Not as far afield as I thought but none the less...I am still doing the blob-bit. Tis sorry I be.
Finally, I remembered to say; enjoy your various captions and their various pointed purposes.You red-headed scullion!
As in enemies playing Checkers while she plays Chess?She inclined her head in that way he was so familiar with that signalled she was contemplating her moves in some complex matter. She did it also when besting all who tried to match her in chess.
This bit did set me up to soon expect the worst and I am relieved we have a delay...I trust.<L>‘Oh aye? And what makes you so sure sir? My reign has been a disaster thus far: I have lost our treasury in foreign wars, lost the loyalty of the lords of Saxony, lost my friend and the respect of my Council and now we lose the first major engagement…’ He trailed off, gazing deeply into the goblet and absent-mindedly swirling around its contents.
As all your readers have said in their own words; Realism...well met.What he had not expected….was the smell. Battle was blood, yes, screams, blood-curdling sounds of fury and agony, but no one had warned him that a dying man no longer exercised control over their bowels and the sheer smell of ordure was turning his stomach.
This simple admission...made the scene glow for this reader.The Earl was a lowborn soldier, used to martial ways and the veteran of many battles but had never quite got used to delivering these sort of tidings
Enjoyable word-dance that.A final bow before the duke shot back: ‘How remiss of me my lady, I forgot to make mention: the king calls for a Grand Tourney in Lambeth…mayhap you will send a champion? Or even don harness and take part in person. I see how much you like the hurly burly of battle…’
Forgive me if I indulge humor that your scene created; "Never judge a book by it cover" became but you can judge a cover by it's book.<L> Hopefully, my meaning comes thru better than wayward ramble.Exasperated now Arncytel of East Anglia snapped, ‘a broadsword the likes of mine denotes a man of high nobility, Harold. Which do you think draws the more attention? An old stooped and dusty greybeard or some glittering lord?’
Heart-breaking.The sound of galloping hooves told him the boy had got away, at least, he thought, whilst wishing he was twenty years younger; each thrust and feint was wearing him out…and his assailants were patient.
Always a risk to be noble?As if reading his mind, the king answered simply ‘I am not my mother, boy and sometimes a king shows his power by staying his hand-remember that
A little risk before and much more now?‘And he shall have it my boy-my little Wulfwynn’s betrothal to the Aquitainian prince shall not be sullied!
Sounds about right.There is finally peace within the realm. Time for war!