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    Deutschland Uber Alles

    --Erstein, LORRAINE - August 12, 1744 (Morning Battle)


    "Compliments of His Imperial Majesty, Sir!" the adjutant huffed as he passed a sealed letter to FeldMarschall Ernst von Branau. The Marschall slowly nodded and sent the staff officer on his way. Von Branau broke the wax seal and quickly glanced at the note. A frown slowly crept across his face, one which was immediately noticed by his close friend Generalleutnant Karl Pillar.

    "Is it something troubling, Sir?" Pillar inquired.

    Von Branau stuffed the letter into his coat pocket and replied, "Not at all, Karl. Just new orders I'm afraid." He passed his spy glass to the General, motioned toward the small hamlet of Dieuze directly in front of him and said, "Have a look and tell me what you see."

    Pillar looked through the telescope for about a minute and said, "I see nothing, Sir. Just a village whose inhabitants are probably scared out of their wits from the battle."

    The old Marschall nodded. "So it appears. But according to the dispatch from the Emperor, the French are firmly dug-in on the far side of the village. Now either their commander is a complete fool or he's simply oblivious to the fact that we've got their rear covered, but in any which case you are to enter the village with your division and lend support to Generalmajor Kurtz's assault."

    "I will proceed at once, Sir." Pillar saluted, turned his horse, and galloped toward his command.

    After the General had left, Von Branau looked through his spy glass at Dieuze and sighed. "Be careful old friend," he muttered.

    --Berlin, Prussia - February 7, 1492

    "A New World, you say?" von Losthin remarked. "Why bother about another world when we've still got problems here in Europe to deal with, is what I'd like to know."

    Frederick Reinsmarck bit his lower lip and frowned. "It's simply a matter of expanding the State's influence, my dear friend."

    Von Losthin laughed. "Influence, eh? I hardly think that we need to worry about that right now! Show me a royal minister who's more concerned with the State than himself and I'll gladly board a ship and pay a visit to this 'New World' myself!" He paused after he finished chuckling and stared at the fireplace. A deep sigh escaped his lips. "Besides, there are other things more pressing for the Fatherland to pursue."

    "Such as?" asked Reinsmarck.

    Von Losthin rose from his armchair and paced the room. The spasmodic popping of the firewood was the only sound that punctuated the stillness of the chamber. He paced and paused. Paced and paused. He made it as though he was about to speak, opened his mouth, hesitated and closed it again.

    "Well then, Leopold?"

    "Have patience, Frederick!" snapped Leopold Von Losthin, "We're not going anywhere so we've all evening." His friend shrugged and clasped his cane closer to himself.

    "So it begins," muttered Leopold.

    "What's that?"

    Slightly perturbed, von Losthin said, "So it all begins, Frederick!"

    "What begins?"

    "Unification of course. Of the Fatherland!"

    Reinsmarck gasped, "You're mad!"

    "If I'm mad then so is the King!" von Losthin declared. "Afterall, it was his idea."

    "What? You're jesting!" remarked an dumbfounded Reinsmarck, "How in the world does this involve the King?"

    "An overheard conversation. I have it from a reliable source," quipped Leopold.

    "Who? Tell me! I must know!" Reinsmarck begged.

    Von Losthin hesitated and the replied, "Remember Paul von Kleiben-Ostenwald?"

    "Generalmajor von Kleiben-Ostenwald's son? Why yes, of course I do. Charming fellow. We spoke briefly at Charlottenburg last year."

    "He's been attached to the Staff, you know. That's my source. It's direct!" von Losthin cried.

    "All the better if it can be accomplished," said Reinsmarck, "but I don't see how Austria, Poland-Lithuania, Spain and France are going to take the news."

    "They'd probably throw a fit, dear friend."

    "And what a fit they'll throw!" snorted Reinsmarck, "Once the talk starts to circulate, our beloved Prussia would probably be stomped underfoot before a single soldier of ours can leave our borders."

