter, which put him in the line of succession and I think that is evidence of a rather pragmatic personality. The duchy of Toulouse and Aquitaine are probably the strongest in France at this point. To any logical person trying to take down a monarch as strong as the King of the Franks you would need them on your side. They aren't simply "some southern allies" but probably a prerequisite for a successful civil war. Mind you he still is a Frank, he is just feels revulsion toward it. His sons Eudes and Robert are Frankish as well he and his sons just happened to marry southern women, but Robert's son Frederi is Occitan. That is the inevitable future when one intermingles with another culture for long enough. I'm really just trying to create a believable mindset for such a shift. Think about as Herbert thinking outside the box. I hope that answers your question?
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    Hmm... Occitan revival of the Carolingians? Awesome. I'll be sure to follow.

    Oh, and here's an Occitan song, if you want to use it in your AAR.

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    Foundations

    In AD 987, elected King, Hugh Capet secured the monarchy having reigned long before the election, he had displaced the sovereign deteriorating an already sick and untenable court. The chronicler Malleacensis rightfully characterized the court as frail and sickly whose arbitrators treasured injustice and callously ruled with abandon to the law. Hugh had made many enemies with his sudden rise to power and carried very little influence. Through the realm, he created a great clamor among the many powerful magnates while they only bitterly gave him their allegiance through force. The clamor was great and to assure the throne for his son, the esurient Rex demanded the Pope anoint his son the rightful successor. Capet wanted to feel important and powerful, he did not care about his people as much as he did his coffers. Upon his death, among all the protestation, it came to pass that his son would assume the throne. The mighty kingdom in the West was in an unfortunate free fall, a decaying corpse, with little unity. This left an important impression on Herbert while recognizing the magnificent beauty that had been left behind after the Carolingian Renaissance was mired in the decent and instability of the Captian court.
    In these troubled and uncertain times Lady Patia gave birth to a son. He would be known as Herbert IV the Caroling, upon the death of his father, he would be known as Count de Vermandois. Herbert learned at a young age that his father was without ambition and had little sense, certainly not enough to be more than Count. He had done little, his accomplishments were few and he had accentuated centuries of decay, especially within his own House. This was a typical response among the cadet branches who attempted to secure peace with the new King. Herbert, when he was growing up, could never accept this status quo or mere filtration toward mediocrity which horrified him. When Herbert was old enough, he was sent to the monastery and instilled with strong religious conviction which had the opposite effect. On his visits to the Parisian court as a practicing preacher, he was eased into the political world, he began to understand court intrigue and what was involved. He realized, for his own survival, he had to become innately skeptical and regarded any friend as a potential foe. When he turned seventeen, his father died and he inherited the court. His rule would measure his ambitious drive against his concepts of western chivalry he was in constant limbo between his own ambition and his conscious. Since, he had become a learned man from his time as a monk he had begun writing a diary which has survived to today.

    Discovered in AD 1211, each wrote in fluctuation between Latin and Frank, Herbert attempted to keep a personal record between corresponding letters and diaries. He favored Latin as it would conceal his thoughts and he favored its simplicity. In this excerpt from those journals he describes his logic in detail:

    “Wresting with debilitating power, a usurping king does beset our land with an unjust hand. Not yet his body cold did the Capet injustices conspire. The vaunted elected lord, treachery and terrible reality does perplex our moral order. Besmirched for sleep, doest come dreams, in them a most interesting Curia. As if the twelve apostles had come down upon angels, these men spoke truth, just and blind. The court politicks so yearned in my despair would now with action bring glory to God, his divine justice to man be wrought.”

    Now his actions were clear in his writings, it seems early influences had left a powerful impressions on the young Count. Herbert wanted to show, not only could he supersede his father, but could be a clear alternative to the King. When he assumed power Herbert broke social conventions in his mission for parilitas, the Latin for equality. He ruled fairly and justly, treated his nobles as well as his free farmers as equals. The men who earned their way to his table were given equal treatment. Compelled through his dream, he invited all his nobility to his feasts, an unheard practice. He asked his nobles through formal contracts full submission to him while he respected their specific skills they brought to him. His father had used verbal agreements to gain their loyalty, which made deals inconsistent and vague. He found these contracts exceeding the otherwise unproductive atrophy the royal county had fell into, the malaise he experienced firsthand at his father’s right hand. The written agreements created accountability for the knights to their master, his rule became easier and created exceeding efficiency, while at the same time the barons found assurance that the contracts gave them an important check on his authority creating mutual respect between both.


