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The rearing red lion on a field of gold has me stumped. Aside from being the arms ofthe town od Tapolca in Hungary, the colours suggest royalty. That of Leon or those ever so friendly Lusignan's. Then again it could be a scion of the Scottish royal house other than the first born.

There's a certain logic to the Scots wanting Alnwick in friendly hands and hiring Trempy to work for them.

Then there's the fact that the messenger is travel-worn indicating that he's come a long way in a short space of time. That brings the possibilty that Suffolk has sent his man to try to work out a settlement or the Welsh prince has sent his relative on ahead of his army. The lion wasn't generally a welsh device though. It would also credit the welsh prince with a lot more nous than he's hitherto displayed. The resultant battle would be a lot more interesting.

The red lion is the device of Norway too. Now, I rather like the idea of ten thousand vikings joining Trempy.

The accent of the messenger would be the give away.
 
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Lions are also plentifull in Dutch arms, Holland has a red one on yellow IIRC. Brabant and Flandres normally have other lions, but who knows.

(Zeeland, obviously, has one too, but that's from the Hollandish arms).
 
Avernite said:
Lions are also plentifull in Dutch arms, Holland has a red one on yellow IIRC. Brabant and Flandres normally have other lions, but who knows.

(Zeeland, obviously, has one too, but that's from the Hollandish arms).

Thus bringing in the Imperial German, and Matilda, connection. Though wouldn't the Emperor's brothers have their own Arms by now?

Cliff Hanger has arrived!
 
Chief Ragusa said:
Thus bringing in the Imperial German, and Matilda, connection. Though wouldn't the Emperor's brothers have their own Arms by now?

Cliff Hanger has arrived!

Now, I think it's a bit of a stretch, even in froggy's twisted universe, to think the count of Holland is in any way, shape or form a very loyal subject of the Emperor, unless he himself is that emperor.

And I doubt the English would marry their daughter to some upjumped count who is supposedly the emperor, rather than some well-established elector-duke.
 
Shouldn't that be candency not cadancy?

Also, wikipedia lists the royal arms of Scotland as:

The shield depicts the red lion of the King of Scots as rampant, with blue tongue and claws, on a yellow field and surrounded by a red double royal tressure flory counter-flory device.

Which gets us a red lion on a field of yellow...
 
“Your Highness? May I speak with you?” The fact Jocelyn’s request came in langue d’oil made Eleanor suspect it was something he didn’t want others to understand, and that in turn led her to suspect he was about to begin the conversation she had been dreading since Trempwick turned up at the gates. Feet planted, hands clasping his belt in a pose which thrust his elbows out to the side and made him appear more imposing, the count was going to talk whether she wanted him to or not.

Eleanor gave the mangy rag of parchment containing the inventory of Alnwick’s medical supplies to Aveis. “Gather as many people as you need and set to making bandages and such like.”

Aveis’ hand dropped to rest protectively on her daughter’s head. “You think there will be a battle, then?”

“I think it best to be prepared for that increasing eventuality.”

Her other companion, Hawise, Eleanor forbore to send away. In the first it would not be seemly, in the second it would be asking for trouble. Already long mired in speculation about her virtue she could afford no more doubt; need for a good reputation aside, soldiers had little interest in protecting someone they considered a harlot. She would have to trust Hawise’s discretion and her limited langue d’oil; as faithful as the maid had been Eleanor still felt it a foolhardy risk.

Jocelyn seemed to realise how threatening his body language was; he removed one hand from his belt and ducked a curt bow. “Thank you, your Highness. I’m not much good at speaking prettily, so with your permission I’ll speak freely instead.”

Eleanor perched on the edge of the backless chair near the fireplace. “I would prefer you spoke wisely.”

If the hint registered the count gave no sign. “Highness, I’m a loyal man, truly. I say what I say because of that.”

Eleanor declined to make the expected agreeing noises.

“I know you’ve got a plan. I don’t know what it is. I do know you need to do something, and fast. The men are about ready to mutiny, and I don’t bloody blame them – that’s their families out there.”

“You suggest I surrender, then?”

“Your husband’s willing to take you back, and that’s a bloody miracle after all you’ve done-”

Eleanor kept her tone level. “My husband is with my brother.” Fascinating how he now named Trempwick as her husband when previously he’d been content that Fulk held that dubious honour.

“By the time that one gets here you’re going to be out of options.” Jocelyn spread his hands. “If Trempwick wins he’ll take you back and you’ll have no bargaining power. If the prince wins then your throne is lost.”

“That throne is not mine.”

The count flung out an arm, matching his words with a gesture which felt like a crossbow being levelled at her forehead. “You are the heir! That’s why I am here!” The arm sagged, and dropped; Jocelyn moderated his voice. “I mean, it’s why I was sent here. It’s not the reason I choose to be here. Well, it is, but that’s duty, not ambition or something. I’m a loyal man, that’s why your father chose me-”

Eleanor covertly dug her fingernails into the palm of her other hand. If she gave him a nudge back towards the right path please God he would take it. “You are here out of loyalty to my brother, lending your forces to mine for my protection.”

