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Chapter XVI: Petros Returns


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The Khwarezmian attack had exhausted Georgia, forcing them to surrender unconditionally and suffer large land grabs for their enemies. The Khwarezmian shah now controlled most of Georgia proper, causing Alexios’s court to take retreat in the Armenian highlands. Half of Alania was handed to the Kipchak chiefs for grazing land against a loose agreement that the raids into Georgia would cease. Georgia was effectively divided into three parts; the southern Georgian holdings in Armenia, the region of Abkhazia on the Black Sea coast and a small region near the city of Derbent what is today as Dagestan.

On the other hand, a group of North Aegean Islands controlled by the rulers of Samos and the city of Ephesus had fallen under Georgian protection after a successful struggle for independence against the Byzantine Emperor – numerous rumours of a new civil war breeding in the East Rome were spreading like wildfire.

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February 1216 – Back in Cyprus


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Osmond kept walking around in circles, nervously tapping his chin with his finger – he feared for the worst. He wondered what was taking them so long, it had been quiet for some time now; all the screams had ended and no laughter, no cries could be heard.

‘Not all premature births end in sorrow’ he kept repeating to himself, yet knew there wasn’t much hope when Veronica began labour just days into seventh month of pregnancy. They had already been blessed with a healthy daughter, Adele, who was still in her infancy.

The door let out a breathtaking clack as someone opened the lock. The young marshal stopped on the spot and stared at the door. Those few seconds felt like eternity; beads of sweat appeared on his hands and forehead. The news brought to him was expected, yet none the easier to swallow. The little boy had passed away before having his first glance in this world.

Osmond couldn’t feel his legs any more and leaned towards the wall, trying to hide all signs of weakness from the priests and doctors present. He tried to mutter something and started to slowly move away, taking support from the wall and various objects on his way.

Anna was crying on the birth bed, holding tight to the lifeless being. Nurses were desperately trying to convince her to let go.

For the following weeks Osmond was given plenty of peace and support, the latter of which he usually turned down. Even Romanos held back from picking fights with his archenemy, although he would later on make remarks of the death of his son being ‘divine justice’, pointing out the immoral relationship of the two siblings’ – something he would gravely regret in the future and which would make Anna brake up all connections she had with her brother and old lover.

Remembering the words of Anahild, Manuel was trying to comfort his half-brother – after all, he had gone through the same emotions himself. Osmond on the other hand was overly sceptical, believing that his brother was trying to victimize him to make him look weak and pitiful – or to simply remind the court how much sorrow the Norman marshal had brought to the prince’s life. Although he did accept the helping hand from time to time (as it actually made him feel better and somewhat helped him get over the event), he decided it was best to hold a grudge and added this to Manuel’s long list of injustices towards him.

But the relative calmness of the court wouldn’t last for long.

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After nearly ten long years in Constantinople Petros was finally on his way home. The carriage was bumping on the road, left full of potholes by the recent rains. He was complaining the dry and hot weather and cursed the Cypriots for not paving their highways while coughing dust from the dirt road.

He also had to try to keep his wife calm during the trip from Famagusta who was terrified of having to be among ‘these savage southern heretics’. Her name was Zofia Grot, widow of a wealthy Polish Szlachta and now one of the richest women in all Christendom – and old enough to be Petros’s grandmother.

The horses curved inside through the castle gates and the couple pretended to be shocked by the modest castle and small size of the city upon descending from their transport. Zofia swore she wouldn’t spend one night in ‘that rat-infested pile of stones’ and expressed great disgust towards the ‘God-forgotten village built by barbarians in the middle of this wasteland’.

“Welcome home, Petros!” Manuel greeted his younger brother with arms open as the couple entered the throne room, assuming it would be a happy reunion.

Instead of greeting his brother in a more accustomed way, Petros started to complain about the castle’s conditions, wildly exaggerating its minor flaws. He grumbled about the draughty corridors, the servants whom hadn’t greeted them with a wide smile or a slender bow and most importantly, the lack of proper welcome ceremony.

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Petros Komnenos

Petros was a person who tended to ride on the success and achievements of others – particularly that of his foster court and the old Roman autocrats (albeit not completely in vein, for being related to the Komnenid emperors) and the wealth of his wife, in order to shadow his own incompetence. As the second youngest of Isaakios’s children the 17-year old had always felt as an underdog, as his only younger brother Basileios (who would later on play a significant role in shaping the realm) was considered a highly gifted child. The ambitions of the young boy combined with the intentional spoiling by the East Roman court led him to believe he was above most mortals and most importantly; better and more civilised than his brethren in Cyprus.

