1: Well, the sudden time jump was jarring. I really liked the premise in general, but I think it might have worked together with just the one scene of despair and revenge together. The part with the wine unfortunately read false. I can't imagine her husband just smiling and accepting the goblet after she walked in on him and one of her maids. Even if he had her beaten into submission like he thought, that'd be a good reasonf or her to avoid him - not walk in with some wine.
2: Again the time jumps threw me. I have to share I think it was Amric's comment - this chap who was obviously so bad at ruling and leading loses yet lives through two wars, gaining more power each time? If his side won they could easily reward more deserving men, and if his side lost the winners would probably exile him ... if they were feeling nice.
3: Definitely over the top! I had trouble getting into this one, though at least I understood the messenger's despair. The PM is obviously and overtly out of touch with reality (or a transvestite). One could wonder how he came into power in the first place.
4: Like the others I think it was too short. We had a brief summary of the new king, and were told what would happen rather than being shown. Just off the top of my head, we could have seen the coronation from the view of this person, obviously hoping for better after the last bad king, only to hear the newbie declare war on Rautasi and Gandeln AT THE SAME TIME.
2: Again the time jumps threw me. I have to share I think it was Amric's comment - this chap who was obviously so bad at ruling and leading loses yet lives through two wars, gaining more power each time? If his side won they could easily reward more deserving men, and if his side lost the winners would probably exile him ... if they were feeling nice.
3: Definitely over the top! I had trouble getting into this one, though at least I understood the messenger's despair. The PM is obviously and overtly out of touch with reality (or a transvestite). One could wonder how he came into power in the first place.
4: Like the others I think it was too short. We had a brief summary of the new king, and were told what would happen rather than being shown. Just off the top of my head, we could have seen the coronation from the view of this person, obviously hoping for better after the last bad king, only to hear the newbie declare war on Rautasi and Gandeln AT THE SAME TIME.