“No.” Jocelyn advanced, halted again as though holding himself back. “I am here because your father sent me. He made me swear loyalty to his heir-”

“And so you serve my brother.” A droplet of sweat trickled down Eleanor’s back; she recognised the expression on Hawise’s face, calm and neutral – and deep in damned thought. The maid was understanding entirely too much of this.

“No. And so I serve you, your Highness.”

Nudge? The man wouldn’t get a hint if it was pounded into his skull with a mallet! “I am not the heir.”

“I heard him name you! I saw him take the ring off his own bloody hand to send to you!” Jocelyn took another step forward, face twisted with emotion. “He knew he was dying and he named you, and I was there!” Softly he repeated. “I was there. You are the heir.”

Hawise had gone sheet white, and Eleanor was none so sure she didn’t share the maid’s lack of colour.

Jocelyn took another step; he was close now. He held out his hand. “You have the ring,” he appealed.

Eleanor leaned back fractionally, away from him. “The ring was lost when my father’s belongings were looted.”

“He gave it to me. I gave it to you. You have it.”

“This is a very dangerous nonsense. My brother is the heir. The ring is lost.” Eleanor shifted her right hand so it lay close to the hilt of the knife on her left arm.

The count knelt in front of her, placing his face on a level with hers. “You’re in great danger.”

“Because of men who claim I am something I am not, sir.”

“Maybe you aim to have the prince defeat Trempwick, then your husband and your force here will turn on him and destroy what’s left of Hugh’s army?” The count stroked a hand over his beard. “Yes, yes, that might work. Bloody risky, but it might.”

Now Fulk was her husband again!? “I have no such plan!” Eleanor cried, pushing her chair back away from him and standing. “I am not the heir. I do not want the throne. I am not Trempwick’s wife. Cease this nonsense!”

Jocelyn rose to his feet, body straightening unhurriedly. “If there’s a battle the prince can’t hope to win it. Trempwick’s damned well picked this ground, he’s prepared it, he’s rested and supplied, and he’s got a bit of damned sense he’ll have been making the enemy’s advance difficult so they arrive worn out and bloodied. His men are a pack of desperate men with nothing left to lose and bloody all to gain – they can’t give up and go home because they’ve gone too bloody far to hope for forgiveness. They’ll tear anything your brother can muster to shreds. You’ve got to see that.” The count stepped around the chair. “Except it won’t come to battle, not for us. We’ll be tossed out those gates. The thirst’s beginning to bite those prisoners, and that’s got their family in here with their bloody balls in the hot coals. They’ve got to act or they’ll lose them, and no right thinking man’s going to sit idly by.” Another step. “It’s a wonder they’d kept faith so long. They should have been sallying forth when the first smoke cloud appeared, saving their families and their lands. But no, they kept faith with you.” Another step. “They kept faith while their homes burned, their friends killed and their womenfolk were raped. So you bloody owe it to us to do something!”

Eleanor stiffened her knees and refused to back away. A dispassionate corner of her mind observed that it was strangely easy to stand unquailing before this angry warrior; after her father Jocelyn was nothing. “Do you think I do not know this? Do you think it does not make my heart bleed?”

“They’ll throw us out those gates, and that army out there is bloody pissed off! They’ll kill me!” Jocelyn brandished a finger in Eleanor’s face. “Lady, I didn’t come to this miserable bloody island to die! I’ve got a family, lands, stuff I want to go back to!” He changed tack abruptly, having utterly betrayed his true motivation. “They’ll do worse to you. If my wife did a tenth of what you’ve done to your husband I’d bloody beat her to death the moment I set eyes on the mad bloody bitch, queen or beggar or whatever the fucking God she happened to be! So consider yourself bloody fortunate that he’s willing to take you back, and don’t make matters worse!”

With one smooth motion Eleanor drew a knife and levelled the point at the count’s belly. He was close enough the wool of his tunic brushed the point with each breath he took. A few steps off to Jocelyn’s side and rear Hawise drew her own knife and assumed a ready stance.

“Enough,” Eleanor said quietly.

Jocelyn’s lip curled as he eyed her weapon. “Sixteen sainted sardines, you’re not bloody natural!”

“A lady in my position must be able to defend herself.”

“Bloody Christ!” From the corner of his eye the count spotted Hawise and her own weapon. “Shit!” He held up his hands, empty and palm outwards, changed his tone to one more placating. “Look, I’m sorry. I got carried away, but with good reason. Please, you have to listen. They will throw us out. The prince can’t win. You need to do something. Before it’s too late. Highness. Please. Go back to your husband on your own terms.”

