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stnylan said:
“Where is the Captain?” I ask.

“In his office, Monsieur.”

“Please ask him to come to my room. There is a matter I need to urgently discuss with him.” Gunter nods and marches away. I return to my climb.
If there were ever a combination of words and behavior which might better set some amateur tongues to wagging, once they begin their games of trying to pick a suspect... :rolleyes:

I find it interesting that Jean takes note of the man with his face smashed in, and the wandering boy, but doesn't seem to let his conscience dwell upon the fact that he is the cause of all this. He did say he hoped the authorities would put a stop to it soon, but it seemed more likely a political consideration than a humanitarian one.

And he also seems to have sparked more than he intended. Perhaps this riot act (so to speak) works in calm times, but Bernhardt may have gotten more than he bargained for in the tense atmosphere! Bernhardt, of course, could not have known this, as he was not party to the discussion higher up (at least we must presume as much!).

I wonder what happens if Bertrand is picked up and doesn't seem to know anything... Perhaps we'll get to see!

More intrigue, Stnylan. Very good.

Rensslaer
 
I'll admit I'm soundly lost after that last post. Not necessarily a bad thing and I'm sure I'll pick up the underlying developments once they crystalize a little more. There's just so many suppositions and second guesses swirling around!

It's a good way to show the chaotic nature of the current (in the past) situation: everybody is trying to find out what's going on, who might have done what, what for... So it's an exciting sort of confusion I find myself in. :)

Finally, two quotes I just have to recycle:
Director said:
Add to all this the fact that a proven conspiracy - no-one will assume the cook acted alone, will they? There must have been a second poisoner on the grassy knoll!
Nothing I can say, but this smiley says it all: :p. Director, you have a knack for the awfully bad (in a good way) humor, be it puns, or this kind of farfetched nonsense. :) Thanks for bringing a disbelieving smirk to my face.

stnylan said:
I find the dagger, hidden under a cloak.
Cloak and dagger! Literally! Also priceless! :D
 
A riot? As a french, Jean is certainly intimidated by such a thing! :D

Oh my! Yes, he needs to find another procedure to get out! I can't imagine him keeping his secret for thirty years in such conditions... Particularly regarding Red Charles and co, who are able to add one and one quickly to find three. ;)

I also wonder what drives those english to help Giovani. Of course they have a "debt" to repay, but I can hardly see them taking too much risks for that. Or is there some other aspect with this debt, like compromising informations?

His grandfather nods. “We’ll get ourselves prepared here, just in case this city really does go up like a powder keg it’s primed to be.”

He stomps out of the room, and a moment later we hear him shouting for various members of the family, giving orders like the officer that he used to be. Red Charles has a smile on his face.
Ah ah! Those spaniards have better be ready to meet angry red coats in action...
 
J. Passepartout said:
Is it possible the debt goes back at least to Jean's father? Hmmm...
That's what I understood anyway. Hence my guess regarding the crimson lion as well...
 
Nil-The-Frogg said:
That's what I understood anyway. Hence my guess regarding the crimson lion as well...
All right... now you've got me thinking too...

Is it possible the crimson lion (the token) dates back to before the Crimson Lion (the inn)? Perhaps the inn was named after whatever brought Charles and Jean's father together! Hmm...

((wanders off to ponder))

Renss

p.s. Odd non-sequitor (another of those French words, Nil! :rolleyes: ) -- anyone remember that ring Thomas Magnum used to wear in Magnum P.I.? The one his secret unit used in Vietnam. A two-barred cross of some sort. This whole line of intrigue is reminding me of all the things connected to that ring! :)
 
Rensslaer said:
p.s. Odd non-sequitor (another of those French words, Nil! :rolleyes: )
I think I'd have said latin... :wacko:
 
Nil-The-Frogg said:
I think I'd have said latin... :wacko:
And many French people have, over the years... ;)
 
coz1 Cheers. Matters with Bertrand are developing, as they say. I have plans! ;)

J. Passepartout :D Just don't fall over while you're hopping. ;)

Draco Rexus Who is to say Bertrand will escape, or even need to escape, justice in the past. He could be a complete innocent! ;) And yes, the Red Lion gang are proving very useful. Too useful?

Rensslaer I think the phrase is: you can't make an omlette without breaking eggs. And he didn't actually know Bernardt would orchestrate a riot, in his defence.

Stuyvesant And there I was thinking that post was one of the more straighforward ones! I have to admit I've gotten slightly irritated of all the news-breaking about the poison. It has meant I've written a lot of conversations that have rather reptitive segments, but there was not a lot I could do. Thankfully I seem to be past that for the moment.

And I am glad someone commented on the cloak and dagger! A little childish in some ways, but it made me chuckle.

Nil-The-Frogg Well of course Jean, in 'the present' does have a rather better prodecure to get out, if you read one of the beginning updates. And it is a good question about the helpfulness.

Further discussion All very interesting. As regards to the language question (and I know this is not original) it is not really French that is spoken in Paris. It is simply badly-pronounced, lower-class, provincial latin. ;)

Update in a moment. Sorry for the delay but my phoneline has been on the blink. I can receive incoming calls, and connect to the internet (Broadband connection) without any difficulties, but cannot make outgoing calls. Been spending time trying to work out if it was the phones' fault, or what have you, but no joy so far. Hopefully the engineer will make some sense of it tomorrow.
 
