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    The bullet ricocheted off the wall with a weird, pinging sound. But what really stunned Major Krysz Skiedweza – causing his world to pause for a moment – was the stinging spray of sand it spat into the side of his face and, worse, his eye. He cried out in pain, but there was no time to waste.

    He and Colonel Sobczak spurred their horses across the narrow street into the next alley. Small angry mobs – some armed – ran toward them from right and left. Sporadic gunshots sniped at them from the roofs that lined the warrens of passageways through Cairo.

    Reaching the next street, they found Feldwebel Gustav Steppenwolf taking quicksure aim at a rooftop target. A resounding thud closely followed his shot, as a man’s body fell to the dusty avenue. Steppenwolf automatically pulled the bolt back, chambered another round, then clenched his cigar with a rictus grin.

    As men dashed around him, firing and looking about anxiously, Steppenwolf took in the scene with a deadly, careless calm. He fixed his eyes on the two officers.

    “Feldwebel,” Sobczak addressed him. “Our perimeter is collapsing. The General has ordered a breakout to the south. We must clear a path of escape for him.”

    “Why?” Steppenwolf grumbled around his cigar. “So the horse’s ass can put us in worse trouble?”

    Sobczak spared a stunned instant for the insubordinate remark, then shook it off. There was no time now. Old Steppenwolf was their unit’s roughest, toughest, orneriest and most fearless non-commissioned officer. He was also, arguably, their best… when he was not confined in the stockade for fighting or drunkenness.

    General Schwedt’s plan to escape with the unit’s full strength was a daring one. It relied on surprise, order, and the constant unremitting application of an overwhelming force against the enemy’s weakest point.

    And this man was one of the few who could inspire or frighten the men into following along. They all needed him.

    General Schwedt’s entourage was mounted and approaching their position as quickly as they could without throwing all caution to the winds. They should arrive soon. Sobczak divided the available manpower into three groups, each assigned a different chokepoint to hold. The officers remained in the middle of the dusty intersection to direct the action.

    Prussian bolt-action rifles kept up a rapid fire against the throngs of fanatical “Mahdists” – the same thugs who had recently overrun several German garrisons, many of which had been stripped to the bone to support the North African campaign.

    With a roar of shouting, the Egyptians up one of the alleys rallied and rushed the rudimentary barricades the Prussians had set up. Sensing danger, Steppenwolf turned his back on the sniper down another alley, dodged right, then left, to throw off his aim, and braced himself against the corner of a building on the alley so he could steady his rifle to bear upon the new threat.

    The stick-wielding mob pressed forward. Three soldiers holding the line were firing furiously, and Steppenwolf’s well-aimed shots were taking their toll. But it was insufficient. The first several fell against the boxes and cart, clawing at them. By now, Skiedweza and Sobczak had also begun firing into the crowd from the middle of the intersection.

    Three frenzied Mahdists climbed over those in front, and hopped on top of the barricades, hacking at the Prussian defenders with scimitars. Two fell, but the other jumped into the alley, followed by two more men with sticks. Two of the Germans at the site had fallen, and the other was cowering, having apparently lost his nerve. Krysz downed one of the three. The remaining pair ran toward the intersection with raging cries.

    Stuck in between magazines, Steppenwolf cursed and rushed forward to use his rifle as a pugil stick against the two Mahdists. Krysz and Radim halted their fire, for fear of hitting their sergeant. Steppenwolf smashed in the head of one before he could even slice with his sword, then blocked the other’s swing with the butt of his gun. He followed up with a shoulder-butt which took both of them to the ground and caused the man to drop his club. Moments later, the Egyptian’s windpipe had been crushed by the application of the Wurttemburger’s weight upon his rifle across the man’s neck.

    The Prussian troops had rallied to the scene, and now five rifles were directing accurate fire against the oncoming mob, which faltered. Many ran. A lone young man with a club ran instead toward the feldwebel, who was crouching over his latest victim. Steppenwolf calmly removed the spent magazine, replaced a fresh one, cycled the bolt and ripped open the man’s stomach with a bullet just before he reached him. The bloody man fell across Steppenwolf, the club flying into the dust a few feet beyond.

    Just then, with one assault defeated, the deafening cacophony of shouts and gunfire and screams grew even louder from another direction. It crescendoed as a troupe of horses exploded into the soldiers’ presence from the far alley.

    Colonel Weitz, the General’s aide-de-camp, yelled at them to move out toward the next defensible intersection.

    “Where’s the General?” Sobczak shouted.

    But immediately he knew the body strapped across the back of one of the horses was his legendary commanding officer, himself.