“Trempwick is not my husband. He is an ambitious man who would use me to rule.” Eleanor took several steps back and lowered her knife, still prepared to defend at an instant’s warning. “You do not like what is happening outside these walls? That will be all England if he shoves me onto the throne. Lords warring amongst themselves and the crown too weak to stop them. I cannot lead an army, so another would have to do it for me and they would serve their own ends, not mine. I cannot command respect in the traditional ways; I would always be challenged by one or another. There could be no peace.”

“The prince can’t win.”

Eleanor smiled faintly. “My brother is a seasoned general. Trempwick is not. I would not discount him so swiftly were I you.”

“That’s no damned use if we’re thrown out before he arrives.”

“As for that, I have plans of my own. You are right; I do owe my defenders a tremendous debt for their loyalty, and I intend to honour it.”

Jocelyn chewed this over. “I suggest you get on with whatever it is, and quickly. If it doesn’t work you’ll want returning to your husband and right quick. I’ll escort you. I’m your bodyguard, after all, and I pledged to your father I’d serve his heir.”

Eleanor pointed her knife at him and snapped, “What you mean to say, sir, is that if I fail you will throw me to the wolves to save yourself, and try to gain while doing so.” She sheathed her weapon. “If my brother is victorious you will abandon my father’s wishes in order to curry favour with Hugh, and that is well.” When the count would have protested she snarled, “Make no mistake, sir, I know your type. Did I not I might be deluded into thinking I might rule successfully.”





A very long time after the count departed Hawise broke the hush that had fallen upon the room. “So, it’s true. You are the named heir.”

It would be a poor thing to attempt to deceive her maid now, futile too. “Yes. For what that is worth. Not very much, I should think.” She smiled tightly, eyes hot with the absurd threat of tears. “He chose me at the last minute, thinking me his best hope for vengeance.”

“Yet you support Hugh.”

“Yet I support Hugh.” Eleanor sank into her chair and scrubbed the back of her hand across her eyes. “Brother or half brother he was raised to rule from the day Stephan died, and I to support him. Support him I shall. He has been accused of being inept. That is not true. He is finding his feet, discovering his confidence, and were he as inept as he is accused of being Trempwick would long since have run him out of power. Instead he is the one pressing Trempwick. I admit I am surprised at how well he has done; I did not think he had this much steel in him. Especially talented, no, Hugh is not that. Nor gifted, nor a born leader. He will not be an outstanding king, merely a good one.” That he had needed considerable help to stand on his own feet, and a mighty good push to set him staggering off in an attempt to walk, well that did not need to be mentioned.

Eleanor twisted her girdle about and freed the her father’s ring from its hiding place. The great sapphire set in the centre of the ring gleamed joyously in welcome of the daylight.

“The coronation ring of Saint Edward the Confessor,” Hawise breathed.

“Yes. From my beloved regal ancestor’s hand to mine.” Eleanor threaded it onto her right heart finger, where it hung next to her wedding ring like a great gold cartwheel. “See how well it fits? One cannot claim I would grow into it. It would have to be cut down, a fitting analogy, I find, for the whole damned thing.” She extended her beringed hand to her maid. “I am swearing you to secrecy. You will never speak of any of this again so long as you live, to anyone. Not a word.”

Hawise knelt, placed her hands in Eleanor’s and swore, “I shall not repeat a word of what I have learned here so long as I live, this I do swear upon my immortal soul and this sacred ring.” She set her lips to the centrepiece of gemstones to seal the oath.

Eleanor returned the ring to its hiding place with some reluctance. As one of the realm’s holiest relics and the symbol of the marriage between king and country it deserved better than being tucked in the belt of a renegade heir.





Varin drew his horse in level with Fulk’s. “It was a decent piece of work you made of the bridge.”

“Thank you.” Fulk viewed this sudden desire to speak with him with no small amount of suspicion; the German had thus far kept aloof, and he remembered what Hugh had said of the man.

“A pity about the leg.”

“It’s none so bad, and healing.” The wound burned like fire, constantly.

“You are an interesting man.”

Fulk used his mouthful of food as an excuse to delay his reply. He swallowed with difficulty, and took a drink of watered wine from the skin hanging from his saddle. “Twice baked bread: as dry as dust and hard as biscuit, mostly tasteless and completely disgusting. I look forward to a proper meal.”

“And a few other home comforts too, no doubt.”

Fulk ran a hand over the short beard he’d grown. “Yes – a razor!”

Varin laughed. “I also.” He dropped his reins, stood in his stirrups and stretched his arms above his head until the joints cracked. “Your wife also you will be glad to see again?”

“More than anything.”

In the distance horns brayed; another of the outriding parties had sighted potentially hostile forces. Both men fell silent as they waited. The horns rang out again, this time signalling the outrider’s advance to contact.