    "It will take time of course."

    "A rather large amount of time, I should think. It's likely we won't see a united Germany in our lifetime."

    "Nevertheless, my dear Frederick, I say we drink to success!" At that, Leopold von Losthin poured two glasses of wine and passed one to his friend. "To the Unification and the Fatherland?"

    Reinsmarck sighed and reluctantly held up his glass. "To success, the Fatherland, Unification and all that it entails."

    To Be Continued
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    MORE ! i want MORE !
    that´s a great concept for writing an AAR !

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    hello emperor mike, i am jealous that you are in vancouver, a splendid city if i ever seen one.

    As for your aar, i think you have a great idea here and i am sure it will be a challenge to finish this, while keeping to such a unique idea for writing the aar. I enjoy the dialogue and hope to see more in the future. Keep up the great work ill keep checking for your updates for a good read.
    What a Game!

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    -- Spandaus Zitadelle, Prussia - October 23, 1522

    The moon's pallid visage lorded over Spandaus Zitadelle, casting its rays across the darkened fortress grounds. Only a small sliver of light from one of the castle's windows gave any indication of life in those early hours. Within that room a man loomed over a map that was carefully laid out on a table. Around him stood a group of high-ranking military officials, most of whom were staring intently at the piece of parchment spread out before them. At once the man began to speak:

    "Pommerania, gentlemen," he said, "is our key to the Baltic and the North Seas. Our naval activities are limited at best in East Prussia and moreover, those territories are non-contiguous. We can presume, without a doubt, that our Grand Endeavour will be opposed not only by the powers of Central Europe, but also by Sweden in the north. And this will require greater involvement at sea."

    He paused briefly.

    "Take note, gentlemen, that what we are discussing tonight will ultimately, with God's help, lead to something that will forever change the political landscape of Europe. We are about to set into motion what our forefathers had only dreamt of: THE UNIFICATION OF GERMANY!"

    Audible gasps of excitement escaped from the lips of the officers who stood crowded around the King. The monarch gave a wily grin and continued:

    "We will need to check Swedish intervention in our future conflicts by preventing them from landing troops on our soil. The best way to do this is to secure Pommerania by diplomacy or by force and utilize their resources to construct a navy. It need not be much, for its duties will be strictly defensive.

    "Once the Swedish threat has been checked, we are free to pursue our aims. For now, we shall concentrate on Pommerania. However, our weapon will not be the sword. On the contrary, that will be our last resort. We will follow Austria's example and..."

    The King paused once more and looked at his officers, smiled, and said:

    "...marry. If we fail to persuade the Duke to see things our way, then..." He stopped short. "...then the sword will be our mouthpiece."
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    More! More! MORE!!! AARRG!

    *goes mad*

    Very cool aar, hope that you will finish it.
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    Well written. I hope you realize you have a daunting task ahead of you writing this story out. Trust me, I know.
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    --Hohendorf, West Pommerania - March 6, 1523 (2:43 PM - Afternoon Battle)

    An artillery round screamed overhead and plunged into the ground no more than 7 feet behind the royal entourage. The horses started to panic, but their riders, the King's guard detachment along with members of the Staff, managed to rein in the near hysterical beasts. The battle at Hohendorf had raged for two and a half hours and yet the Pommeranians displayed no sign of giving up despite repeated Prussian blows to their left and centre.

    "Haul your guns further up, Kniebel," the King called to one of his officers.

    The General by the name of Kniebel looked at his monarch, evidently bewildered by the command.

    "Sire? Shall we bombard the fortifications again?" he asked with incredulity. The preliminary artillery assault on enemy field works at the beginning of the battle had ended an hour ago and the guns were a good quarter mile back from the frontlines. To bring the guns up once again would take time and further more, the redoubts thrown up by the defenders were of little consequence to the numerically superior Prussian forces.

    "No. We're bombarding their line," replied the monarch.

