Dawn in the East--A Japan AAR

Dhimmi-It's like calling the French, Frenchies, Northerners, Yankees and so forth.

Rensslaer-you'll have to wait regarding the Dutch. Let's just say there's some European meddling.

Regarding your comments about avoiding unnecessary gore, it just worked out that way. It seemed more in line with the story.

And the ninja misjudging the size of hole he needed. Well, I just wanted to throw that in, as there's a misconception that ninja's are the ultimate in stealth. They make mistakes, just like anyone else.

BBBD-

I'll have to bring in a pirate, just to keep the story balanced.

I'll probably throw an update out there sometime tonight.

Rensslaer said:

Cold withers a leaf
If it is not kept nourished
Promises not kept

With care and feeding
The bonsai rivals the oak
The story kept strong

Stupid haiku encouragements to update!

Renss

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I should have said 'you'll get it tomorrow night'.

I'll try to get it out within the next hour or so.

The next morning

“Are you certain?”

“As much as anyone can, my lord.”

“Very good. I have another task for you. See if you can discover who else is part of this conspiracy. I leave the details of the task to you.” He did not mention the requirement of strict secrecy. It was not necessary to do so.

“Yes, my lord.”


August 28, 1838

The Daimyo Date’s palace in Akita was grand, almost to the level of the Emperor’s in Kyoto. Such a palace required hundreds of servants to run efficiently. It also made it difficult to keep track of them all. A man came to the palace gates that warm morning, asking for a job. Deiri, mistress of servants was summoned to officially send him away, for any lesser servant of the Daimyo would shame the man forever.

Instead of sending him away, like she should have, Deiri took pity on the man. “What is your name?”

“Takase Matabe, madam.”

“You have had experience serving daimyo before?”

“No, madam. This one was the servant of three different merchants in Nagasaki.”

“Why have you left their service?”

“The burden of competing with the Westerners was too much for them. They sold all they had, and left for Edo, to become soldiers in the Shogun’s army, madam. They released me from my bonds, and hearing that the Daimyo Date might have an opening for a servant, I came. Madam, I am willing to work in the stables if I am able to work in this honorable house.”

“Very well. The stables it is.” Deiri smiled to herself. If he worked as hard for the Daimyo as he did to get in, he wouldn’t be in the stables long.


Takase smiled to himself after leaving for the servants’ quarters. Well, he was in. It would be a long way from the bottom to the top, but accidents occasionally happened to senior servants.

Rensslaer: Thanks.

prussiablue: You'll have to wait a little bit. Sorry.

Fiftypence, kingmbutu, Wookiee: Many thanks. New faces are always good.

coz1: The revolts actually have been dealt with. I just haven't gotten there yet. More is coming. In less than a minute.

deltren: Ha! I have some screenshots ready to go, unfortunately the story isn't there yet. I'm working on it.

I was reminded, quite rudely may I add, Wookiee, that no update in 3 days was bad. So, you're getting another one. I hope to get the story to move a little quicker, but we'll see. I have two gigantic exams next week, so we'll see. You'll probably get one Wednesday night(+/- 1 day, Rensslaer ).

November 18, 1838—Akita

A cold wind blew down from the mountains, across the Sendai road, and into the bustling town of Akita. In Akita, the townsfolk were busy preparing for winter. Akita, alone of the coastal cities, could count on both the wrath of winter, as well as the wrath of the Daimyo in his castle. Daimyo Date did not handle winters very well. His irritability was feared throughout the town. Though nominally independent, recognizing only the Imperial Government’s dominion; in reality, the Daimyo controlled the towns.

Tanaka looked up from his work on the gigantic wooden structure behind the town hall, as the three soldiers walked up.

“How may I help you fine gentlemen?” He asked as he stepped down off the ladder. Tenjiro looked down on Tanaka quizzically.

“Keep working, Tenjiro.”

“Yes, sir.”

“Gentlemen?”

“Tanaka-san? The Daimyo Date wishes to speak with you.”

“Where? Here?”

“No, sir. At his palace.”

“Gentlemen, I am a busy man. I will have a break in two days’ time, when I will call upon the good Daimyo.”

The guards looked at each other. The leader spoke again, just as Tanaka was turning back to his work. “Sir.”

Tanaka pivoted back around. “Yes, gentlemen?”

The leader licked his lips. “Sir. The Daimyo was expecting you today. He will not be pleased.”

Tanaka smiled to himself. “If I go with you now, the Shogun will be displeased. I am truly sorry good sirs, but I have been commissioned by the Shogun himself. I advise you to inform the Daimyo of this. I apologize to the Daimyo for the inconvenience, but I really must be working.”

The soldiers looked at each other worriedly. Their master would not be happy. They turned to leave, expecting the worst.

BBBD said:

Interesting, though I must admit with the Japanese names I am getting a little confused. But then it ain't too hard to confuse me.

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It's a way to encourage you to reread my updates. Coincidentally bumping up the total views.