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    Okay, your last press conference update was very well done.

    But, the one before that, where Wolfe is trying to join the spy team. How dare you have Wolfe start his story and not continue in the next update. Blasphemer! Way to keep me on the edge of my seat and then have me fall of in disgust when the next update does not continue the same theme. I would be more angry...well...if I had not done it myself a few times...ahem.

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    Don't worry, Grayghost. That peice will be completed right now. And it won't be very long until the battles for Uganda begin.

    Biography
    Wolfe 5

    Dimitri looks at me, his eyes calm, but his expression one of stone. I re-gather my thoughts, redoubling my search into distant memories. I attempted to begin again. “November 9th, 1939. Kristallnacht. My father was a tailor, his shop got burned down. By the mobs. Our synagogue, too. I was living in Konigsberg, and my father had spied in France, for Germany in the Great war. Konigsberg was close to the border to Poland. So my father snuck us across. Some of his spy friends had left Germany in the past, gone with the Poles; they were our contacts. They helped us get over the border- Me, my parents, my baby twin sisters, and my older sister. I’m sorry, I still struggle a little with English.”
    “Are you kidding me?” Dimitri asked, a look of surprise on his face. “Struggling with English? Do you hear my accent? Not so observant, are we?”
    “You’re a bit full of yourself.” Call me a hypocrite. “You’ve got a Russian and an English accent. I know a lot more about you than you think.”
    “Now who’s full of themselves?” He casts this remark with a smug smile. The nerve! He’s playing a game with me! He knows I can’t react, he knows I need this. But that just makes me a bone in the mastiff’s slobbering mouth. He thinks that I’ll just roll over, be obedient. We’ll see if he gets away with this!
    “Stop the rain of self-assuredness, sir.”
    “Stop the rain of attitude, son, or I’ll kick you out into the streets. And there’ll be no soup for you- just robbers and the like. Not all Jews follow Torah- there are Jewish criminals.”
    I am about to shoot back an angered reply, when I hear a faint whisper.
    Stop it! You argue, and your whole plan fails, you hear!
    God? I think loudly, trying to evoke a reply.
    You didn’t hear anything…The voice drifts off. God wants, God gets; right?
    “Well?” Dimitri asks. “Are we going to continue?”
    “We will continue, sir.” I take a deep breath, collect my thoughts, and begin once again. This time with an even shakier voice, but I do restart. “We hid in Poland for a while, before father’s friends found him a job. Spying of course, with the Polish government. Not an easy job, mind you- the only ones left were dangerous, high risk. Nobody but someone as brave- and desperate- as my father would have embarked on those missions.” I choked back fake tears as I continued. “One day father never came back. Died, in counter-intel.”
    “Stop trying to earn my pity, Wolfe. You’ll earn it like a man or earn nothing by sobbing those salty crocodile tears.”
    I struggle against my anger. This guy is better than me, he’s too good to try and stoop to my level and fight. He knows I have my hands tied, and he’s taking full advantage. “Yes sir.” I once again attempt to regain my composure. “Well, the Poles needed a new man, to replace father. He had taught me a lot, so I went in to try and convince them I was the one they needed as a replacement. They said they saw lots of ‘natural subterfuge ability’. I guess they were pretty desperate, hiring a 13- year- old boy, but they did. And then they sent me into Germany with nothing but some cash and a contact.” I then reached into a pocket into my slacks and pulled out a pistol. “And this- a Luger 9mm P08. They said it was my father’s. You can still see where he scratched his initials into it- there, on the barrel.” I held the gun a ways away from him, so that he wouldn’t see the initials. Even that could be dangerous information; all he needs to know is Wolfe.
    “So, have you ever fired the gun?” Dimitri asked.
    “Yes.”
    “At a man?” He’s trying to test if I can actually kill, if the event arises that I have to. This I was prepared for.
    “Yes.”
    “Well, how many times?”
    “Six.”
    “Have you ever killed anyone?” I knew it.
    “Seven.”
    “You shot seven men with six bullets?” He looked pretty incredulous, his face contorted into an unbelieving frown.
    “I’m a pretty good shot.” He continued to stare at me with that same look on his face for a second, but then caught himself and once again hardened his stare on me. He was trying to tell if I was truthful, once again reading me with a cold stare. Finally, satisfied, he leaned back in his chair.
    “Please, Wolfe, continue with the story,” he said as he took a cigarette from a desk drawer and casually lit it with a beautiful lighter, with his name engraved upon its glossy metal exterior. He puffed some smoke, and then motioned with his hand. “Please.”