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    Great action scene!

    Too bad about Schwedt, though. Ah, well. Prussia will smite the Mahdists, eventually.
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    Yes, a really outstanding scene Renss. And war's price is always hard. Besides, one has to watch out for these Mahdists. They can get pretty crazy. Good luck with the rest of the war. Let's hope your Polish troops find themselves home in one piece.
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    Look out, Rens! The Mahdists will force you to be their satellite!

    Also, loved the scene where the Kaiser toasts the Queen. Good to know the man knows what's important in life, the love of your grandma. And if your grandma happens to rule the world's largest empire, well, so much the better.

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    Aye, 'tis to bad about the General, but I was more worried about Feldwebel Steppenwolf (nice name! Maybe someone will form a a rock'n'roll band with that name, eh? <smirk>). Glad to read that he made it out alive... at least from that intersection!

    I do believe that Willie is about to find out that taking all of North Africa without having more that enough troops to garrison it all is going to be quite painful... if not deadly.
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    poor Schwedt, but it seems it's poor Mahdists a bit more. They lost a lot more men, afterall.
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    It was a rare meeting. Just the Kaiser and Prince Pietr Van Rensselaer. By now, it was clearly pointless to have Foreign Minister Rensselaer and War Minister Kalkhorst in the same room. It would just dissolve into endless argument.

    Originally, the disagreements had been over aggressive moves of questionable legality which drew Germany deeper into conflict. Now, the shouting resulted from the fact that Rensselaer’s former employee, Friedrich von Holstein, had transferred into the War Ministry. Now Holstein was running an independent foreign policy out of Kalkhorst’s offices, complete with “unofficial” representatives of the Crown, who as often as not claimed to speak on behalf of the Emperor.

    Kaiser Wilhelm II laid out for Rensselaer his vision for Africa and the Near East, as if his repeating it just one more time would convince the prince of its logic. “There is only one way for Portugal or Britain to move north to threaten our position in Africa, and that’s along the east coast, in Tanganyika. That’s where we must block them in by seizing the Omani colonies of East Africa. It really couldn’t be any harder than the North African conquests.”

    Wilhelm paused, a yet more expansive plan seeming to form behind his eyes. “And since we’re attacking Oman already, why not go after their peninsular territories at the same time? That would shore up our position in Abu Dhabi, and provide more oil supply.” He referred to what was increasingly becoming one of Prussia’s most useful industrial commodities.

    “And then,” the Kaiser went on, with a half-serious gleam in his eye, “we could take Aden and the Hedjaz, too. We’ll keep the Red Sea as a Prussian lake! To part, like Moses! Or to otherwise do with as we please.” He chuckled at the end, clearly impressed with his own cleverness, but also hoping his enthusiasm might carry Rensselaer along.

    Indignancy was not what Wilhelm anticipated in reaction. “That’s blasphemy!” Rensselaer cried. As an afterthought he added, “Your Majesty.”

    The Kaiser looked hurt. “Well… We did part the desert, at Suez. Why not… No, you are quite right, Pietr. Blasphemy. May God have mercy and forgive me.” Thus chastened, Wilhelm blew out a breath and frowned at the maps on his desk.

    “Your Majesty…” Rensselaer’s voice betrayed quiet frustration. “It is completely inadvisable to go forward with any operation of the like, when we are grossly overextended already.”

    “We are grossly victorious, Pietr!” His hands waved in an expression of grandiosity, then he gestured up toward a far wall. “Just look at the map. It just arrived. The ink is barely dry!”

    Indeed, the wall map of Africa showed vast stretches of the continent in a light blue color, meant to signify Prussian territory.



    “But Your Majesty…” Rensselaer paced toward the map, one hand pointing. “This map does not show your soldiers – how few of them are there, and how they are stretched thin. Nor does it show that Cairo and Khartoum are both under the control of the Mahdi and his followers.”

    Wilhelm shrugged dismissively. “We will…”

    Not stopping for the Kaiser, Rensselaer kept up his point. “Nor does it reflect the blood spilled in the streets of Cairo by General Schwedt, and hundreds of others, at the hands of a rebellion we should have been able to contain!” Rensselaer’s voice contained volume and bitterness – two things he had previously been able to exclude from his conversations with the Kaiser.

    Now the Kaiser’s face, already hot from being interrupted, burned. “Minister!” he shouted. “You forget yourself! I am your Sovereign! And you lecture me… No, you accuse me! I should demand your resignation over this insubordination!” the Kaiser shouted.