    Notes: Ok, so I'm a little backlogged on these updates (and we just got started!) but I've been working on them diligently. I say quality over quantity... right?
    Game Update:
    - A lot hasn't happened in game terms up to this point, this is just a set up into the bulk of the story and my opening moves (more to come).
    - I've been battling with whether or not I should do big updates talking about general stuff or going into detail. Short answer: I decided to do it in detail (it also gives me more leisure to be me).
    - Enjoy.
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    I always love a good French AAR and the Vermandois are probably one of the best dynasties to do so, given their impeccable lineage. No one else can claim descent from Charlemagne in the male line except them. I'll be following. Very interesting to read, keep up the good work!
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    Totally forgot to thank you for the lenghty answer earlier, so thanks. And I agree, quality before quantity.
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    Sorry about the long wait, I had life hit me in a big way and got bogged down, I'll still continue the saga, however. If anyone was worried. I hope you all didn't miss me.



    Heritage


    After his election in AD 987, Hugh Capet secured the throne in France, displacing the old King while he was still on the throne. His election created much discontent through the realm, which led to power concentrated more in the magnates throughout France than in the King. Upon his death it came to pass that his son would assume the throne. This era began a anew with Capet enervation. Eudes de Vermandois and Patia gave birth to Herbert IV who grew up near a frail, sickly royal court. Conversely, while his lineage gave him ambition, it had sufficiently skipped his father.

    While Herbert would go to great pains to inflate his lineage, we know now his true lineage. The ambitions that would guide Herbert were established through his ancestors, starting with Pepin (Pepin was a very common name) in AD 781, who was the son of Charlemagne. He was given the Iron Crown and received charge over all Lombard until his death in AD 810. His illegitimate son, Bernard of Italy, with urges from his grandfather, inherited this realm. He would plot to overthrow the Emperor, Louis the Pious, when he was placed under direct vassalage to him. He failed, however, when his allies did not materialize. He lost the crown when his uncle decided to blind him to death as a consequence of the plot. After he died, Pepin de Vermandois, his son, became count of Vermandois. He died shortly thereafter having done little, if nothing. When he died, his lands passed to his son, Herbert I, who also did little of note. His son, Herbert II, however, had an ambitious dream of a principality emanating from Vermandois. He began consolidating his position throughout the great northern lords, uniting them under his leadership, his power peaked when he imprisoned the King. He used the king as a bargaining chip, forcing Duke Rudolph of Burgundy to concede to his son becoming Archbishop of Reims, which would have secured for future generations a number of lands in France and Germany. When the King died, however, his dreams would never be realized and he lost all he had worked for, including Reims for his son.

    When Herbert IV became old enough, he was sent to the monastery where he was instilled with strong religious convictions. His father still managed to teach him pragmatism when he would visit him from time to time. On his visits to the Parisian court as a practicing preacher, he began to understand the seedy world of court intrigue. He realized at an early age, to survive he needed to be suspicious and regard any friend as a potential foe. When he turned seventeen, his father died and he inherited the court. When he did, an intense despair settle over him, he had only then realized how severely crippled his ancestors had left his inheritance. It was in this despair, as in all great despairs, he realized his dream. He dictated his dream to his mentors, explaining he knew a new realm should be created that would rival the Capet, who he despised. It is speculated within a few histories written about him that he was the witness to divine intervention. Since, he had become a learned man from his time as a monk he had begun writing a diary which has survived to today. In it he saw this as a practical maneuver.

    Discovered in AD 1211, each wrote in Latin, the many journals Herbert collected through his rule. He favored Latin as it would conceal his thoughts and he favored its simplicity, words he could not find he used Frankish. In this following excerpt from those journals he describes his logic in detail for his bold future moves against the King:
    “In this day and age, it has come to pass that all the powers the dynasty once enjoyed are gone. In this there must be a balance set against his lord, Louis V. Not yet his body cold did the Capet injustice spring in his 987 election. Avenging this treachery, this tragedy, this terrible reality should be our life work. In a dream, realized was a table, with great men round and a throne, not in the center, but at it. It was then, realizing the magnitude, my despair disappeared. The court politicks so yearned in my despair would now with action bring glory to God and his divine justice to man would be brought.**”

    It was from there on he planned to be stronger than his father. It was perhaps his family and their ancestral link to madness, especially schizophrenia, which gave him these delusions of grandeur. Whatever the case, from then on he felt he had to restore his royal line, he became especially vivacious in the bedroom. Some nights his wife, Matilda de Vogue, could not stand his stamina she was after all raised to understand chastity. It was also on those nights, according to accounts left behind from court members; he would find other women within his court to satisfy his unquenchable sexual drive.