    “Well, I can’t tell you what my mission was, but I can tell you that my contact in Berlin was one Nerio Macrino. He was a tall, hefty man; perhaps six- foot- seven, and supposedly a Sicilian mobster, a runaway from Mussolini. He wasn’t. He was a bad contact, an agent of the Italian government. I heard him talking on the phone many times, in Italian. He underestimated my ability to learn a language, as everyone does, and within a week of meeting him I knew everything he was saying. I was ready when the three agents entered my room in the dingy motel to kill me, and I was ready for him the next morning. Four bullets, four men.” I took a deep breath. I had just relived one of the most exciting moments of my entire life. Dimitri snuffed the burned- down cigarette in a small glass ashtray on the corner of his desk. I thought he looked slightly impressed, but that spy’s poker face was still too good for me to decipher anything from it. My mind was probably just playing tricks on me, making me see what I wanted to see, instead of what was actually on his face.
    “So how’d you get here, Wolfe?”
    "Well,” I continued, “I finished that mission when I got a call. It was a different man than usual who gave me my new mission, but I thought nothing of that. Staff changes all the time in this line of work, if you know what I mean. I was to go off to Hamburg by train. The tickets were at my door, I left as simple as that.” I lowered my voice. “I was in a railcar with three other men. I noticed that there was something out of whack. Each one had an identical briefcase.” I smirked. This was my crowning achievement, what I had always wanted to share, but had never had anyone to share it with. “Each one had the same make of suit, just in three different colors. It was obvious to me- they were counter-agents, German spies. But I wanted to be sure. I didn’t want to go killing three innocent men. It was a few miles south of Luneberg when they pulled their guns. But there’s no faster gun than Wolfe- not in all of Europe. Two shots, three dead- not ifs, ands or buts. I offloaded in Hamburg and ran. If I had tried to go back to Poland, the Germans would have caught me. Belgium was closer, I had more of a chance to get there. War started right after I crossed the border. I crossed into France from there, and hung around the docks in Brest until I found employment on a liner going to India. It stopped in Mombasa. I jumped ship and became a refugee here in Uganda. And I ended up here. Ask Maimai for that story.” I took my gun off of the table, sticking it back in my pocket.
    Dimitri nodded slowly, looking me straight in the eye. He looked down at his papers, now covered with messy, scrawling notes. “Wolfe,” he started, “there is something we’ve been planning for a while- Operation Scarlet. There is a German spy ring in the country. They call themselves Chimera. There are three operatives, codenamed Lion, Snake and Goat. Lion is dead. Snake is the leader, we have no idea where he is. But then there’s Goat. He’s up in Jima, spying as we speak. I’m gonna send you up there. You are to collect all of the information you can on Goat, and if there is any, on Snake. Can I trust you with this?”
    “Yes, sir.” It was a blunt reply, said with the utmost conviction.
    “Good. I’ll get a car to take you up tomorrow. Until then, here’s some money.” He handed me a small wad of cash, which I quickly counted. 500 shekels. “Find yourself food and board. Prepare yourself.”
    “Shouldn’t I have some training or something?”
    “It’s urgent. Time is of the essence. The Germans might be here in a few weeks, and if these agents happen to have any information, it’s imperative we get to it before we can put it to good use.”
    “Wait,” I said, slightly shocked, “we’re at war with the Germans?”
    He stared at me funny, and then the first grin I had seen from him broke from ear to ear. “Oh, you haven’t heard, have you?” He gave a small laugh. “The Germans declared war, Lekoche’s telling the whole nation today in a press conference. Aren’t you fortunate, getting some info early. Now be off with you. You’ve got some driving to do tomorrow.”
    I scooted out the door. When I almost to the door at the end of the hall, I took three deep breaths. That had been exhilarating, and it went off without a hitch!
    You should have told him.
    Shut up, God, I snapped.
    You’re very lucky I didn’t make you lose this opportunity because of that.
    I withheld information. Partial truths. I don’t want to bring that stuff up.
    You’re going to have to, eventually.
    Never, God. Never again.
    I ran, opening the simple door at the end of the long hallway, as if to escape the protests of the voice inside my head. The foyer spread out before me, and I went straight to that statue which had caught my attention before. I read the engraving.
    Theodor Herzel
    1st Chancellor and founder of Hebrew Uganda
    His figure looms over the history of our nation.
    May he be remembered always.
    1860-1925
    Below that was a long speech. I am not very big into reading huge chunks of text in English, so I didn’t bother to read that, but this had a profound effect on me. I read it again. All I could think was that if the Germans took over, he would be remembered no longer.
    And with that depressing end I left the room. I would need to find the nearest motel and a gun range. When it comes to marksmanship, frequent practice is needed- even I wasn’t born perfect.
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    Now that's better. Actually, very well done. Always a nice touch when God enters the converstation, even if only one person can hear God's participation. Six shots, seven kills...hell, that's better than Marine snipers.