“You cannot expect my wife to spend one night in this second-rate palace!”

“Your wife?” Manuel now realised the over half-a-century old woman wasn’t an elderly servant, such as a nanny, whom the young man had brought with him, but the two were married.

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Zofia Grot

It was hard to tell was Zofia was thinking for she was always looking angry with her squinted eyes and sulky expression. The granny was wrapped in a heavy fur coat, even though it was nearly 18 degrees outside, and wore jewellery expensive enough to be considered a royal lady. She held her young husband as a relic, a proof that she hadn’t lost her charm over the years although everyone – even herself, knew that Petros was only after the money. She was probably even more arrogant than her husband and was a staunch Catholic who considered the Orthodox denomination to be nearly as bad as the heathen religions of the east.

“Pleased to meet you”, Manuel greeted his brother’s wife in a baffled and cold manner. The old woman opened her mouth as if she had been gravely insulted and stepped backwards, saying something to his husband in Polish.

“Don’t bother, brother. She doesn't socialise with your kind.”

If Petros had put as much effort into doing something productive as he had put into marrying the old lady and boasting about what others had done, he might have actually accomplished something meaningful himself. If learning Polish and the proper etiquettes weren’t enough, the young man had also had to convert to Catholicism in order to please Zofia.

Manuel sighed, he knew the situation wouldn’t be getting any easier and right he was.

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When Petros met Osmond the next day, in a welcome ceremony he had yearned for earlier, he thought he had finally found someone to boss around. After all, the young marshal wasn’t much older but most importantly; he was a bastard and hereditarily in a lower position than Petros.

Things didn’t turn out as the young man had assumed and he soon realised that the Norman possessed a strong personality and had the upper hand. After being insulted numerous times by Petros, Osmond started making fun about the boy’s small size and his wife, angering his brother.

“You take that back!” Petros yelled at his half-brother, “I’d challenge you if I only I was armed.”

Osmond gave a grin and threw his sword towards the brat who let out a squeak and jumped backwards as it hit on the floor just in front of him.

“You don’t expect me to actually fight you?” the shocked brother wondered uneasily, “It is so... barbaric!”

Teasing those weaker to him wasn’t pleasing for Osmond as it offered no challenges, but it was good enough for killing time. Besides, the whole court had a certain dislike for the pampered teenager and even Romanos found himself cheering for the Norman, albeit not aloud.

“Up to you”, Osmond sneered, drew a dagger from inside his coat and charged towards his brother.

Petros screamed in panic and ran out of the hall faster than one would expect from a man of such build. The courtiers left behind burst in laughter and went on with the feast happy about the main guest's absence. Zofia didn’t understand what was going on, but it all enforced her prejudices that the Orthodox believers were nothing but a bunch of feral beasts.
 
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Just read it through. I wonder why this AAR has so few readers even this is very well written and has an interesting story. You have to advertise this :).

Where is Yasir?
 
Just read it through. I wonder why this AAR has so few readers even this is very well written and has an interesting story. You have to advertise this :).

Where is Yasir?

Yasir is still there, in fact he will be present in the next update once I have it finished (two lines written now, but I'm getting there ;)).

About advertising; perhaps I should, but whenever I advertise something I sound like an annoying door-to-door salesman. :p
 
About advertising; perhaps I should, but whenever I advertise something I sound like an annoying door-to-door salesman. :p

Heh, yeah. It might sound like that :).

You should scheme this AAR to 'Weekly AAR showcase' somehow :rolleyes:.
 
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Chapter XVII: The Dangers of Political Marriage
January 1218


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“No, you’re in my team!”

“But I don’t want to!”

“Come on Sa’daddin! For once!”

“Fine”, the boy agreed reluctantly and kicked some sand; he would have rather preferred to be a bandit than a guard.

Sa’daddin was the cousin and best friend of Muslihiddin, Yasir’s one and only son. The boy was very stubborn and decisive, but not too bright and often relied on others to do the thinking for him. Yet he was a loyal friend to the end.

Muslihiddin was considered something of a leader by rest of the boys from the small Arab community of Famagusta; partly because of his father’s high position on the island and partly due to his natural talent for leadership. He was also one of the few who could talk sense into his cousin and keep him away from trouble.

Yasir looked at the group of boys running around, having mock battles with their swords. He was glad Muslihiddin was starting to get over his mother’s death; Veronica had died just little over a year ago. Along with Muslihiddin, she had bore her husband two daughters – Hawwa and Julnar.

“Be careful with those things!” he yelled half seriously at his son as the children’s game was getting rougher.