    Rensselaer – even more ruddy-faced than he was on a normal day – considered for just a moment, glaring at Wilhelm. Then he reached into his vest pocket and pulled out a rumpled, folded piece of paper. Wilhelm blinked when he saw it. Spreading it open on the desk, Rensselaer seized a pen and, with a flourish, affixed his signature to the page. Then added the date.

    Straightening again to his full height, Rensselaer held out his resignation letter toward Kaiser Wilhelm, who recoiled slightly.

    The Kaiser’s face was ashen. He had not intended this… Bluster. Blustering again, but he did not want this. As difficult as Rensselaer was, his counsel was of some use…

    “Very good, then!” Wilhelm snapped, accepting the paper. His mouth worked around unsaid words, then he called over Rensselaer’s shoulder, “Schultz! See this man out!” Setting the letter down on the desk, the Kaiser crossed his arms across his chest and lifted his chin. His personal attendant entered hesitantly, as if entering a dark cave, unsure what dangers lurked. “And see that he is not allowed to trespass on any Royal properties from this day forward!”
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    Will Rensslaer launch a coup, maybe?

    it's seriously bad for Prussia, I presume, but great for the story, that he resigns.
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    You know, at times Wilhelm himself sounds like the Mahdi. But I really feel poorly for the Prince. It is obvious that his age has interferred with his diplomatic ability. As a younger man, he probably would have found a way steer Wilhelm, but now it is lost to him. A sad day, really.
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    Good update! Brings back memories of Bismarck's last day at the office...

    Prussia's going to have some issues for the rest of the game. I see a Grand Coalition forming.
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    Well, what sanity remained in the Prussian government was just escorted from the building. It's all down hill from here, my friends, and not in a good way.

    I forsee many, many more instances of the brave Prussian troops making fighting withdrawls... not good, not good at all!

    However bad that is, it's great for your loyal readAARs, Renss! Awesome!
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    This was fun!

    Rennslaer - a very enjoyable read so far. I started on this last week and I finally caught up with your excellent writing. Thank you very much.

    I especially like the way you give a face and character to the actors in the unfolding drama of Prussian superiority on the European and world stage. Those character pieces make the AAR into a truely unique and exciting reading experience.

    Have you thought about putting all of your posts into a pdf file that could be avilable for download when all is said and done?

    Thanks again for renewing my interest in Victoria, which was not installed until I started to read this voluminous work of highest art.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Rensslaer
    ...“And see that he is not allowed to trespass on any Royal properties from this day forward!”
    tis a sad day, it is! !
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    Wow. Time to give feedback to all your comments, which have piled up over the course of the last… well, the last few days!

    KPTB, welcome! Great to hear from you, and very glad to have sparked your Victorian Age. May I venture a guess that there is an Ohio radio station named after you? I greatly esteem your high praise, Sir! Thank you very much. As for the .pdf thing, funny you should mention that… I was just thinking earlier today about asking Coz1 or Catknight how to go about that, and to post it, etc. But then I’d grieve for the loss of all the valuable and constructive comments you readAARs have made!

    Catknight, sorry to hear about your chaos. I’m having some of my own, lately, so at least to some degree I understand! But thank you for taking the time to catch up here! I’m still working on yours – looking forward to the day when I have more than an hour of internet time a day, so I can actually make some progress! Glad you enjoyed the toast – it proved lots more popular than I expected!

    Rocketman, thank you also, re: the toast. Great to hear from you again! Largest empire? Hmm… I wish I could do a geographical analysis. I’m not entirely certain that Prussia doesn’t have the world’s largest empire, in spite of Britain’s India and all… I suppose if you add in the commonwealth territories, Britain is still pretty dominant. A force to be reckoned with! As we will see…

    Draco, glad you also enjoyed the toast! I take it you were aware of the historical toast? I really wanted to work it in, because it’s a great insight into Wilhelm II’s quirky character. More to come, on that, and his relationship with his grandmother. I’ve got some catching up to do on your AAR, too! My reading time has just taken a dive lately. And what little computer time I have is usually spent transcribing my story, which I’ve HANDWRITTEN while at work! I haven’t written stories by hand in years!

    Sgt. Steppenwolf was a fun character in the developing. And you WILL see him again. In checking to make sure the name wasn’t TOO out of the ordinary, I did some research. The band apparently was named after a book which has some weird psycho-philosophical theme to it. Looks interesting enough that I might try to read it one day. Frankly, I’m not sure I’ve ever heard anything by Steppenwolf… but it’s a cool name!