    His Wives


    During his reign, Herbert would have three wives. While he was raised with strict religious principles he felt at any given time he needed to have two or three mistresses. With his sexual escapades, revisionist historians consider him much more a pitiless womanizer rather than a chivalric knight who gave women their due dignity. Alix-Adele de Valois was born AD 1040 and died AD 1071 peacefully in her bed to natural causes. She met, however, an untimely death and speculation points to her husband as a likely culprit. Few then made these assertions until contemporary historians investigated her death in-depth in the early twentieth century. These histories have drawn on numerous theories; however, they are backed up with little or no evidence because she was actually until her death his chief spy. Any attempt he would have had on her life she would have in all likelihood known was being planned. While she herself was incapable of doing her job well she did lay the groundwork for her successors to create the most powerful network of assassins and spies that would eventually work for Herbert. She was involved in numerous high-profile murders and was thus more likely a target of external threat rather than fear of her husband.

    The allegations her husband had anything to do with her death probably rested more on his numerous sexual encounters, than either his unorthodox or secretive behaviors. Adele was apathetic toward her husband, she knew he had moral failings and was continually suspicious toward her husband and knew it came from when she could not please him. His mistresses, however, were never as lucky as he was and would usually disappear once Adele learned they existed. Herbert would use his responsibilities at both castles as excuses to alternate between the two, leaving his wife at the one he was not. He practiced strict coitus interruptus with each affair and had no illegitimate children. Many speculate to the contrary, but there seem to have been no record of bastards in his line.

    Rather than break his habit, he got smarter with each affair and his wife got better at following his trail. She would complain constantly in her letters to her father, each time they would escalate in their severity each affair she found her husband in. One of her letters claimed a servant at his Péronne castle, going by the name of Rupert, went into the royal chambers with more pillows when he found Herbert with two other women. These letters became a court secret, she hoped to keep her husband’s reputation intact, while she wanted her father to place pressure on him to change. He applied pressure with her escalating reports even threatening to leave his grandson Eudes out of the line of succession and she had only given him three daughters who were married off to southern French courts to establish good relations with them. With Herbert’s relations with his father-in-law in jeopardy his wife suddenly died in 1071 AD and his father-in-law died in 1082 AD and a year later his son Eudes died, making Herbert Dux de Valois as he had always dreamed of.

    He married his second wife, Matilda de Vogue, a year after his wife died. She was from the County of Rouergue a deceitful and skeptical woman she challenged Herbert’s faith on more than one occasion. She had come from the lower nobility in the county itself; de Vogue is a lost name to history because her family did little. This was an unlikely pick for a Duke of Herbert’s stature, considering she was a step removed from the freeholders and he was born of such noble blood. He considered her energy to be rejuvenating to him, by this time he was becoming an old man. While Adele had done a worse job when she was placed in charge of the spy network Matilda could easily make up for her many shortcomings and seemingly excelled through her own resourcefulness. She did bring many reforms to the old system Adele had created, making it much more efficient and effective for her husband to use against his many enemies and to elevate his friends into high places. While he had her killing his opponents his brother, Chancellor Eudes Caroling, was warming relations with other courts.

    His friend Olaf Haraldsson Yngling, King of Norway, had the children of brother Magnus the Duke of Trondelag killed using his assassins. He had begun a civil war against his brother in 1078 AD and the King nearly lost his throne a couple of times until his brother finally died succumbing to an intestinal worm with no heirs. The Dukedom was given to a friend of Olaf, Alsak Smor, who had stayed loyal throughout the civil war with his brother. This was her main legacy at court as well as bringing in more Italian fashions from southern France. It seems during this time, to keep their line pure of any Frankish stock, the southern nobility had married into many influential Italian families in the Republics of Venice and Genoa. Pisa, for instance, had started to become eclipsed by its many neighbors though it’s massive navy continued to control the Mediterranean it’s close rival Tuscany had taken much of Central Italy under Matelda di Canossa who had her capital in the city of Firenze, today known as the city of Florence. While both Norway and Italy were transforming under her reign, more specifically the part she played in weaving good relations with their nobilities either through subterfuge or in cooperation with the Chancellor using her daughter, Isabeau, had begun to consolidate the Duchy’s position in France. Time would still be needed for Herbert’s master strokes which would not go into motion until a year after her death. It was also in this time that his behavior became more secretive and stranger, there are few accounts about him following his marriage to Matilda. Evidence indicates numerous trips aboard, many speculate he was identifying a new wife, but others theorize it is possible these were diplomatic missions. When he arrived home again he finally settled down and married. Accounts seem to indicate preparations to create a chivalric order, mainly looking back on his numerous accomplishments and in celebration for his marriage. It would evolve from the Knightly Order of the Iron Crown, an ancestral object which he intended on winning back, into the mysterious and secret society it is known to be today.

