andPost#1 said:It was the Dorians who later built the three important cities of Lindos, Ialyssos and Kameiros, which together with Kos, Cnidus and Halicarnassus (on the mainland) made up the so-called Dorian Hexapolis.
And even in update titles:Post#1 said:Demetrius created huge siege engines including a 180 ft (55 m) battering ram and a siege tower named Helepolis that weighed 360,000 pounds (163,293 kg).
and the narrative itself:Post#7 said:Episode 1 - Sic Semper Tyrannus! (Just in Greek)
Why, your story has almost as many parentheses as jokes!Post#14 said:Finally, there was the Populist Party (also known as ‘The Black Panthers’ and, sometimes, ‘The Real Reds’).
Congratulations! It's amazing how just a few quick brush strokes can create such compelling portraits of incompetence. Prize for 'Person You'd Most Love To Hate' has to go to Nick, the proto-communist nincompoop, of course.
Unfortunately, I do have to correct one of your assertions:
and
And even in update titles:
and the narrative itself:
Why, your story has almost as many parentheses as jokes!
Yes, yes, I'm aware that this exposes me as a blathering nitpicker with way too much time on his hands. Anyway, congratulations on the well-deserved award!