Varin resumed their conversation. “So then, you look forward to settling into domestic bliss.”

“Why wouldn’t I?”

Varin hitched his shoulders, made awkward by the shield hanging across his back. “Not all men are cut from the same cloth. Some do not stomach peace well.”

“I look forward to it. I’ve had little enough time to spend with Eleanor, and my lands need work.”

“Good then. I wish you the joy of it.”

“Thank you.”

“A word of advice, if I may?” He didn’t wait for consent. “My lady, the Empress, will have no quarrel with her sister if she accepts her place in this world and remains there. If she will not behave as she should the quarrel between sisters will grow, and then I would not like to say how things will be.”

“You may keep your threats,” Fulk answered curtly. “They’re pointless. She doesn’t want the throne, the claim was made in her name by those who would use her for their own ends.”

“Could the claim have been made if she had not made it possible? No. Her wilfulness placed her in a position where the unscrupulous could make use of her.”

“Beware. You come dangerously close to saying something I take exception to.”

Varin made a disgusted noise. “I am trying to help you. The Empress feels herself slighted, and I would not pretend that she takes overmuch to heart. She was passed over, people thought to deny her her due. Where the Empress is slighted the Emperor is doubly so. Wrong has been done them; I am here as a part of their effort to right that – and to prevent further … mishap. Provided from this point on your wife limits herself to the place which has been made for her there shall be no quarrel.”

“And what place would that be?” Fulk asked stiffly.

“The wife of a minor, newly made earl of dubious lineage, living in semi-exile in the graceless north.”

“That I could very easily take as an insult.”

“A man in your position might easily imagine the whole of God’s creation insults him.” Varin pulled at the reins and touched his mount’s flank with his spurs. Over his shoulder he said, “I would suggest a man in your position cannot afford to.”

Fulk let out the breath he had been holding. Bone weary, aching, wounded; the last thing he felt like doing was fighting for a reason which would bring him no closer to Eleanor, king’s request or no.

“You should have pounded him!” Richard’s face glowed with indignation, the first time the lad had looked fully awake in a long time. “He shouldn’t say such things.”

“There’s fighting enough to be done without seeking more within our own ranks.”

“But he insulted you!”

“He is far from the first, and shall be far from the last.”

The enthusiasm dimmed from the boy’s face. “But you’re a knight, a great lord.”

“Yes, and as such I should behave with civility. It is not right for a man to disrupt his lord’s household with brawling.” Noticing how his page was sagging under the weight of the shield Fulk leaned over and re-arranged it so part of the lower rim rested on the pony’s back. “Better?”

The child dragged his back straight and, face set, remained fully upright in his saddle. “Thank you, my lord.” Under the veneer of grime Richard’s face turned rosy.

Fulk bit the inside of his cheeks to keep his face straight; he remembered well how the tender pride of youth saw anything which did not treat them as a full adult as patronising, even where the reverse was true. If his page knew he thought well of him for his stolid endurance the poor boy would be horrified.

“Don’t be taken in by the stories. A knight need not answer every last ill-spoken word with his sword. That would make him nothing more than a thug. A true knight – a true man, for that matter – knows when to turn the other cheek.”

“But you were going to fight him.” Richard’s brow creased. “Weren’t you?”

“I was growling to warn him off. If he backed down then I’d won without needing to fight. And, you’ll notice, he did.”

“He insulted you some more as he left.”

“He would have lost face if he had not. I knew it, he knew it, anybody watching would have know it. To pursue him because of that would have made me less of a man. Always be gracious in victory, Richard, and always leave a way for people to back down. Else you find yourself with troubles you could have avoided.”

The boy was quiet for a moment. “I think I see, my lord.”

Fulk continued to eat his miserable lunch while listening to the distant sounds of fighting. He’d nearly finished the fist-sized loaf of bread when he spotted a messenger galloping back down the marching column.

The man dragged back on the reins, the animal turning about and slowing and pretty as you could please. “Sir Fulk, you are commanded to take your men and go to the aid of the fifth-right party of outriders. They have engaged the enemy party which has been harassing our flanks and are holding them. You are to encircle them and help finish them off. Quickly – before they escape.”

Fulk dumped the remnants of his bread into his page’s hands. “FitzWilliam’s men! Form up!”







Jocelyn: I’m possibly in some danger and I’m freaking out! Cooperate, damn you!
Nell: I’ve been waiting 1071 pages to pull a knife on a yelling idiot-man. Go ahead, make my day.
Jocelyn: Eeeek!
:D


When I become supreme ruler of the universe I am going to ban noise! (This shouted over the sound of skirting boards being cut down to size and fixed to the walls in the house next door)

:watches all the heraldic musings: Well, that was fascinating. Unexpected, too.