    A horrified Generalmajor Kniebel looked at the King, eyes wide and mouth agape. "Bombard the enemy LINE, Your Majesty?" The unwritten rules of war stated that no artillery would be intentionally aimed at man or beast on the field of battle. The King's orders, if carried out, would violate that rule.

    "Do it, Kniebel," replied the King, "Bring the guns up and concentrate the fire on the enemy centre." He turned to the officer on his left and said, "General, prepare your forces to take advantage of any situation that may arise following General Kniebel's attack." The man he spoke to, General der Kavallerie Johann Weinenbach, evidently quite shocked at the King's decision to train field guns on fellow Christians, weakly concurred.

    The Prussian monarch smiled to himself as the sounds of clashing steel and thundering cannons drowned out the screams and moans of dying men; men who were giving their lives to the Fatherland.

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    Note: Until the Battle of Mohac between the Hungarians and the Turks in 1526, artillery had never been purposely trained on infantry or cavalry before. It was with this "underhanded" tactic that the Turks managed to utterly destroy their Hungarian enemies at the battle. Following this, many Christian commanders condemned such a strategy, but secretly they too wished to do the same to their foes.

    For the the purposes of this AAR/Story, it will be the "King" of Prussia (in our reality, the King would have been Kurfurst Joachim II of Brandenburg) who will change the "rules of war."

    By the way, hope all of you are enjoying this.

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    More! MORE!

    *goes mad again*
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    Great way to begin an AAR, Mike. This could become a classic if the quality of writing stays as high as it is now.

    Deutschland Erwache!

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    -- Stettin, East Pommerania - August 28, 1524

    The clip-clop of horses' hooves upon cobblestone streets reverberated throughout Stettin as a party of officials from the Duke's castle made their way to the city centre. The bewildered survivors of the hapless city which had fallen under siege by the Prussians gathered along the route of the horsemen to witness what may be the last of Pommerania's independence within the Holy Roman Empire. Whispers immediately rose from the throats of the spectators when a man on a black charger overtook the small party of mounted civil servants and made his way to a hastily put together stage where he dismounted and ascended the stairs. From there he made his announcement:

    "People of Stettin!" he cried. Silence greeted the opening of his speech and only the twitter of an occasional bird interrupted the quietude. "The trials that we have been put through have come to an end! The Pommeranian Army has set down its arms and at this very moment representatives of Pommerania and Prussia are discussing the terms of our surrender." A deep groan issued forth from the mass of people and at once all began to converse, lament, and weep. The man on the stage made no effort to silence the inhabitants. Tears began to form in his eyes and as he stood in front of a vanquished people, he muttered forlornly, "God help us all."

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    The man was sitting in his room, he wore a jacket. A nice jacket, the sleaves of his jacket were tied together at his back. He wore a helmet, a lether helmet, specially constructed so he couldn't bang his brains out on the wall. And what walls it were, nice big ones and all covered with soft padding, to stop the man breaking his bones when he jumped at the wall in one of his hystirical fits.

    I saw the man, once migthy. A king, a king amongst kings, the Danish
    King. And I was sad, for I had seen it coming. Another great AAR had started. Full of promise, written by an Emperor.
    Oh, what an AAR, unifying Germany. He had us asking for more, more, more,...

    And then suddenly he stopped writing, nothing was heard of him again.
    Post were placed asking when the AAR contineud. But no reply came.
    Instead we saw the first signs of madness enter our beloved Danish King. His post become incoherent, his speach garbled and before we knew it he was walking trough the streets of Copenhagen swinging of
    8-foot longsword and screaming:"I want Germany united, give me Germany united!"

    Oh , how we lamented the day some poor soul told him that Germany got united, in 1989.
    That poor soul was found, head chopped of, with the Danish King next to him, a broken man.


    Now Mike, we don't want this to happen do we?
    I guess you better write this AAR to the very end, because I believe you will be responsible for the damage of a mad Danish King.

