English Patriot - A complete and utter defeat on an island that was supposed to be a minor sideshow is surely not the best way to start such an endeavor. Vataczes did what he was trained to do though - fight till the end to protect the Emperor. As for Constantinople, alot will depend on how the rest of the campaign goes as well - if it is a heavy defeat as well, then expect things to get very dicey for Basil. An Emperor, suffering repeated defeats and far from the capital, usually doesn't fare well in Byzantine politics...
AlexanderPrimus - Thank you for the praise, though me writing the battle is a slight misnomer. I created the music track (I listened to those parts of the
King Arthur soundtrack and it all came together), and I basically let the music guide my writing... so in my mind's eye, the music is more placid but strained while Basil et al are marching, unable to contact Alexandros, and becomes frenzied as the Moors launch their devastating assault. Thank you for all your advice and help in creating the music that appears in this AAR, and introducing me to Audacity. Wonderful program.
Fulcrumvale - Yes. If Basil has the massive strengths of being a brilliant commander and inspiring leader, he has the fault of being rather stubborn and sometimes proud. He's encountered the worst defeat of his career, don't look for him to take it laying down.
And this is the 4th most viewed now? WOW. I didn't realize we'd hit such a milestone!
Mettermrck - I tried really hard to keep the chaos of the situation in the writing. Simple, one word commands shouted, and so on, to keep the action tight and moving quickly. I'm glad to hear you think I succeeded - it was one of the most fun passages to writing, even if when it occurred in game I invented new curse phrases involving the name Menorca.
IamWhoa - Thank you also for your kind words! Defeats can be just as epic as a victory - especially when such a catastrophic defeat happens to such a military genius!
RGB - That little bit I had the Battle of Phillipi from
Rome the television series in my head. There's a scene where Cassius and his troop come under attack from arrows, and they form a
testudo over him, with arrows breaking through some of the shields and striking men's arms. I imagined the Romanoi would have shoved their Emperor under the protection of shields at the onset of the attack, at the least until they knew where the enemy was. Glad the descriptions worked well!
Nikolai - Basil at that moment wasn't thinking like an Emperor (another possible weakness), but as a commander that cared for his men. If Basil thought him launching a charge could save a large part of his army, he would likely do it without question. This is fine and dandy if one is a random
strategos, but it can be a bad habit if one is wearing the diadem...
canonized - Oh, did you expect someone like Vataczes to go down asleep in bed? Chances are if he didn't fall at Menorca, somewhere along the line he'd spark a duel or some other violence that would cause his doom - once his ability to fight had decreased from age or injury...
The_Archduke - Welcome to the AAR! As I promised, I'll have something included special in the next update for you!
Enewald - Both Vataczes and Thrakesios died at Menorca. In game Basil did not head that contingent, so with both of the commanders gone CK reverted the army for the rest of the fight to "Anonymous Commander." The Almerian commander died as well, hence their "Anonymous Commander" also.
Estonianzulu - Indeed - if he had survived, what would the Moors have done with a loud, foul mouthed man who didn't know when to keep his trap shut. I have a feeling even if they thought Vataczes was a nobleman, his tongue might have gotten his head on a spike anyways...
asd21593 - In practical terms, Menorca wasn't much of anything - the loss of 5,000 troops out of a standing army of
450,000 is barely a pinprick. However, psychologically the defeat must be stinging - an undefeatable Emperor utterly crushed at the onset of a campaign. True there are 15,000 others on the campaign, but still Basil's shining reputation must, at least for the time being, gain some tarnish from this.
phargle - High praise from someone who invented a new genre of AAR writing.
Thank you for your kind words... I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
bert jr - Thank you also for your kind words! This is a Byzantine AAR, by definition it has to have twists and turns. I just hope the road ahead is sufficiently winding to suit your tastes and enjoyment.
The next update is maybe 25% complete... its taking a little longer to type because I'm still working out the special thing I'm putting into it for all of you. So, to tide you over, I do have a little teaser... some more flags from the eventually EU3 edition!