“Come on, dad! You know we will be”, the annoyed son responded and came to his father, “besides, if I want to be a knight when I grow up I gotta get used to taking hits now and then.”

Yasir laughed: “Why would you want to be a knight?”

The boy looked dumbfounded; who wouldn’t want to be a knight. Fighting for justice in a shining armour, bearing colourful flags and travelling the world – it seemed like a dream job for the young boy.

“Wouldn’t you rather pick a safer occupation, such as being a merchant or a politician – like your father?”

“But, that’s so boooring!” The boy knew how his father’s job was; sitting at the dusty office all day long or haggling with other businessmen and dining with the court for dull occasions. Though he had to admit he was very fond of the perks that came with being a wealthy businessman; Muslihiddin was used to the pampering servants and living in a house big enough to accommodate a battalion. Yet he was certain it was nothing compared to the thrill of an adventure.

“A knight you say?” a man inquired from above. His name was Muhtadi and he had found a comfortable spot from the trunk of a palm tree. “But whose knight will you be? A knight for the Greeks or a hero of your people?” Muhtadi questioned the boy.

Muslihiddin gave a sigh and shrugged, at times life seemed overly complicated; he just wanted to side with the good guys – whoever they were.

“Muhtadi... I’ve told you to drop your stupid ideals! And stop influencing my son”, Yasir scolded his friend.

“But Yasir, we have no power, no proper rights and no say on this island. For now they let us be, but times change as generations pass. We must be prepared for the worst!”

“Oh you are a lunatic!” Yasir repelled Muhtadi’s views with a wave of his hand, “we must be grateful for what we have. We are living a good life here, with no war and disease in sight. You say we have no rights but I tell you we have plenty. In the times of my father we wouldn’t have been allowed to even set our foot here.”

“Easy for you to say; hailing from one of the city’s greatest palaces, having a proper title and an influential position. The rest of us have to work hard to scrape a living.”

“Quit your complaining, I’ve been in your position. Don’t think you have it any worse than rest of this island’s inhabitants”, Yasir said and pointed towards the shanty shelters on the nearby hill, mainly occupied by Cypriots and Armenians.

“The laws might say one thing, but these people don’t accept us here. They draw only a thin line between us and their enemies, you know it too. The prince has recentöy acquired great deal of land from Anatolia, think of the possibilities if we were given a land of our own! Land where all Arabs, Christians and Muslims alike could live free of taxes and autocrats.”

Yasir gave a short laugh: “You are still young and naive Muhtadi. Delight yourself with some of the wonderful fruits granted to us by God and enjoy this beautiful day.” Yasir picked a bowl of grapes and leaned back against the palm, ignoring rest of the man’s raving.

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Osmond was gazing at the crude map placed on a table in front of him. He ran his eyes southwards from the north. There was Norway, Sweden, Russia... ah, Russia. News was flooding from the region, telling the old Rurik king had passed away without leaving an heir. A foreign-born son of his daughter was raised to the throne as was written in the law, but the Rurikid dynasty wasn’t pleased with this.

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The rebelling princes are shown blue on the map, while red stands for the areas still loyal to the king. The orange spots represent counties that have declared independence peacefully.​

The Rurik princes still held most of the power in Russia and had largely risen against the king in order to reclaim the throne for their dynasty. Even the few who had sided with their new king did so out of justice rather than love or loyalty, and were considering whether to switch sides. It was clear the new ruler wouldn’t last for long.

But Osmond hadn’t taken the map out to verify Russia’s location. He moved his eyes down south on the map and carefully evaluated Cyprus-Cilicia’s neighbours, measuring their strengths.

“Alexadretta”, the Marshal whispered and pressed his thumb over the city.

“I was told you wanted to see me”, a voice suddenly interrupted him.

“Ah, József – or do you prefer to be called Grigorii?” the Norman sneered.

“Yes, I believe I am in need of your services. Have you heard of the Principality of Antioch, my friend?”

Of course József knew the principality. Set up during the first crusade and now ruled by de Poitou family, it was a relatively wealthy and powerful state considering its size. However, it was Antioch only in name as the city itself had fallen in a popular revolt and was now protected by the Byzantine Empire. Reduced to a city-state controlled from the prospering Alexandretta, the principality still held the capability to defend itself from outer threats.

“I want that city”, Osmond stated baldly.

József gave a short laugh: “And what do you want me to do about that? Murder their whole army one by one?

Osmond smiled and started explaining: “As you are spying on him you probably know that my brother is a calm type of a man. If I am to get him to wage war against a city he considers something of an ally, I will need to come up with a very good reason. After pondering the situation, I believe the very problem can be turned into a solution.”