Avernite, Trempy asks if you’d like some stake, Hugh’s offering some of his special naphtha barbeque sauce, and Fulk says he’s an expert at tenderising meat … :p

Chief, thanks to you I now have this enduring image of 10,000 Vikings in stereotypically inaccurate horned helmets and fur tunics descending on England while Wagner plays in the background and a guy with the voice of the Swedish Chef from the Muppets gives the orders. It’s a pretty cool, if utterly absurd, scene :D

Crusher, I say it should be. Word disagrees and keeps on quietly changing it.


:Celebrating passing the "Read 100 books this year!" mark: 102 to be precise.
 
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I'd watch a movie just to see 10,000 Vikings in unhistorical horned helmets coming over the rise.

Jocelyn lost it and in front of Hawise. I wish Eleanor had not used the ring in that manner. Only the sovereign can so do. It's a mistake, which may have to cost Hawise her life. I've never been convinced that Hawise is on the level, but I can't work out for whom she really works. Poor Nell having to explain things to Jocelyn. he's not going to let it lie, is he? He can't understand not taking power. He'll tell the men that Eleanor has a plan. Should buy her a couple of days. Then she better have a plan.

Fulk's doing a lot of leading from the front.
 
I'm more worried that Jocy might decide that the rightful heir and her husband need to be reunited forcefully. We've got two potential internal problems coming up just as the big battle nears. Hopefully there's the same sort of problems within Trempy's ranks.


...wow, it must have taken quite a lot for me to finally acknowledge Trempy as the villain of this tale. :D
 
Novea said:
What about other foreign powers ? Will the French attempt to garner some advantage from this civil war ? Perhaps the retaking of some of France?

I seem to recall hearing something about domestic troubles in France too. If those end, of COURSE he'll take advantage. It's only natural.

Oh, and bad frog for keeping the cliff hanging for a whole update :p



And as to Nell and Jocy, things are going fine. I seem to recall the whole Fulk romance started in a similar situation, so who knows :D

As to the angry guys, sure, I would like some barbecued meat put around a piece of wood. Tha was what they were offering, right? :D
 
Chief Ragusa said:
Right after someone has changed his diapers.

Ahh, seems you do remember what those troubles were :D

In that case, it'll be whoever solidifies the regency who takes advantage, unless England is solved first. In which case the ruler of England will likely take advantage of the French troubles ;)
 
Chief Ragusa said:
How's this sound? Nell and Jocy adopt the little tyke (no, not a knytling).

Sounds like fun :)
 
Awesome! After something of an absence, I'm treated to two full updates on my return...
I am a little concerned by the mutterings within the castle...entirely understandable mutterings, but dangerous nonetheless.

As to who the man is with red lion on a yellow/gold background, well clearly this is a messenger from the much anticipated Nefastus, who is finally getting involved.
I don't think any of the other options make any sense.
 
I think this Joycelyn is either very selective or very forgetful. He promised the dead king to tell Eleanor that she was the elected heir, and this he fulfilles with the utmost care. But he also promised to kill Trempwick, and that he does not seem to be planning at all. Contrarywise, he wants to give Eleanor back to T., just not to risk his own life.
As T. now has a smaller army than Hugh, the messenger must be welcome.
Fulk has got quite a bad damage and lost time to be of great value in the forthcoming battle - but maybe he will be there just in time to tip it right.
 
Trempwick’s messenger was allowed in through the gate once he had dismounted. The man knelt before Eleanor and offered up a scroll. “My queen.”

Taking the roll of parchment Eleanor indicated a pair of soldiers who had not been close to the messenger before. “Let him sit in the gatehouse guard room again. Remain with him.” Though the same messenger had been running back and forth between castle and camp since the flag of truce had first been raised Eleanor still refused to give him more than the bare minimum of courtesy. He would be given no chance to compromise the castle’s security.

Once again the message was in code. Having deciphered two messages and written three in the space of a day Eleanor’s skills with Trempwick’s favoured cipher were in full flow; it was the work of minutes to read it. He offered her eight days. Would that be enough?

She took up her quill and held it poised. Eight days. She had asked for fifteen, he had countered with five, she with thirteen, he with six, and her previous reply had insisted upon ten. Eight days – if no help came by then she could honestly call herself abandoned, and what had begun as a play for time may well be the only course left to her.

Eleanor wrote: I say again, you ask me to leave my sanctuary and place all in trust to you: my life, my future. You have given me no cause for such confidence. Hugh has given you more trouble than you anticipated, and your position has been reduced to one more precarious than you admit. I will not be persuaded to act hastily or to place overmuch faith in you who have made so many mistakes. Thus I say ten days, and on this I shall not be moved. If Hugh has not come by then he will not, and I need not fear leaving these walls only to find myself in the camp of the defeated.

A little sand scattered on the words dried the ink. After three previous letters the role started to feel natural enough; it was easier now to play the part of queen-in-waiting.

