Timelines: What if Spain Failed to Control the World?

**Judas Maccabeus** · 21-09-2008 20:45

Ohhhh dear. I come back to find this. Quite a big twist to throw out!

**Milites** · 21-09-2008 21:56

That was.. bloody epic Gruby!!

**canonized** · 22-09-2008 05:49

Originally Posted by Lotus-6

So.......

When's the next chapter coming out??

It's coming out very soon ! Most likely tomorrow or Tuesday !

Judas Maccabeus: We're absolutely thrilled to have you back either way

just in time for Season III as well !

Miletes: yes he really went all out ! Very epic chapter indeed !

**Murmurandus** · 22-09-2008 12:16

Good God, Grubby also got that disease canonized has... There should be a character limit or something per update...

**canonized** · 22-09-2008 16:11

Originally Posted by Murmurandus

Good God, Grubby also got that disease canonized has... There should be a character limit or something per update...

What can we say ? XD Ensemble casts are fun !

**phargle** · 23-09-2008 00:16

Originally Posted by canonized

What can we say ? XD Ensemble casts are fun !

There's some fastidious voraciousness at work there, true. Otherwise, I'd say you're percolectic.

**canonized** · 23-09-2008 06:41

Originally Posted by phargle

There's some fastidious voraciousness at work there, true. Otherwise, I'd say you're percolectic.

.. Naturally !

**Grubnessul** · 23-09-2008 15:53

AlexanderPrimus, Milites: Thanks, glad you guys liked it!

Murmurandus: Haha! I think Canonized infected me

phargle: Whatever Canonized said :P

**canonized** · 24-09-2008 19:59

I'm glad you were infected XD It was really excellent ! Next installment of the story is most likely today ! Luckily my essay got moved back to Monday so I have some extra time XD

**robou** · 24-09-2008 20:10

Urrg, always while I am asleep. Still looking forward to the first real update... *teeth chatter*

**canonized** · 24-09-2008 22:14

Originally Posted by robou

Urrg, always while I am asleep. Still looking forward to the first real update... *teeth chatter*

Well it's only because you live in England you silly goose XD

Here's something for you all though !

**canonized** · 24-09-2008 22:14

Season III Prologue Part II

“Isabella…” she whispered to herself. The water surrounding her shattering softly against the tile floor drowned out most of the sound that was escaping her lips, but her whisper was still loud enough that she could hear herself speak—or at least she thought she was hearing herself. “Isabella…” she repeated to herself, “is my name…”

It was not that Isabella de la Cruz was so unfamiliar with her voice now that her memory was returning to her. On the contrary, it was the familiarity of it—the sameness of her voice with the one she had during her time as Princess Jesca of the Infinite Castle that disturbed her. It was as if everything and nothing had changed.

“Isabella?”—this time it wasn’t her voice. Antonio was calling her from behind the sealed door. “Are you alright in there?”

That man’s voice, as well, was both familiar and unfamiliar. Isabella looked up towards the distorted glass that camouflaged her naked body inside of the shower with the shadow outside. Even her sight seemed too sharp now… now that the doctors (she was told) had taken the liberty of fixing what was wrong with her damaged eye—the one that she sustained after being shot, she remembered. Now, however, the double effectiveness of her vision disturbed her as much as her memories—her previously closed eye was now giving in vivid sight just like it used to—she could see much more clearly.

“I’m fine,” she said in return instinctively holding her upper body with her arms as if the glass itself would break away at any instant and expose her. The hot water shuddered against her skin as she leaned forward towards the shower. She could see out of the corner of her eye the receding shadow of Antonio. For a moment she wanted that familiar silhouette to return, as if Antonio was holding onto the other end of a string that was attached to her body and every time he moved away, a part of her was attempting to jump out of her skin, but she pulled herself back and tightened her grip across her chest. An instant later, it was as if she relented, shooting her eyes back towards the distorted glass wondering if perhaps the shadow was gone or if the man was hovering just outside of the view of the light still waiting for her. “Antonio?” she called out quietly.

She wasn’t even sure why she called out for him. Maybe the departing figure was pulling out his name through her throat with that string— “Yes?” was the surprise from the other side.

He hadn’t left, Isabella thought to herself with a confused delight. For a few seconds, she wasn’t sure what she wanted to say at all or even if she had a purpose for calling out to him. “Thank you…” was the only thing she could say.

**Avernite** · 24-09-2008 22:27

Ahh, so modern medicine has helped restored Isabella's memory, so that in the end the guys from ancient times are going to be fixing the world where the present-time good guys are dropping like flies?

Interesting

**Murmurandus** · 25-09-2008 00:31

Originally Posted by canonized

I'm glad you were infected XD It was really excellent ! ...

This reminds me of 'Return of the Living Dead'...

**Kurt_Steiner** · 25-09-2008 10:11

The Shower Scene reminds me of "The Hunger". No idea why. The shower scene between Deneueve and Bowie (sheer coincidence that Bowie appears here).

**Grubnessul** · 25-09-2008 13:46

Originally Posted by Murmurandus

This reminds me of 'Return of the Living Dead'...

Beware of the sequel: Return of the Living WritAAR

**canonized** · 25-09-2008 17:44

Originally Posted by Avernite

Ahh, so modern medicine has helped restored Isabella's memory, so that in the end the guys from ancient times are going to be fixing the world where the present-time good guys are dropping like flies?

Interesting

Haha maybe you're half right . You're actually quite close to a little twist i want to set up for later XD

Murmurandus: haha I want to watch another movie now XD Something campy !

Kurt_Steiner: man Kurt you watch terribly erotic movies XD

Grubnessul: ROFL nice XD

**TheExecuter** · 25-09-2008 19:07

Gah!

<covers eyes...while still trying to read>

ANOTHER SHOWER SCENE!!!

SOME of us are trying to maintain our virginity!

Canonized you are the devil!

TheExecuter

P.S. Nice to see Isabella and Antonio 'hooking up' once more...

**robou** · 25-09-2008 19:28

Those scenes never get old... very effective... ima...ge... *shudder*

**Grubnessul** · 25-09-2008 19:44

Hmm Isabella in the shower and Antonio a dirty voyeur

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