Well first I would like to thank everyone who commented on my story.
From what I have read, in terms of feed back, there is a wide range of opinions as to what I was saying, how I said it, and was it unstandable.
First the country is made up. I orignally had it as France, but then thought well who wants to sympathize with someone who assists the Nazi's? And on the flip side who would support someone who supported the French? :rofl:
So I went with the choice of Enemy, Puppet, and Ally. Not for any Orwell since but it is easier to create national identity with the word Enemy, then a paragraph on French-German relations could. I did not want the story to get very complicated, the main character had a bad life and dealt with it to the best of his abilities.
The gun. I know it is absurd. I chose 48" because the sound of it brings forth images of sinking ships and life rafts.
As for the ending I am a big fan of Deus Ex Machina. When all hell seems to break loose, it all works out in the end. In this case, the Bastard knew of a second bomb connected to a vital piece of equipment. It was simple. Clean, and cut to the point.
From what I have read, in terms of feed back, there is a wide range of opinions as to what I was saying, how I said it, and was it unstandable.
First the country is made up. I orignally had it as France, but then thought well who wants to sympathize with someone who assists the Nazi's? And on the flip side who would support someone who supported the French? :rofl:
So I went with the choice of Enemy, Puppet, and Ally. Not for any Orwell since but it is easier to create national identity with the word Enemy, then a paragraph on French-German relations could. I did not want the story to get very complicated, the main character had a bad life and dealt with it to the best of his abilities.
The gun. I know it is absurd. I chose 48" because the sound of it brings forth images of sinking ships and life rafts.
As for the ending I am a big fan of Deus Ex Machina. When all hell seems to break loose, it all works out in the end. In this case, the Bastard knew of a second bomb connected to a vital piece of equipment. It was simple. Clean, and cut to the point.