A bit of thought, then she addressed the next point. I see your soldiers have begun to cut my people free of the stakes, and commend your obedience to my wishes. This part was difficult. The point of testing Trempwick’s willingness to obey could only be carried so far before her true motive became so obvious he would no longer deign to play along. If she asked for too much he would refuse and dress it up as being in her best interests. No matter how hard she tried she could not see a way to get Trempwick to release the prisoners; he knew they were one of his best holds over those inside the castle. Regretfully she let the point die there.

I have no objection to your constructing a small fortified position outside the range of Alnwick’s walls if you are so afraid of my garrison sallying forth to aid Hugh. This fear, however, does reinforce my own opinion that the confidence you claim in your victory is less solid than you would have me believe, and thus reinforces my decision to remain inside these walls until Hugh is defeated or plainly not coming. Eleanor tapped her fingers on the tabletop. With a little inventiveness the fortification could be bypassed and aid still sent to Hugh, and in the worst case her forces could mount an attack on it in an effort to overrun it once the main battle lines had joined.

Eleanor left her quill sitting in the ink well and made a quick review of the situation. No, there was nothing else for her to add. On all other matters I will remain silent until we may speak face to face, and request, once more, that you cease to pester me with them. The completed letter she took back down to the messenger.





Acceptable. Trempwick set the letter aside and reached for a fresh sheet of parchment. Let her have her minor victories. Ten days, not eight. Made precious little difference. If it made her feel more in control, good. Convinced her of his willingness to work with her, excellent.

It was clear now she didn’t envisage a partnership. Thought he would take all and use her. Made her actions make far more sense. Trempwick tapped his fingertips on his tabletop. Should have considered that. Yet. Another. Mistake. Enough to make him grind his teeth. When had he become so careless? Answer: since he’d been pushed into acting prematurely. Meaning since the very instant word reached him of William’s accident. Meaning many weeks ago. Given the circumstances mistakes were to be expected. Understandable. Predictable. Unacceptable! All so much proof that one mind was not sufficient where two could be had.

Hurt that she thought him capable of it. Should have known he respected her abilities. But … He sighed and gently laid his fingers the letter. But would she be good if she had not considered and considered and thought and searched, looked back, evaluated and re-evaluated, found possibilities and assumed nothing?

No.

The very suspicion. The willingness to upturn all she had known as a lie. The caution. He’d cultivated it devotedly across the years. Could not complain now it had come to fruition and bitten him.

Hurt.

Pointless. Focus on the important. What was done was done. Mistakes – learn from and move on.

Eight days or ten. No real import. Scout reports gave a picture of the bastard’s army. He would be here inside of eight. An exhausted army harried and demoralised arriving at a prepared ground. Numbers not quite equal but close enough. Until one added the unexpected factor.

Could the prince be trusted? No. Might not turn up. Might arrive only when all was won. Might seek glory only, be reckless. Might hang back and try to keep safe. So many things that boy could do.

Was he truly necessary? No. Enough factors in his favour to make seeking an engagement safe.

So ten or eight, no matter.

The stakes had done their job: brought the castle to negotiation. Would have been best if they had worked sooner and placed Nell back at his side. But they’d worked. The garrison had no heart left. Nell had proven herself admirably tough. But in the end had admitted her responsibility. Dual victory. No need for them now.

Fortification blocking the gate accepted: good. Main use psychological. Placing a barrier. Men don’t run at walls, as a rule. Note: expect and be ready for attempts to bypass it and aid the bastard.

Suspicion: works both ways. Wouldn’t accept anything she said at face value any more than she would.

No! More! Mistakes!

Speak face to face. Fine. Necessary. Could only make her see, understand, everything that way. Had expected this answer. Increased his belief she played for time. Lied.

Once she was back at his side they would talk. From there things would mend. He would correct her misunderstandings. Complete the interrupted teaching. Then they could forge forward side by side. Achieve.

Admission: If he did lose better that she was in Alnwick. Better she not be close to the vanquished. Better she have some chance at life, such as it would be.

He would not lose.

Battle was always chancy. A gamble.

All was prepared. The ground chosen. His men knew victory was their only chance to evade death or exile with loss of all property and station. Their chance to gain great rewards: the lands of the defeated, material junk, position, whatever. The bastard was worn down, tired, his men less desperate: this made much difference.

Better if it had not come to this.

Irritated Trempwick crumpled the clean parchment. Too little sleep and too much worry. It upset his balance. Too much care or not enough. Either could lead to mistakes. Had done all he could given the circumstances. Now it remained to see it through to conclusion. Needed air, exercise. Nell – to talk, to see. To get away from this business of writing letters. Refresh himself, take her measure. See if there were any tiny moves he could make to tilt things yet further his way.

Trempwick called for his horse. He would convey his acceptance of her terms personally.