    By the way, great AAR!
    For the Fatherland!
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    Hi! I'm glad all of you are enjoying the AAR! I'll add sections to it on a daily basis when I can! Recording the game events is one thing, but presenting it is another, no? Oh, and Barkdreg, I wouldn't dream of driving The Danish King insane. Hehehe!

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    --Hofburg Palace - Vienna, Austria - September 3, 1524

    Count Ludwig von Potenhoff paced about the study with a look of trepidation on his face. The news of the military defeat and subsequent annexation of the Duchy of Pommerania had reached the Imperial Court in Vienna earlier that afternoon. The messenger, a Pommeranian infantry major, was on the brink of physical (and no doubt mental) collapse as he staggered up the palace steps with a sealed note in his grasp. The man managed to mumble a few incoherent words before succumbing to utter exhaustion. The letter was delivered to the Count only hours before and only he knew of the events that had taken place up north. A knock sounded on the door to the chamber and von Potenhoff gruffly called for the individual to enter.

    A short balding man in his mid-forties stepped into the study and greeted the Count with a wry smile.

    "The news you have must truly be of great importance to warrant calling me away from Baron von Eisenstadt's luncheon," he said.

    The Count tossed the letter onto the table in front of his guest and said:

    "Take a look, Herr Oberstleutnant."

    The man, an officer of the army, gingerly retrieved the piece of parchment from the desk and opened it. He scanned the jagged etchings on the paper and as he gleaned more information, his eyes grew wider and wider.

    "Impossible!" he gasped, "Utterly impossible!"

    The Count merely nodded. "And how will the Emperor take this? What will be his response?"

    "I haven't the slightest idea, Count," the fellow replied.

    "But you ought to, Herr Oberstleutnant. One doesn't have blood ties to the Imperial Family without gaining some measure of influence. Or at the very least, the ears of the Emperor."

    "I...I don't know." The officer pulled out a kerchief and wiped the beads of sweat from his prominent forehead. "I...I...I don't know what to say. This is all rather...rather..."

    "Shocking?" the Count said, "Disconcerting? I can think of a dozen other terms, my dear Oberstleutnant, but the key issue here is that Austria's honour must be preserved."

    The officer regained his composure and replied, "And what will you have me do, Count? Suggest to His Imperial Majesty that we should not stand by while our honour has been scarred? Then what? War?"

    "Perhaps," von Potenhoff responded. "I doubt it very much that the Emperor will stand by while one of his 'vassal' states suddenly reaches a decision to start absorbing its neighbours."

    "The Emperor will seek a peaceful resolution," the officer said. "The issue will be brought up in the next Diet and Prussia will be forced to guarantee the independence of Pommerania."

    "And if they refuse?"

    "Then the rest of the empire will make them concede."

    "Can you guarantee that, Herr Oberstleutnant?"

    "My dear Count von Potenhoff, nothing in war and politics is ever guaranteed." The officer replaced the letter and walked out of the study.
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    This is excellent. Keep it up.
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    Originally posted by Emperor Mike I
    Hi! I'm glad all of you are enjoying the AAR! I'll add sections to it on a daily basis when I can! Recording the game events is one thing, but presenting it is another, no? Oh, and Barkdreg, I wouldn't dream of driving The Danish King insane. Hehehe!
    Alas, I fear it's to late. My sources inform me that the Danish King is an frothing lunatic.
    Well, at least it's not your fault.
    Keep writing!
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    Just wanted to join the chorus and say you have a great start to this aar. Now you just have to finish it.

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    Barkdreg - LOL!!

    more...More!...MORE!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

    AAARGGGGG!!!!

    *goes mad once more*

    Give us Skåne, Norway, Holstein, Iceland, Normandy, England, Estonia, Gotland, Eireland, Finland, the Scottish Isles, Kingdom of Jerusalem, Helgoland, Rockall, Newfoundland, Labrador and the U.S. Virgin Islands back!

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    Nice one.
    In no way related to Paradox Johan, we just happen to share the same first name (which is a common name in Sweden).

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