    With death of his son Eudes, Herbert needed to have an acceptable heir to take his place when he died. She gave him that with the birth of Robert the Magnificent. His second born was a prodigy with many talents and many of his father’s friends saw him as a perfect successor. He had few enemies and any he had he easily won over with his brilliant wit and charisma. Robert had a glorious marriage, when he became of age, to Felisa de Toulouse in a great cathedral. Many from around Europe came in attendance and the Duke spared no expense. It was here that the Duke bestowed on his son the title of Knight of the Iron Crown and a badge which many in attendance were said to have worn like wise, it seems numerous foreign monarchs in attendance had the same badge. It was confirmed in the early twentieth century this order had suspiciously vast control over executive decisions by the Duke and the other rulers in the order. A book known as "The De l'Orme Code**" is a controversial history of the order and its possible link to historical events, many discredit this with real evidence and some say the writer, Don Black, may have created evidence to substantiate his claims.

    While Robert was a perfect successor, his brothers both of which were born from Matilda before she died of old age in 1087 AD, were jealous of their brother’s success and were overshadowed even at birth. Jean, the middle child, could never live up to his brother in any of his successes and fell into a deep depression. While his younger brother, Leon, went blind while acting out on the battlefield. Herbert wanted his other two sons to be functioning court advisors to their older brother, as his brothers had been, and to continue his line into the south. His brothers had done the same, for instance, the son of Pierre Caroling and Sancha Jimenez the sister of Sancho I of Aragon, Geraud, had another son with Sibilia de Barcelona, Gaucher, who was in the line of succession to be Duke of Barcelona. Jean was married to Isabeu de Toulouse, placing his son Charles into that line to become Duke there. However, there were many successors in that line and his son had a long shot to ever become Duke. Meanwhile, his other son Leon married Richenda d’Aquitaine and their son Alain was in line to be Duke there as well. Most of the southern nobles had already started to intermarry within the family, causing disturbing birth defects for their children. This meant that both Charles and Alain would have an equal shot at becoming Duke in either Toulouse or Aquitaine.

    The First Occitan Insurrection*


    While rebelling against an Emperor was at one time a punishable offense, one met either with death or painful torture until death, treachery had become a common occurrence in France especially toward the unpopular Capetian Dynasty. While commoners were frequently leading insurrections in the old Holy Roman Empire, noble barons in France would frequently seek opportunities to free themselves from the high costs of the malignant court at Paris. Indeed, even the King's most loyal supporters, such as his own cousin in Burgundy would balk at his excessive taxation. In the south, these policies were much worse, the King had considered it his mission to erase the Occitan language from society as he preferred the crude Frankish. When King Phillipp I of France* finally died in 1082 AD his only heir, Alderic le Gros ("the fat"), became king and was excommunicated for his very gluttonous and extravagant behavior. As one visiting representative from the papacy commented of the court, "only devil would have a home in such a place, food is nearly constantly served for the king, his magnificent suppers are accentuated by his late night gallivanting. It is no secret he has dozens of mistresses, his marriage to the Madame Cecile de Brienne seems to mean little to him and she is very distance, how terrible a place for young princes to prosper."

    When Alderic was excommunicated from the Church, Raimond d’Aquitaine followed with a general insurrection against the King. This was to be known as the First Occitan Insurrection. While Herbert remained officially neutral in the conflict itself, which would last from 1088 AD until 1097 AD, his sons all participated in the conflict and his coffers had supported those in the insurrection. Behind the scenes, he was playing both sides against each other hoping they would exhaust their armies. He was looking to the future, because in 1095 Pope Urban II held a council of Kings from around Christendom to officially declare a holy war in the Levant. The Crusade had begun and the lords of France, except Herbert, were preoccupied. Herbert did not expect was they would put aside their petty differences to fight in the Crusade. It did not really matter, because his armies were fast approaching the far away lands of the Orient.



    **I think you might notice, I have a lot of fun poking fun at ridiculous conspiracy theories. I thought about this for a long time, what could really change the fate of so many nations in Europe while trying my best to keep this historically possible. The least repugnant for me would be some sort of secret society, possibly of rulers around Europe, maybe it would have the cover of a knightly order of some sort. I still haven't really flushed the idea out and have only really hinted toward it, to see how appealing it is for people I do intend to go into more depth next update.