    Now, I am looking foward to battle.
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    Very good update as always!

    I got to agree with Grayghost, always a nice touch when God enters the room.

    Now lets see how's Rommal going, I presume.

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    Thank you both. Update tommorow.

    Gis, I don't like it when you read my mind. I was tempted write Wolfe 6 just to prove you wrong.

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    Quote Originally Posted by likk9922
    Thank you both. Update tommorow.

    Gis, I don't like it when you read my mind. I was tempted write Wolfe 6 just to prove you wrong.

    Aw men, I like reading your mind.

    Say: what flag did you put for Hebrew Uganda? And from where did you bring the original pictures if you didn't play this game?

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    OK, update tommorrow. I'm sorry, it slips my mind way to often.

    Gis- it's a weird flag. It looks nothing like what I tried to make it. Like an error. And I don't know what you mean by "original pictures".
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    OK, I've got your update right here.

    Mail Call
    Rommel 4

    I lie on my back in the warm sand and stare out across the empty desert in the evening. The huge red sun hangs like a peach just over the horizon. It holds me like a trance and as I look out upon it I reminisce, thinking about a beautiful wife and wonderful children, of the green German meadows and white, puffy clouds; what I long for out in this barren oven.
    My trance came to an end, however, when the quiet calm of the desert was broken by the clapping and cheering of soldiers. I got up and trudged toward the now growing cheering, my boots sinking into the loose sand. I walked through rows of tents, all now emptied. And when I reached the edge of camp, a couple of meters behind a large crowd of uniformed soldiers, I saw him. And it.
    There was a young man, Ghayth bin Tabassum Al-Fulani, atop the largest camel I have seen in my entire life. And believe me, in these desert campaigns I’ve seen a lot of camels. This one was almost 20 feet long, and almost ten feet tall at its hump, named Ali. Luckily Ghayth is fairly proportionate, being well over seven feet tall. A purple veil covered much of his face, protecting it from dust, and he wore a long white robe over the rest of his body. He was an Arab, and his complexion and beard were as such. From his right hip he hung a musket, from his left a small pouch. He is our messenger, our mailman. Over the back of that huge camel is thrown sacks of mail to loved ones, all to be delivered to Tunis to be shipped off, and mail off the boats of that port town wishing luck to these soldiers. And in that pouch on his left hip were the most important of telegrams. They were destined for me. I payed him an extra tip, however, if he saved me some reading and presented the news to me. It was really for him- he needed to practice his German- but it helped me to get the news faster, especially to my inner circle.
    I pushed through the crowd (which wasn’t hard. If the highest ranking man in the camp tells you to make way, you make way like your life depends on it, which in some cases it very well might).
    “Guten tag, Gayth!” I yelled over the crowd.
    Gayth finished pulling a mailbag off of the Dromedary before turning around. “Oh Rommel, I must talk to you!” He cried back in fluent German, struck suddenly with the memory of having to tell me something. “Just as soon as I’m finished getting these bags off Ali.”
    “Soldiers! Attention!” I turned and yelled. They immediately shut their mouths and stood up strait, giving me their full attention. “You five!” I said, now in a normal tone, pointing. “Can you help this kind gentleman with the mailbags?”
    “Sir!” One of them yelled inappropriately loudly, “I’m pretty freaked out by Ali.” Stifled laughter emanated through the army.
    I got right in his face and whispered, “Son, what’s your name?”
    He barely managed to get out the word, “Joseph, sir.”
    “Now Joseph, are you more afraid of me right now, or are you more afraid of Ali?”
    “The camel, sir.” His voice was wavering, and he must not have been helped by the now open laughter of his fellows.
    “Ali?” He gave a shy, feeble nod. “Ok, Joseph, what I want you to do is look at that camel.” He respectfully did so, although his fear and revulsion were written across hi face. “Now if you’re more afraid of that camel than me, I want you to imagine that camel as me. Imagine its face to be my face, and my boots on its feet.” There was now widespread laughter through the army, and Joseph’s face was beet red. I paused a second, until another man nearby broke down laughing. “You, son!” I cried, “What are you laughing at?”
    “Nothing sir,” he replied, choking back giggles.
    “You’re laughing at something son. I can tell, I’m neither blind, nor deaf, nor stupid. You must also address Ali as ‘sir’.” I motioned widely with my arms at the whole mass of soldiers. “In fact, I want you all to address Ali as sir. And if you don’t, you’ll get the same punishment as you would if you failed to address me as sir. You all hear me?”
    “Yes sir!” came the cry from the men. “Good. Now I suppose you should all get back to your tents. You will receive your mail tomorrow. And yes, I still do expect you five to get those mailbags off of Ali. Now- dismissed!” The army fled to their tents, upset about the lack of mail, but still lighthearted due to the events surrounding Joseph.
    I stepped up to Gayth. “Gayth,” I said, “Come with me. I need my mail and I’d love to hear what you have to say.” He simply nodded. I started off back toward my tent. Looking back over my shoulder, I saw that Gayth hadn’t moved. “Are you coming? All of the others are waiting.” He nodded and, after a last look at Ali, ran towards me.
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    Awesome Update again!