Osmond started going through his drawers as if he was searching for something.

“Apparently my sister Eduokia, whom I’ve never met, is married to prince Nikephoros’s brother Frédéric. I have heard she is very dear to my brother and they are in frequent correspondence with each other.”

“I still don’t understand where I come into the picture”, the spy wondered.

“As I said, my brother is very fond of her”, Osmond found what he was looking for and pulled a dozen letters from the drawer, “I have intercepted their letters for months now and Manuel is getting worried. I will forge a letter in which she expresses fear for her life and this is where you come in.”

“You cruel bastard want me to assassinate your own sister”, the Hungarian figured and gave a wide grin

Osmond smiled with József and nodded: “I need to make him believe Frédéric killed his own wife. After that it should be easy to persuade my brother into giving me the authority to launch an invasion.”

“I like your cruel and ruthless style, friend. Start preparing for her funeral; she won’t survive to see the spring.”

Osmond was pleased. Things were going according to his plans.
 
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Woo! Mysterious Yasir is back!

Are there any spy who would not be cruel and cold-blooded? :rolleyes:
 
@ Enewald: All the Muslims are too strong at this stage, besides; Manuel isn't too prone to go to war as long as he can sleep late, eat well and generally do nothing. ;)

@ Auray: I'm sure there are. However, if one isn't mentally unstable when choosing to become an assasin, the job will do that for him - at least that's what I believe to happen, I haven't had the chance to gather much experience from working as one. :p
 
I fixed the date of last update from January 1217 to 1218. Had a small error in the timeline I've constructed for myself to keep the dates in check. :)

Also, a short letter for you:

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Evil husbands after another :).
 
Apologies for not mentioning, but I was on holiday during easter. I am back now and will get on with the writing soon. :)
 
Apology accepted :). We'll be waiting eagerly for next update!
 
Chapter XVIII: On the Road to Alexandretta

PART 1

September 1218



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“Dead? Are you sure?” Manuel started feeling giddy; the garden around him seemed to be swinging around. The prince sat down on a nearby bench and beads of sweat rolled down his neck and forehead.

“I am afraid so, Manuel”, Alice responded in low spirits, “according to my informants she has been murdered – poisoned, to be more exact.”

The spy master was starting to feel the burden of age already, having been born 34 summers ago. Yet she was vigilant as ever and her network of eyes and ears kept her well informed of what was happening around and inside the small principality – even Osmond had trouble avoiding her informants.
Manuel wiped some sweat away and swallowed: “Who... who was it? Do we have any clues?”

“We don’t know, but there’s strong evidence pointing at her husband; the young heir has already remarried with a Frankish lady”, Alice stated, “He was the only one who benefitted from this tragedy.”

Manuel and Alice weren’t alone in the garden; a whole group of courtiers were with them as well as an envoy of four high-ranking diplomats from Jerusalem. They had arrived in Cyprus in order to ratify an alliance between the two Mediterranean states, and once explained what was going on they realised they had already been swallowed into a political crisis.

“She... I received a letter from her just weeks ago. She sounded terrified and fearful. And I wrote back to her not to be such a paranoid... I should have listened to her!”

“Don’t blame yourself, Manuel. She was dead long before you received her note”, Alice tried to comfort him.

Osmond saw the moment was ripe to step up and walked to his brother from behind the small crowd, holding a half-eaten apple: “You know what must be done.”

“Tell me.”

Osmond gave a grin and bit a piece from his apple: “This calls for a revenge – for justice! Give me the permission and I will have a small army of able men ready by tomorrow.”

“What are you talking about? A war with our allies? I... I couldn’t...”

“They murdered our sister!” Osmond interrupted him in anger and threw the apple away, “And it is obvious they aren’t even going to punish those guilty of the atrocity! Isn’t that correct, dear Alice?”

“I’m afraid he is right, Manuel”, the spy master replied, “There are no hints of justice being served in Alexandretta, only pretentious sorrow.”

The prince sighed; this put him in a very unfortunate situation. As it was, Jerusalem was now allied to both Antioch and Cyprus-Cilicia, and it was awkward for Manuel to discuss about the possibility of going to war with the Frankish city-state with the ambassadors present. He looked inquiringly at Guillaume who acted as a leader for the envoy.

“Fear not, friend. King Ubert will stand by your side in this matter”, he stated with enough confidence to make Manuel feel relieved.

Although Alexandretta was an important trading partner to the Crusader Kingdom, they were in dire need of an ally with a military muscle. Ubert’s father Oton I, who was hated and despised throughout Christendom, had been assassinated less than a year ago and his 11-year-old son was raised to the throne. Those loyal to the Lusignan dynasty feared for the possibility of the king being toppled – either by powers from inside or abroad Jerusalem. The alliance with the Komnenids would bring at least some degree of security – but little would they know about the dark period they were heading to.