    *This whole idea is a huge historical turning point, basically, I wouldn't trust anything to be historical anymore. That is one of the problems with an ahistoric game, really, its so damn hard to stick to history when you're trying so hard to change it. It gets very complicated. For instance, while it is true most Capetian rulers had problems putting down domestic revolts from power-hungry vassals, Occitans never seemed to care their language was purposefully being subverted. Certainly not enough to raise a revolt. But I think there was so much pressure added through the game mechanics that this kinda happened on its own.

    *He actually was excommunicated historically, he "separated" from his wife Bertha numerous times claiming she was to fat for him and married his lover Bertrade. Each time the Pope told him to back to his wife, excommunicating him, he would but not for very long and would go back to Bertrade.

    *I would like to apologize for the rushed style no one has expected of me, but I wanted to fit as much into this update as possible to catch everyone up on what has been going on for me in the game. A lot.

    In game terms: Everything has gotten very complicated. Family lineages, countries entangled in massive rebellions that make no sense and uppity vassals who all join Poland for some reason.

    (Btw, everything I'm about to say will be a huge summary of my next update I plan on going in-depth into the new geo-political scheme of Europe, so, !!!!Spoiler Alert!!!!)

    - Germany and Sweden almost completely collapsed. Sweden was my fault, though, Norway got so strong they nearly completely devastated them (their vassals just kept leaving with each war, fed up with the cost). Germany was meanwhile being teared apart by both Sweden, who was looking for some quick territory to sustain itself, and Poland (claims on their land had become dirt cheap with war and excommunications, as well as generally terrible kings who had little intrigue).
    - I had to keep Austria from disappearing. This was actually my fault, I was so busy helping Bavaria survive and Germany stabilize that I wasn't paying attention to Austria which had quite a few shortcomings, the Duke of Carinthia began encroaching on them because their nobility kept getting excommunicated, making their territory dirt cheap.
    - Scotland kept trying to take over all of Ireland and England has nearly utterly collapsed. This was very unexpected outcome, but I guess because they have Norman rulers it has caused friction enough for outright rebellion in the "anglo-saxon" parts of England. I don't think this is very historical, I think most conflict in this period was mainly between the successors of William the Conquer after he died for who would reign on the throne (mainly this took place between two of his sons, his eldest on the throne and his other the Duke of Normandy). None the less, any rebellion in England is welcomed because that will keep them from being able to invade France in the Hundred Years War and I intend to capitalize on their misfortune (perhaps with French claims on Cornwall?). Scotland for some reason got it in its head to invade Ireland and has took over a few northern provinces. This is probably because there is no distinction between Scottish and Irish since they are part of the same cultural group "gaelic".
    - I also had to help Hungary be more historical by taking over Croatia. This has, however, backfired for them and they have a huge civil war on their hands.
    - I've been keeping Italy stable. The Duchess of Tuscany has a few times attempted to take over most of northern Italy, while the King of Germany kept vassalizing her and then she would rebel. This wouldn't be a bad thing if they would stop entirely killing each other, either she nearly destroys Germany with her huge armies or they nearly kill her and take over Tuscany diverting them from more important rebels at their own gates (like Sweden and Denmark).
    - The Byzantine Empire seems to either be nearly conquered or conquering Russia. I've had to force them to declare war on numerous Russian vassals to keep them from being the Kingdom of Rus as well as the Empire of Byzantine. As a counter-balance to them I've tried creating a Sultanate of Rum to, which I had patiently waited to be created through events that were in the game to create an Ottoman Empire. I don't think those events work. So I am going to have to do it myself, because without them the Seljuk Turks will be to strong and overwhelm Europe.
    - I'm also working out a historical path for the crusade to take place (landing in Southern Turkey, sieging all the way to Jerusalem), albeit a little late and under the guidance of a Croatian Pope which all makes no sense, which worked out really well and helped the Byzantine Empire survive (unfortunately, they have actually been very successful conquering Russia, specifically the Cumans which I could not allow to happen).
    - In Spain I've had to create the same kind of balance through my personal intervention, while I need Aragon (it will be bigger to compensate for Castille's strength) and Castille to survive as a buffer against the Muslims in Spain, they have been either to successful or have completely failed to hold them back. Unfortunately, religious enemies like to kill each other until the other guy is completely dead which is annoying for someone trying to keep things at least a little historical. I've had a mini-crusade happen before in Spain where both Britain and France took swaths of territory (that I had to do here, so there are independent vassals that are French, its weird and completely ahistorical, but it was necessary to keep Aragon and Castille alive). Also, Alfonso won, if anyone was interested in knowing.

    The next update will probably be on the Carolingians extraordinary success in the First Crusade.
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