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longlee

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Irish Lords

A story of love treason and betrayal at the hands of one order and one family. All set in the beautiful land of Ireland. Hope you enjoy.

note- skip to page 4 for some the main storyline..to anyone who read the first pages and stopped get to page 4 and i think you will find it more enjoyable.
 
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Pat looked at the visater. His coat of arms sugested someone from the duchy of lienster but he couldn't be sure. Enoch uttered what do you want. When the king said something the whole room shook with fear because of his visions that could send a man to the dungeon. The visator replied we must take bsck southern Spain from the infidels. Enouch paused to think. Since The O Brien family suddenly became kings of all Ireland they had a lot of visators. Even though he had to rcord everything said he still felt honour that a man of so low noble birth be allowed to hear all the dealings in the court. It was hard not to marvel at Enouch the man with blond hair had done in 20 years what his preddessers tried to do for centuries. Then he heard the dreaded words. WE Must Declare War. Recording this he coulding help wondering why. He would not need to wait long as the king explained to the visator. We must attack southern Spain to make sure the infadials will not reclaim the Spainish main. An outcry of agreement shook the halls. Years later Pat would consider this the first big mistake.
 
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the order

in a secrect corrider in the fort of enouch a man scurried along. the order needed a plan. This line of the O briens is too powerful. If they would have any chanche of siezing the throne they needed something bad to happen quickly. that normally included a guy dying. He got the news of the decleration of war notice suddenly every thing fell in place he sent a note to the head. Yes everything was okay.
 
Good luck with your first AAR

Don't take it personal, but using a spellchecker would greatly improve the quality of your AAR.

Some longer updates would improve it also.
 
Pat considered it so lucky he could be here in Africa. He had hoped that this day would come. He had been equipped with a sword and told to fight with it. In camp later that night he talked with his comrades about why they were there. He told all about the preparations in the court. It had put great strain on the court to sail all the way. They needed all the men they could get as long as you could lift a sword you were okay to go. He was horrified on the way over. There were stories of great illnesses setting in on the journeys. The next morning he woke up like everybody else. He assembled in a battle line. He heard the crunch of the ground underneath him. He saw great numbers of sacrens up ahead. He was fearful for his life but he had to do what he had to do. Then feeling as if it was time started charging towards the enemy he fought hand to hand till he got to where he needed to be he killed the man on the horse. He then saw Enoch fall off his horse. He cried KKIINNGG. The king’s last words were the writer.

Later in the fort in Ireland a man talked about the success of their plan. Had Enoch been killed? The answer was nothing like a 'simple accident'. While they laughed they moved on to more uncertain details. Has lienster been blamed for starting the war yes.He went into detail into how this had happened a couriter had arrived saying that the threat to Ireland was too great and forced Enouch to declare war. How many men were lost I have to say around 12000 said his companion. How did the Ulster force turn out? Fine. Who is the next king. Dimme. Is he accident prone. Yes was the answer riddled with laugther. With this the man said tell master tell him everything went according to plan.
 
the meeting

A man was sitting at a meeting of the order. It was the same everytime. The judge says something and everyone replies. He started to tune out when the judge started by saying we need to kill this person and this person. Why can't they change it up a little bit like its time to kill that person and that person. Yes that sounds better. Well he had to think about if he was voting for the master or if he was voting for the master. It was a hard desicion. Well he still needed to decide his political party. He could join the kill this person party. Or maybe the kill that person party. Aditnilly he could join the kill the person with a funny name party. or the very new party which is injure that guy party. Just when he stopped thinking the shouting started.

Over at the fort Pat was filling out a survey for how much we love our king. The questions were like this. How much do you like your king on a scale of ten to ten with ten being the best. This is what Pat was doing when the screaming started.