    Well in the start of the AAR you have posted some images of a HOI2 style map...

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    Well in the start of the AAR you have posted some images of a HOI2 style map...
    Yeah, I did mod in Uganda. But I didn't play the game. I just took screenies and then wrote my story.
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    Alrighty then, update tommorrow. I'm posting this close enough to midnight here that I should have two outs to get this thing up.
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    lol, sorry but I know what you mean about posting late... I do it just not with an AAR.

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    It is, at long last, finally up. Even later than the last one.
    But I have good news. I've been named to the weekly AAr showcase! I'm so excited and pleased. My amazing talent is finally being reconized.

    A War’s Progression
    Rommel 5

    In my command tent sat a dozen of my closest advisors- colonels and generals whose medals shone brightly by the light of lantern which was set up on my collapsible desk. I sat behind this desk, drawn up in as dignified a position as I could muster; back straight, shoulders relaxed, face stern and commanding.
    We were all staring at the very large Arab man in the center of the tent. He was looking over my letters, talking to himself, preparing to tell to tell everyone present about the war’s current progression.
    “Get on with it, already!” cried Ingo Vibbard, impatient and short- tempered as usual.
    “Are you ready to start, Gayth?” I asked, my tone polite and patient.
    “Yes, I am, Herr Rommel.” Vibbard shot me a nasty look, as though I had just tried to one- up him. I’m sure that we would have exchanged several nasty words had Gayth not started talking in his deep, gravelly, heavily accented voice that very moment.
    “Hello German officers. Today’s news comes from several fronts. First, the East. The battle of Stalingrad is won. The city is under German control.”
    There were cheers from the officers all around. I simply smiled. A few hundred thousand soldiers had died, but what are a few hundred thousand soldiers to the might of the Third Reich?
    "The whole front is moving forward, although Moscow is not yet in our hands. The Japanese suffered another defeat in Vladivostok, another failed assault.” There were small groans, but everyone knew Vladivostok wasn’t a very important target- simply a distraction to the Russians, nothing more.
    “The Republicans have carried out their threat and entered Portugal. As soon as the Reich can spare troops, war will be declared.” No reaction to that one, seeing as it was a combination of good news and bad.
    “In the Middle East , Turkey has joined the war,” a cheer erupted from the officers, who began whispering to each other that the British were finally done for in the Middle East. “on the side of the Allies.” The whispering ceased quite suddenly.
    “Now, hearing about this, the Italians have attempted a landing close to Istanbul, to give them access to the Black Sea. But it has failed terribly, the Italians are pinned down on the beaches. There’s a man who’s stopped several of our breakthroughs, known simply as “Alp.” They’re calling him the next Ataturk.”
    I thought this over for a second, the said, “Gayth, where exactly did the Italians land?”
    He took out my letters from that pouch- pocket of his and, after skimming the page for a moment, announced, “It’s a small peninsula, called,” he looked over the letter again, “Gallipoli.” He shrugged, as though it seemed to him like the name held no importance.
    I gave deep sigh, then moaned out the words, “Thank you Gayth. I’ll be out to talk with you in a few moments. He nodded, saluted, and exited the tent, ducking down low to fit through the flap.
    I stood up and slammed my hands on my desk, leaning forward with them supporting me I said, “Men, my first question is this- do you think that the Italians have enough troops to hold the front against Turkey?”
    “What do you think, Herr Rommel?” asked one of my younger officers.
    “I don’t think that they can advance. They’ll just have to hold the line. Especially if they’re wasting troops on that damned landing. The British are going to have a lot easier time supplying those troops, by land now instead of airdrop.”
    “As much as I hate to say it, Rommel is right,” said Vibbard, every word dripping with ugly malice, “the Italians were right fools to try and land there. I don’t know whether they thought the Turks stupid, on whether they wanted a propaganda victory, but if that lumbering oaf outside meant what I think he meant, they’re just marching their troops to the slaughterhouse.”
    “A second Ataturk, a second Gallipoli?” piped up an old officer with a shock of snow- white hair atop his head, “I hate sequels.”
    “So,” I took a piece of paper and a ballpoint pen from inside my pocket, “I’ll simply tell General Santoro to hold the line and get his men off of Gallipoli.” I scribbled a quick note, then jogged outside to meet up with Gayth.
    He wasn’t hard to find, sticking out like sore thumb a few dozen feet from my command tent. “Gayth!” I cried out, slowing my pace to a walk.
    He spun about. “Rommel!” he yelled back, face lit with joy.
    “Here,” I said, handing the note to Gayth. “Make sure this gets to Middle East Regional Command, General Santoro, in Damascus.”
    He nodded before speaking to Rommel. “Sir,” he said slowly, “I have very grave news.” Rommel nodded, waiting for him to elaborate. “I see from these letters,” he handed me my stack of mail, “that you now have approval to go through with the plan to cut east through Uganda. Don’t do it.”
    “Is this your ‘seer’ again, Gayth?”
    “Yes! He says your men will die, the Jews will go free, that you tanks-“
    “I don’t want to hear another word of your nonsensical, irrational beliefs, Gayth. There is no such thing as an all-knowing seer, no such thing as your witch- doctor. Now please, get on that camel of yours post-haste! That letter needs to arrive before Santoro decides to do something suicidal.”
    We saluted and he ran off towards Ali, sandals flapping against the quickly cooling evening sand.
    I looked out at the shifting sand. There was barely any light left, the sky had lost almost all of its brilliant hues. I sighed and trudged back, ready for what would happen next. I was going to tell all of my officers to leave so I could attend to my private mail. Vibbard would protest, jest, and taunt before finally exiting so that I could read of my wife’s joys and my children’s antics. This, more than any military achievement, was what gave me the joy I had that day.
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    "This, more than any military achievement, was what gave me the joy I had that day."