    And re: Renss’ resignation (the Renssignation???), yes it is bound to complicate things in Prussia. I like how you put it about “sanity being escorted from the building!” I thought it a typically Wilhelmine way to cover up his mistake with bravado. Glad you liked it!

    Oh, and Draco… Your Mission: Before you read the rest of this, and DEFINITELY before you read the next post, you MUST go read my post in the Fan of the Week thread . Then you can come back here, and enjoy to your heart’s content!

    Fj44, glad you enjoyed the Cairo battle scene! It was a lot of fun to write. I haven’t done very many battle scenes, so it was a nice change of pace. Yes, I agree there is a sense of the “dropping the pilot” in Renss’ resignation. It seems that Wilhelm’s personality just has a thing for conflicting with other personalities! There’s a search & rescue professional who wrote a book about team dynamics (Paul Williams, maybe... Rescue Leadership), and the term he used to describe conflicting personalities was “rough diamonds knocking edges off each other!” Quite apt, I thought. Thank you also for your constant encouragement… err, prodding… erm, threats.

    Coz, thank you also for your enthusiastic approval of the Cairo scene! As you will see in the next update, Krysz makes it out okay. And will have quite a future ahead of him! Re: Renss’ resignation and his age. Well, Renss was doing okay at manipulating even at his age. It just got to be too much for any man, I suspect…

    You too, Iron Skull!

    And I want to take a moment to put in a plug for Fj44’s new Japan AAR, Dawn in the East . He’s been commenting for quite a while, but who knew he was a great writer?!

    Prussiablue, yes we did at least have a nasty feeling this was coming. I contemplated having Renss stick it out, but it didn’t seem to fit. Besides, I had an idea to really make use of his absence…

    Avernite – a coup? Hmm… No comment. Yes, I agree that his resignation is great for the story. Which I hope you’ll see in the fullness of time!

    GhostWriter, great to see you reading and commenting, as always! Yes, it is a sad day. But the end of one period of Renss’ life may inaugurate another just as bright! Just wait…

    VILenin… (re: ‘keep this professional’… kind of ) You know… Actually this is an experiment and a challenge for me, as a writer. I’ve always had the adventure, politics, personal interactions, etc. between male (and often military) characters down. I’ve always had difficulty writing two things: 1) humor and 2) relationships between men and women. So I’ve been making an effort to add more of that here. The thing between Princess Victoria and Fritz was cute, but not quite a complicated relationship. Now I’m trying some more suggestive storylines, though I’m very careful not to suggest very much. If my readers choose to imagine more, well… who am I to stop you?

    I will say that there is one more major love theme coming up for one of the Kaiser’s sons. It’s already proved very fun to write (though readAARs won’t meet the girlfriend for about 15 updates, still), and I think I will continue to develop it as the story goes on.

    And that’s one of the odd things… I’ve written (or outlined in great detail) much of the next several years… dozens of updates. We’re just not there yet. Sorry, but I can’t be convinced to speed up the posting, or else I may run through a period where I can’t write fast enough and you’ll have a counterbalancing lull of 3-4 days. I prefer to maintain a steady pace, so…

    Maximilliano, BBBD and all the others who have commented and been reading, thank you again!

    Renss

    … and now for something different! Update coming in a few moments…
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    “Oh, It Herz Right There” – A live guest massage! *

    “Once Rensselaer left the Foreign Office,” Dr. Reinicke Herz told Eric, conversationally, “Hohenlohe was a feather in the wind. Naturally, he didn’t last long after that.” Eric, a student volunteer, was helping his European History professor at her large home office – a room lined with bookshelves and bestacked with papers. A computer monitor poked out of the detritus, and Herz sat before it, typing fitfully.

    How could one concentrate on writing when there was an interested student to relate anecdotes to? Eric had acquired quite a fascination with Prussian history.

    “Except for the adventures in North Africa, which were spurred largely by the French coup attempt, the Kaiser really didn’t get into serious trouble until after Rensselaer’s resignation. Which is the proof that he was the real check on Kaiser Wilhelm’s more extreme notions, and the meddling intrigues of the other ministers. After that, Hohenlohe couldn’t keep his ministers in line. They kept grasping and manipulating.”

    “You make him sound like the Kaiser’s bobblehead doll!” Eric remarked.

    Herz giggled. “Well… But remember that Wilhelm Two was as victimized by demagogues and bumbling idiots as his Chancellor! Wilhelm wasn’t a really bad guy, but he followed the advice of a bunch of overly ambitious people who were in way over their heads.”

    “So it was Eulenburg who took over and drove Prussia into all these conflicts?”