The Past (June 15th 1682) - Continued

Four of us set out from the Red Lion a few minutes later. Accompanying Red Charles and me was his uncle, Tall William, a towering lanky man with long arms, and Alonso. Alonso had married one of Red Charles’ sisters, and thus joined himself to the English clan. However we did not have time for more than basic introductions.

“We will go to the Rose offices,” Red Charles said as we leave. “It is where Bertrand is most likely to be, and if he is not it is where he will return. If something has happened and Henry returns to the Lion they’ll send him to us, and we can consider our options.”

We walk swiftly, and do not waste time talking. Williams walks with his legs swinging beneath his waist like a pair of pendulums. It is he who sets the pace. Red Charles walks alongside, equal in height and superior in build. He strides with purpose, drumming his feet onto the stones with every step. Alonso is smaller, a little shorter than myself. He has a dark, round face that had lit up with a grin when we were introduced. Now he has his head down and paces furiously so as not to fall behind. His fists are clenched and his arms jerk back and forth. I simply do my best to keep up, and I am soon breathing hard. It is fortunate that we do not have very far to go.

The Rose Trading House maintained its offices on a wide, uninteresting street. The identical buildings stared at each other across the road, with small plaques to tell the one from the other. In any other city the architecture might draw comment, but in Mad Carlos’ rebuilt Madrid the fine lines and impressive fronts are repetitive and dull. Charles stops us in a small square at one end.

“I’ll go ahead and see if Henry is in place.” He says. “By myself I won’t attract too much notice.” It is true enough, though the three of us standing idle arouse suspicions, but I do not think the crowd is paying us too much attention. A herald and some soldiers enter the square. In a loud voice he announces a curfew has been decreed, starting at nightfall. The church bells will be rung to give warning. Few people react, most hurry on their way. The herald and his escort depart, and a moment later Charles returns. With him is a short man with dark hair.

“This is Henry,” he says to me. “Bertrand is in the building.” We gather round into a small circle.

“He returned there about an hour ago,” Henry says.

“Do you know when he will next come out?” William asks, looking around.

Henry shakes his head. “Can we raid the building?” Alonso asks.

“I do not think that is wise,” I answer. “There will be at least one guard, and that might be all it takes.”

Charles agrees. “Too risky,” he says. “We either wait until he leaves, or we try some way of flushing him out. Giovanni, might some message do the part?”

I think it over. “It’s a possibility,” I allow, “but without surety.” Most of all it would depend on my accurately forging the Comte’s handwriting and signature, and that is far from a certain feat.

“There could be problems if we wait until the curfew,” Henry says. “There has been some sort of riot and the soldiers are nervous, as are the officers. I think bribes are unlikely to work.”

Alonso shifts from one foot to another. As he sways a small gap opens up between him and Henry, and I have a clear view down the road.

“Gentleman,” I say, “do be careful but I believe Bertrand is heading this way.”
 
stnylan said:
Been spending time trying to work out if it was the phones' fault, or what have you, but no joy so far. Hopefully the engineer will make some sense of it tomorrow.
Sniglet (i.e. a word that does not exist, but should): Resistentialism. Def.: Seemingly spiteful behavior manifested by an inanimate object.

I really like how you attend to their different heights, and provide a personality. And Alonso huffing along behind was just hilarious!

So they are about to have the man walk into their web! Interesting to see what is up. And since he is on his own business, I wonder if we get to know what that business might be...

Rensslaer
 
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stnylan: ...“Gentleman,” I say, “do be careful but I believe Bertrand is heading this way.”

ahhhh. the moment we have waited for! ! :)
 
I seem to hear the dark theme music begining to build to a crescendo! Oh man, this is gonna be good!
 
stnylan said:
“Also,” I continue, “even if Bertrand is not himself implicated, it is possible what he knows will lead us in the right direction. There is something up between him and the French.”

Sorry to backtrack to the post from last week, but I am confused by this part. I thought Bertrand was part of the French. :confused:

I am wondering why Jean was so quick to single out Bertrand (among about 2000 other agents in Madrid) as being part of the conspiracy to poison the king.

In any case from the latest chapter it appears that Jean and Bertrand are about to have a "free and frank" discussion.
 
I find it interesting that even though we know how this will turn out eventually, the planning and such still has a level of hope to it. And due to the writing, we are engaged in the discovery of the intrigue, thinking ourselves that somehow their plan might work, when it is obvious it becomes snafu'd in some way.
 
Quite a nice piece, particularly the walk through Madrid. Like Jwolf, I wonder how Jean has come to target Bertrand out of the swarming schemers in the city. :confused:
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Hmmm, interesting, very interesting.

I assume that "papa" has provided his son with numerous informative documents, which suggest to Jean a definite course of action and a probable culprit or group of culprits.

But I shall eagerly await the outcome of the Kidnapping of Bertrand.

Just think of the pain Jean would have spared himself if he had just killed the man in the past...

DW
 
Dead William said:
Hmmm, interesting, very interesting.

..Just think of the pain Jean would have spared himself if he had just killed the man in the past...
not necessarily so. Bertrand would have just been replaced (by an unknown?)...
 
GhostWriter said:
not necessarily so. Bertrand would have just been replaced (by an unknown?)...
Didn't you say this yesterday???

Or am I having "preja vu?" :rolleyes:

You are my friend... please tell me if I'm crazy. Or if I have some crazy guy from the future whispering obscure AAR notes in my ear at night.

Rensslaer