“Very well”, Manuel started and rose up, “do what you must, brother. But I will not give you more than a few hundred men from the island. We will let the Armenians do the job. Sail to Seleucia to William, I’ll write an order to give you as many men as you require. Rest of the troops you can hire from the peasants of the east.”

Osmond couldn’t hold back his smile and bowed slightly: “I will do my best, my prince. I shall leave before sunrise.”

The pleased marshal started to walk away but was interrupted by Manuel: “Oh and Osmond – please, take Petros with you. I know you two aren’t the best of friends but I believe it will do well for you to get to know each other. Besides, that spoiled brat needs something meaningful to do.”

Osmond grit his teeth together and reluctantly accepted his brother’s company.

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“Oh will you be quiet already?” Osmond yelled at Petros. He had had to suffer his brother’s complaints for two days in a row now.

“But I cannot accept this! It is not right for a person of my status to be sent off like this to God knows where! There are savage people out there!”

“If you keep up with that attitude you will notice there are savages in here as well!” the young Norman threatened and jumped off his horse.

“Why are we stopping here?”

Osmond didn’t answer, but walked hastily into a wealthy house.

“Yasir! Yasir!” he called for the Arab.

“Who is it?” a voice said from a room behind him.

“It’s me, Osmond.”

“Ahh, our young marshal”, Yasir came to the entrance hall and greeted Osmond with a smile, “What brings you here?”

“You’re coming with me.”

The Saracen looked confused now: “Come to where and why?”

“To war with us.”

“We’re in war?” he yelped in shock.

“Not yet, but soon.”

“My apologies but I don’t quite understand... besides I am no warrior, just a humble governor.”

“I need some company for a trip, that’s all. I won’t travel alone with that”, he said and pointed at Petros who carefully stepped inside with a disgusted look on his face as his eyes scanned for possible dirt and dust, or other lacks in tidiness.

“Oh, I see...” Yasir was familiar with Petros as well, having met him couple of times on his visits to the capital. Needless to say, the teenager’s manners hadn’t impressed the old and tranquil merchant.

“I’ll give you two options; either you join us or I’ll leave him here.”

Yasir sighed and gave a short laugh: “Fine, I get it. I will accompany you on your travel. But you must tell me about this war, I haven’t heard even a rumour.”

“I’ll explain you on our way across the sea, but we’re late already.”

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The ships were soon loaded and set sail towards Cilicia, but as any fleet with two, young rivals trapped on a same vessel, this too would be all but peaceful.

Sun was setting low as Petros climbed onto the deck. Osmond was there with Yasir, watching the sunset and discussing about something. Petros walked wearily at the rear of the ship and yawned; he had just woken up from his three-hour nap. The island of Cyprus had already shrunk into a small strip far in the horizon. It was windy but clear and warm, and the galley relied solely on its sails.

The young man turned around and stretched; he started walking towards the two men sitting at the front of the ship and grinned as if he was looking for a fight. Somehow he had gotten a stupid and provocative idea during his rest that was bound to stir trouble.

“Hey bastard!” he called for Osmond who turned around, bewildered by the bold way his brother had addressed him. “I just wanted to announce that I am no longer under your command Osmond, in fact I am taking up leadership from now on.”

It took Osmond a moment to recover from the initial shock, but he soon replied in a strict and firm manner: “Over my dead body you are!”

But Petros kept insisting: “I don’t see why I should be subjugated under the rule of an illegitimate, half-blooded son. Besides, I am a highly educated man while you... you are just an uncivilised barbarian.”

The young Greek turned to a few sailors who were still on the deck carrying out their watch duties and yelled to them: “From now on, I am the sole leader of this ship, the fleet, and all men aboard. You hear me?”

The sailors simply ignored the pampered teenager, knowing it was better to let their superiors work out the hierarchical disagreements on their own, yet it was a highly provocative move against the marshal’s authority. Yasir was sure it would lead to a fistfight or worse, but to his surprise Osmond calmly rose up without saying a word and walked to his brother. He gave a smile and easily raised Petros, who was much shorter than him, into the air, hurling him straight into the salty waves of the Cilician Sea.

“Good night”, Osmond said calmly to his brother over the ship’s brim and headed below the deck, leaving the shocked sailors and Yasir to fish the young Komnenid from the water.




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This chapter was originally supposed to be much longer, but because it's been a while since my last update I decided to split it in half to be able to post already.