    “Well, he wasn’t really the problem either. He had gotten many of these people into the Kaiser’s inner circle, which is where I fault him. But the Kaiser trusted him, and Eulenburg actually kept him from many bad mistakes. Phili was smart enough to manage the ministers to some point, but they got out of control. They started striking out on their own.” She took a sip from a brandy snifter on the desk.

    “For the most part, Eulenburg stayed in the background, much like Rensselaer had, controlling things from behind the scenes.” She let out a cute little laugh. “Eulenburg did a lot of things behind the scenes.”

    “How so?”

    “He was gay.”

    “Yeah?!” Eric seemed to think he had just had an epiphany. “Oh, wow. Weren’t he and the Kaiser best friends?”

    “Well, yes, but… It’s probably a good thing that Eulenburg’s homosexuality didn’t become widely known until after Wilhelm’s death. He was such a man’s man, I think he would have had a stroke.”

    “So Wilhelm wasn’t gay?”

    “No,” she said decisively. “He had five or six women as mistresses, at least.”

    “But what about all the singing and drag shows?”

    Herz laughed. “Well… That stuff hadn’t so much of a stigma back then. Singing was considered masculine. And the drag shows were kind of a military thing. No women around for the skits, so…”

    “Whatever…” Eric gave Herz a peculiar look, and she just smirked. Eric picked up a stack of three books from the corner of the desk, and began searching for their places on the shelves. His mind was working even as he searched. About the time he slid the second book into its slot, he called across the room. “Even if it was frustrating to work with Wilhelm, how could a control freak like Rensselaer let that office go and step out of power?”

    “He had his ways,” Herz said, “of maintaining some degree of control. His reputation carried a lot of weight in the Konservative Partei, so he could influence what the Reichstag would and would not approve. Things calmed down after Rensselaer left the ministry, partly because he actually gained power in some ways. When you’re an employee, you are beholden to the employer. As a Reichstag Deputy, Rensselaer could afford to be a critic.”

    “Huh.” Eric mulled over that for a bit.

    “So as a Deputy, he built coalitions. He began to lead an opposition faction within the Konservative Partei, which was actually quite strong. And they cooperated, to some degree, with the Liberaldems and the ZentrumPartei. Interestingly, one of his key allies was a guy named Pavel Skiedweza, who had been elected as a Deputy from Tsechen, and led a Polish separatist faction within the Zentrums.”

    “Hey, isn’t that the guy who founded the Polish state?”

    “No, but close. I'm impressed! This guy was dead by that time. The Kaisers wanted to keep Poland under their tight control up until the Bolshevik Revolution in Russia. Then, they figured they needed a buffer state. So it was actually Pavel’s son, Krysz, who followed in his father’s footsteps and became Poland’s first President, in 1921.”

    “So,” Herz returned from their rabbit trail. “Instead of manipulating foreign policy from the inside of the government, Rensselaer ended up orchestrating support and opposition to government policy by manipulating these political factions within the Reichstag.”

    She took another sip of brandy. “Besides all that, it also helped that he had a lot of loyalists – spies – in the halls of the Wilhelmstrasse.” She paused for a moment, then smiled slyly as she resolved to bait a hook. “He even had one really highly placed spy, for a time…”

    “Oh?” Eric said with interest. “Who?”

    “If you’ll give me a shoulder massage, I’ll tell you more!”



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    I want to know more...more. Does that mean I have to give you a massage, Rens... ?
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    Ah, sweet dreams are made of these! (I think we should have a band sing a song with that title, whaddya think?)

    I'd give Eric's right arm to be in his shoes right about now! Why couldn't I have a prof like that when I was in college? Oh, wait, I did... but never got to be in Eric's shoes... damn!

    Anyway, my many thanks to Fraulien Dokter, and to of course to you Renss!

    So we've learned that Rensselaer actually gained some power after his sanity left der Kaiser's service, Russia goes commie, Poland is released (possible as a client-state?) in 1921 under one of our heros (Krysz Skiedweza the cavalry officer), Prussia survives as a world power up at least 1921 AND that Dr. Reinicke likes shoulder massages and having dalliances with students who have a hankering for history and beautiful young college professors! Sah-weet!!! Man, I gotta go back to college...
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    Good Update. Especially all the hints you dropped concerning Poland, Russia, and Prussia. Nice to see van Rensslaer is staying active, in opposition.

    Thanks for promoting my AAR. There are new updates ready.

    Also...do I get the impression that Rensslaer is going to be responsible for the creation of a Polish state?

    Good stuff.
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