“Then we have a deal.” Eleanor turned away from the ramparts. There was nothing else in need of saying and she did not wish to talk with Trempwick. Every word exposed her to risk, increased the likelihood he would see through her play - if he had not already.

“Leaving so quickly, beloved Nell?” Trempwick called.

“There is nothing left to say.”

“There is.”

Eleanor returned to the front of the wall. “Such as?”

“How about goodbye? You might wish me luck, and offer to pray for me.” The spymaster softened his voice so it was hard to hear. “You might give me chance to say I love you.”

Whether that lie was for the benefit of their audience or for her Eleanor could not say and did not care. As she left the gatehouse roof she heard him shout, “It’s true.”





“We have missed you at court.” Hugh let the gentle rebuke sink in before he added, “I am glad that you have come to aid us now.”

George, Earl of York ducked his head. “Nothing would have pleased me greater than to have sped to your side the very day I heard the sad news of your father’s death.”

“It would have given me great pleasure also to know such a close friend of my father would be there to help receive his mortal remains and conduct them to his place of rest.” The former king and his Earl of York had cared no great amount for one another; theirs had been a relationship of necessity. Politics, Hugh now believed, was the source of all lies. Therefore politics were the invention of the devil, being as he was the source of all ill in God’s earth. A pity one could not call upon a clergyman to exorcise this evil from his kingdom.

“Sire, there have been … troubles which kept me here. Unrest. Bother from the north.”

Hugh indicated with a wave of his hand that the earl should rise. “I understand very well.” The earl had been hiding until he knew which side was safest to back. One must assume the man had been following word of Hugh’s advance for days, agonising over the decision to jump or hold aloof. Here he was, half a day’s ride from York itself, decision made. Hugh stepped in to clasp the man’s hand. “I thank you for your tireless work against the rebels. You have my gratitude.” A tiny pause rested before the final word, and he placed a touch of emphasis on that word.

The dig was not lost; York returned to his knees, hand still in Hugh’s. “Let me swear fealty to you, sire.”

As the earl made his oath Hugh felt acutely conscious of the figure he must present; he must look a shabby old soldier in contrast to York. If his hands had not been locked around George’s he would have needed to control the urge to bat at his surcoat in a ineffectual attempt to clear the dust from the scarlet velvet.

“Sire, the city stands ready to receive you, if that is your will. If you would continue to march we are ready for that too.” York addressed the soldiers he had brought with him. “Is that not so?”

“Aye,” the men roared.

“Is that not so?” York asked again, louder.

“Aye!”

“Will you fight for your king?”

“AYE!”

York’s militia stood well-fed and well-rested in their nice clean livery in the midst of an army befouled with five day’s hard marching and fighting. They looked like nothing so much as a collection of soft youths playing at being soldiers as they put on their pretty show. Hugh became aware that this was not an attitude he was alone in; the scorn of his veterans was palpable.

Hugh swung into the saddle and trotted his horse out in front of the hundred-odd new men. “I thank you for your enthusiasm, and will repay it with the chance to take the battle to the enemy. You will be able to tell your children and your children’s children of how you did your king a mighty service by rescuing his sister and returning peace to the realm.” He could find no more words for these clean faces. They cheered for him anyway, thrusting spears and empty fists skyward.

“What is it to be, sire?” Serle enquired as Hugh rejoined his lords. “Onwards, or York?”

There remained half a day’s march before the sun began to fall. “York,” he said, before he could change his mind.

Derby nodded. “A wise choice, sire. Chance to rest securely and fill their bellies will bring the fire back to the men.”

The orders to form back up into marching order went out. Men dragged themselves back onto their horses.

Hugh said, “It is my desire to enter York in such a manner a strong impression is left upon their minds.”

Serle chuckled and made an exaggerated job of inspecting their state. “I think we’ll do that.”

Their part of the column had begun to move. Hugh tapped his palfrey with his spurs. The animal was so weary he had to spur it again, more harshly, to get it to move. “A king of rusted mail and dirt.”

“No, sire.” For all that Fulk had been part of Hugh’s council since before they left London he still spoke rarely. “A king who’s been busy doing his own hard work.”

Wymar of Derby took over the theme, all but snatching it from Fulk’s hands. “Yes, and with a deal of success. Be the victorious general.”

“I am not yet victorious,” Hugh reminded them softly.

“Do not be a pedant, sire. It ill befits you.” Derby peeled away from the group and rode off to his place in the line.





Fulk paused in the antechamber before the stairs leading up to the prince’s chambers, intrigued by the conversation Hugh’s guards were having.

“It’s like that Troy war story.”

“It is?”

A third voice, a little more refined in accent than the others, drawled, “The Iliad, you mean.”

“Yeah, that,” replied the first voice. “See, there’s this princess and she’s married to a boring old sod, so she runs off with this handsome sod. Then there’s this big war. Now isn’t that exactly like this?”