    For a good reason too, awesome Update as always, good luck on the AAR land voting.

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    It’s a small peninsula, called,” he looked over the letter again, “Gallipoli.” He shrugged, as though it seemed to him like the name held no importance.
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    I've been following this for awhile - it's excellent, but this is quite possibly the most brilliant line in the entire AAR - perhaps in any AAR I've ever read. The aplomb it's delivered with.. well, suffice it to say that an AAR where the Jewish people are given the power to fight against Germany is enamouring enough.

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    brilliant update..


    i loved the gallipoli line too
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    Thank you all. It really means a lot that you guys are still following.

    The next update will come in the next couple of days. I really need to kick things into high gear, because I probably won't have access to the net for two weeks in August. You might see things going a little faster in the near future.

    The next update might be boring to many, but it's neccessary to set up some stuff for later in the AAr.
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    Yes, I know, I know: Likk's late, how typical.
    Now, this update has the most neccessary of evils- character development. Watch out, I feel it's kinda weak.

    Honey, I’m Home!
    Maimai 7

    I saw it, in the distance and steadily approaching. It was a house, similar to all of the other houses on the block. Light blue front, white shutters, a fenced-in backyard and a short, well- trimmed hedge out in front. But it was not just any home- it was mine. And to me, it was more a palace than the one in Mombasa, or the chancellery retreat near Kempala.
    My red car cruised past the other houses on Zion Road, and pulled into my driveway. I got out, opening the door and carrying out my briefcase, and as I slammed the door shut I heard the frenzied barking of my small dog from the backyard, a beagle blotched in black and tan. I walked the rest of the way up the drive, hurrying down our short walkway and climbing the steps up to the stoop. I moved to open the door, but it was unnecessary. The door flung open in front of me, revealing my youngest daughter, Sarah (age six) standing in the foyer. Behind her soon stepped her older sister, Deborah (age eight); and finally, after the shrill screams of greeting from my two girls, my wife Rachel stepped behind. I gave her a quick peck on the cheek and swept Sarah into my arms, carrying her the few paces into the kitchen.
    After the initial euphoria which arrives every time I do from one of my long trips elsewhere in the nation (or elsewhere in the world), things quieted down and I was able to tell them the stories of my trips- about Basque Jaque’s latest argument with Einstien, the normal antics of air minister Kenyatta’s twin boys; and, if I have nothing to say, the account of my latest meeting with celebrity. My girls are only partially interested in this. I know that they only sit through it because there are always presents at the end- a trinket from a peddler in Mombasa, else a necklace or some sandals from a more remote region, always beautiful and always unique.
    After this, the tradition is for Sarah and Deborah to go to bed. Today however, to my surprise, Sarah had something to say. “Hey daddy, guess what?”
    “What?” I replied, interested to hear the reply.
    “All of the older kids are saying that because of the war, you’re a,” I immediately went into stern mode, ready to reprimand for the curse word which was bond to follow, “a hero.” I must’ve given her quite a surprised look, because she continued, “they say you’re gonna push the Germans all of the way to Europe!” I just smiled. The Jews are so sure of themselves, of their abilities. Though they’re often overconfident, this kind of confidence can be a good thing.