“Is it?” The forth voice sounded confused.

“Yes!” insisted the first voice. “One princess, two husbands, and a right hell of a war all because of some stupid tart.”

The more refined voice said, “I don’t agree. Helen of Troy was a famous beauty. Prince Paris was of most noble birth, and quite useless. There’s no rebel trying to usurp the throne-”

The first voice interrupted, “Yeah, but you’re going too far. Look, all I’m saying is that there’s this handsome guy, a normal guy, and a princess who wants a bit of fun, and it all causes this big war-”

“It doesn’t work,” the interrupted man insisted. “Our princess was never married to Trempwick.”

“Depends who you ask,” the second voice muttered.

The forth voice: “I don’t think so. See, I was on duty on the day she got betrothed. I saw it all.”

“Saw?” The first voice jeered. “Hiding in her blanket chest, was you?”

With a wounded dignity the voice explained, “I was in the tower nearest the building she was in. I heard all the screaming.”

“But you saw nothing, you daft prick.”

“When she left that building she was all faint, like.”

“You said you saw it all, but you bloody didn’t, so stop your lying already.”

“I tell you, I heard-”

“Yeah, then why didn’t you say heard, arse face? You said saw, and you didn’t.”

The posher voice sighed, “God give me strength.”

“Oi!” barked the forth voice. “A bit of respect! Just cause you’re a knight and we’re not.”

“Silence, peasant, or I’ll flay you alive and feed you to my hounds.”

The guards laughed.

“Yeah, but it is just like that,” the first voice insisted, unwilling to give up.

“No, it isn’t.” The knight’s voice was full of a schoolmaster’s patience. “Paris was a useless little fart stuffed full of the best blood in his land. Fulk isn’t, either of them. Helen was beautiful. The princess isn’t. Menelaus was a wronged husband. Trempwick’s a bloody traitor and a liar.”

Eavesdropping was increasingly uncomfortable, and the prince’s summons had a degree of urgency to them. Fulk made his passage across the room as loud as he could. The voices shut up abruptly; by the time he entered the room the four occupants were engaged in harmless little tasks while they chattered about how nice it would be to sleep in the warm that night.

“The prince has summoned me,” Fulk said.

“Yes, my lord. You’re to go up immediately.” The owner of the more educated voice opened the stair door for Fulk and bowed him on through.

The prince had taken advantage of the time to bathe, and the remains of a hearty meal rested on the room’s table. “In two days we should arrive in proximity to Alnwick.”

“Yes, sire.”

“How well do you know the surrounds?”

“Not well enough to be of much use, sire. There are a few men with me who’re local. They’ll know far more.”

The prince fiddled with the ring on his right hand. “Do you think we will be in time? Nell will not have surrendered, will she?”

“Never,” Fulk stated.

“I do not mean out of treacherous desires. I am positive Trempwick will not have sat meekly outside Alnwick’s walls.” Hugh linked his hands in his lap, his thumb beating a steady tattoo against his wrist. “That man must surely be desperate, and he has great need of her if he is to have a hope of turning all back in his favour.”

“Never,” Fulk repeated. “She knows what is at stake.”

“He has had the training of her …”

“She managed to fool him once, and she’s stubborn enough to resist his tricky if she’s a mind to. Which she has.”

“In general I must profess to having faith in my sister’s ability to behave like a mule. It is Trempwick whom concerns me. That man is …”

“Yes.”

Hugh got to his feet. “Well, I shall attempt to share your faith.”

“Eleanor would only surrender if she knew us to be dead.” That was his own fault. He’d never thought to release Eleanor from the promise that she would go to Trempwick in the event of his death. When circumstance gave them chance to marry it hadn’t seemed important in the multitude of other things, and then it had been forgotten. It had been in her better interests at the time, sufficiently so for him to go through the bother of ensuring she would obey. It still might be. Everything had changed since their journey to Scotland. He’d made her swear on his soul; she would not damn him to an eternity of torment by breaking her word. The mere thought made his wounded leg burn and the multitude of other small hurts flare to remind him of their presence.

Something of his thoughts must have shown, as Hugh told him, not unkindly, “Go back to whatever lodgings they found for you in this city. Go and rest. I need you hale and ready to fight for me once more.”

Fulk bowed. “Sire. The prince was wrong. In that battle he’d be fighting for Eleanor – and himself.







Blegh. Nasty writing which stubbornly refuses to turn into something less icky; definitely a section earmarked for a heavily revised edit at some point in the future. I can’t lose the nagging feeling I’m missing something. I’ve been trying to work out what for days. If I have missed something it’s buried under the nasty feel of this episode. Then again, maybe it’s the nastiness itself which makes me feel there should be more.

Can’t stop; got company and my shiny knight equivalent has been ignored for long enough so I could prepare this for posting. Today without comments is better than tomorrow with, I hope. :(