    “Yeah!” Deborah chimed in, “My teacher says she’s goin’ off to war. And Billy across the street just enlisted yesterday.” I smiled warmly at them. Whether their mother had put them up to this or the plebes were actually that eager for war, it sure made me feel better.
    I heard a door slam upstairs. My hand automatically moved to my pistol, but I relaxed as I realized who it was. I turned to Rachel and asked starkly, “Kakuta?” She simply nodded, and I moved back into the foyer and up the adjacent staircase.
    I passed three doors to my left, two to my right as I walked down the second floor hall. I rapped on the door to my left with my knuckles. A low, powerful voice whispered, “Dad?”
    “Yes, Kakuta, it’s your father,” I whispered back, as softly and comfortingly as this grizzled old war vet could manage.
    “Dad, go away.”
    “I have a letter from Winston Churchill. Signature and everything.”
    “Seriously?”
    “Yes.” There was a moment’s pause.
    “You can come in for a second.”
    I heard the lock click and obliged, sliding the door open gingerly. The walls of the room were notably barren; a large but simple wardrobe dominated one wall, a poster featuring a wild-eyed, wild- haired Einstein sticking his tongue out at a camera another, a bookcase stuffed full the third. In the center of the room was a bed and a nightstand, and the floor was littered with books, papers, maps, clothes and all sorts of trinkets and gadgets.
    Dominating the room was my 20- year- old son. Tall, strong, built like his father; though with his mother’s good looks. No, not Rachel, he’s only 18 years younger than her. My first wife, Somoine, had but one child with me- Kakuta. She was killed a few short weeks later, in the First Anglo-Ugandan War by a British raiding party. I remarried 10 years later, to Rachel. Those ten years cannot have been good for the boy. I was constantly trying to advance my career, and though he had nannies and the like, what he really needed was a parent. Though he was promising in sports, and I tried to convince him many times to aspire to the army, when I was gone he turned to his books. When I got remarried, he didn’t react the way I had hoped. Instead of opening up to me he became more introspective, staying up in his room reading for long hours during the day. At seventeen he was awarded a full scholarship to Kempala University, studying physics under the great Albert Einstein.
    He hates me. Every time I look at him he reminds me of his mother, I often cannot bear to look at him for more than a few seconds. I miss her, my childhood sweetheart, and I hate to be reminded. He thinks I abandoned him, he thinks I don’t care for him and what he reminds me of. I don’t know what to do about him. So, as estranged as we are, I still bring him gifts- just what he wants, smart gifts.
    “Where is it?” He asked. I simply handed it to him. He gently took it, took a moment to read it, and then threw it on one of his piles of papers on the ground.
    “Thanks dad.”
    “You’re welcome.” There was a moment of awkward silence. The man who had vanquished armies ten times his owns’ strength, who had inspired the most undisciplined of troops, who had been victorious in one of the greatest battles of the century and had trained another hundred brilliant commanders, was not even able to handle his own son.
    “I love you, Kakuta.”
    “Yeah.”
    I exited his room and walked back down the stairs, my mind whirring with confused, lonely, depressing thoughts.
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    funnily found this! damn computer, my buck ups won't load, so I couldn't find this: I funnily did: Yay!

    well, character building are important.

    A very good update as always.

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    Awesome AAR man! I got to say having read through this I really feel like I picked up an important part of AAR's. Character building and development, you do it so well and almost seamlessly.

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